Micro-Season: “Thick Fog Blankets the Sky” (2023)

Aug 17 to Aug 22 is the micro-season “Thick Fog Blankets the Sky”.  This is the third micro-season of the season of First Autumn. All the micro-seasons within First Autumn are:

These seasons were established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. While they are specific to Japan, you can use these seasons as a starting point for exploring the natural world.

To celebrate this season, we will learn about autumn fog and then read haiku by Issa, Basho, Buson, Reichhold, and Kerouac.


Fog

Fog is often described as a cloud that stays close to the ground, and, like clouds, fog is made up of tiny suspended water droplets. However, unlike clouds, fog doesn’t move much.

The suspended water droplets that become fog form around tiny pieces of floating matter.  National Geographic explains this process by saying, “In order for fog to form, dust or some kind of air pollution needs to be in the air. Water vapor condenses around these microscopic solid particles.”(1)

Fog can be either salt water or fresh water fog.  Fog that appears near bodies of salt water can go by many names including called sea fog, haar, or sea fret.(2)  In sea fog the water droplets condense around tiny particles of salt. 

If you are interested in learning more about fog, its formation, and how to classify fog, check out last year’s post where we took a deep dive into these topics.

Fog in Autumn

Fog is more likely to happen during autumn compared to other seasons due to the longer cool nights and continued warm days. The interaction between these warm and cool periods is ideal for fog formation.

To explain this further, when nighttime temperatures drop, the heat accumulated in the earth during the day begins to dissipate into the atmosphere. Then, as the temperature falls below the dew point, which is when water vapor condenses into water droplets, fog will form near the surface.

Radiation Fog and Autumn

Radiation fog, also known as ground or valley fog, is the most common type of fog in autumn. The chances of experiencing radiation fog increase after a rainy night because there is more moisture on the earth and in the air.  

It’s important to note winds over 15 mph may prevent the formation of radiation fog because the breeze can bring in drier air that will interrupt fog formation.

Seasonal Haiku

The World Kigo Database tells us the kiri is the term used for the fog of autumn and winter.  This is different from kasumi and oboro, which are the words used for the mist and haze experienced in spring. 

 In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, fog is listed in the “Heavens” section of autumn words. In A Dictionary of Haiku, Jane Reichhold lists fog in the “Celestial” category of autumn words.  

Now with this in mind, let’s read some haiku!

Issa

the morning fog
tangled
in the willow
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
morning after morning
my tea tastes better...
falling fog
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Buson

morning fog–
a painting of people passing
In a dream.
(translated by David Coomler)
In the morning fog 
a city of one thousand eaves — 
market noises
(translated by EP Allen)

Basho

clouds of fog
quickly doing their best to show
one hundred scenes 
(translated by Jane Reichhold)

Jane Reichhold

broken fence
river valley fog patches
the gaping holes
evening
in a secret cove
fog bound

Jack Kerouac

Leaves skittering on
   the tin roof
–August fog in Big Sur
Temple tree
   across the creek
–Fog blowing

Haiku Invitation

This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu that references the arrival of autumn fog.

Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your own page and link back to this post. I can’t wait to read what you write!  


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Resources:

  1. “Fog”; National Geographic Society
  2. “Fog”; Wikipedia 
  3. Mersereau, Dennis. “It’s not your imagination–here’s why fall is the foggiest season”. The Weather Network
  4. “Fog Types”; National Weather Service PDF
  5. “Fog, Mist, Haze, and More”; World Kigo Database

Issa’s haiku were retrieved from the World Kigo Database.  Basho’s haiku was retrieved from Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Hokku: Writing Through the Seasons and Foxfire: The Selected Poems of Yosa Buson. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from A Dictionary of HaikuJack Kerouac’s haiku were retrieved from Book of Haikus.

