August 06 – August 11 is the 32nd week of 2024. This week, we enter the Solar Term of Beginning of Autumn (Aug 08 – Aug 23). The micro-seasons for this week are “Great Rains Sometimes Falls” (Aug 03 – Aug 07) and “Cool Wind Blows” (Aug 8 – Aug 12).
Basho, Issa, Buson, Reichhold, and Kerouac wrote the poems selected for this week.
The 24 Solar Terms
The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around Xi’an, the capital of China during the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)
Beginning of Autumn
Beginning of Autumn is the thirteenth Solar Term of the year and the first Solar Term of Autumn. Liqiu (立秋) is the Chinese name for this season. The Chinese character for autumn, Qiu (秋, autumn) “consists of two parts, he (禾, rice) and huo (火, fire), meaning the ripening of rice.”(2)
The 72 Seasons
The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)
The micro-seasons for this week are “Great Rains Sometimes Falls” (Aug 03 – Aug 07) and “Cool Wind Blows” (Aug 8 – Aug 12).
About The Wind
Wind is a natural phenomenon that is best described as the movement of air outside. It can range in intensity from hurricanes to gentle sea breezes. The primary force behind all winds, regardless of their intensity, is a variation in atmospheric pressure.
The air in our atmosphere tends to flow from regions of higher pressure to lower pressure. These different pressure zones are created by the Sun’s uneven heating of the Earth’s surface. Low-pressure areas are created by rising warm air, while high-pressure zones are created by cold air systems moving in and replacing the heated air.
As autumn approaches and the Earth tilts away from the Sun, the days begin to shorten and there is a gradual cooling. (This cooling is more noticeable in regions closer to the Earth’s poles.) The Earth’s cooling affects atmospheric pressure systems and creates a significant difference between the warmer southern air and the colder Arctic air. The temperature difference influences weather patterns resulting in more frequent and intense low-pressure systems, which brings an increase in wind and rain as autumn moves in. Hence, the cool wind blows.(5,6)
Astronomical Seasons
August 11, is the last day of week 32. August 11 is 52 days past the summer solstice and 52 days until the Autumn Equinox (September 22, 2024).
Astronomical Autumn
The astronomical seasons are determined by the Earth’s position in its orbit around the Sun. Astronomical autumn will begin on the autumn equinox (September 22, 2024). An Equinox is when the Earth’s axis is neither tilted towards nor away from the Sun, resulting in equal day and night lengths. Spring is the other season that arrives with an equinox. Summer and winter arrive on solstices.
Meteorological Autumn
The meteorological seasons are based on annual temperature cycles and change about every 90 days. These changes coincide with the months of the Gregorian calendar. For those of us in the Northern Hemisphere, meteorological autumn includes the months of September, October, and November. Therefore, if you follow the meteorological calendar autumn doesn’t arrive for another 30 days.
Haiku and Kigo
The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku. The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society provides us with the following explanation for why we use kigo in haiku.
“A kigo is a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season; it’s a powerful word or phrase that can conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions. Its use in haiku, a poem of few words, is especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(9)
Visit The Haiku Foundation’s “New To Haiku: What is a Kigo?” for more information
This Week’s Kigo
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto “remaining heat”, ”new coolness”, “refreshing” and “autumn near” are relevant kigo for this week.
In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “wind – cool”, “coolness”, and “beginning of autumn” are relevant kigo.
With all this in mind, let’s read some haiku.
Basho
a clear night
cooling myself under cherry trees
waves of flowers
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
Now autumn begins,
the sea and all the fields
the same shade of green
(translated by Sam Hamill)
as autumn approaches
our hearts are drawn together--
a four-and-a-half mat room.
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
Issa
back in the house cooling off again... moon in the window (translated by David G. Lanoue)
evening's red leaves-- cooling off the grilled yams (translated by David G. Lanoue)
moonflowers-- world-improving rain so refreshing (translated by David G. Lanoue)
Buson
Moonflowers tremble in the autumn wind — a purifying river (translated by Allan Persinger)
A cool breeze blows through the mosquito net — a rootless wanderer (translated by Allan Persinger)
Reichhold
cricket silence between scraping sounds autumn begins
red rock walls the cool wind as wide as holes
Kerouac
Cool breezy morning –the cat is rolling On his back
Haiku invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu about cooling off
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write!
