September 28 – October 02 is the micro-season of “Hibernating Creatures Close Their Doors”. This is the second micro-season of the mini-season of Autumn Equinox. The micro-seasons within Autumn Equinox are:
- Thunder Lowers its Voice (Sep 22 – Sep 27)
- Hibernating Creatures Close Their Doors (Sep 28 – Oct 02)
- The Paddy Water is First Drained (Oct 03 – Oct 07)
These seasons were established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. While they are specific to Japan, you can use them as a starting point to explore your environment.
To celebrate this season, we will learn about hibernation and other similar winter survival strategies. Then we will read seasonal haiku by Basho, Issa, and Buson.
What is Hibernation?
Hibernation is an adaptive strategy that allows an animal to survive many months without migrating or foraging for hard-to-find food resources. Hibernation usually occurs in the winter and is marked by minimal activity and the depressed metabolic function of the animal.
True Hibernation
Not every animal that transitions into a dormant stage enters what is called True hibernation. Brittanica defines true hibernation as “body temperature is close to 0° C (32° F); the respiration is only a few breaths per minute, and the heartbeat is so slow and gradual as to be barely perceptible.” Hibernators survive by relying on body fat reserves and residing in a well-protected den. An animal in true hibernation stays in this state until they are exposed to warmer temperatures. Since the animal is so cold, it could take several hours for the animal to wake up from true hibernation.(1,2)
Mammals that enter true hibernation are some bats and members of the order Rodentia including woodchucks and ground squirrels.(2) Since hibernation is an adaptive strategy used to survive periods of cold and limited food, the exact time animals enter hibernation depends on your location. For example, woodchucks in Vermont usually enter hibernation in October, whereas those in Alaska may enter hibernation in September.(3,4)
What is Torpor?
Torpor is similar to hibernation with a decrease in breathing and heart rate, lower metabolic rate, and slightly lower body temperature. However, unlike true hibernation which is a voluntary process that lasts until the animal is exposed to warmer temperatures, torpor is involuntary and is often broken up by periods of activity where the animal regains a normal body temperature, breathing, and heart rate. (5,6)
One of the benefits of torpor versus hibernation is that it is easier for an animal to emerge from its “sleeping” state. For animals in hibernation, it takes hours for them to emerge from true hibernation.(5) While animals in torpor are able to awaken quickly if needed.
To wake up and warm the body during torpor, the animal begins shaking and contracting its muscles to warm up. This process makes the animal look like it is shivering.(6)
Bears are one of the most common mammals that use torpor as a winter survival strategy.
A Quick Note About This Season
The authors of the 72-season app tell us that this season marks the arrival of a period of seasonal dormancy for many insects. However, insects don’t hibernate.
To survive the winter, insects will either migrate or enter a period of seasonal dormancy known as Diapause and Quiescence. Diapause is described as “suspended or arrested development during an insect’s life cycle,”(7) and Quiescence is defined as “a temporary slowing down of metabolism and development in response to adverse environmental conditions”.(9) Although these conditions sound similar to hibernation, the scientists who study these types of things noticed that there are enough differences between them that they need different names.
Seasonal Haiku
For today’s selection of haiku, I wanted to focus on the ways humans prepare for winter. Jane Reicchold provides us with several potential kigo in her Dictionary of Haiku. These kigo, which can be found in the Autumn-Livelihood section of the dictionary, are “canning”, “cutting wood”, “fire starting”, and “raking leaves/burning leaves”. I would also add “stacking firewood” to this list.
Now with this in mind, let’s read some haiku about humans preparing for winter.
