October 14 to October 20 is the 42nd week of the year. The Solar Term for this week is Cold Dew (Oct 08 – Oct. 22) and the micro-season for this week is “Chrysanthemums Bloom” (Oct 13 – Oct 17).
Basho, Issa, Buson, and Reichhold wrote the poems selected for this week.
The 24 Solar Terms
The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around Xi’an, the capital of China during the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)
Cold Dew
Cold Dew, the seventeenth Solar Term of the year the fifth Solar Term of Autumn. Hanlu (寒露) is the Chinese name for this season. Hanlu (寒露) means even lower temperatures should be expected.(2)
Chrysanthemum liquor is a traditional drink during Cold Dew.(2) The chrysanthemum has been used in Chinese Medicine for thousands of years. When consumed as an herbal tea, it is said to to treat respiratory issues, boost the immune system, reduce blood pressure, and improve sight.(3).
The 72 Seasons
The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)
The micro-season for this week is “Chrysanthemums Bloom” (Oct 13 – Oct 17).
The Chrysanthemum
The Chrysanthemum, which is often called “mum”, is a perennial flowering plant belonging to the Asteraceae family and the Chrysanthemum genus. There are about 40 different species of chrysanthemums.(6)
A chrysanthemum flower may vary in color from white to purple. Some of these flowers have both disk and ray florets within their flower heads, other species may have only one type of floret. Disk flowers are small tubular flowers located at the center of a composite flower. Ray flowers are the larger ones around the flower head’s edge.(6)
Chrysanthemums are popular fall-blooming ornamental plants, and they are relatively easy to grow as long as they receive full sun and are in well-drained soil with good air circulation. While the plants thrive in full sun during growth, their flowers last longer if moved to shadier spots after blooming. Chrysanthemums typically bloom from early September until the first frost.(7)
Chrysanthemum’s Cultural Significance
Chrysanthemums were first cultivated in China as a flowering herb around the 15th century B.C. Over time, they became culturally significant, joining the plum blossom, orchid, and bamboo as part of the “Four Gentlemen” in traditional Chinese ink and wash paintings.(8) These four plants symbolized virtues promoted by Confucianism: the plum represented inner beauty and resilience in adversity; the orchid symbolized grace, beauty, and nobility; the bamboo stood for cultivation and integrity; and the chrysanthemum symbolized “virtue to withstand all adversities.”(9)
Chrysanthemums were introduced to Japan during the Nara period (710–794 AD) and became especially popular in the Edo period (1603–1867). The imperial family embraced the flower, and incorporated it into the emperor’s crest. This led to the term “chrysanthemum throne” being associated with the emperor.(10)
Today, the chrysanthemum remains deeply embedded in Japanese culture. Its likeness is found on currency, clothing, and passports, and Japan’s highest honor, the Supreme Order of the Chrysanthemum.(10)
Haiku, Kigo, and Saijiki
The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku. A kigo “a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season.”(6) It can “conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions.”(11) When used in a haiku, it is “especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(11)
A saijiki is a dictionary of season words, or kigo, paired with haiku using that season word. A saijiki is a reference and tool for the poet that is divided into five seasons (Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, and New Year) and separated into seven categories.
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, each of the five seasons has seven categories of words.
- Seasons
- Heavens
- Earth
- Humanity
- Observances
- Animals
- Plants
While this document doesn’t include haiku for each season word, it is helpful in understanding what words may be kigo.
In A Dictionary of Haiku, Jane Reichhold’s English language saijiki representing her location and experiences, she follows the five seasons structure with some slight differences in categories. Reichhold’s categories are:
- Moods
- Occasions
- Celestial
- Terrestrial
- Livelihood
- Animals
- Plants
Both Reichhold’s Dictionary and Yamamoto’s Essential Season Words are helpful in understanding the role and use of kigo in haiku.
