Week 36: “End of Heat”

September 02 –  September 08 is the 36th week of 2024.  This week we enter into the meteorological season of fall, but remain in astronomical summer until the autumnal equinox on September 22, 2024. 

During this week we are also in the Solar Term of End of Heat (Aug 23 – Sept 07) and enter the micro-season of “Rice Ripens” (Sep 02- Sep 07).

Basho, Issa, Buson, and Reichhold wrote the poems selected for this week.


The 24 Solar Terms 

The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China  (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around Xi’an, the capital of China during the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)

End of Heat

End of Heat is the fourteenth Solar Term of the year and the second Solar Term of Autumn. Chushu ( 处暑) is the Chinese name for this season. Chushu ( 处暑) means “exit of heat”.  

Duck is a traditional food for the season, fishing festivals are common, and during this time of year people prepare for the upcoming harvests.


The 72 Seasons

The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai.  Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)

The micro-season for this week is “Rice Ripens” (Sep 02- Sep 07). 

Rice: From Planting to Milling

Below is a general overview of the lifecycle of a rice plant from planting to milling.  Specific days and times may differ depending on your location.  

February – Early May: Field Preparation & Planting

  • Commercial rice farming in the United States utilizes heavy clay and loam soils that are very good at retaining water, making them perfect for rice.

March – Early August: Irrigation & Growing

  • The traditional irrigation method is to construct earthen levees that follow the contour of the land. Farmers then flood the field with about two to four inches of water. This water level is maintained during the growing season.
  • It takes about 120 days for rice to grow to a height of about 3 or 4 feet with the grain appearing on the top of the panicles.

Mid-July – November: Harvest

  • When the rice is ready to be harvested, the water is drained from the fields. While modern farmers use specially designed combines to cut the rice and separate the grain from the stalks, traditional farmers harvest the rice by hand.
  • Once harvested, the rice is moved to drying facilities that reduce the moisture content of the rice grains until it is ready for milling.

August and Year-Round: Milling

  • Milling is a mechanical process where harvested rice passes through sheller machines to remove the inedible husks. This initial pass-through produces brown rice.
  • If the manufacturer wants to produce white rice, they run the rice through another mill that rubs the kernels together to create “polished rice”. At this point, the manufacturer may add vitamins back into the rice. This is known as enriching the rice.

November-February: A Wildlife Habitat

  • After the harvest, water is returned to the rice fields. This practice encourages the migrating and winter bird population to forage in the fields.  In exchange for access to the rice fields, the birds enrich the soil, aid in straw decomposition, and help control weeds and insects, offering valuable benefits to the ecosystem.

Haiku, Kigo, and Saijiki

The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku. A kigo “a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season.”(6) It can “conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions.”(6) When used in a haiku, it is “especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(6)

A saijiki is a dictionary of season words, or kigo, paired with haiku using that season word.  A saijiki is a reference and tool for the poet that is divided into five seasons (Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, and New Year) and separated into seven categories.

In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, each of the five seasons has seven categories of words.

  • Seasons
  • Heavens
  • Earth
  • Humanity
  • Observances
  • Animals
  • Plants

While this document doesn’t have haiku for each season word, it is helpful in understanding what words may be kigo.

In  A Dictionary of Haiku, which is Jane Reichhold’s English language saijiki that represents her location and experiences, she follows the five seasons structure with some slight differences in categories.  Reichhold’s categories are:

  • Moods
  • Occasions
  • Celestial 
  • Terrestrial
  • Livelihood
  • Animals 
  • Plants

I find both Reichhold’s Dictionary and Yamamoto’s Essential Season Words helpful in understanding the role and use of kigo in haiku.


This Week’s Kigo and Haiku

In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “coming of autumn”, ”autumn air”, and “refreshing” are all relevant kigo for this week. 

In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “school”, “beginning of autumn”, and “cold night” are also relevant kigo.

Now, let’s read some haiku. 


