July 08 – July 14 is the 28th week of 2024. This week, we enter the Solar Term of Minor Heat (July 07 – July 21). The micro-seasons for this week are “Warm Winds Blow” (July 7 – July 11) and “First Lotus Blossoms” (July 12– July 16).
Basho, Issa, Buson, and Reichhold wrote the poems selected for this week.
The 24 Solar Terms
The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around Xi’an, the capital of China during the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)
Minor Heat
Minor Heat is the eleventh Solar Term of the year and the fifth Solar Term of summer. Xiaoshu (小暑) is the Chinese name for this season. Xiaoshu means “weather becomes increasingly hot”.(2) At this time, crops grow rapidly and there is a potential for drought.
Season Food: Melons
Melons are the ideal food for the warmer weather because they can provide vitamin C and hydration, both of which are beneficial for your skin and immune system. In Nanjing, Jiangsu province, people typically enjoy smaller melons like cantaloupes during Minor Heat and save the bigger melons for the next Solar Term: Major Heat. Watermelons are considered bigger melons.(3)
The 72 Seasons
The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)
The micro-seasons for this week are “Warm Winds Blow” (July 7 – July 11) and “First Lotus Blossoms” (July 12– July 16).
The Sacred Lotus
The sacred lotus, also known as the Indian lotus or Nelumbo nucifera, is an edible aquatic plant native to Asia’s subtropical and tropical regions. The Nelumbo nucifera belongs to the larger Nelumbonaceae family of plants. All plants within the Nelumbonaceae family are flowering aquatic plants.
Lotus plants thrive in the floodplains and in slow-moving waters. Lotus plants have large, round leaves and flowers that are pink or rose-colored. The flowers grow on stalks that may reach 6 feet above the water’s surface. The lotus flower, which has a very short blooming period, will open in the morning and close in the evening.
Once the flower is pollinated, it begins its seed development. The lotus seed pod starts as a small green bud and continues to grows until it splits open releasing hundreds of seeds. As an aquatic plant, the lotus relies on hydrophily, or seed dispersal through water movement. Seeds that fall into the water and are carried by the currents to new locations.
When the seed settles into its new location, it can take anywhere from two weeks to two months for that seed to germinate. After germination, the lotus sprouts into a seedling. Once the leaves and stalk emerge from underneath the water, the lotus redirects its energy towards flowering, thus beginning a new cycle of growth and seed production.(6,8,9)
Astronomical Season
July 14, is the last day of week 28. July 14 is 24 days past the summer solstice and 70 days until the Autumn Equinox (September 22, 2024).
Moon Phases
The Moon reached its first quarter phase on July 13th. The First Quarter is seven days after the New Moon and marks the first quarter of the Moon’s orbit around the Earth.
After the First Quarter, the Moon shifts to its Waxing Gibbous phase. During the Waxing Gibbous phase, the Moon’s illumination increases until it reaches the Full Moon. On July 14, the last day of this week, the Moon is in a Waxing Gibbous phase with 57% illumination.
July’s full Moon will occur on July 21.
Haiku and Kigo
The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku. The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society provides us with the following explanation for why we use kigo in haiku.
“A kigo is a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season; it’s a powerful word or phrase that can conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions. Its use in haiku, a poem of few words, is especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(9)
Visit The Haiku Foundation’s “New To Haiku: What is a Kigo?” for more information
This Week’s Kigo
According to the World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greves, the “lotus” can be a summer, autumn, or winter kigo. “Floating lotus leaves” or “lotus leaves” are examples of early summer kigo. “Viewing lotus” or “fragrance of lotus” are late summer kigo. “Seeds of lotus” or “broken lotus” are autumn kigo, and “dried lotus” or “lotus roots” are winter kigo.
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto “lotus”, “melon”, and “south wind” are all relevant kigo.
In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “lotus” and “melon” are relevant kigo
Now, with all this in mind, let’s read some haiku.