Basho
felling a tree and gazing at the cut end - tonight’s moon (translated by Makoto Ueda)
An alternative translation
chopping a tree, then looking upon the cut end- tonight’s moon. (translated by David Landis Barnhill)
Both of these would be considered autumn haiku. The first one has “moon” as its kigo and the second haiku has “chopping a tree”. The World Kigo Database tells us that the “moon without further connotation, refers to the Autumn Moon.”
beneath the noodles building up the fire: the night’s cold. (translated by David Landis Barnhill)
Issa
rain falling-- tomorrow's chance of firewood is nil (translated by David G. Lanoue)
one, two, three, four counting the firewood... autumn dusk (translated by David G. Lanoue)
staring at the man burning leaves... stone Buddha (translated by David G. Lanoue)
Buson
In a field of bracken gathering firewood dead azaleas (translated by Allan Persinger)
In front of the gate the old woman covets the young firewood a wintry blast (translated by Allan Persinger)
The smoke from the lit hearth shapes the red maple leaves (translated by Allan Persinger)
A Haiku Invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu that references preparing for winter.
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your own page and link back to this post. I can’t wait to read what you write!
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Thank You!
Resources:
- “Hibernation”; Britannica.com
- “Snug in the Snow”; Environmental Education for Kids
- “Woodchucks”; Vermont Fish and Wildlife
- “Marmot”; Wildlife Notebook: Alaska Department of Fish and Game
- “Snug in the Snow”; Environmental Education for Kids
- Chris Bachman; “Do Bears Really Hibernate” National Forest Foundation.
- “Diapause”; Wikipedia
- “Diapause in Insects”; Though Co
- “Quiescence”; Wiktionary
Issa’s haiku were retrieved from HaikuGuy.com by David G. Lanoue. Basho’s haiku was retrieved from Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: The Selected Poems of Yosa Buson.

Lots of memories from my childhood (I am 75) as I thought about how my dad would prepare for winter. Thanks for this prompt. LaMon
remembering dad
with plastic over windows
winterizing
ah yes, the evolution of window coverings in Northeast Ohio in the latter 20th century; I’ll write a thesis
What a poignant haiku, LaMon, about your dad. Well done!
Hi LaMon, I have a similar memory of my dad putting up plastic over the windows. I then took up the tradition when I bought our house. Thanks for sharing!
You bring back such memories with this one, LaMon. I’m only 56, and this is still a memory from my childhood.
LaMon,
Your verse reminds me of those tubes of sand or beans that were put across the bottom of doors and windows to help keep drafts out. Newer windows do not need such preperations. A few years back we put in new windows – double pane, no leaking.
But our first home with wooden sashes… was very drafty, but then it didn’t have any insulation in the walls at all! It was about 80 years old in the late 1970’s.
Hi LaMon: This is such a wonderful memory and haiku of your dad!
pulling dry vines
off the azalea
found a pumpkin
perhaps one might reasonably ask how I let those vines grow all over the azalea in the first place, and how those seeds got into the compost . . .
Love this haiku, Griffin.
We had the same thing happen in our wildflower garden last year. No azaleas, but a pumpkin in amongst the yarrow and lupines.
~Nan
Hi Nan and Griffin, Those pumpkin seeds must be extra hardy! We had a similar situation in our compost bin! Here is one that I wrote for a Culinary Saijiki open mike:
autumn moon
the compost bin presents
a squash flower
What a delightful surprise in L3! I love how this conveys both a winterizing job, and the glory of autumn.
Agree with you, E, about Mark’s haiku. A well-written aha moment, too.
Griffin,
Bonus!!!
Hi Mark. Here is my response to this week’s prompt – ‘Preparing for Winter’.
Have a great day everyone.
Nicely done, and I like the framing; it really sets off your haiku well.
~Nan
Hi Goff, Let’s hope we get another couple of warm-ish weekends before that Autumn chill gets to intense! Thanks for sharing and I hope all is well.
Yes, yes, yes…more warm weekends!
Goff,
Nicely done.
Goff,
Nicely done.
Thanks Jules for the read and kind comment. Much appreciated. Happy Smiles Saturday My Friend.
I am really enjoying the info Mark gives us weekly. And the challenge is fun too. 🙂
Such a great site. Stay Smiling. Happy Blogging My Friend.
Cheers My Friend.