Formatting Note: To eliminate the spaces between the lines of your haiku, hit shift-enter at the end of the line. For example,
one (shift-enter)
line two (shift-enter)
the third line (shift-enter)
Thanks to LaMon for sharing these instructions!
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About the Haiku
Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku was retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku. Kerouac’s haiku was retrieved from Kerouac’s Book of Haikus.

I love Friday mornings–always enjoy Seasonwords!! I am not a big fan of Buson compared to Basho and Issa. But his “cool breeze” haiku is brilliant. Who is the rootless wanderer? It could be that mosquito trying to find a hole in the net. It could be the wind which blows through the net. It could be the dreaming sleeper under the net. Brilliant–I love it. Here is a new haiku that I wrote this morning, remembering as a child visiting my cousin’s country church.
summer-time church
every pew stacked
with hand fans
Peace,
LaMon
What thoughtful questions you pose, LaMon. I love your haiku; it is so visual, and it reminds me of some church services in the summer especially in the days before air-conditioning. I remember those fans (and to my knowledge, they are still being used in some churches). ~Nan
Oh, LaMon, I just loved all the ways you saw Buson’s poem.
Your poem evokes such strong images!
Wonderful.
Hi LaMon,
I really enjoyed your thoughts on Buson’s haiku. I went through a similar process when I read that one.
Your haiku is great. It has great imagery and tells a story. So good.
Thanks Mark. Now, only 6 days until next Friday!!
Really well done LaMon. I enjoyed the memories your haiku reminded me of those hand fans I have seen as well.
LaMon,
While I have not been to a congretional meeting house in quite a while I do remember a church wedding I went to in September. It was a small building and the image you have with hand fans in the pews brought back good memories.
Cheers, Jules
Another enjoyable and informative post, Mark. Personally, I am not ready for this “cooling off” that autumn brings. I know many people feel differently, but then, I don’t drink coffee, let alone pumpkin spice latte. Regardless, an off-the-cuff haiku or two about “cooling off.”
cooling off…
she wears a sweater
everywhere
~Nancy Brady, 2024
But then, with air-conditioning, what woman doesn’t wear one?!
cooler evening…
a football game played
under the lights
~Nancy Brady, 2024
Ha, Nan, I run so hot I almost never wear sweaters, and it’s only gotten worse as I’ve aged.
I love your football poem. Like you, I was a huge Friday night lights high school football fan in my hometown. I don’t think I missed a game in my 4 years of HS. Then Saturdays in college, same thing. My husband is a football fanatic so my Sundays will be busy until January. 😂
Eavonka,
I have my moments of being hot, but so many places keep the air conditioning set so low that I end up in wearing a light sweater or a long sleeve shirt almost all the time. That they tend to cover my melanoma scar is a plus, too.
My sisters and I grew up with Friday night football and watching college (mostly Ohio State) football, too. We rarely missed a game (and that was from the time our school began the football program).
Concerning H.S. football, I was in the band so loved attending all of the games–home and away. It was a fun time. My granddaughter and grandson also played in the H.S. bands, so more football! (We were mostly on the mission field with are two kids–so no football for them, but they wouldn’t have traded those experiences for any football.
Peace,
LaMon
LaMon,
I was always so grateful to the band. That can be a difficult job (especially in high school). It’s so great that your grandkids are continuing the tradition.
LaMon, I can’t claim to have played in the band. I gave up the clarinet early on. I know that the team always appreciated the support. On the other hand, my son played violin in the orchestra, and I am proud to say he played from fifth grade on all the way through high school. He chose the instrument, not me, but I’d like to think it was all the classical music he heard through the years (including in-utero). I think your kids must have had such great experiences on those mission trips, and I can understand how much it would change their lives One of our SILs (and his siblings) lived in Africa and it affected them all profoundly. Peace, Nan
Nan, thank you for this second haiku. It’s very inspiring. I didn’t go to the football games growing up…but I went to every game of one of my son’s who loved football. It was a lot of fun.