Basho
offering
a yam on a lotus
because ”they are alike”
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
scent of lotus blossom
goes to the eye through
the mask’s nose
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
Issa
alongside the beggar's pillow... lotus leaves float (translated by David G. Lanoue)
lotus blossoms-- the beggar's smoke wafts over (translated by David G. Lanoue)
even lotus blossoms bend a bit... oh floating world! (translated by David G. Lanoue)
Buson
Flying through lotuses
and bamboo — the heart
of sparrow parents
(translated by Allan Persinger)
The monk pauses contemplating cutting the white lotuses (translated by Allan Persinger)
Reichhold
point blank the whiteness of lotus petals spinning
Haiku invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu about a lotus or a melon. You get to choose!
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write!
Formatting Note: To eliminate the spaces between the lines of your haiku, hit shift-enter at the end of the line. For example,
one (shift-enter)
line two (shift-enter)
the third line (shift-enter)
Thanks to LaMon for sharing these instructions!
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About the Haiku
Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku was retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku. Mills and Clausen’s haiku were retrieved from Haiku Enlightenment by Gabriel Rosenstock.
- “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
- “6 Solar Terms of Summer”; China Educational Tours
- “24 Solar Terms: 6 things you may not know about Minor Heat.’ ChinaDaily.com
- 72 Seasons App
- “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
- “Lotus, plant common name”; Britannica
- “Sacred lotus”; Britannica
- “Nelumbo nucifera”: wikipedia
- “How Does a Lotus Flower Grow”; Earth.com

Thanks, Mark. It’s always a joy.
The lotus temple.
Never been to Bahapur.
Open flower there.
Hi Adele,
I couldn’t help commenting as this is such a charming haiku. I had to look look the lotus temple and Bahapur up. It is fascinating…I didn’t know that Bahapur was in India. I love in particular the last line.
Madeleine and Adele,
I had to look Bahapur, too. Gorgeous building and I can see the lotus flower in it. Even more impressed with the ‘ku, Adele.
Thanks, Maddy! I’m so happy you liked it! I always appreciate your comments!
Thank you Adele, that means alot to me. 🙂
Adele,
Nice use of the lotus prompt. Very Asian feeling in this haiku.
Nan
Thank you, Nan.
Hi Adele, reading Maddy’s and Nan’s comments sent me searching for the lotus temple. Thanks for adding this and encouraging us to do some research.
Thanks, Mark for your nice comment. We all learn so much every week from your highly educational blog.
Marvelous calming haiku Adele. I was not familiar with Bahapur either. What a comparision of the lotus as a foundation/building. Wonderful haiku!
Thanks, Suzette! I’m glad you liked it! It is an actual Baha’i House of Worship in New Delhi, India; located in an area called the village of Bahapur. it is also known as ‘The Lotus Temple’.
Thank you, Adele, for the excellent information.
Thank you so much for the feedback, Suzette!
… Oh floating world—I like that one from Issa.
Ehem… 😆 hello Mark and all. Did some digging and got endorsed by my husband/fishing-enthusiast 🤣
old proverb that states:
“Wind from the West, fish bite the best. Wind from the East, fish bite the least. Wind from the North, do not go forth.
Wind from the South blows bait in their mouth.”
Conclusion: it’s better to fish in a position where your bait moves with the wind—excellent time for fishing 🎣
Selma’s 😉 haiku:
happy fisherman,
south wind blows bait in their mouths
the prize is a melon
I can see him returning home with a bounty in his cooler and a melon in his hand. 🙃 🎣
Thanks for the fun. Stay in the shade. Bee cool 🤗
So much fun to read, Selma. I enjoyed the old proverb and your delightful haiku, “…happy fisherman…” 🙂
Happy fishermen them all. The ocean gives and withholds. She’s mercurial but she knows what she’s doing. Benevolent ocean. May we learn to protect her. 🤗 thanks always, Maddy bow
Selma,
I not only like your haiku (and the story behind it), but the homespun knowledge of weather (wind) and fishing. Those sayings are often spot on such as “red sky at night, sailor’s delight; red sky in the morning, sailor take warning,” or “when the rain comes before the wind, tall ships bring their topsails in; when the wind comes before the rain, tall ships bring them out again.” (Can you tell I live with a sailor?) ~Nan
Nan, 🤣 The wisdom of old is SUCH Wisdom! They were real gatekeepers and great observers.
I love the knowledge you added. May I always remember. 😆 arigatou, Nan-san 🙇🏽♀️
Selma,
I recently read a children’s book, Red Sky at Night, (or something close to that), and it had all sorts of weather-related sayings. Most of them were new to me, but a few I had heard before (the ones I quoted above). Yours, however, was another to add to my memory, so thanks!