Basho

red more red 
in spite of the indifferent sun
an autumn breeze
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
as autumn draws near 
our hearts feel closer
to this small tearoom
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
autumn is cool: 
let each hand set to peeling
melons and eggplants
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)

Issa

evening cicada--
a last burst of song
to autumn
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
mountain path--
today beginning to feel
the autumn wind
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
a bird takes flight--
a shout in the duckweed
autumn wind
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Buson

Now I realize
autumn’s arrived —
achoo!
(translated by Allan Persinger)
Autumn has arrived —
what is the fortune teller’s
surprise?
(translated by Allan Persinger)

Reichhold

night winds blow
on the cabin bed
another quilt
cricket silence
between scraping sounds
autumn begins

Haiku invitation

This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu about the arrival of autumn

Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write! 

Formatting Note:  To eliminate the spaces between the lines of your haiku, hit shift-enter at the end of the line.  For example,

one (shift-enter)
line two (shift-enter)
the third line (shift-enter)


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A Local Saijiki Project

The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society, explains that a saijiki is useful for poets, “naturalists, and people interested in the natural and cultural history of an area.”  The saijiki contains seasonal words, plus haiku that demonstrate the poetic qualities of the words.

The creation of a local saijiki, one that represents an individual community, always felt like a big, daunting, and yet worthwhile project.  So, I have decided to try and create my own saijiki. I am not sure how this will turn out, but if you are interested in joining me and creating your own saijiki, I have created a saijiki worksheet to get you started.  If nothing else, this is a good exercise in noticing the natural world and writing haiku. Let’s see where this project takes us! 

About Today’s Haiku

Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku was retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku.

References:

  1. “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
  2. “6 Solar Terms of Autumn”; China Educational Tours
  3. 72 Seasons App
  4. “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
  5. “How Rice Grows”; USARice.com
  6. New To Haiku: What is a Kigo?

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  1. The wait was worth it. Thanks Mark for this informative post. I even clicked on some of the links! I may work on the saijiki sheet for our area. I may have some friends who will join me. My favorite haiku this morning was Issa’s “evening cicada”.

    Now in terms of my contribution. I have written, over the years, 27 haiku with “Autumn” mentioned and 10 with “Fall”. But I will share only two this morning:

    autumn morning–
    bright red cardinal
    in the fog

    promise of autumn–
    yellow tulip tree leaf
    fallen on the path

    Peace,
    LaMon

    1. LaMon, I am lucky enough to see many cardinals throughout the day at my feeders. It is about 9am now and the sun isn’t blasting away the cloud cover. Ah… coolness.

      Yes… so much is falling, leaf wise. ~Jules

    2. I envy you those cardinals, LaMon. I had always wanted to see them in person and finally, just this year, I did while visiting a friend in South Carolina. So thrilling as there were 5 of them!

    3. Hi LaMon,
      I really like your cardinal haiku. This week, I have been keeping an eye on my local cardinal family. They even inspired a haiku of my own.

      Labor Day
      the second brood
      takes flight

      Have a great weekend!

    4. Hi LaMon:

      Your two poems are delightful. I can see the image of the bright red cardinal glistening in the fog. Your second…”promise of autumn…” feels like a very special moment. Hope you are having a nice weekend and keeping cool.

      1. Thanks Maddy, It was actually 58 early this morning, but will warm up into the mid 80s. Fortunately low humidity. May your weekend be blessed as well. Peace, LaMon

      2. Hi LaMon, 80 degrees is quite warm. Nice that it’s cool in the morning and the humidity’s low. 🙂 Thanks…it’s been a very relaxing weekend.

  2. Mark,

    Welcome home! Thank you for all your infomation on rice, the Masters verses, and the worksheet. I generally write what about what is around me. Is that kigo? Is a list necessary. Perhaps as a guide, useful.