Glad you liked it, and even more glad that you had the opportunity to watch your son’s games. I didn’t have any brothers, but that never stopped my sisters and me from going to the games. Neither of my sons played high school sports though. ~Nan
Hi Nan, These are delightful! When I read “cooling off” I think of both the change in the seasons and the aging process. There are many possible layers in this one! Well done.
Thanks, Mark. I’m glad you saw layers that I didn’t consider. Of course, putting on a sweater is a layer. ~Nan
It is amazing how soon the NFL starts playing football! But I do remember those high school games played just as the season was changing. Felt good (to me, LOL). Peace, LaMon
LaMon,
The pro seasons (baseball, football, hockey, and basketball) all bleed into one another. I still prefer to watch high school games because the kids are out there. It is not money that motivates them to play, either. My family and I rarely missed a football game, but then my parents went to a football game the same night they got married, or so they said. ~Nan
Love the poems of the great masters…all so inspiring. I love the poetry offered and comments! I am going to read it all again. I am already cheered up: LaMon’s “…every pew stacked with hand fans…” and Nan’s “…she wears a sweater every where…”! Both are delightful!
Hello Mark and all, here are my offerings:
It is true a cool wind has been blowing since this morning…scents of autumn
cooling off
summer
has been a riot
~ ~ ~
longing
for summer
even the heat waves
~ ~ ~
trouble
the computer
cooling off
Hope everyone is having a good Friday.
Hi Madeleine,
What a trio! I smile at the “longing” haiku…for me, it is longing for summer to continue for another month or so. I like heat and am not ready for autumn at all.
Awww…thanks Nan. 🙂 I understand…I wish the weather pattern would make up its mind:). Last week it was a heat wave and this week it’s been on the cool side, it making us wonder if it would ever be warm again! This afternoon it’s warmish with an autumn feel, which I like. (I’m having a hard time making up my mind, as well! 🙂
oops…Nan, sorry for the typos:/ ( Your kind words meant a lot.)
Yes, yoyo temperatures can drive me crazy, too, but I hate them worse when it is the yoyo between autumn and winter. My body does not tolerate the extreme drops in temperature. Once my body adjusts I don’t want a rise, but it is what it is, Madeline.
As for the typos, it isn’t your fault; it’s Otto’s fault!
I understand Nan and commiserate. Even though the weather here is milder, one of my family members also suffers from the cold.. my heart goes out to him as it does to you. (Agreed, the yo yo effect can play havoc with ones body.) With autumn fast settling in over here, I feel as if I am being cheated out of a few more weeks of Summer’s offerings…Although, once Autumn is in full swing, I believe despite its ensuing cold, we will begin to enjoy everything that goes along with it..vibrant colors, scents, the food… (Thanks, for the kind remark Nan, means a lot…Oh, Otto! 🙂
Madeleine, I woke up to chilly temps (50-60) and that is just what I felt. That I was getting cheated out of summer. It’s still August, and it used to be the hottest month. Now, it seems it isn’t. The temp is back up in the 70-80, but still. I’ll share a poem I wrote a few years back (pre-pandemic). I hope it formats correctly.
It’s August
It feels like fall this morning, but it’s August.The chill in the air reminds that too soon winterwill be here. Yet, monarchs cover the flowersCanna lilies still blossom, growing ever taller,and calling tohummingbirds, who sip nectarfrom each bloom. Young boys ride their bikes before schoolbegins, the last daysof freedom.
It feels like autumn this morning, but it’s August. There should be plenty of summer left, with days of hotremaining. Soon the winds from the south will feel as frostyas northern ones.Sweaters and jackets will be needed, warding off thedamp, warding off thecool.Young boys will ride their sleds down the basin’shill, before theholiday break ends. It feels like autumn this morning, but it’s August.
For now, I’ll find summer where I can. In the butterflies, in the bloomingflowers, in children beingchildren, and in southern breezes. ~Nancy Brady, 2018
It’s August
It feels like fall this morning,
but it’s August.
The chill in the air reminds
that too soon winter will be here.
Yet, monarchs cover the flowers,
Canna lilies still blossom,
growing ever taller, and
calling to hummingbirds,
who sip nectar from each bloom.
Young boys ride their bikes
before school begins,
the last days of freedom.
It feels like autumn this morning,
but it’s August.
There should be plenty of summer left,
with days of hot remaining.
Soon the winds from the south
will feel as frosty as northern ones.