My pleasure. 😇
Hi Selma, This is great! I really like how you wove the proverb into the haiku and then added a melon! What a delight!
Arigatou, Mark-san 🤗
Thanks Selma for the smiles of fishing and returning home with more than the day’s catch. Awesome.
Stay cool as well Selma. Some days here in the Northwest are hot and others are cool, it just depends where the wind blows. Cheers.
one lotus seed
beaver pond full
of blossoms
Was it a good idea to plant lotus in the beaver pond? One can only hope they are tasty.
Griffin, a delightful haiku and commentary, (which almost seems like another part of the haiku) … a pleasure to read.
What a great visual! And a true story to boot!
Griffin,
I live near an estuary and creek (actually volunteer there), and each summer both are filled with lotus plants blossoming. There is also a pair of beavers living on the creek. I don’t know whether the beavers eat the lotus or not, but they obviously coexist.
Love the haiku; it’s so unique. ~Nan
Hi Griffin, What an image!
I am wondering if beavers would eat lotus. I’ll have to look that up. Thanks for giving us something to ponder.
Good morning Mark and fellow haiku writers:
Always a delight to read your post Friday morning. I love Issa’s poems, especially “…alongside the beggars pillow…” and reading all the kigo…I find it very inspiring. I enjoyed learning facts about the lotus and I intend to go back and read it again. Here are my offerings for the week,
floating lotus leaves
where my father spends
his last hours
~ ~ ~
regarding the melon
my daughter describes
the sunrise this morning
~ ~ ~
I read about minor heat above and I couldn’t resist:
major heat
my vertigo
comes back
Hope you are all having a lovely Friday.
These are very personal and evocative. Each a chapter in a fuller story.
Thank you Griffin. That means a lot to me.
Lovely, Maddy.
Adele, that puts a smile on my face.
Madeleine,
Love all of the haiku, but the first one about your father, powerful. The one about your daughter, how insightful she is. Major heat is coming; I fear for you because of your vertigo. ~Nan
Nan, you have brought tears to my eyes with your thoughtfulness. I appreciate so much your commentary on my poems. 🙂Awww, thank you, I am taking Dramamine twice a day and drinking plenty of water throughout:)
Hi Maddy,
These first two are so good! As Griffin and Nan have already commented, each one is a powerful story!
Thank you Mark, means a lot!
Your daughter has a good eye. And so do you for fitting the image into this stellar haiku. I love it. About the vertigo, I hope it’s not true. I just recovered from a bout of vertigo. Not nice.
::brush with a gentle brush before bed. It helped me lots. I counted to 100 😉 👏🏽 be well dear one. 🤗
Thanks Selma,
I am sorry you went through this, too … I use to hear about brushing 100 strokes when I was growing up, but I think that was for shiny hair:). I will definitely try it.
Arigato, my friend. 🙂
Maddy
I enjoy seeing frogs resting on the large plate like leaves of the lotus!
Lovely verses this week. ~Jules
Thanks, Jules…what a charming visual…to me, it reads like a monoku. 🙂
Thank you – I guess that comment did read that way 🙂
Hello Maddy,
Your poems are beautiful slices of life well told. Your first one is so heartwarming and moving “my father spends his last hours”
Your beatiful play on words is well placed and totally relatable in the third poem on vertigo’s effects. Well done.
Hi Suzette, thank you so much for your lovely and thoughtful feedback. It’s made my day!
You are most welcome, Maddy. Blessings to you. Hope you have a wonderful rest of the day!
Hi Mark,
Thanks for another interesting, informative post. I live in an area where there is an estuary with plenty of lotus flowers floating on the surface, They are a sight to behold. Their leaves remind me of the round solar collectors. Here are haiku:
she hikes
the overlook trail
the lotus in bloom
~Nancy Brady, 2018
published in Haiku Dialogue, 10/18
solar array
turned to face the sun
lotus leaves
~Nancy Brady, 2018
published in Failed Haiku #28, 4/ 2018
spooning
orange flesh
–muskmelon
~Nancy Brady, 2024
#offthecuffhaiku
In my family, cantaloupe was called muskmelon.
https://nbsmithblog.wordpress.com
All so nice!