This Week’s Kigo and Haiku
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “chrysanthemums”, “orchids” and “morning glory” are relevant kigo for this week. These kigo are found in the Autumn-Plants section of Yamamoto’s list.
In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “asters”, “chrysanthemum”, and “heather” are relevant kigo. These kigo are found in the Autumn-Plants section of Reichhold’s list.
Now, let’s read some haiku.
Basho
deep into autumn-
a butterfly sipping
chrysanthemum dew.
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
drinking morning tea
the monk is quiet
as is the mum flower
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
Lovely hermitage -
the moon, chrysanthemums, and
an acre of rice
(translated by Sam Hamill)
Issa
a standing priest a standing crane... field chrysanthemums (translated by David G. Lanoue)
blooming chrysanthemum like me a pseudo-hermit (translated by David G. Lanoue)
grassy thicket-- what karma lets the chrysanthemum survive? (translated by David G. Lanoue)
Buson
It’s time then to throw flowers in a vase — chrysanthemums (translated by Allan Persinger)
The candle reveals a pallid waxy face and yellow chrysanthemums (translated by Allan Persinger)
Reichhold
broken by the storm the asters' fragrance rises out of damp earth
autumn rain above the dialysis machine a withered mum
Haiku invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu about chrysanthemums!
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write!
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A Local Saijiki Project
The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society, explains that a saijiki is useful for poets, “naturalists, and people interested in the natural and cultural history of an area.” The saijiki contains seasonal words, plus haiku that demonstrate the poetic qualities of the words.
The creation of a local saijiki, one that represents an individual community, always felt like a big, daunting, and yet worthwhile project. So, I have decided to try and create my own saijiki. I am not sure how this will turn out, but if you are interested in joining me and creating your own saijiki, I have created a saijiki worksheet to get you started. If nothing else, this is a good exercise in noticing the natural world and writing haiku. Let’s see where this project takes us!
About Today’s Haiku
Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku was retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku.
References:
- “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
- “6 Solar Terms of Autumn”; China Educational Tours
- “The History and Healing Power of The Chrysanthemum”. The Qi.com
- 72 Seasons App
- “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
- “Chrysanthemum”; Brittanica
- “Chrysanthemum: Growin, Care, & Design Tips”; Garden Design
- “The ‘Four Gentlemen’”; Art of the Brush
- “Four Gentlemen”; Chinaonlinemuseum.com
- “How Did the Chrysanthemum Become the Symbol of the Japanese Emperor?”; Owlcation
- New to Haiku: What is a Kigo?; Haiku Foundation



Mark, thanks as always for inspiration. The dialysis and withered mum really hit me. Yesterday I moved my 98 year-old Dad into a nursing home . . .
bug-chewed brown-tipped
still a dozen asters
for his bedside
Griffin, thanks for sharing your experience with your dad and the accompanying haiku. I too was moved by Reichhold’s “Autumn rain” haiku.
May you and your dad have peace,
LaMon
Griffin, Thank you for your heartfelt haiku. May grace and peace be with you and your Dad each day.
“bug-chewed brown-tipped…” is such a beautiful haiku, Griffin. I too wish peace to you and your dad.
As always, thanks Mark! I hope this never ends! I love my Friday mornings. In terms of the selected poems, I particularly like the whole selection from Basho. I have read it several times already and will go back to it again, I’m sure. We bought some mums just this week! And we have a couple of blooming flowers in our little wildflower garden. So, my haiku:
potted red mums
blue asters and gold cosmos—
autumn beauties
Peace to you and all of the gang,
LaMon
Hi LaMon, The tradition of buying large potted mums at this time of year is seasonal highlight for me. I enjoyed your haiku. Your careful arrangement of the colors and floral names brings earth and sky together in my thoughts. Most excellent!
A wonderful haiku, LaMon. Such delightful imagery!
Madeleine,
I just want to say that you are one of the best haiku cheerleaders this community (and I am including the Haiku Foundation) has. I am sorry that you have been treated horribly there. I am so proud to know you and I support you.
