September 22 – 27 is the micro-season of “Thunder Lowers Its Voice”. This is the first micro-season of the season of Autumn Equinox. The micro-seasons within Autumn Equinox are:
- Thunder Lowers Its Voice (Sep 22 – Sep 27)
- Hibernating Creatures Close Their Doors (Sep 28 – Oct 02)
- The Paddy Water is First Drained (Oct 03 – Oct 07)
These seasons were established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. While they are specific to Japan, you can use them as a starting point to explore your environment.
To celebrate this season, we will talk about the equinox, discuss how thunder and lightning are created, and then read haiku by Basho, Issa, Reichhold, and Kerouac.
Autumn Equinox
An equinox marks the time when the length of the day equals the length of the night. After the autumn equinox, the days begin to get shorter, and the temperatures begin to fall. The reason for these changes is the earth’s 23.5-degree tilt. The tilt places the northern hemisphere farther away from the sun in the winter months and closer in the summer.
The graphic below from the National Weather Service illustrates this process.
The Days Between The Seasons
In the Northern Hemisphere, the Autumn Equinox is on September 23, 2023. That is 94 days past the Summer Solstice (June 21, 2023), and only 91 days until the Winter Solstice (December 21, 2023). The Vernal Equinox (March 19, 2024) is now 178 days away,
“Thunder Lowers Its Voice”
“Thunder Lowers Its Voice” (Sep 22 -Sep 27) is a counter-season to “Thunder Raises Its Voice” (Mar 30 – Apr 03). These two micro-seasons highlight the distinct changes in climate brought about by the Earth’s orbit around the Sun.
A Bit About Thunder
Thunder is the sound that accompanies lightning. Thunder is most common in thunderstorms, which are created when warm moist air rises and comes in contact with colder air. These conditions exist when there is an “unstable” air mass.
Unstable Air
An “unstable air mass” is when a warm air settles under cold air.
This is the opposite from a “stable” air mass where the cold air lies under the warm air. It is called “stable” because cold air is denser than warm air and will settle on the Earth’s surface.(2)
Thunder Clouds
When the warm moist air rises to meet the colder air (unstable air mass), the water vapor begins to condense and creates a cloud. As the warm air continues to rise, it creates a cloud formation that is known as a towering cumulus cloud.
As the towering cumulus cloud continues to grow, it will eventually reach a high enough altitude that the warm air updrafts flatten out and create an anvil-like cloud that is known as cumulonimbus incus.(3) At this time, water vapor has frozen in the cloud’s upper reaches and begins to fall back to Earth. As the ice falls, it thaws and becomes rain. The falling rain then creates a downdraft.
The rising and falling of water molecules in the cloud create a static electric charge within the cloud. When the cloud’s negative charge reaches its maximum limit, it looks for a place to discharge. The earth’s surface offers that discharge point. We see a lightning flash when the negatively charged clouds release their energy.
When lightning is created, it rapidly heats the atmosphere which creates the initial crack of thunder. The rumble that follows the initial crack is created by the atmosphere cooling back down.(4)
Why Does The Thunder Lower Its Voice?
Once we reach autumn, the likelihood of thunderstorms decreases. Part of the reason for this is that unstable air masses are less likely to develop in the cooler months.
The opposite is true in the micro-season of “Thunder Raises its Voice”. At this time the earth is beginning to warm up and there is more opportunity for unstable air masses and more moisture in the air.
Seasonal Haiku
Thunder and lightning have the potential to be multi-season kigo according to the World Kigo Database. However, “thunder” without another seasonal descriptor is considered a summer kigo, and “lightning” without a specific seasonal descriptor is an autumn kigo.(5)
The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto list “lightning” and “autumn’s voice”, which is described as “the sounds of autumn: wind in dry leaves, insects, etc.”, are related Autumn kigo.
In A Dictionary of Haiku, Jane Reichhold lists “clouds”, “dark rain”, and “equinox” as other autumn kigo
With this in mind, let’s read a few haiku!