We’ve just had our first storm of the season (Agnes) but before she arrived:
Plant pots —
Gathered into a sheltered corner,
Before the storm!
🍂🍂🍂
Just in the nick of time, Ashley. The haiku saves the plants, well done!
~Nan
Thanks, Nan. Love your thought! 🌹🙋♂️
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Hi Ashley, I hope Agnes didn’t do much damage and everything stayed in place! I know that feeling of trying to protect those delicate plants before the storm. We had that situation a couple times this year.
Thanks so much for adding to this week’s conversation!
Actually, Mark, the storm passed by whilst we were asleep and it didn’t wake either of us! I think there was only a few trees down and some flooding, thank goodness! 🙋♂️🍂🍂
Ashley,
I’ve taken my outside houseplants into the porch. They might have to come ‘all the way in’ soon. 🙂
Thanks, Jules. Our pots remain outside all year so that sheltered spot is essential. Thankfully, the winds weren’t so bad and we slept through without disturbance! A lot of sweeping up of leaves though, the next day. I suppose that’s the real meaning of your “fall”. 🙋♂️🍂🍂
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Maddy,
Couldn’t add a reply where it was…
Of course you can use ‘Long Janes’… Words are for everyone! 🙂
Hi Jules: Awwww! I can’t wait to refer to my yoga pants as “long Janes” when the occasion arises which will be soon as it is getting colder here too! Or maybe I will do some yoga to day, too! 🙂 …I am looking forward to telling the children (grown children, they will always be children to me:) the story behind it, which is delightful. Hope you are having a great morning! Yes, they are! …Words are wonderful!
😀
Great post, Mark, especially explaining the difference between hibernation and torpor. It’s only my opinion, but as far as I am concerned, January should be a month of hibernation for the whole world. Just think a month of sleeping, no eating, and maybe after all that rest, everyone would be well rested, maybe a bit of weight loss, less grumpy leading to world peace!
late fall…
Buckeye Chuck takes
a long nap
~Nancy Brady, 2023
raking leaves—
chasing the one
who got away
~Nancy Brady, 2018 published in Ephemerae, Volume 3
autumn afternoon
she shuffles her feet
through golden fans
~Nancy Brady, 2021
Hi Nan, I like your plan for January! I know that I am usually ready for a long nap by mid-January. “Raking leaves” is really good! I am always impressed with your haiku memory and the fact that you were able to pull that one out of the 2018 archives.
Hi Mark,
I’ve been working at getting a hibernation month for years. Finally, someone else agrees with me.
As for pulling it from the archives, I now make two documents every year, one for all the haiku I write and one for any haiku I get published (or like here, those I post on a blog). Over time, I have become more organized labeling one Haiku Year, the other Published Haiku Year. I hit search with the phrase I’m looking for and then scroll through the pertinent document with all of the haiku until I find it. It is NOT a perfect system; I often get frustrated when I can’t find what I’m looking for, and it has taken me quite a few years to figure this out (and I still lose haiku I’ve written every so often when I just wrote them on a piece of paper and then don’t add them to my doc. TMI…aren’t you sorry you mentioned it, Mark?
Not at all! This is great. I haven’t quite figured out my own system yet. I have tried Google notes and notebooks and even note cards. I’ll get it figured out one day!
I can see why “raking leaves” was published! And I would think “Buckeye Chuck” could as well. Well done, Nancy.
LaMon
Thanks, LaMon. That’s kind of you to say especially about Buckeye Chuck. ~Nan
Ha! Since my birthday is in January, I can not endorse this plan. I am a woman who needs her cake! 😉
Eavonka,
We’ll keep your birthday open. Will that work? Or make sure we celebrate it in February. 😉
I usually take all of January to celebrate so I’m afraid that simply will not do.
Hahahaha! I kid. I do tend to make a big deal out of my bday, it’s true. I’ll find any excuse for good food, company, and cake.