Virtual hugs,
Nan
Dear Maddy,
I want to echo, Nan. You are nothing but encouraging. I was shocked and appalled by what I saw today. I am so sorry that happened.
Please know, I adore you, and I am furious that anyone would treat you this way.
💜💜💜
Eavonka
Writing from western NC…
after the flood
potted mums
in living color
Autumn midnight:
Fallen chrysanthemum petals
Scattered ghosts dimly gleaming on the moonlit dining table
Autumn full moon
Our tender hearted rescue-shelter dog
Her inner wolf up all night barking
At Moon and Chrysanthemums!
As rainy season ends
Dense clouds enmist our colding mountain;
Occasional chrysanthemums yet quietly bloom
These are lovely haiku, Baron. I really like the first and second haiku. “Autumn midnight…” is full of the seasonal spirit and the second poem is so heart warming…full of imagery: “…tender hearted rescue-shelter dog…”
A beautiful haiku… a vivid choice of words Darcy. I understand that North Carolina was the state that was most affected by both hurricanes. I hope you and your family are doing alright.
A meaningful poem. Thanks.
Peace, LaMon
Thank you Mark for the great information. I was struck by the 42 week mark of the year reminder….only 10 weeks left in the year. The information on chrysanthemums is insipiring especially the significance given to them as “virtue to withstand all adversities.” I also visited your provided link to the wonderful article “Four Gentlemen” in traditional Chinese ink and wash paintings, totally inspiring emphasis on meditation and the self awareness which I did not expect from an article on painting.
You really do great research Mark, thank you. The deep poignant moments in these poems were moving:
Issa:-
blooming chrysanthemum
like me
a pseudo-hermit
And Reichhold:-
autumn rain
above the dialysis machine
a withered mum
I love this commentary Suzette…it’s inspiring me to read Mark’s post again with a focus on the article about “the Four Gentlemen”.
I am glad it resonated Maddy. The Four Gentlemen add a special and rich dimension to the ideas of flowers as symbols and tokens,
I agree, Suzette! 🙂
Hi Mark and everyone,
What a great post. I have a class every other Friday…I wasn’t able to post earlier. I loved reading about chrysanthemums, “the Four Gentlemen” and “cold dew”. “Deep into autumn…” and “drinking morning tea…” by basho resonate for me.
At a restaurant some time ago…
chrysanthemum
petals
in her green tea
~ ~ ~
My mother was born in november and her favorite flowers were chrysanthemums
fall favorite
our mom
a chrysanthemum blossom
I hope the above isn’t too similar to Issa’s haiku, “chrysanthemum blooming…”. I had worked on it before I saw Issa’s.
~ ~ ~
cold dew
a robin
flies to our window
~ ~ ~
She leaves her tea out too long
cold brew
her chrysanthemum
tea
Hey Maddy, loved the haiku. The first one is my favorite. I can see the scene!
Peace,
LaMon
Thanks, LaMon…it means alot. Peace to you…hope you have a lovely evening!
Hello Maddy,
I love all three haikus and the great connections you made to your mother’s birthday and the beauty of a mother’s love in the second one is very moving,
I like the sound of chrysanthemum petals in green tea…delightful.
Thanks Suzette for your positive and thoughtful commentary. It’s encouraging. Hope you are having a lovely Saturday.
You are most welcome. And thank you, for your best wishes. And same to you Maddy. Have a lovely Saturday!
Thank you Suzette. 🙂
Maddy,
Lovely ku – there are only so many ways to express the same thoughts. I too write before I read the ‘masters’ verses.
While I was born in late October… my flower – the favorite is a football mum! 🙂
Thanks Jules 🙂 I had no idea there was such a thing as football mums…they are beautiful! And Happy Birthday soon, Jules!
Thank you!
WP must be having some issues… ?