    Something different. I wrote monoku yesterday that fit with your prompt – at my post is are two links. One about the zipper spider and another about the Swallowtails that I am ‘rearing’. For anyone who is interested. For now though at the link.; https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/09/05/nd-09-05-xxiv-monoku/

    Quint Monoku

    slow sunrise brisk morning air, time for flannel over shirts, fall’s arrived

    yellow and black zipper spider still holds court upon its unique web

    nuts from the Chestnut tree fall on the shed roof, waking us at seven.

    appointments, bowling, chores, recorded class, and training meetings, fill the day

    monoku script after dinner, seems a good way to end a good day 

    © JP/dh(Jules)

    (I just came up with another verse… I’ll be making a second post…)

      1. Dave,

        While I am beyond having school age children – this is the season where so many sweaters and coats get left at schools. You need something in the morning but the afternoon warms up and their is one more light jacket in the lost and found 😉

    1. Hi Jules, what a great collection! Zipper spiders aren’t often the subject of poems, but they should be!
      When I think about the kigo list, I find them both helpful in writing and they encourage me to be more observant. So yes, I agree that they are useful as a tool and an exercise in awareness,
      It’s good to be back home! Thanks and I hope you have a good weekend!

      1. That Zipper spider is still there!

        A full weekend. Cards with friends, slow Saturday, but Bingo on Sunday – We didn’t win anything this time. But we go to support our son’s in-laws and just have fun. 🙂

      1. Thanks for the info, JP. I can see why they are also called black and yellow, too. I used to see them when I was little, but I really haven’t seen any of them for a long time. I know they must be around, but…I don’t know.

      1. One of those zipper spiders startled me – I was cleaning off what I thougt was an old web and out of one ot the pipe ends of my umbrella clothesline… the huge spider dropped out – I picked up a stick and gently put the spider in a quiet fauna area. For all I know it could be the same one that found a new home? 🙂

    1. Hi Jules:

      Flannel shirts are the best…I love both your poems. They are helping me look forward to fall…  I am so impressed that you’re raising swallowtail butterflies. I love swallowtail butterflies and I enjoyed reading all your notes. 

      1. Maddy,

        No butterflies yet from the ‘Sweet Sixteen”. When my children were little we did the Painted Lady Butterfly kit at home. We also raised one Monarch…

        Thanks always for your visits.

      2. Hi Jules, hope the butterflies from the “sweet sixteen” will appear soon. That’s great you did the painted lady butterflies with your children and raised a Monarch. My children and I raised painted lady butterflies from a kit…there are butterflies still flitting around, here. It’s warm here in the afternoons. My son and I saw two monarchs flying around our neighborhood in early summer a couple of times on our walks…they must have got off course somehow. (They don’t usually visit this area.)

    2. Reading your charity shop haiku reminded me of this haiku/senryu I wrote a few years ago, JP.

      thrift shop…
      she tells me
      she once had a skirt like that
      ~Nancy Brady, 2022 published in  Kokako #37 Aug 2022

      I love thrift shops, clearance racks, and finding bargains, JP.

      1. I try not to buy too much these days… but I did find another pair of tights the other day… now I have to trade out one or two pair to make room! I’ve decided one drawer full is really more than I need anyway. But it is fun to look…

        Sometimes you’ll even find new stuff with original price tags! I’ve looked up the tights brand I like and the new designs go for about 12-15 apiece. Still better than the brands that will try to get 40-60 a pair… eek!

      2. I try not to purchase any clothing for the same reason, Jules. Nowhere to store it, and I hate for anything to end up in the landfill. Every so often, I realize how old some clothes are. I think I still have a sweater, that I received as a present, from when I was in college.

      3. Hubby’s had his bowling shoes longer than we have known each other! 🙂
        I did get rid of some shoes that I got just for weddings… Probably don’t need anything special – if I do I’ll just wear my (ballet) flats!

      4. Jules, I can understand getting rid of wedding shoes especially if they are heels. I actually have a pair of heels I purchased for my son’s wedding, but ended up not wearing them because I ended up walking with a cane during this period of time. While physical therapy has cured that, I have never worn them. Nice shoes, but I’ll never wear them. Some day I’ll find someone to give them to. Until then, they remain in the box taking up space in my closet. ~Nan

  3. I really enjoyed this post, Mark, thank you. Always a delight to read your explanation of the seasons and to read the kigo of the season. I also liked reading about how rice is harvested and the Japanese dictionary tool.