Okay, E. I’ll make sure you get your birthday cake! As for me…
pumpkin pie
still my favorite
birthday cake
~Nancy Brady, 2012
I love it! Great poem, and I admit I also love pie, pastries, and ice cream. Did I mention chocolate yet?
I love sweets too, especially chocolate! But pumpkin pie is truly my favorite, E, which I would never share with squirrels.
There might be an Issa inspired haiku about sharing birthday pie with a squirrel in there somewhere?
Nan,
Oh, raking… haven’t had to do that …yet.
Well, less raking than using the blower to get them into a pile. Still, lots of leaves haven’t fallen and I’ll be doing that for the time being (actually just came in from another round), Jules.
We have a blower (small). We have a city pick up two or three times a season. Though I do put some leaves in my berms. I don’t have any oak trees, but the few in our area produce tons of leaves and you have to get them up, they don’t ‘rot’ the same as other leaves. They seem to be stronger.
Jules,
you are right about oak leaves being tougher. The oak trees I had at one place I lived didn’t even lose their leaves until winter. Often, we’d get a snowstorm and the leaves would come down afterwards. It looked strange seeing the leaves atop the snow.
We have two blowers: a small one that is battery-powered and another larger one with a cord. The more powerful one is also much heavier, which makes blowing the leaves a pain. Thus, so far, I’ve gotten away with using the smaller one, but eventually I’m afraid I will have to get out the larger one. Once, the leaves fall in earnest, I can blow them to the edge of the tree lawn and the city will come along and suck them up with a huge vacuum (the machine they drive reminds me of an elephant with its trunk doing the sucking up).
Is that how autumn became known as fall (because of leaves falling)? ~Nan
We have that Vacuum truck but only two or three times. We did visit a place in Kentucky that (because of all the old trees) came at least every week! But as you say one has to get those leaves to the curb.
Different areas different rules about leaf pick up. One thing about living in an appartment – (as I did sometimes) – no worry on yard work. I don’t mind the yard work – less noise and less crowds. 🙂 Especially living on the edge of the development…
Our vacuum comes through about two or three times too, but they are picky. Leaves only, no sticks. It’s easier to put them in the yard waste bags or cans, which are picked up weekly. Still, the vacuum is fun to watch.
Our yard work is pretty minimal and relaxing for the most part. Of course, I am still trying to fill my flower beds with enough hostas so that I don’t have to weed (the leaves will cover them).
Nan,
My hosta leaves are still green… I’m wondering if I should get some hay for my onion sets which sprouted because it got into the 80’s last week.
Jules,
I think protecting your onion sets makes sense. Most of our hostas are turning brownish, but there are a few holdouts (the ones that were last to bloom). The dip in temps will probably bring about the rest.
All I know for sure is that my body has to regulate to the lower temps.
We keep our place at 68 day 66 eve to sleep.
But when the temp dips… even though the house is the same – I’ll reach for my long-Janes!
I’ve discovered that my gym/yoga tights make good leg warmers!! 😀
Yeah, I find I have to wear sweatpants to bed these days. Eventually, I’ll get used to the dip in temperatures and can ease off, but for now, I am shivering without them. Of course, I consider shivering exercise. 🙂 Long-janes…I like the terminology, JP.
I don’t think I made up Long-Janes… but maybe I did? Stay warm.
I am trying to stay warm. Once I get acclimated to the lower temps, I’ll be better. However, if the temperatures yo-yo up and down, it will take longer.
As far as I am concerned, you are the inventor of long-janes. At least, you are the first person to use the word.
Guys have Long-johns…(or Union Suits!). I wonder if just winter undergarments is more correct? But really some political correctness can go to far. 😉
Agreed. PC can go too far for sure. Cold weather undergarments might be the best word choice. As for the rest of the PC stuff, I’ll fumble my way through it.
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I have to agree Nan:) …It looks like Jules is the inventor of Long Janes! …What great terminology:) I hope I have permission to use it when talking with my kids! (lol:)
Glad to hear that you will share Jules’ Long-Janes with your family. We can all get on her bandstand.