Thanks.
I have to admit Jules, I didn’t realize it was going to be such a big smiley face…Lol!
Happy is good.
Hope you have a wonderful time! 🙂
I generally don’t do anything special these days… I do have a gift to open from a relative from out of state though…
I don’t think it’s wp, I think it’s me …I have to find a more reliable website for copying and pasting emogi faces. (lol:)
No worries. ~Thanks
Sounds like fun, Jules…and I admire your will power…I would have opened it up by now!:) Lol!
A few more days… to go. 🙂
I am intrigued…the 30th or …Halloween? 🙂
Ooh… some things should remain mysterious 😉
Lol, Jules…perfect for the season!
🎃
Happy Halloween Jules, Mark and as LaMon refers to us…”the gang”! 🙂
…Can’t resist sending a Halloween haiku!
autumn walk
even the skeleton
smiles
🎃 💀
Jules, I hope your birthday went well and that you had a good halloween. No trick or treater came knocking at the door in our neck of the woods…we spent the evening wolfing down pizza and watching scary movies. 🙂 Miss you all–our Friday get togethers— filled with poems and wonderful information. Hope you and all have a great holiday weekend!
I had a day like every other. I think Mark skipped another Friday – I went looking, (I don’t follow many sites) and last Friday I didn’t look. I’ve been through the whole year now… I think I might do once a month… Getting a bit hectic now towards the end of the year. Thanks for thinking of me, I appreciate it.
Understandable, Jules…it gets very busy this time of year. That’s great you’ve gone through a whole year in Season Words. I went for a walk yesterday in the afternoon and since it’s camellia blossom time (according to the micro season calendar), I didn’t see any. What stood out were the maple trees… some of course turning a blazen red and others pale yellow. I looked those up …
It’s been raining this morning. I couldn’t help but get inspired
petrichor
the kettle sings
inside
🙂 We had a nice rain that started around 4pm and lasted throughout the night. I had to clear a clog of leaves from my gully so the water could flow free.
Sounds lovely, Jules 🙂 …the rain has been very peaceful over here!
More rain tonight. 🙂
sounds wonderful Jules! 🙂
Maddy – I went looking… there is nothing at SW beyond week 42, which I wrote to. I do hope our host is OK. Sometimes we all need some time off especially in November and December.
I am a little concerned, too, Jules. I hope Mark is doing alright. Yes, it’s true…these are very hectic months…I’m hoping that’s what it is.
I emailed him last time there was a blip in action… perhaps you can this time?
Be well – If you visit any of my links on this site it will take you to my blog… if you are looking for me 🙂
I know that some folks only post in comments and don’t have a blog. (((Hugs)))
Hi Jules,
Hope you are doing well… Miss you and all. I hope it’s warm, now where you are. ☺️
Sent you an email… thanks 🙂
☺️
Mark, another great post. The timing couldn’t more appropriate as I have seen so many mums among the fall decorations. I’d love to taste chrysanthemum liquor sometime just to experience it. Here are some haiku:
mums on the lapels
of the homecoming court
–October evening
~Nancy Brady, 2024
supermoon…
mimicking the orange
of chrysanthemums
~Nancy Brady, 2024
#offthecuffhaiku
Hi Nan, your haiku are wonderful…I really like that in your first, you highlight a lovely fall celebration. Your second resonates for me. It’s intriguing and imaginative how you compare a chrysanthemum to the supermoon. Well done!
Another wonderful haiku, Suzette!
Thank you Maddy! Blessings to you!
🙂
Mark,
Lovely info. I’m a day late as I was away visiting family… we arrived back home today. Here’s a pair; Mum’s the Word, Again
second bloom
chrysanthemum gift
a pink diadem
Lace the green stems into a circlet, crown thy crown then dance for autumn.