  4. Mark, thanks for the description of the season and for highlighting several haiku. Basho’s tearoom warmed me, and Buson’s sneeze made me smile. Here’s my haiku:

    opening windows
    we invite autumn’s cool air
    in the house, in us

    1. Dave,

      If it weren’t for allergies… I’d open more windows too. I need to wait for the first frost, and then its’ almost too chilly. Nice to take a ‘chilled’ walk in my yard down to the creek every morning. Fresh air is good.

      1. Thanks for the comment, Jules. My allergies usually kick in during October (and in the spring with pollen). I hope your allergies calm soon, so you can take walks to the creek 🙂

      2. Dave,

        This is the first year I’ve been taking meds to help with allergies – I just always had issues when the weather changes. But I didn’t think much of it. Doesn’t stop me from being outside. I think I read somewhere that it isn’t the flowers but the tree pollen (and maybe animal dander) that causes most of our allergies. Well not including foods. Cheers! Hope your allergies are less this fall.

    2. Hi Dave, Thanks for the comment. Buson haiku felt very timely as I am recovering from my first cold of the year.
      Wonderful haiku for this week! Letting the fresh air in the house is one of my favorite parts of autumn!

    1. Nice haiku, Tracy. I have already raked leaves. Of course, they were from the linden tree, which seems to shed something every month. Autumn seems early this year, alas… ~Nan

  5. waiting for

    this heat wave to end

    cooling centers

    LA County is experiencing its highest temperatures of the summer this week. Even here in Long Beach, it will be 100 degrees tomorrow. So I had to laugh when I saw the “end of heat” at the beginning of this week’s terms.

    A good reminder that southern CA needs its own Saijiki. It probably already exists tbh, but I should seek it out.

      1. Rain? What’s that? 😉

        Bad news, we rarely get any rain until “winter”.

        Good news, somehow there is always something blooming here.

    1. Hi Eavonka, Sorry to hear about the extreme heat this week! That sounds awful!
      The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society was working on a saijiki for the San Francisco Bay Area. That might be interesting to read.
      I hope you can stay cool and the heat breaks soon!

      1. Thanks, Mark, hopefully it will break this next Wednesday. It was actually 101 degrees today, and I am so grateful for the extra a/c we got last year. Whew.

    2. Eavonka, I am really impressed by your haiku. It brings it home…I am sorry you are experiencing such heat where you are in L.A.  I had no idea there was such a thing as “Cooling Centers.” I went straight to google.  I am so glad that they have such places people can go to seek relief…I am very happy you have AC!

      1. Thank you, Maddy! Yes, cooling centers are a much needed resource down here. I feel very privileged to be nice and cool at home.

    3. Eavonka,

      You’ve had too many days of 100+ temps this summer. I can understand why you laughed about the “end of heat.” I hope you are staying as cool as possible, and that for you, it does begin to feel cool. ~Nan

      1. Thanks, Nan. Luckily, while most of the county has had many days above 100 degrees, this was the first time in Long Beach. We live a mile from the ocean so it is really rare. Today is crazy hot. Also, it won’t be less than 75 at night which is also unusual.

        Hahaha, I am too obsessed with this crazy heatwave. Apologies!

      2. I can understand your obsession, Eavonka. I hear the reports of how many days in a row it has been over 100 degrees. I’m not surprised that being on the ocean would help keep it cooler, but hitting 100-degree mark is still mighty warm.

        We actually had one 100-degree days earlier in the summer, but again, like you, we had the lake to make it cooler.

  6. Hi Mark, hope you had a great vacation…thank you for a very inspiring post.  I am looking forward to rereading the Rice: From Planting to Milling.   I enjoyed Basho’s haiku  “…as autumn draws near…”

    fresh morning

    watering 

    the last of the tomatoes

    ~  ~  ~

    backyard squirrel

    checking 

    her hiding places

    ~  ~  ~

    white dew drops

    taking the color

    my faded roses

    ~  ~  ~

    rice

    with chicken soup 

    her cold 

    ~  ~  ~

    There’s a lovely children’s book titled  “Chicken Soup with Rice: A Book of Months”… my son’s teacher used to read it to the class years ago, when he was in kindergarten.