Basho
lightning— into the darkness a night-heron's cry. (translated by David Landis Barnhill)
a flash of lightning your hand takes in darkness a paper candle (translated by Jane Reichhold)
a flash of lightning - where there were faces plumes of pampas grass (translated by Makoto Ueda)
Issa
in cool air slicing the falling rain... lightning! (translated by David Lanoue)
lightning flash-- no way to hide the wrinkles (translated by David Lanoue)
in the lightning how he laughs... Buddha! (translated by David Lanoue)
Jane Reichhold
in the dark of night who would have thought rain was round
Jack Kerouac
Drunk as a hoot owl writing letters By thunderstorm
A Haiku Invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu that references autumn storms.
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your own page and link back to this post. I can’t wait to read what you write!
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Thank You!
Resources:
- “The Seasons, the Equinox, and the Solstices”; National Weather Service
- Highs and Lows/High and Low Air Flow: Iowa State University
- “Thunderstorms”: Wikipedia
- “What Causes Lightning and Thunder?”; SciJinks NOAA
- “Thunder and Lightning”; Dr. Gabi Greve (WKD)
Basho’s haiku was retrieved from Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations. Issa’s haiku was retrieved from HaikuGuy.com by David G. Lanoue. Jack Kerouac’s haiku were retrieved from “Jack Kerouac Collected Haikus”; Terebess Asia Online


Foolishness of my younger years:
on the golf course
ignoring the dark clouds…
lightning!
Thanks Mark,
LaMon
LaMon,
Yes!! Hubby now that he is retired and playing more (or shall we say attempting to play more) golf – he is indeed aware of the sky! Stay safe!
Hi LaMon,
Yes! The things we do when we are young are not always the best. Wonderful poem for the season!
Hi LaMon:
I really enjoyed your poem. I really like the two subjects you chose to juxtapose You set the haiku up so well for the surprise ending.
Thanks Maddy.
Heterodox Haiku Journal just did an issue on Head Notes, and I love that you have one with your Haiku, LaMon!
I’ll have to check out that journal!
LaMon,
Your haiku resonates with me. I like it. I’ve been caught on the golf course when I ignored the dark clouds until I saw lightning flash. So, too, have my husband and I been caught in a micro-burst on our sailboat. Scary! ~Nan
Perfect LaMon ❤️
Mark,
Thank you again for a lovely and informative post. I have information about cloud seeding at my post. Here is the first one of three;
…thunder lowers its voice…
lay awake
hear seasons echo
diminish
Brittle corn stalks, dry wheat, wait for harvest; the farmers stock the silos.
© JP/dh//Jules
Perfect for the transition into autumn Jules 🍂
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Hi Jules: I agree with Angie. Your haiku are a perfect transition. I really liked your haiku, especially “spacial anomaly”. I had thought you had first written “special anomaly” . I was intrigued when I read it again and noticed it was “spacial anomaly” , it works so well with the action going on in the poem. I really like the third line … “seed blue sky”. It is lovely you saw the plane just the day before. The monoku are great, as well! I really like the line ”…petals falling…”.
Our eyes like to play tricks on us. I used ‘spacial’ because the planes, though not in outer space, were taking up space in the atmosphere. And it was odd to actually see the planes, several actually creating clouds (not the ‘normal’ trails that planes leave) over the sky – a bit of an annomily to me 🙂 – the first time I think I ever saw that happen, seeding or making clouds. Though I did learn that my area is still in a bit of a drought. Though not as serious as other places.
Cheers and thanks ~Jules
This is so very interesting, especially that the planes made clouds and not trails as they usually do? I am sorry you are in a drought, it’s good it’s not severe.
Hi Jules, I looks like I forgot to reply to you on this page! My bad! Thanks so your continued participation and thoughtful comments! I hope you have a good week.
Thank you – one place or the other is very good. Both is a delight. So – no worries there.
Hopefully Ophelia didn’t dump too much rain on you. But I have heard that PA is still slightly in drought mode. I guess it depends on how the rain is absorbed into the grounds.
Busy week ahead. Our local independant baseball team won some division so we’ll be going to see that game!! Stay well and happy!
Hi, Mark. here is my response to this week’s prompt ‘Autumn Storms’
Happy Friday Everyone. Enjoy your day.
Thanks Goff! I always appreciate your contributions to the conversation. I hope all is well!