As for Mark, I’m so glad to hear he is okay. Eavonka and I have messaged over our worry about him. Glad you all reached out to him to get the answer.
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…Good that all is well!:)
Hope you are having a very good week, too Nan!:) Thanks for your reply!
Nan & Mark,
About oranizing… Writing. I have a system it might help you?
I have files of years, in the years I have indexes for the month.
Each month has the date first, the title of the piece, (if there is a prompt), then what type of poem it is… for example this entry is;
‘nd 9.29 …hibernating creatures close their doors… 1p Nat Wkly (‘ku and Am. Sent pairs).’ Which is why everything I write has a title or if nothing else the first line of the verse. That though is only for the stuff on the PC. It was similar for when I was writing in journals. The first pages were left for the ‘Index page(s).
I’ve been writing for a long time so the ‘nd’ stands for new decade. The months are in yearly files so that’s how I know the year.
Jules,
I have tried and tried to figure out what all nd and numbers meant. Now, I know. What a system! Quite unique, and I should have known that as disciplined about writing as you are, you’d have it all together. ~Nan
I’m gonna have to come up with something different when the 2030’s come around 😉
(Now if I could only get all the years that are still in pen or typed where they can be easily accessed….)
Hi Nan:
I must admit I like your theory that January should be a month of hibernation! It makes a lot of sense. This is the first time I had heard of a Buckeye Chuck. I had to look it up. Although I am very familiar with the ground hog. (One of our babies was born on February 2nd–although she is all grown up now:)
Hi Maddy,
Buckeye Chuck comes my hometown of Marion, Ohio, and has been predicting the end of winter since the 1970s. He’s not as famous as the Pennsylvania rodent though. I always love it when they disagree in their predictions. ~Nan
Hi Nan:
Thanks for filling me in…Buckeye Chuck is a lot of fun!
Nan, these poems are wonderful: Buckeye Chuck is adorable and I also love the second haiku, “raking leaves” and its play on words… it’s a very unique juxtaposition. The poem Autumn afternoon is very beautiful: “…shuffles her feet…through golden fans”…these are such enchanting and unique images!
Thanks, Madeline. That’s sweet of you to say about all of them.
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Mark,
I almost wrote about not seeing the squirrels as much, but then I saw you wanted the prompt relating to humans ;). So that’s where I went 😀
(Two more at the title link – I put the middle one first;)
…hibernating creatures close their doors…
this wife layers
her autumn clothing
husband laughs
Husband has his natural fuzzy warm ‘coat’, but he’ll snuggle when asked.
© JP/dh (Jules)
This haiku just makes me smile because I understand the layering so well. And the snuggling/ cuddling, too.
~Nan
Hi Jules, I didn’t mean to throw you a curve ball there! Thanks for adapting to the prompt and coming up with a couple of great pairs!
Mark,
No worries. I am known for not following instructions and for being a bit of a rebel with ‘rules’. 😉
Hi Jules:
I agree with Nan: they do make you smile:)! The haiku and monoku are both very charming and cheering!
Warming spirits – I like that ~Thanks
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Hey Mark,
Involuntary Torpor is the name of my new band! 🙂 Here’s my contribution to this excellent post:
let falling leaves lie
natural recycling
a wildlife haven
Tracy,
That’s an awesome band name.
I love the haiku so much because it is not only beautifully written, but it also is great for the early pollinators. We’ve started doing leaving leaves alone for that reason…it’s good for the environment.
~Nan
Hi Tracy, perfect band name!! Love it!
Also, what a good haiku. Such a good offering for this prompt. Thanks so much for sharing!
Tracy,
I’m going to rake… but some of the leaves will go over the onion sets I’m attempting to grow! 😉
That sounds like a great plan, Jules. Wishing you healthy, thriving onions!
We’ll see what happens over winter.