    1. Hi Maddy, Thanks for the welcome back! It was a good vacation and now I need a vacation from the vacation activities!! A wonderful collection of haiku for this week! I really like “white dew drops”. Very nice.

      1. Thank you Mark for your feedback. I know what you mean about needing a vacation from your vacation. lol! Hope you are able to get some rest this weekend…Thank you for including the Saijiki template.  I intend to look at it again…Hope you and all have a great rest of the day.  🙂

      2. Hi Mark, I enjoyed your poem, “labor day” which really resonates with me. I didn’t realize that cardinals normally raise two sets of chicks in the same year and it’s the same for American robins and Eastern bluebirds, (I just looked it up:).  I enjoyed the play on words, too! We were blessed with a second brood in our own family…Looking forward to the new season with all the baking and fun! 🙂

    2. Hi Maddy, all your haikus are excellent. I love the moments you captured with the watering of the last of the tomatoes to be harvested later as fall continues to ripen. What a reminder that it is fall harvest. Nicely done.

      The white dew borrowing the color of roses…sublime comparision.

      1. Thank you Suzette…your feedback means a lot to me! I also find your haiku this week to be excellent,  especially the last line, “autumn dips its brush”  inspiring me to welcome this new season of fall. 

      1.  Nan, it means a lot!  I am happy my squirrel poem and inspiration to my rice poem made you smile!  Awww, thank you! She is much better now! 🙂  …Will be going back to work, Monday.  

    3. I only had a few cherry tomatoes this year. The ones I bought from the farmer’s stand weren’t as flavorful as I’d hoped. One needs good acidity in the soil for tasty tomatoes.

      I really enjoyed ready ‘Chicken Soup With Rice’ to my children. Maurice Sendak books are wonderful.

      If you’ve got a cold… get well soon 🙂

    4. Maddy – I couldn’t reply where you posted about the butterflies… Yes I still see some paintd lady butterflies… and wonder if they are from the kit we had?

      No Swallowtails emerged while I was away – though I put in a few flowers just in case 🙂

    1. Hi Griffin,
      Yes, I will take care of the multiple posts. Glad that you like the idea of the saijiki. I hope it provides poetic inspiration!
      Wonderful haiku. I like your choice of “chuffing” in L2. Very nice.

    2. Griffin,

      How apropos… I saw a baby heron in my gully area (that leads to the creek – a few days ago. I like seeing the Great Blues fishing in the creek at the end of my yard.

  7. Glad to see you are back, and with such an interesting post. I shall try to make up a couple of haiku in response but first I wanted to offer, for those interested, an essay I wrote a while back about Heaven, Earth and Man which is mentioned in the category list. They are an extremely old triad but also used by many traditionally trained artists to this day in Asia but are not much written about or explained. I tried to make a stab at it because I studied with a Tibetan artist-teaching the 1970’s who also studied Japanese Flower Arranging wherein Heaven Earth and Man were the core principles used around which composition was structured to reflect. For example, the first flowers (or with a large one a branch) is Heaven and tends to be tall and over-arching; the second is Earth and is often a clump of smaller branches or flowers which compliment Heaven’s first over-arching one; then Man ties them both together making them more dynamic somehow. This is an outer, or physical, description but the Triad works on the inner, or mental/atmospheric, level as well. So Heaven is the initial atmosphere or mood. (This is what is being supplied by the kigo.) It is the first brushstroke which is still very open-ended, without a conclusion or point. Earth provides relationship, a next step, something more tangible. The two together create more than just each one. A splendid sunset (Heaven) is different if one is viewing them from a mountain or a beach; a stormy sky is different from a blue sky, so there is stormy Heaven versus Peaceful Heaven. Then you have trees blowing madly in the stormy situation. And Man might be a diminutive figure in a boat wrestling in a raging river; or in a Peaceful Sky, lazy Palm Tree (Heaven & Earth), Man might be a monkey scratching his neighbour, or a child picking flowers, bringing the scene to life somehow.