Thanks, Adele. So nice of you to say.
~Nan
Nan, all three are wonderful, they strike a chord, “…she hikes the overlook trail…”, is so very special and “…turned to face the sun, lotus leaves…” I like that your family calls it muskmelon! I looked it up,…it’s very interesting.
Mark, when you have time, would you take out one of these responses to Nan. 🙂 I have duplicates.
Yes, I’ll do that now.
Appreciate it, Mark… love the image of the lotus that’s on the gallery part of your blog! 🙂 (It’s peaceful and striking and the same time!)
Thanks, Madeleine, for your kind comments on all of them. And yes, my family has always called cantaloupes that. We grew them in our garden along with tomatoes and green peppers, which my parents called mangoes. Weird, huh?
Hi Nan, I can see why those first two were published! “she hikes” is especially good!
I don’t think I have ever heard a cantaloupe called a muskmelon before.
Thanks, Mark. I’m glad you like that “she hikes” haiku, which was a slice-of-life haiku.
That’s what my family called them, and I was hesitant to write it until I checked out whether if we were the only ones. We are not!
Sounds fun, Nan! 🙂
Hi Nan, your poems are a delight. Congratulations on the two publications! Also, I did not know that muskmelons is the variety of melon under which canteloupe falls. Thank you. Blessings to you.
Mark,
I’m slowly catching up, so just one today; River Flower at the link
https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/07/12/river-flower-1p-xxiv-nd-7-12/
And its a good one! Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for your inspirational posts!
They are both a delight, Jules! 🙂
🙂
Neat post as usual, Mark.
Spontaneously composed melon haikus:
sweat like thirst expands
in heat wave hothouse
time for a nice cold juicy sweet cantalope!
Baron,
I like spontaneously written haiku. I find I enjoy writing them, too, except I call them off-the-cuff haiku. Enjoy your melon!
Neat post as usual, Mark.
Spontaneously composed melon haikus:
sweat like thirst expands
in heat wave hothouse
time for a nice cold juicy sweet cantalope!
Neat post as usual, Mark.
Spontaneously composed melon haikus:
sweat like thirst expands
in heat wave hothouse
time for a nice cold juicy sweet cantalope!
Neat post as usual, Mark.
Spontaneously composed melon haikus:
sweat like thirst expands
in heat wave hothouse
time for a nice cold juicy sweet cantalope!
Neat post as usual, Mark.
Spontaneously composed melon haikus:
sweat like thirst expands
in heat wave hothouse
time for a nice cold juicy sweet cantalope!
Neat post as usual, Mark.
Spontaneously composed melon haikus:
sweat like thirst expands
in heat wave hothouse
time for a nice cold juicy sweet cantalope!
Neat post as usual, Mark.
Spontaneously composed melon haikus:
sweat like thirst expandsin heat wave hothousetime for a nice cold juicy sweet cantalope!
Neat post as usual, Mark.
Spontaneously composed melon haikus:
sweat like thirst expands
in heat wave hothouse
time for a nice cold juicy sweet cantalope!
Hi Baron, Sorry for the delay in getting back to you! It’s been a busy week. I hope all is well!
(More: not sure how but the other one got published instead of going to a new line!)
sunrise with birdsong
after hot, sleepless night
wife singing in the kitchen, preparing morning melon!
big and round on the ground
juicy sweet so good to eat
summer lasts forever
Wonderful…especially the sunrise with birdsong. I wish summer lasted forever.
Thank you 😃
On board with Nan, Baron…especially your “sunrise with birdsong”.
https://benjamintonkin.wordpress.com/2024/07/13/13-7-24-haiku/
So cute, Ben. It made me smile.
Nan, thank you for bringing Solitary Daisy’s commendation for Mark’s blog, Season Words to our attention! 🙂
I did? If I did, I don’t remember although I try to share some information between sites. I know I mentioned Solitary Daisy here.
Lol! Yes, I do remember Nan, you telling us about it a few weeks ago! I would like to thank you now, if I didn’t before! 🙂
Maddy, I’m glad to pass along haiku info since Mark is such an advocate for haiku writing AND a haiku poet in his own right.