Sweaters and jackets will be needed,
warding off the damp,
warding off the cool.
Young boys will ride their sleds
down the basin’s hill,
before the holiday break ends.
It feels like autumn this morning,
but it’s August.
For now, I’ll find summer where I can.
In the butterflies,
in the blooming flowers,
in children being children,
and in southern breezes.
~Nancy Brady, 2018
Thank you, Nan. What lovely sentiments. It has certainly cheered me up. I will read them over again. Very lovely ideas…I did see butterflies and the sun did come out yesterday and my children were here. Thank you, Nan.
Yeah, the formatting didn’t work out the first time (running the poem altogether), and it is not a haiku, but it does get the feeling across (I think), Madeleine. Enjoy the week and the butterflies and kids and…and. ~Nan
Awww, bless you my friend!…will do! 🙂
A great trio, Maddy! ‘even the heat waves’ is such a great line.
This week was actually the hottest we’ve been so far. August and September are the hottest months in Long Beach. But of course, we are blessed with good weather almost all the time. I try not to take it for granted, but I know I do.
Thanks, Eavonka! Lovely of you to say. 🙂 . I am sorry you are going through this intense heat. Nice that the weather is good for the most part. It’s not too bad over here either…yeah, easy to take for granted. 🙂
Hey Maddie, nice haiku. My favorite is “longing” though I confess that I never long for Summer–except that it would end!!. It is too hot (in Alabama) and the humidity is terrible. And the UV rays are especially dangerous during that season. I can do out to some of the nature parks around 7 am (when they open) and walk around for an hour or so–otherwise I stay inside (except to drive to a coffee shop or a book store!) But I am glad you enjoy them. Just stay safe!
Peace,
LaMon
Hi LaMon…yes, I understand. I used to visit my mother and family in Florida. I remember I could hardly breath one summer because of the humidity… all these things sound like a great way to manage the heat. Thanks, will do. 🙂 The past couple of days, we’ve had a little relief, temperature wise.
Hi Maddy, Glad you enjoyed this week’s haiku from all the contributors! It is such a delight to read what everyone writes. Thanks for sharing these three! “cooling off” is my favorite!
Hi Mark: I really appreciate your comment. I wasn’t able to reply yesterday, as we celebrated my daughter’s birthday. All the kids were here except for one of my sons who had to work… at one point we were able to face-time. It was a pizza fiesta with different kinds from various stores… I really like that you included two poems with the same first line … “moon flowers” and how different they both are, even though the last line has the same sort of theme…fascinating.
Hi, Maddy,
I love your haikus. I like how you captures the transitions not just in the weather but how it echos other changes, like the computer left to cool off…from its own “heat” wave. Nicely done. I enjoyed them.
Thank you Suzette, it means so much to me. I relish transitions and I appreciate that you do too. I really like your witty remark on the last one, “..its own heat wave..” 🙂 It made me smile.
You are welcome Maddy. I enjoy your poems and your comments. Thank you for the smile in your poem and kind replies. Blessings to you!
I enjoy your verses and commentary, Suzette…and your kindness. Blessings to you, as well! 🙂
You are very welcome, Maddy! Thank you for the blessings!
🥰
Certainly, my friend!
Maddy,
Lovely ‘ku… my favorite was the one with the line; even the heat waves! 😍
Awww, thanks Jules. 🥰
Mark,
I think we are still getting the remains of the hurricane today. I’ve done a series – the first is here; the rest at the link
https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/08/09/sum-of-sun-1p-xxiv-nd-8-9/
Sum of Son
where is the
new coolness hiding
hot warm rain
a tornado watch along, leaves my desire to travel quivering
© JP/dh
Nice trio, JP. I really enjoy the warm rains of summer. The feel and the smell are different than other times of the year.
Yikes, Jules, so sorry you’re dealing with the hurricane remnants. Great rains, indeed!
Heavy rains can cause some flooding, and really doesn’t help the soil and growing things. But it is more the high winds that knock down trees. A neigbor had a huge tree fall across the creek. But they probably are going to leave it be. There is still room for water to pass under it. Though now it blocks my view in that direction. We had issue with trees three times (falling across the creek) which borders two townships – neither would help us remove them. Two times we were able to remove the trees. The third time we had to get some help (and had to pay for it).