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  1. Mark,

    Lovely info this morning. I’ve three offerings and info. I’ll inclued the first one here;

    …thick fog blankets the sky…

    thick vale fog
    majestic proud buck
    autumn dawn

    Early morn, I fill bird feeders; we see each other blessing silence

    (I’ve written about this majestic buck before. It was really quite something to see such a huge multi point buck in my neighbors yard. I didn’t/couldn’t get too close, but I did tell him how hansome he was with his full rack!)

    1. Hi Jules, Another wonderful trio for this week. “thick vale fog” is my favorite. I think that is mostly because of the scene that it depicts. Very cool!

    2. Lovely haiku, Jules. That would be so cool to see buck with antlers. I’ve seen does and their fawns, but never the male. I will be checking out your other haiku, too. ~Nan

      1. I’ve been luck to see that ‘buck’ as well as an entire family; Buck, doe, teen and a pair of fawn. Just in the right place at the right time at the picture window 🙂
        ~Thanks

      1. Hi Jules: I just saw the very interesting information about droughts you posted in response to the California drought I brought up, (in Mark’s “Heavy Rain Showers” Micro-Season Post.) I am sorry it took so long to respond:/

      2. I think even if we didn’t speak the same language that we, the buck and I understood the magic of the moment 🙂
        ~Thank you.

  2. Interesting post, per usual, Mark. I even re-read your former post and agree while Sandburg’s poem isn’t a haiku, it’s worthy of being included. Here’s a haiku or two about autumn fog.

    the gray cat emerges
    from the autumn fog
    –October morn
    ~Nancy Brady, 2023

    the morning newspapers
    full of bad news
    –autumn fog
    ~Nancy Brady, 2023

    washboard road…
    an autumn fog appears
    and disappears
    ~Nancy Brady, 2023 (a work-in-progress)

    Have a great (fog-free) weekend!

    1. Hi Nancy, These are wonderful! I am not sure if “the gray cat” of ” the morning newspaper” is my favorite. I do like haiku with animals . . .

      1. Thanks, Mark. I wasn’t sure any of them worked well, and I am still playing with the last. I often spend time at the Haiku Foundation when there are renku sessions (going on now, by the way). Some of my two liners, I use as phrases in haiku, and both of the ones you mentioned were once considered by the person in charge of the renku. I tend to forget about them, but in this case, I just added a fragment and made some modifications to them to turn them into haiku. Thanks for keeping me writing. ~Nan

    2. I love all three, Nan. Isn’t great when you can add a fragment to a phrase and make it sing?

      My favorite is the grey cat which works as an allegory for fog and as an actual cat too.

      1. Thanks, Eavonka. I like the gray cat one, too. It reminds me of Sandburg’s poem. Wispy fog takes such interesting shapes.

        I like your monoku. I think it works well. (PS. I noticed the typo, too, when I first read it.)

      2. The former English teacher in me always proofreading. 😂 And yet, my autocorrect messes me up daily.

    3. Hi Nan:
      I love your poems! The cat one is darling:) I really enjoyed the description “washboard road”, conveying the rippling effect of fog appearing and disappearing.

      1. Hi Madeleine,
        Thanks so much for kind remarks; appreciate them. I wasn’t sure the washboard road haiku would make sense to anyone but me. I’ve driven home on a road like that and have experienced that effect of going in and out of fog.

    4. Hi Nan: happy to…the washboard poem has fast became my favorite of the trio, a perfect description:)

  3. Something like fog but
    thin, thin. Oh, it’s rain, hiding
    in the ghost of cloud.

    *

    How hard it tries
    not to be dismal
    but can’t help it.

    *

    Soon, soon, creeping in
    the trees have been alerted
    autumn, giving in.

    My humble offering 🙂 Hope you’re well, Mark!

    1. Hi Sunra, Thanks so much for adding to the conversation! I really like the thought of the fog alerting the trees to the upcoming colder weather. Very nice!