I can see that, Nan. Yes…we have been privy to reading some of his great haiku, I think, in the beginning of this year. I know we all wish we could see more. 🙂
Ben, your haiku is a delight!
Suzette, this is a wonderful haiku!
Thank you Maddy for your kind support. Have a lovely rest of your day. Cheers.
Your welcome, Suzette, will do! 🙂 Hope you are having a lovely evening, too.
Cheers and Blessings!
Yes indeed. Cheers!
Hi Suzette, I have been wanting to say that the image of your lotus is beautiful as well as the image you have conjured up in your teapot haiku. I can’t help but think of a kettle whistling and then the tea pot tipping…drinking a hot cup of tea to a very good morning! This is a treasure! 🙂
Maddy,.I am happy that these thoughts came to mind from the photo and haiku..I am thrilled that you “see” a whistling kettle, teapot, and a hot cup of tea. Perfect!! Thank you for your wonderful comment. You made my day!!
Awww, so good to hear, Suzette! 🙂
Fun – brought back a youthful memory.
So excited to join this community. ~Darcy
watermelon…
shooting seeds
from the porch
a slice of melon
on the porch
crescent moon
Hi Darcy, sorry you are having challenges posting! Thanks for your patience.
“A slice of melon” is a fun one. This one is a great example of the “zooming out” technique.
Hi Darcy, I agree with Mark, “…shooting seeds…” is a lot of fun. I like your second one too! We are very happy to have you here. Welcome!
Love the fun imagery of watermelon seeds in motion. And a great insight in your second haiku on the shape of the moon and the watermelon slice…brilliant writing Darcy. Cheers
Thanks, Suzette, for your kind words. Yes, muskmelon definitely falls under the cantaloupe label. I actually looked it up as I thought, maybe, that what my parents called them was just a made-up name, and I was misinformed. ~Nan
Darcy,
Such wonderful haiku! I like the pairing of the melon with the crescent moon. And who hasn’t spit watermelon seeds? ~Nan
Hello Mark,
Sorry for posting late. Summer gets a bit busier some days.
I enjoyed the information on lotuses, a favorite of mine for many reasons. I did not remembe that they opened in the morning. That speaks volumes of haikus right there…LOL.
I like Basho’s comparison of yam to a lotus:
offering
a yam on a lotus
because ”they are alike”
Hope you are enjoying the summer days, Mark. Thank you for all the great information you gather to encourage haiku writing. Blessings to you
Hi Suzette, Yes, To summer being busier that usual. I have been traveling a lot this summer so it has been hard for me to keep up! I just appreciate being able to read peoples work when they can share! Thanks for the kind words and I hope all is well.
And a great weekend to you as well Mark! Cheers.
Hi MarkI am new to your site – really appreciating the resources and all the beautiful haiku.
smiles and frowns
dropped cantaloupe rinds
rate the picnic
Morag Elizabeth Humble
Hi Morag, Thanks so much for joining our community and sharing your poetry! I am glad that you found us!
Hi Morag, a great haiku…and sounds like a lot of fun! Glad you have joined our community, too!
Welcome, Morag. I love the picture you’ve made with your haiku. I hope there were more smiles than frowns. ~Nan
You guys all inspired me! I tried to write something when the blog came out, but was trying too hard. Today I finally got back to the blog and read all of your haiku. I realized I didn’t need to be clever, just remember:
sultry afternoons
watermelon days…
a child’s delight
Thanks (and as always, peace),
LaMon
Hi LaMon, You took me right back there. I like pairing afternoons and days. Delight in summer and seeds. ~Darcy
Beautiful, LaMon. 🙂
LaMon,
I sometimes think those haiku that just flow are the best, and here you have proven it. Well done.
Sorry to arrive so late to the party! This one just popped into my head.
the full smile
of a watermelon slice
happily seedless
We all need a smile, Eavonka. Glad it popped into your head.
Thanks, Nan, watermelon never fails to make me ridiculously delighted.
Your watermelon haiku makes me smile, Eavonka!
It’s delightful!
Yay, mission accomplished! Thanks, Maddy.
Eavonka, yesss! And watermelon is so good for us too! An added bonus!
Ta-da! https://melissalemay.wordpress.com/2024/07/18/four-midsummer-haiku/
Wonderful collection!