Aug 17 to Aug 22 is the micro-season “Thick Fog Blankets the Sky”. This is the third micro-season of the season of First Autumn. All the micro-seasons within First Autumn are:
- Cold Wind Blows (Aug 07 – Aug 11)
- The Evening Cicada Sings (Aug 12 – Aug 16)
- Thick Fog Blankets The Sky (Aug 17 – Aug 22)
These seasons were established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. While they are specific to Japan, you can use these seasons as a starting point for exploring the natural world.
To celebrate this season, we will learn about autumn fog and then read haiku by Issa, Basho, Buson, Reichhold, and Kerouac.
Fog
Fog is often described as a cloud that stays close to the ground, and, like clouds, fog is made up of tiny suspended water droplets. However, unlike clouds, fog doesn’t move much.
The suspended water droplets that become fog form around tiny pieces of floating matter. National Geographic explains this process by saying, “In order for fog to form, dust or some kind of air pollution needs to be in the air. Water vapor condenses around these microscopic solid particles.”(1)
Fog can be either salt water or fresh water fog. Fog that appears near bodies of salt water can go by many names including called sea fog, haar, or sea fret.(2) In sea fog the water droplets condense around tiny particles of salt.
Fog in Autumn
Fog is more likely to happen during autumn compared to other seasons due to the longer cool nights and continued warm days. The interaction between these warm and cool periods is ideal for fog formation.
To explain this further, when nighttime temperatures drop, the heat accumulated in the earth during the day begins to dissipate into the atmosphere. Then, as the temperature falls below the dew point, which is when water vapor condenses into water droplets, fog will form near the surface.
Radiation Fog and Autumn
Radiation fog, also known as ground or valley fog, is the most common type of fog in autumn. The chances of experiencing radiation fog increase after a rainy night because there is more moisture on the earth and in the air.
It’s important to note winds over 15 mph may prevent the formation of radiation fog because the breeze can bring in drier air that will interrupt fog formation.
Seasonal Haiku
The World Kigo Database tells us the kiri is the term used for the fog of autumn and winter. This is different from kasumi and oboro, which are the words used for the mist and haze experienced in spring.
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, fog is listed in the “Heavens” section of autumn words. In A Dictionary of Haiku, Jane Reichhold lists fog in the “Celestial” category of autumn words.
Now with this in mind, let’s read some haiku!
Issa
the morning fog tangled in the willow (translated by David G. Lanoue)
morning after morning my tea tastes better... falling fog (translated by David G. Lanoue)
Buson
morning fog– a painting of people passing In a dream. (translated by David Coomler)
In the morning fog a city of one thousand eaves — market noises (translated by EP Allen)
Basho
clouds of fog quickly doing their best to show one hundred scenes (translated by Jane Reichhold)
Jane Reichhold
broken fence river valley fog patches the gaping holes
evening in a secret cove fog bound
Jack Kerouac
Leaves skittering on the tin roof –August fog in Big Sur
Temple tree across the creek –Fog blowing
Haiku Invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu that references the arrival of autumn fog.
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your own page and link back to this post. I can’t wait to read what you write!
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Thank You!
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Resources:
- “Fog”; National Geographic Society
- “Fog”; Wikipedia
- Mersereau, Dennis. “It’s not your imagination–here’s why fall is the foggiest season”. The Weather Network
- “Fog Types”; National Weather Service PDF
- “Fog, Mist, Haze, and More”; World Kigo Database
Issa’s haiku were retrieved from the World Kigo Database. Basho’s haiku was retrieved from Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Hokku: Writing Through the Seasons and Foxfire: The Selected Poems of Yosa Buson. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from A Dictionary of Haiku. Jack Kerouac’s haiku were retrieved from Book of Haikus.
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Boy we could use some fog in my locale. I love foggy weather but then I don’t live in London or San Francisco. Thank you for your blogging.
Thanks for the comment! Have a great rest of your day!
I like this post but goodie:
https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/45032/fog-56d2245d7b36c
A bit off topic, but in the last few years, weather forecasts call for “freezing rain fog”. I don’t remember that kind of fog as a kid! 😉
Yes, I like the Sandburg poem! I don’t know if I have heard about freezing rain fog before either. Interesting!
Great post Mark:)
vanishing landscape…
autumn fog rolls in
@suewoodpoetry
Hi Sue, Thanks!
And wonderful haiku for the season!
Sue, what a lovely duostich you have written. I can just see the landscape vanishing as the fog covers the ground. ~Nan
Thank you so much.
Mark,
Lovely info this morning. I’ve three offerings and info. I’ll inclued the first one here;
…thick fog blankets the sky…
thick vale fog
majestic proud buck
autumn dawn
Early morn, I fill bird feeders; we see each other blessing silence
(I’ve written about this majestic buck before. It was really quite something to see such a huge multi point buck in my neighbors yard. I didn’t/couldn’t get too close, but I did tell him how hansome he was with his full rack!)