Pleasure My Friend. Have a great weekend.
Hi Mark, thank-you for the fascinating information. I love how the explanation of rain lightning and thunder lead from one paragraph into the next. I intend to read these explanations for rain, lightning and thunder again… I have to admit it is hard to resist Issa’s poems today: “…no way to hide the wrinkles…” one of my favorites!
Right! Issa’s haiku is great. The other one about the Buddha laughing I really enjoy.
Yes, it is a delight!
Hi Mark, I couldn’t resist writing a poem in honor of Issa’s wonderful Haiku: “…in the lightning…”
hard to resist
the laughter
of Buddha
I enjoyed writing this one
HI Madeleine, I like this new one!
If you allow me to build off this and add . ..
hard to resist
the laughter of Buddha
rolling thunder
Adding this new third line really changes the meaning and feeling of the haiku. I think I like your version better.
I hope it is okay I used your ku as a “seed” for another ku!
It’s more than ok, Mark, I am honored that a haiku has sprouted from my haiku (which in turn sprouted from Issa’s masterpiece:) lol…I believe that is what in essence writing haiku is all about.
I beg to differ: I like your haiku much better:) It is absolutely wonderful and adds another layer which completes the poem —the last line is perfect!
Thanks Madeleine!
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Your welcome, Mark!
We are blessed with mild weather here in the bay area, although in years past it has sometimes been known to reach freezing temperatures, (in winter).
the wind picks up
the skies start to grey
is all that happens here in fall
…
fall in the area
becomes progressively cold
no major storms
…
storm of honey bees
follows me to the front yard
with no evil intent
…
a gust of crickets chants outside my kitchen door
Loved the honey bee haiku! But my favorite may be the monoku; “gust of crickets”–a wonderful image.
Awww! Thank-you LaMon for the lovely feedback.
‘storm of honey bees’ and ‘gust of crickets’ are fabulous collective nouns, Madeleine!
Thank-you for the great feed back Eavonka!
Nice set of haiku, Maddy, and so varied. I especially like the gust of crickets. That could replace an orchestra of crickets as a collective noun for them.
~Nan
Thanks, Nan…I appreciate your feedback:)
I agree with others about the “storm of honey bees” and “gust of crickets”. Definitely my favorites out of this week’s collection. I am especially draw to the honey bees and I think it is because of your use of the “storm” and then contrasting with “no evil intent”. I like that!
Thank-you Mark for the lovely feedback:)
Lovely trio Maddy 💞
Thanks Angie!
Maddy,
I enjoyed your haiku. I really like the natural events of the last two. Bees do not have evil intents at all 🙂 And that last line is really enchanting.
Thanks Jules: Aww. I appreciate it…Yeah, bees have no evil intent:)
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Oh, my, Maddy– this, this “storm of honey bees
follows me to the front yard
with no evil intent”–most delightful. The other two are wonderful but this one is stellar methinkso! Thanks for sharing here. Blessing you.
Thank-you, Selma for your lovely comments:) Blessings to you too!
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Maddy,
I couldn’t reply to your ‘drought’ comment where it was.
I personally don’t see a drought in my area – but PA is a big state and some of the farms might be a tad dry. Or were dry when they needed water for corn and other grains.
Thanks for thinking of me. Hope you are still having good weather.
Lovely poetry written by my fellow poets. Mark, I hope you and all have a wonderful day!
Hi Madeleine,
I agree! I am really enjoying reading all these and the great comments people are providing.
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Hi Jules: I really like the poems you wrote: “…a spacial anomaly…” resonates with me. The monoku are lovely too!
lightning flash
across the valley
thunder rolls
I’ve become quite the fan of the pivot/hinge 2nd line that can become a phrase with either line 1 or line 3. This prompt really lends itself to it.
I have written a few haiku with the hinge in line 2. It really is fun when it works well–as yours does!
Thanks so much, LaMon. I really love when I can use them because it adds extra layers to the ku.
Eavonka,
I like the pivot/hinge on the second line, but I have not mastered it very well so far. Not like you. This works really well with this haiku, well done. ~Nan
Thanks, Nan. I’m always so happy when a poem like this comes together. I find certain prompts inspire them far more than others. I envy those who can seemingly create them at will.