    Many, though not all, haikus follow a Heaven Earth Man structure with the last line being Man, often having some sort of surprise, colour, passion to bring the whole thing together into a vivid moment of nowness.

    My essay about it: https://baronbrasdor.art/2024/02/21/layers-levels-chapter-five-heaven-earth-man/

    (Sorry if that is too long; as you can tell, I find the Heaven Earth Man topic of interest!)

    1. Hi Baron, This is fascinating! Thanks for sharing and drawing the connections between Heaven Earth Man, Flowering arranging, and haiku. I may have to read this over a couple of times!

  8. Mist creeping down the hills
    Slinking unseen under the door sills at night…
    We pull the blankets a little tighter

    Dark clouds above yielding a bright circle of glorious blue
    Behind and around darkly echoing thunder and rain
    Ginger, our dog, shivering in her cubby hole

    Yesterday arrived our cast iron wood stove
    Today Amazon delivers red flannel sheets
    Surrounded by brooding mists waiting for rains to end…

    (We live a few hundred yards above the coffee belt altitude at about 5,500 feet, two hours from the Gulf of Mexico which wafts in mucho humidity, so our equivalent to autumn is the end of the rainy season, which started in June-July and is just now beginning to taper off though will continue into October. Where we are, nearly every night for 1-3 hours we get torrential downpours hammering on our metal roof with thunder a-plenty, often surrounded by low-hanging clouds which when you are in them look like mist. The days are sunny and warm, like perfect spring or early summer weather. As it happens, the hint of the rainy season ending has just started this week, which is about as close as we are going to get to autumn, I suspect. When the rains finally end, almost immediately after comes winter, which lasts about 4 months. It hardly ever goes below about 5C (40F?), so not too bad, but still: we will be using that wood stove!)

    1. I love these poems, Baron…they evoke such a sense of Autumn. The first two resonate with me. The first one is my favorite. I am glad that there is a hint of the ending of the rainy season already. 🙂

    2. Your poems are so visual, Baron. I can just see the mist coming down the hills in your first one. The others, too, have a similar feel to them…a shivering dog, warm flannel sheets. You’ve created fall in all its iterations. ~Nan

      1. Thanks for kind words (you and others). Maybe they are so visual because, at least in this case, I was describing what was actually happening as I wrote them. The mist or clouds were right in front of my window. The thunder was reverberating all around. The dog was huddled in a corner shivering (she is frightened of thunder and fireworks!); the only thing I made up was pulling the blankets closer – because actually this week has been a little warmer than usual.

        Actually, am finding it both fun and challenging following Mark’s seasonal posts because Mexico really doesn’t have quite the same seasons. We do have a colder spell in winter for sure, and now that I’ve moved up to around 5500 feet the winters are considerably colder. But spring, summer and fall are not the same at all. We have flowers and grass etc. year-round here. In Central Mexico the rainy season ends around October and then by January-February everything has dried out and the landscape gets more and more like a desert. If you want to keep flowers going you need to water them a lot which poor people in rural communities cannot do. But here in coffee country where it is generally humid, our ‘dry season’ still gets a light rain several times a week keeping everything green. Then at some point it gets very hot, usually April-May. Then it will cool down a little from June to September as the rainy season kicks in. Still very warm and pleasant but not as boiling hot as April-May. So we sort of have winter – summer – spring – winter. Not really a fall as far as I can tell. So for us, knowing the rainy season will end makes us want to get ready for winter, which is what you guys up North do during the fall.

        It’s a topsy-turvy world…

    1. Hi Adele, I do love this description of the season turning to autumn and it being juxtaposed with a human activity in L3… “Another school time” works so well… I can’t help but feel nostalgic. 🙂

    2. Hi Adele,
      I am really enjoying your haiku and really like “green turns to yellow”. I have been trying to put that same sentiment in a haiku for a couple of days without any success. I like how you captured the moment with this one.