Hi Jules, Another wonderful trio for this week. “thick vale fog” is my favorite. I think that is mostly because of the scene that it depicts. Very cool!
Indeed. 🙂
Thank you!
Lovely haiku, Jules. That would be so cool to see buck with antlers. I’ve seen does and their fawns, but never the male. I will be checking out your other haiku, too. ~Nan
I’ve been luck to see that ‘buck’ as well as an entire family; Buck, doe, teen and a pair of fawn. Just in the right place at the right time at the picture window 🙂
~Thanks
Hi Jules: Really enjoyed reading your haiku about the buck at early dawn!
He was a beauty or is that ‘handsome?’
~thanks.
Hi Jules:
The monoku on your blog about filling the bird feeder is wonderful 🙂
Hi Jules: I just saw the very interesting information about droughts you posted in response to the California drought I brought up, (in Mark’s “Heavy Rain Showers” Micro-Season Post.) I am sorry it took so long to respond:/
I think even if we didn’t speak the same language that we, the buck and I understood the magic of the moment 🙂
~Thank you.
I think either one works, Jules! (lol:)
thank you Mark for another labor of love post
Hi Barbara, Thank you for your kind words! I hope all is well on your side of the Earth!
thanks Mark, I am not falling off in any case 😀
Interesting post, per usual, Mark. I even re-read your former post and agree while Sandburg’s poem isn’t a haiku, it’s worthy of being included. Here’s a haiku or two about autumn fog.
the gray cat emerges
from the autumn fog
–October morn
~Nancy Brady, 2023
the morning newspapers
full of bad news
–autumn fog
~Nancy Brady, 2023
washboard road…
an autumn fog appears
and disappears
~Nancy Brady, 2023 (a work-in-progress)
Have a great (fog-free) weekend!
Hi Nancy, These are wonderful! I am not sure if “the gray cat” of ” the morning newspaper” is my favorite. I do like haiku with animals . . .
Thanks, Mark. I wasn’t sure any of them worked well, and I am still playing with the last. I often spend time at the Haiku Foundation when there are renku sessions (going on now, by the way). Some of my two liners, I use as phrases in haiku, and both of the ones you mentioned were once considered by the person in charge of the renku. I tend to forget about them, but in this case, I just added a fragment and made some modifications to them to turn them into haiku. Thanks for keeping me writing. ~Nan
I love all three, Nan. Isn’t great when you can add a fragment to a phrase and make it sing?
My favorite is the grey cat which works as an allegory for fog and as an actual cat too.
Thanks, Eavonka. I like the gray cat one, too. It reminds me of Sandburg’s poem. Wispy fog takes such interesting shapes.
I like your monoku. I think it works well. (PS. I noticed the typo, too, when I first read it.)
The former English teacher in me always proofreading. 😂 And yet, my autocorrect messes me up daily.
Hi Nan:
I love your poems! The cat one is darling:) I really enjoyed the description “washboard road”, conveying the rippling effect of fog appearing and disappearing.
Hi Madeleine,
Thanks so much for kind remarks; appreciate them. I wasn’t sure the washboard road haiku would make sense to anyone but me. I’ve driven home on a road like that and have experienced that effect of going in and out of fog.
Hi Nan: happy to…the washboard poem has fast became my favorite of the trio, a perfect description:)
Something like fog but
thin, thin. Oh, it’s rain, hiding
in the ghost of cloud.
*
How hard it tries
not to be dismal
but can’t help it.
*
Soon, soon, creeping in
the trees have been alerted
autumn, giving in.
My humble offering 🙂 Hope you’re well, Mark!
Nice haiku, Sunra.I hope autumn holds off for some time. I am enjoying this summer.
Ha ha, thanks pedometergeek. Autumn arrived here in the UK some time ago, it seems! 🙂
Hi Sunra, Thanks so much for adding to the conversation! I really like the thought of the fog alerting the trees to the upcoming colder weather. Very nice!
Ha ha! You’re most welcome, Mark! 🙂
Lovely 💕
Thanks Mark for another great writing challenge. here is my response to this week’s prompt reference ‘ The Arrival of Autumn Fog’.
Have a great day everyone.
Thanks Goff! Great addition to this week’s conversation!
fog horns bellowing before the fog
Probably not technically a ku, but I like the sounds. It is based on my experiences living only a mile from the ocean in Long Beach (part of the most active port in the US) when I sometimes wake to a foghorn and blue skies. The fog can shift so quickly.
I love the monoku, E. It works.
Yay!! Thank you so much, Nan. BTW I’m participating in my first renku session on THF. I truly have no clue and bumbling along, but it’s fun to learn.
Hi Eavonka, Thanks so adding a wonderful monoku. I really like the image. I hope all is well!
So far we’re just a bit freaked out to have CA’s first hurricane headed our way, but perhaps the winds will switch or it will decrease quite a bit in size by Sunday. 🤞🤞🤞
I have seen the reports on the hurricane. Let’s hope it decreases in intensity before it reaches land. Be safe!