Thankfully we are not in an area where this type of weather, hurricanes or tornados happens all that often.
Sounds like a horrible nuisance, and I’m sorry you’re going through it. I hope this downed tree is relatively easy to deal with and your view will return.
Neither of the two townships helped us when our trees fell. I doubt they will help our neighbor either. And she probably won’t do anything about that huge tree. Her fallen tree is at least twice as big as the one we had to pay others to get out for us. …I’ll just have to look the other way now. But maybe the heron will land on it to spy the fish in the creek? Gotta look for some good in the situation. ~Thanks.
“leaves my desire to travel quivering” is brilliant!!
Peace
LaMon
~Thank you. My Muse believes in cleverness. And I enjoy the double meaning of words in the English Language. Puns are fun too.
These are lovely, Jules. I really enjoyed “…where is the new coolness hiding…”. I am sorry you’ve been dealing with this:/
Maddy,
This summer has been easy compared to others that have had drought/water restrictions. Each season is unique.
I was up early (for me) this morning and it was indeed much cooler at 6am than even at 8am! 🙂
Jules, the weather patterns through out this country are so varied…I hope it wasn’t uncomfortably cool. 🙂
Maddy – to answer about it being too cool… It really isn’t too cool yet. Still in the 80Fs… but better than in triple digits. 🙂
Hi Jules,
We had rain and wind from the hurricane last night and made the similar observation about the warm wind and rain. The change in the atmosphere was noticeable!
Mark,
Weather is just another daily challenge 😉 Stay safe!
Hi Mark, you beat me to it but here is offering:
Hi Ashley, this is a very lovely haiku. It has a refreshing calmness about it, which I love. 🙂
Thank you, Maddy, for your lovely comment. 🙇♂️😊
My pleasure, Ashley. 🙂
Hi Ashley, what a delightful photo and haiku! Thanks for sharing!
Thank you, Mark. 🙏
Humidity dropped to 63% today. My offerings:
evening brings
a light breeze
open the window
let the cat out
morning dew
on bare feet
Darcy,
Very enjoyable haiku, and I can almost feel the breeze. Lovely.
I adore how both your poems allowed me to feel the coolness without you saying the word.
Hi Darcy, the imagery in both haiku is quite vibrant. I like that the owner and cat in the second poem are both enjoying the outdoors 🙂
Hi Darcy,
“let the cat out” is my favorite of the pair. The imagery is great and there are many possibilities for the bare feet!
petrichor
the fire evacuation
finally lifted
One of the reasons I’ve been away is because my heart and mind have been caught up in a 3 week fire nightmare that threatened the place I love most in the world, Argenta, BC. Argenta is a small rural community at the top of Kootenay Lake. It is as close to Walden (or Eden) as I’ve ever been. I spent my summers there with my sister visiting our dad as a kid, and in my young adulthood, being a nanny to my 18 year younger sister.
A lightning storm caused over 134 fires in the Kootenay mountains alone. Climate change has put one of the last fully forested areas in the world in danger (most of British Columbia). This was the first time in over 100 years that Argenta was in danger. Anyway, it’s been harrowing.
But when I read ‘the great rains come’, I was amazed at just how timely it was because, at long last, they did come! Yesterday, the evacuation order was lifted (though they are still under alert). Yay!!
Eavonka,
What a timely haiku, and I’m so glad that the rains have come for your Argenta. I hope the fires have ended so that things can get back to normal (or as normal as they can considering…).
Dear Nan,
Thank you so much. It’s wonderful for everyone to get to return, but there will be a lot of collective grieving for how much was lost (though, thankfully, no homes). But they are planning to take the fire plans they’ve been practicing for over 20 years to other rural communities so they too can better work with BC Fire to successfully prevent catastrophe.
I am so grateful for the daily updates provided via the GoFundMe which allowed all of us who love Argenta to be involved. The photos and videos were a stark reminder of just how dangerous wildfires can be.
Dear Eavonka,
I’m glad that no homes were lost, yet losing anything is devastating. I’m glad they have a fire plan and plan on sharing it with others so that other wildfires will be contained quickly. Wildfires just seem to be bigger and more dangerous every year. Global warming/climate change needs to be addressed because they are only going to get worse. I hope your friends and/or family are doing okay (enough, considering).