~~~
spring blooms fade
florets blush again
bring fall hue
I must trim them, so they will spring forth again after winter’s darkness
© JP/dh (Jules)
Hi Jules,
I was struck by your use of autumn…reminding me of Keat’s “Ode to Autumn”… I have been fine tuning the “wild geese” haiku from last week. In honor of “Autumn”.
autumn returns
wild geese
to a peaceful pace
~ ~ ~
wild geese
autumn returns
a peaceful pace
Maddy,
lovely verses. I do enjoy most wilde birdies… but sometimes geese can be very messy! 😉
Yes, they sure can be:) Lol!
Delightful, Jules! I love both your haiku and both your monaku, as well! Your verses are inspiring me to “dance for Autumn”! 🙂
I really like Basho’s haiku about the butterfly sipping chrysanthemum dew.
Here’s mine: https://melissalemay.wordpress.com/2024/10/20/bold-colors/
It’s very lovely, Melissa..very inspiring.
…and the image too. 🙂
https://benjamintonkin.wordpress.com/2024/10/22/22-10-24-haiku/
Wonderful haiku, Ben.
Thank you.
🙂
Happy Halloween to Mark and the Gang! 🙂
We’re all very appreciative of “Season Words”!
a Halloween haiku:
autumn walk
even the skeleton
smiles
I am indeed appreciative of the community of Seasons words. Wonderful haiku Maddy.
Love the images of the skeletons smiling…powerful perspective. Well done Maddy. Have a great weekend!
Thanks Suzette…for your positive message and kind words…I just saw your post. I am sorry I missed it. I hope you, Mark and all are well and having a nice Friday. .
Oh no worries Maddy it is all good. Thank you for your good wishes, and blessings and the same grace to you as well. Cheers.
Thanks Suzette. Your welcome! … A blessed day to you and hope it’s still warm where you are!
Cheers!
Hello Mark and Everyone:
Hope we will be able to get together again soon!
Hope everyone is staying warm!
Have a great week!
Happy Thanksgiving and holiday weekend, Mark and Everyone!
May it be safe, warm and happy! 🙂
What has happened to the blog and Season Words. Is everything alright with Mark?
Baron (and anyone else who is wondering),
I sent him an email a month or so ago, and he indicated that he was dealing with some issues (cleaning out a house after a death) and hoped to be back soon. I keep expecting to get an email indicating he has posted another blog. We just have to be patient in the meantime. ~Nan
Hi Barron, Season Words has started up again, under “Spring Haiku–May 25”. I hope you will join us soon.
*oops, I mean, “Spring Haiku–May 2025”
Lovely post as always. Hoping all is well, and wishing you and yours a wonderful holiday season. Have been missing your blog, as I’m sure many are! <33
We are not sure Barron…Hoping too that everything is alright with Mark! Happy New Year to you all!
Eavonka, trusting that you and yours are safe and sound from the fires going on right now.
I’m so sorry, I hadn’t seen this, Maddy. We are safe and sound (other than the air quality), but it’s still been emotionally devastating.
I just sent you a note under Nan’s new message. I’m here to lift you up!
Eavonka, I am so happy to hear you are safe and sound. I can’t begin to imagine the emotional devastation these fires have caused. You are in my thoughts and prayers.
Dear Eavonka and Nan, you are shining lights in our poetry communities…you inspire and are both dear to my heart.
Aww, Madeleine, thank you so much! I am always so happy when I see you get published. You have learned so much!
Thanks, Eavonka…I have learned so much from your mentoring! 🙂
I am so happy for you! A haiku and haibun in the Red Moon Anthology and your new book, ” Variations on the Planets” just got published. I also love your “last kick…” posted in Solitary Daisy.☺️
I didn’t see the last part of the messages until recently…it means to me.
Me, too…what Eavonka said.
Nan
Thank you Nan and Eavonka, your messages mean so much to me… I am lifted up.
Much appreciated, Nan.
Thank you for letting us know.
Nan, thank you for letting us know and for the wise advice in being patient.
🙂