Yeah, me, too, E. It doesn’t come easily to do pivots or any other “haiku processes” at all. I basically write fragment/phrase or phrase/fragment, and sometime without an ellipsis, there will be an accidental pivot. I think so many of my off-the-cuff haiku work because I let go of the constraints and just write (and revise and revise afterwards). ~Nan
I almost always write off the cuff. Sometimes I don’t even revise. I just want it to stay fun.
Girl haikuists just want to have fun! Off-the-cuff works for me, but then I still tend to revise even haiku I’ve written years ago.
Hi Eavonka, I agree with the other comments that this ku really works! I also really appreciate you talking about the technique that you are applying here (the pivot). I think it helps us as readers think about the mechanics that make a good haiku. Thanks so much!
Thanks so much, Mark! I may talk about technique more in the future then. I find the exploration of this form to be endlessly rewarding.
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Hi Eavonka: Your gorgeous poem about the tiffany blue eggs has been chosen! Congratulations! I am early but I wasn’t sure if you had seen the message from Marshal on Renku Sessions.
Oh my god, Madeleine! I am utterly gobsmacked. I truly am shocked. This is thrilling news!! Thank you so much for alerting me!
You are most welcome Eavonka! I am so happy and excited for you:) It’s exquisite.
Thank you so much, Madeleine!
Without you, I would never have known Marshall had replied with an edit suggestion. I really hate that THF doesn’t have a notification system in their comments. Please let me know if they do, and I just don’t know how to get it!
Awww, Of course Eavonka, well done!!…I had a feeling you hadn’t seen it. I don’t know if THF has a notification system. I’m thinking that Nan or Mark might know. We can talk to them about it…and or maybe address it on the Renku session, too:).
Yes, definitely need to do that.
Hi Maddy and Eavonka, I haven’t see a notification option for THF comments. I do get their frequent newsletters, but that has new posts and articles and not comment notifications.
Thanks, Mark. That’s all I know to do as well.
Thanks Mark:)
I really love the action your poem invokes, Eavonka! It is vivid and beautifully put together. This is the first time I have heard of the pivot/hinge 2nd line:) There are always new things to learn with haiku!
That is so true, Madeleine! Probably one of the reasons I find this poetic form to fascinating.
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Hi Mark,
I never thought about the fact that autumn storms were less intense, not as severe. I don’t I have ever written a haiku about an autumn storm. Drizzly rain, yes, as in the first haiku below, and an off-the-cuff haiku about rumbling thunder far away.
drizzly day
even the squirrel crosses
the street slowly
~Nancy Brady, 2021
autumn storm
the thunder rumbles
on and on
~Nancy Brady, 2023
https://nbsmithblog.wordpress.com
I just adore your slow squirrel–a rare sight, indeed! It really does feel like thunder sometimes rumbles on and on.
Eavonka,
Our last big storm that’s exactly what the thunder did. Constant lightning strikes kept the thunder rolling on and on. Thanks, even the squirrel was feeling the drizzle. Which brings up a point: when it begins to rain, is it better to run to get out of the rain faster or walk so one doesn’t get hit as much? Inquiring minds want to know.
I’m pretty sure I get wetter the longer I’m in rain. Sadly, I suck at running. 😂
You made me laugh, E! I suck at running, too (that’s why I am a pedometer geek and walk).
Hi Nan, these are wonderful. The drizzly day one is really fun!
We have had the remnants of a couple of hurricanes/tropical storms come through in the past couple of weeks. Which made me wonder how this season relates to hurricane season.
Thanks, Mark. Yeah, I wonder about that, too, especially as these hurricanes become Cat 3 or Cat 4 or stall out drenching one area more than other.