  4. fog horns bellowing before the fog

    Probably not technically a ku, but I like the sounds. It is based on my experiences living only a mile from the ocean in Long Beach (part of the most active port in the US) when I sometimes wake to a foghorn and blue skies. The fog can shift so quickly.

      1. Yay!! Thank you so much, Nan. BTW I’m participating in my first renku session on THF. I truly have no clue and bumbling along, but it’s fun to learn.

      1. So far we’re just a bit freaked out to have CA’s first hurricane headed our way, but perhaps the winds will switch or it will decrease quite a bit in size by Sunday. 🤞🤞🤞

  5. Hi Mark: This is wonderful information on the different kinds of fog. I had no idea that in order for fog to even form it requires particles of dust or air pollution.

    I really enjoyed Issa’s two poems: “…tangled in willow” and “…my tea tasting better…” (Hoping my tea starts tasting better, too:) (lol)

    As always I love the poems by my fellow poets!

    1. Hi Madeleine, I always appreciate Issa’s work and you are correct there are come great poems shared by others. It is such a joy to read what everyone comes up with.

  6. Here are my submissions:

    fog thick with early autumn fragrance!

    diablo wind
    on my walk…
    dispelling brain fog

    1. Hi Madeleine,
      I really like the monoku with the smell of autumn because of the fog. Thanks for making me look up diablo wind so now I know and it makes your haiku that more compelling. ~nan

      1. Hi Mark: Thank-you for the opportunity you give to us to practice writing haiku and all the while learning more about the world around us!

    2. Madeleine,

      Autumn fragrance here, near ‘Amish’ farm country is wet hay!

      I think we could use a good diablo wind sometimes… It was very hot today.

      (Not to worry about delayed responses. Sometimes I tend to babble… ~thank you.)

      1. Hi Jules: That’s funny! …Yes, a good diablo wind always comes in handy! Thanks, I don’t think any of us feel these pearls of wisdom you impart are babble:)

      2. Awe, I always joke about being over the hill…
        And with grands now both in double digits! But still young at heart. ~Thank you.

  7. Eavonka,
    I hope the hurricane calms down and that you don’t get all the rain that’s predicted.

    As for the renku, I have participated in a few of them at THF, but so far, I have no clue with this session (it’s so early in the process). I just throw out some lines and see what happens. To be honest, I have no idea how linking in renku works; sometimes it seem really random. Just have fun with it and keep a list of your lines. I’m glad you’ve joined in. I have gotten a few decent haiku based on some of those lines that I wrote during former renku sessions, and they keep my writing fresh. One of the leaders indicated the same. I wish the same for you.

    1. Sounds like just the journey I want to be on! I am keeping everything in my Notes on my phone. I only have been offering one per week, but I see others offer tons. Baby steps.

      1. I never offer more than two or three (in the past, there was a limit of five offers), but many put in ten or more. I don’t know if putting out more than a couple matters. Just have fun with it. Baby steps…maybe there’s a phrase in that! 😉

  8. Thanks for the detailed info on fog and then the haiku share. You parked me at Issa’s. 💗 How his tea tastes better the further away we get from summer. I can relate. 😂 and then how that poor little fog gets tangled up in the branches. Delightful. I think that fog is Rapunzel, and her hair… a tangle mess 🤣
    Thanks, Mark.

    Here I share my best attempts:

    In the morning fog
    mute wait the late mosquitos
    and yet, I slap

    Over and over
    the caw-cawing is black
    in the thickest fog

    Even through fog
    the tallest sunflowers
    wave to me and smile

    Thank you. I will visit often. Yoroshiku 🙇🏽‍♀️

    1. Hi Selma, Thanks so much for your thoughts about Issa’s haiku. Issa does have a magical way with words!
      I really like the imagery of your last fog haiku about sunflowers! Wonderful!
      Thanks for adding to this week’s conversation.

    1. Hi Allyson,
      Thanks for adding your haiku to this week’s conversation! I really like line 3. There is lots to ponder with that one. I hope that all is well!

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