I know I’ll have some horseraddish for spring 🙂
our squirrels
don’t hibernate …
they just hoard
It’s too warm, even in winter, for them to need to do so. In fact, they gorge themselves on fallen oranges. It’s likely their best fed season. 😂
Wonderful, Eavonka. I suspect as the climate crisis (warming planet) worsens the squirrels won’t be the only animals who don’t hibernate. We certainly see some squirrels in the winter. They’ll even use the shoveled sidewalks to avoid getting in snow. ~Nan
Heh, Nan, squirrels are so fat here. Too much abundance!
Hi Eavonka, Yes! So much fallen fruit at this time of year. We don’t have oranges, but we do have lots of fallen apples which the deer and other woodland creatures enjoy!
I meant they eat the oranges in winter since that’s when they are available. How I wish I lived where there were apples for the picking right now!
Eavonka,
My squirrels are getting up later. I think they like warmer weather. Most of the squirrels around here have tree nests. 🙂
Watching a squirrel wake up late in a tree nest? Feels like a Bugs Bunny cartoon!
I don’t actually watch them waking…
But they are getting to their feeders later – so much so that the birds are raiding the squirrel feeders!!
I love your poem, Eavonka. I like the play on the word hoarding, Making light of a human tendency, I think is a welcomed relief, allowing us to laugh at our weaknesses… I believe it helps a lot! The squirrels sound adorable. (lol:)
Thanks, Maddy! I do enjoy our squirrels, but our cat is terrified of them. 😂 They berate him endlessly.
I recently saw a photo of a woodpecker stashing (hoarding/caching) acorns in the bark of a tree. It was strange. I understand the squirrels in Eavonka’s haiku.
Awww! I am sorry for your cat, Eavonka… Nan, I get Eavonka’s squirrels, too:) Thankful for these wonderful creatures!
Hi Mark and fellow poets:
All these poems are wonderful. I enjoyed all the interesting information. The poems of the masters are great.
Here are my poems for preparing for fall.
picking up 10 packets
of semi-sweet chocolate chips
from the grocer’s
30 boxes of tissues
one box strawberry chapstick
…
I never thought about ants at winter time until recently…even though ants don’t hibernate I love how they prepare for fall:
ants fill up with fats
carbohydrates and proteins…
going deep cover
Hope everyone is having a good Saturday!
I love your winter shopping list. All the necessary items. I have to admit, Madeleine, that I never thought of ants preparing for winter, perfect haiku explaining it all. ~Nan
Awww, I never did either:) Thanks for the lovely feedback, Nan!
Maddy,
I have a few things stocked; Tissues being one!
Instead of candy bars I’ve been getting bags of dark chocolate nibs… to snack on.
Ants are quite interesting. Red ants can bite though! And Red ants let off a smell as a warning that you have disturbed them. Thankfully I haven’t seen too many of the red ants. Small and large black ones seem to be everywhere.
Hi Jules, we start running out of tissue paper around this time of year! Thanks for the tip: dark chocolate nibs are healthier than dark chocolate chips..less processed. Chocolate nibs are on our next grocery list! lol:) I baked chocolate chip cookies yesterday with just oatmeal, (no flour) and decreased the sugar, and they didn’t disappoint:). lol.
Thank-you for the information about ants. That is interesting about the smell they let off when they are disturbed… I intend to go back on the internet to find out more:) They are fascinating!
I might bake more this winter… 🙂
Thanks.
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Hi Mark and Fellow Poets:
All these poems are wonderful. I enjoyed all the interesting information. The poems of the masters are great.
Here are my poems for preparing for fall.
picking up 10 packets
of semi-sweet chocolate chips
from the grocer’s
30 boxes of tissues
one box strawberry chapstick
…
I never thought about ants at winter time until recently…even though ants don’t hibernate I love how they prepare for fall:
ants fill up with fats
carbohydrates and proteins…
going deep cover
Hope everyone is having a good Saturday!
I’ve had a chance to reread the comments by fellow poets, they are so much fun!