Hi Nan:
These are lovely haiku! The first poem about the squirrel really resonates with me. The squirrel’s slowness works so well with the drizzly day. I like that the last line “on and on” of “autumn storm” ties the poem together– accentuating the thunder:)
Thank you, Madeleine. I appreciate your comments since it helps me write better poems (what works and what doesn’t). We actually had a storm a couple weeks ago that had thunder that just went on and on. Suffice it to say, we didn’t get much sleep that night. ~Nan
Hi Nan: I feel the same way, I am improving because of your commentary…one of the reasons I like Mark’s blog so much. (Yeah, it is the worst being kept up all night, especially by something you have no control over:/
It works both ways, Madeleine. I improve based on comments, and this is one way to get out of the same rut of writing by thinking of something differently or in a different way. I am so glad Mark writes his blog (it’s one of the highlights of the week) and that so many haiku poets have found their way here. We get to read some haiku of the masters, past and present, and to read our contemporaries as well as write/ share some of our own. It’s a win for all. ~Nan
Oh my, that one about the squirrel crossing slowly is divine. It sounds like something Issa would write: he seemed so gentle.
And the newer one, just as amazing. Again, Issa/Nancy Brady. Thank you. I enjoyed them. xoxo
Wow, Selma! No one has ever compared my haiku to anyone of haiku stature, let alone one of the masters. Thank you so much; you have made my day, my month, my year. For the most part, I write what I observe (in nature especially), and I always have (which often leads to people thinking that I write in too obvious a manner, too simply). ~Nan
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Yes, a win win:) Nan, I agree with Selma. Your poem about the squirrel moving slowly, reminds me of Isso and his way of writing… with your own stamp on it and the poem about thunder is so well done.
Thanks, Madeleine.
That is so kind of you to say. Maybe I should have been born when Issa was around. ~Nan
Too funny , Nan! lol!
I think everyone will agree that it is good you are around now and composing your unique and wonderful poetry and being a blessing to all around you!:)
What a great visual the title of the microseason gives “Thunder lowers it’s voice”. I used to enjoy thunderstorms in my hometown when I could watch them roll in on the horizon and then roll on over and beyond. Here in the Puget sound though, we just get these random one off “Boom!” and that it. Sudden, startling and then gone.
Hi Melanie, That is so interesting to hear about the difference in weather patterns based on your geographic location. It makes a lot of sense, and yet not something that I often think about. I hope all is well on the Sound!
my thundering heart
beats a tattoo of seasons
in time with the storm
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the groaning cosmos
booms to speak ‘fore subsiding
softly, it departs
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sky opens gaping
the aftermath of silence
a peach orange pause
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Hi Sunra, thanks for adding these to the conversation! Wonderful offerings!
You’re most welcome! I couldn’t resist! 😊
Great trio Sunra 🙌
Thank you! 💕
Three very auditory haiku, Sunra. Even the peach orange haiku has sounds in it. Well done.
~Nan
Thank you, Nan! :-). Appreciate your lovely comment!
Loveleee, just lovely, Sunra. Thanks.
Awww thanks Selma, my dear!! ❤️
Hi Sunra: These are lovely haiku. I agree. It is great you are accentuating the sounds which adds to the uniqueness.
Thank you, Maddy! ❤️
Hi Mark – great info here, definitely the start of autumn here 🍂
Thanks for sharing your link and work with us! Autumn is here!
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Read my entry at https://peterbouchier.wordpress.com/english-essays-and-poems-2/stormy-haiku/
Hi Peter, Thanks for joining the conversation! I hope you have a good week!
Say it isn’t so.. lol. thanks for the lesson and great haikus Mark. I really don’t love the darker nights. Owls hoot
moon light guidance
thunderous storms
to walk me home
Hi Cindy, The shift of seasons is here! I am one of those weird people who enjoys the longer night and colder weather. Thanks for sharing you poem with us!
Hi Cindy:
A wonderful haiku. You make something that seems very scary: “thunderous storms” more of a comfort helping to walk you home, a lovely surprise!
Hey, Mark, this was an amazing lesson. IS. And it’s life as we’re living it today. So relevant. I got two lessons this week and now I must shut my mouth. Alls I’ll say is Thanks. xoxo
Here’s the link for my haiga retouched on Canva. https://selmamartin.com/micro-season-thunder-lowers-its-voice-and-i-shut-my-big-mouth/
Good night to you and all from Japan.
Hi Selma, thanks for joining this week’s conversation with a couple of wonderful poetic offerings. I hope all is well!