It’s lovely Eavonka. Descriptive and inspiring:)
Thank you, Madeleine, I’m so glad.
Psst, Mark, there’s a typo in the Kerouac ku.
Yes there is! Thanks for catching that.
Here is mine pl-
Thanks so much for adding to this week’s conversation about fog! I hope that you have a good rest of your day.
Hi Mark, some great haikus here especially the Basho one 🙌
Yes, I like the changing scenes of fog!
Thanks for linking up and sharing your haiku with us. It is perfect for the season.
Cheers Mark 😊
Hi Mark: This is wonderful information on the different kinds of fog. I had no idea that in order for fog to even form it requires particles of dust or air pollution.
I really enjoyed Issa’s two poems: “…tangled in willow” and “…my tea tasting better…” (Hoping my tea starts tasting better, too:) (lol)
As always I love the poems by my fellow poets!
Hi Madeleine, I always appreciate Issa’s work and you are correct there are come great poems shared by others. It is such a joy to read what everyone comes up with.
Here are my submissions:
fog thick with early autumn fragrance!
…
diablo wind
on my walk…
dispelling brain fog
Hi Madeleine,
I really like the monoku with the smell of autumn because of the fog. Thanks for making me look up diablo wind so now I know and it makes your haiku that more compelling. ~nan
Thank-you Nan for your very kind words! It means a lot!:)
Hi Madeleine, I really like the monoku! Autumn does have its own fragrance doesn’t it!
Thank-you Mark! …Yes, it does:)
Hi Mark: Thank-you for the opportunity you give to us to practice writing haiku and all the while learning more about the world around us!
Madeleine,
Autumn fragrance here, near ‘Amish’ farm country is wet hay!
I think we could use a good diablo wind sometimes… It was very hot today.
(Not to worry about delayed responses. Sometimes I tend to babble… ~thank you.)
Hi Jules: That’s funny! …Yes, a good diablo wind always comes in handy! Thanks, I don’t think any of us feel these pearls of wisdom you impart are babble:)
Awe, I always joke about being over the hill…
And with grands now both in double digits! But still young at heart. ~Thank you.
My pingback didn’t seem to ping. Here is mine. http://accordingtosassy.com/2023/08/19/thick-fog/
Hi Sassy, Thanks for making sure the link up worked and wonderful offering for this week’s haiku prompt. Wonderful!
Eavonka,
I hope the hurricane calms down and that you don’t get all the rain that’s predicted.
As for the renku, I have participated in a few of them at THF, but so far, I have no clue with this session (it’s so early in the process). I just throw out some lines and see what happens. To be honest, I have no idea how linking in renku works; sometimes it seem really random. Just have fun with it and keep a list of your lines. I’m glad you’ve joined in. I have gotten a few decent haiku based on some of those lines that I wrote during former renku sessions, and they keep my writing fresh. One of the leaders indicated the same. I wish the same for you.
Sounds like just the journey I want to be on! I am keeping everything in my Notes on my phone. I only have been offering one per week, but I see others offer tons. Baby steps.
I never offer more than two or three (in the past, there was a limit of five offers), but many put in ten or more. I don’t know if putting out more than a couple matters. Just have fun with it. Baby steps…maybe there’s a phrase in that! 😉
Steaming cup
Clears away morning
Autumn fog
Hi James,
Thanks for adding this one to the conversation! There is much truth contained in your line. Great job!
Thanks for the detailed info on fog and then the haiku share. You parked me at Issa’s. 💗 How his tea tastes better the further away we get from summer. I can relate. 😂 and then how that poor little fog gets tangled up in the branches. Delightful. I think that fog is Rapunzel, and her hair… a tangle mess 🤣
Thanks, Mark.
Here I share my best attempts:
In the morning fog
mute wait the late mosquitos
and yet, I slap
Over and over
the caw-cawing is black
in the thickest fog
Even through fog
the tallest sunflowers
wave to me and smile
Thank you. I will visit often. Yoroshiku 🙇🏽♀️
Hi Selma, Thanks so much for your thoughts about Issa’s haiku. Issa does have a magical way with words!
I really like the imagery of your last fog haiku about sunflowers! Wonderful!
Thanks for adding to this week’s conversation.
It’s my pleasure, Mark. Next time I will publish in my blog and pingback to your post. Thanks dearly. xoxo
Selma,
So good to see you here. I enjoyed your haiku.
~Jules
Aww, Jules. Lovely of you… ((🤗))
Enjoyed reading this on Autumn fog. Good info that helped one delve more deeply into the various Haiku.
Hi David, Thanks for the comment and I am glad that you enjoyed the post. I hope you enjoy the rest of your day!
record humidity
the fog
that won’t settle
Hi Allyson,
Thanks for adding your haiku to this week’s conversation! I really like line 3. There is lots to ponder with that one. I hope that all is well!
morning fog… the dream blends with the day
Wonderful! This one seems to captures that feeling you can get when out in the early morning fog. Thanks for sharing!