Mark, this information on the blog is absolutely fascinating (as always:) and I have been reading up a lot on ants:
Even though the following monoku is more of a winter thing rather than autumn, I wanted to include it for this week:
when it gets too cold for ants God pours in a pinch of anti-freeze
I just read that the Alaskan Darkling Beetle also produces an anti-freeze, a sugar- based polymer to keep from freezing in the cold.
(If you would like to read more here is the ink to the website:)
https://asknature.org/strategy/unique-antifreeze-protects-from-extreme-cold/
Hi Mark and fellow poets:
All the poems of old are engaging. “Basho’s chopping the tree and beneath the noodles.” Issa’s “ rain falling” and his second “one two three” and Buson’s last two poems.
I liked Issa’s third poem too.
“…staring at the man
burning leaves
stone Buddha…”
I couldn’t help but pay tribute:)
Gautama Buddha
a cloister of snails
keeping him cool
…
(The above haiku is in reference to reading a story of how Buddha stayed cool while meditating under an increasingly hot sun and explains the shell-like shapes on his head..there is also a second explanation to the shapes on his head as well.)
Hi Madeleine,
I love the tribute poem and the information you shared about the Buddha keeping cool, too. I like the snail story. ~Nan
Thanks Nan!:)
Hi Mark:
Both your haiku and Geoff’s are great… finding a new plant in unexpected places is a wonderful experience and helps the uniqueness of each poem stand out. The writing in both poems is beautiful and full of imagery:)
Hi Nan:
I wanted to say that I like your filing system, too. Dividing into two sections like that makes it a lot more simple… It would probably be for me things I have sent to blogs like Mark’s blog and the Renku Sessions and things I haven’t sent out yet.
Hi Madeleine,
I put all the haiku in the file for the year (with notations), but I also post NW haiku in the published file for the year in that file as well. Many journals consider them “published” so that I tend not to send them out UNLESS there the journal editor doesn’t consider blog published haiku as “curated/published.” My system works for me, well, most of the time. Sometimes I goof up, but since I have figured out this system, I haven’t had the issue. I also have a renku offerings file, that I started when I began to submit to the THF’s Renku a year or so ago. Sometimes, I get a decent haiku from the rejected ones. That’s one of the reasons I participate because I can free my mind for something other than my usual haiku subjects. ~Nan
Thanks Nan. These are all really good ideas. It will help me achieve a more dependable filing system. Right now I have them in monthly files. At the beginning of every month I start a new file. And my most recent poems are always at the top of the document and my older ones are at the bottom of course. (I am going to start dating each poem as well, which I am embarrassed to say I haven’t been doing.) I think sub dividing the poems like you suggest will help my filing immensely. I think I may have to do some consistent cross-referencing too.
Madeleine,
I think everyone has to develop a system that works for him or her. I know one haiku poet who puts every haiku she writes on a 3X5 card. As she submits to a journal, she writes the name on the back. If accepted, she files it away in a separate stack with the pertinent publishing credit. If rejected, she keeps it in the current stack and then submits it to another journal. She continues until the haiku is accepted, or decides it won’t be and sticks the card in another stack. She’s successful at her writing so it must work for her. She says she has stacks and stacks of them with all her documentation. As for me, I’ll stick with mine. Happy Haiku-ing, Maddy!
Thanks Nan and I agree, it is important to find a system that works:) That is a very interesting way to file regarding your friend’s method of resubmitting. I can see how it could help stop a person from becoming discouraged in the process of re-submitting .
And Happy Haiku-ing to you too, Nan!:)
Thank-you Mark for these amazing blogs! They are such a blessing for all of us! Hope you and all the poets are having a very nice Friday!:)
Hi Mark, I missed your challenge for this week (October 6, 2023). Hope all is okay with you. ~Colleen~
Hi Colleen, Yes, I had a very busy couple of weeks that didn’t allow very much time for writing! I’ll get back at it shortly. Thanks for reaching out and checking in! Much appreciated.
So glad to know all is well, Mark. Take care. I look forward to your challenge.
Thanks Colleen!