    3. In three lines, Adele, you created the beginning of autumn with your words. I always feel like it is the beginning of the year (rather than January 1) when school begins. Well done, bringing autumn to life. ~Nan

    1. Darcy, I like them both, but your second haiku is combines both the natural world with the modern physical world (post-Edison, that is). And that second line acts as a pivot. Nicely done. ~Nan

  9. Mark, glad to see you back. Hope your time away has been refreshing. I love the idea of creating a sajiki list. Will participants be creating their own kigo for their particular area? Inquiring minds want to know (and I’ll be honest, I have not read any of the comments, and quickly skimmed your blog, which I will remedy soon after posting my haiku). Haiku referencing the beginning of autumn:

    first days of school…
    the tears from
    another mass shooting
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024
    off-the-cuff haiku

    autumnal advent
    leaves piling up
    on the ground
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024
    off-the-cuff haiku

    one by one
    dropping leaves
    –summer burial
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024                                        

    1. Hi Nan, wish that there weren’t such a tragic reason to write your first poem..reality as it is–an incomprehensible loss and waste of young as well as mature lives :/ if I might say, the last two haiku are remarkable in their own way. I feel they could very well be tied to the first because of the very symbolic way in which you wrote…I have the impression that this connection was intended.

      1. It is good that you wrote about this tragedy. (There are far too many of them, as expressed in ‘”leaves piling up” in your second haiku.) This tragedy, tragedies need awareness such as in the example of your poems…until it is stopped. Thank you, Nan.

      2. Madeleine,

        Thanks for the kind words. I, too, am sorry that for the loss of life once again. It is tragic how many mass shootings occur, and it really disturbs me. I wish I could say that the three haiku were intentionally written to be read together, but they do seem to work together. Actually, the last one was written about a week ago and posted on Twitter. I really liked it and thought I would share it again. ~Nan

      3.  Nan, the fact that you took the time to write about it and are sharing it on Twitter and on Mark’s post is such a wonderful and helpful thing to do. I hope you continue to share these great poems.

      4. Thanks, Madeleine, for your support. Over the years, I have written more than a few haiku about mass shootings, unfortunately. I hope to never have to write another, just as I hope to never hear about children being murdered at school.  ~Nan

      1. Thanks, Eavonka, for your moving words. The first haiku was intentional to the moment, but the others were serendipity. I see it now that you and Madeleine pointed them out. ~Nan

    2. Hi Nan,
      I also read all three haiku and thought they were intentionally connected. Serendipity indeed!
      As far as the saijiki, I was planning on doing a saijiki-themed post once a month. Then, maybe others can share some of their observations. I don’t have a solid plan yet, just running with the idea. We’ll seehow it all unfolds.

      1. I’ll look forward to the posts, Mark, and hope to fill out my form. I have used the list of Five Hundred….Season Words since the Haiku Foundation’s Renku Sessions master, John Stevenson, said that it was “required” in his renku. Up until then, I just wrote haiku. In my opinion, I think It has made me a more thoughtful poet in my word choice. Creating specific kigo for Ohio, awesome! ~Nan

    3. Hi Nan, how powerful haiku can be with three little lines. And your first haiku fills that. Incredible sadness from another tragic event. Your other two haiku are vivid in showing the actions of the leaves. I always look forward to the leaves changing colors, and how they float for a bit when traveling from tree branch to the ground 🙂

      1. Thank you, Dave, for your uplifting words on my haiku as well as your words about fall leaves. They do, indeed, seem to float and twist as they make their way to the group. ~Nan

  10. Hi Mark, Welcome back. I hope that your short time off was refreshing and relaxing.

    Thank you for the wonderful information on rice….I thought I knew about rice but I did not know and was pleased to hear that the water is returned to the rice fields and birds etc are allowed to forage and by extension nourish/revive the land.

    I love Buson’s haiku…made me chuckle what a way to capture a moment with a well-known sound.

    “Now I realize

    autumn’s arrived

    — achoo!”

  11. Hi Suzette, I enjoyed reading your commentary on the rice section in Mark’s post and your appreciation of Buson’s haiku. It really is a delight…I am intrigued by how his writing about something so ordinary can produce such beauty and humor. 

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