Thanks, Nan, from what I understand just an incredible amount of clean-up, putting things back, and dealing with the aftermath of sprinklers on homes, smoke, and debris. The worse thing may be that it looks like their drinking water won’t be clear for quite some time. This will be a long haul for sure.
Eavonka, Thanks for the haiku and I’m glad it is based on the truth. The fires are getting worse and worse. It is troubling indeed.
Peace,
LaMon
Thank you, LaMon. So grateful for the rains, but keenly aware of all the places (especially here in CA) that have not had any to mitigate the fires. Heartbreaking.
I am glad you are back. I am so sorry to hear about what’s happened. It must be agonizing to have had to stand by… good it’s over and that Argenta will be used as a model for prevention in nearby areas…a powerful haiku, Eavonka!
Thanks for your sweet words Maddy. Hopefully, I won’t get so wrapped up in my thoughts in the coming weeks.
Awww…it’s understandable, Eavonka. 🙂
So glad to hear rains have arrived!
It couldn’t have been more needed! Thanks so much.
Hi Eavonka, So sorry to hear about what is happening to a place that sounds very near and dear. Climate change is having massive and devastating impacts. I hope the shift in weather brings relief to the people of Argenta and the Kootenay mountains.
Thanks so much, Mark. So far that I know, things are much better.
Eavonka,
May your area recovery quickly from all the fire. Natural or manmade – fire can destroy very quickly. Though my family has fought building fires, and once even in a tunnel…(volunteer and compensated members) they have not done forrest fire fighting. (((Hugs)))
While the fire was no where near me (I live in Long Beach CA), it was in my favorite place in the world where many people I care for live. Thankfully, the clean up continues. A long process ahead though.
Yes on the long process. Hopefully swift healing and recovery.
Thank you Mark for the great information. I appreciate your clear explanations betwen Astronomical and Meterological Autumn. The cooling days are here in the Northwest as I experience it. So not too hot.
A fellow blogger remarked on a different blog that she had realized that she had not had enough time to do all the things she had planned for this summer. Therefore, she decided that this autumn would in her mind, be an “additional Summer.” I quite like that sentiment. I’ll try it out this year…LOL!
I love the Buson and Issa poems:
Buson:
“A cool breeze blows
through the mosquito net
— a rootless wanderer”
Issa:
“back in the house
cooling off again…
moon in the window”
Hi Suzette, I hope you are having a blessed Sunday, not meaning to step over… but I have wanted to say how intrigued I’ve been by the conversation for a while… how fast Autumn is approaching and how not all our projects will be completed and in my case some not even started. I am encouraged that your friend has resolved it, this way… I would love to try it myself too! 🙂
Not overstepping at all Maddy. I am intrigued by this topic too. Ah how the plans of Summer are never complete. I am glad you like my blogging friends “idea” Cheers.
Thanks, Suzette, it is true! Cheers, I hope you have a very nice day!
Thank you, Maddy and a beautiful day to you too!
🙂 🙂 🙂
a cooling breeze
of fever
aching bones
stream in the valley
a cool ribbon
running along its bottom
drop of sweat
on my chest
chilling reminder
each afternoon
once the midday heat has climaxed
cool dark rain clouds rolling on in
Nicely done, Baron, on all of them. They all feel cooling in some way, shape, or form, but my favorite is the drop of sweat though.
Hi Baron, What a great collection for this week! I am really enjoying “stream in the valley”!
These are great verses, Barron. I have to admit, the second haiku resonates with me…full of imagery. I really enjoyed L2 “…cool ribbon…”
I don’t have a haiku this time, but I learnt so much about weather this week! Thanks, Mark!
Hi Adele, Thanks for the comment and I am glad you got something out of this post. Have a great weekend!
Thank you! You too!
I wanted to say, Adele, I was happy to see your commentary…Hope you have a good week! 🙂
Thank you! You too!
https://benjamintonkin.wordpress.com/2024/08/10/10-8-24-haiku/
Hi Ben, Thanks so much for adding this one to the conversation!
Welcome.
A delightful haiku, Ben!
👋🏻https://melissalemay.wordpress.com/2024/08/15/sometimes/