Mark,
Some of us are hoping that you aren’t hibrinating over winter and that all is well.
I’ve dipped into your ‘archives’.
Just letting you know that you and yours are in our thoughts (((Hugs))).
I am so worried.
I’ve left a message on the ‘about page’ as well.
We can only wait… Think good thoughts.
I’ve also sent him a DM on Twitter where we have corresponded before. I’m sending all good hopeful thoughts to the universe.
Hi Eavonka and Jules, sounding hopeful….yes, sending up good thoughts to the universe for Mark for his safety and well being.
(((Hugs))) and thank you.
I thought I had an email address, but I couldn’t find it.
Hi Jules, Maddy, and Eavonka, Thanks for reaching out and checking on things! Everything is fine over here! We had house guests and an uptick in work which left very little time for writing and posting! I am trying to get reoriented this week. I may take this opportunity to switch up the format of these posts a little bit. Not sure what that means yet, but I have some ideas. Thanks again for keeping me in your thoughts!
“The only constant is change.”
Looking forward to whatever you provide. Your educational notes and sharing of haiku is a mini treasure each week. Every other week, monthly. Your blog, your way 🙂 Have you ever looked into putting in a Mr. Linky? Though I believe some folks who visit may not have a blog and that’s OK too.
As for house guests…once and only once I had both of hubby’s sibs and their children stay over (plus us and our kiddos) The In-laws who stayed at a hotel also came for meals and family time….8 adults and 5 young people… an enjoyable challenge but glad when everyone went home too 😀
(Really quite glad that you and yours are Okey-dokey!)
Hi Jules, I hadn’t thought about a Mr. Linky. I’ll look into that. Based on your experience, what are the pros and cons to Mr Linky. I am not really familiar.
That sounds like a lot of people in the house. I am glad you came out okay!
Colleen might be able to help you out with Mr. Linky and tell you more about it. You can check any one of her (New) Tanka Tuesday prompts – they have a round up as well as Mr. Linky. I knew one site that used it but then took it away. Once I figured out how to use it (years ago, that is) it seems OK.
However if ‘you’ don’t have a blog it isn’t useful, so ‘you’ would still post your piece in the comments of the prompt site.
Different Prompt Folks also add ‘Round-Up’s’ (But again only helpful if the folks have links to blogs). You can Check with Colleen on that too.
I’m not the most tech savy person. I’m still using the Classic WP. And I work out of the Dashboard. Most of what I learned with WP – I’ve discovered on my own. Like how to eleminate the extra line spaces WP tried to foster on folks years ago.
I like Mr. Linky because then I can find familiar names on the list. Though some folks use a different name for the link than the name of the blog. It is complicate that way. Others only link the blog not the post – so that can be annoying.
Do what you are comfortable with. Your blog is your space. 🙂
Thanks Jules for that summary!
I am one of those without a blog. I’m not sure how many of us there are.
Eavonka,
I think some prompt places are nice where those without blogs also encouraged to post in the comment sections. Conversation is nice 🙂
Yes, that is why I hope Mark doesn’t make this a linky thing.
Eavonka,
I hear you. I think a mix is good. You can always let Mark know that you like things the way they are. Though he may change some things to make it easy for him.
Change is always hard. We just found out our free elder care gym membership at our gym is going away… So we have to figure out what to do come the first of the year. Stay and pay or go somewhere else.
I am as well, Eavonka.
Me as well, without a blog! Eavonka!
Maybe we’re the only two?
Thanks for all your thoughts on the Linky tool. I don’t want there to be barriers to communication and will probably keep things as is. I do appreciate hearing from everyone, it is really helpful.
I think we are:)
Hi Mark:
So good to hear from you! Delighted everything is well with you as I know all of us are:) Everything sounds great! Looking forward to the new formats! So grateful for this place you provide for us to meet to share our poetry and thoughts! Have a wonderful week, Mark and fellow poets!
I am tired and not able to get the response in the right place, oh well!:)
Thank-you for all the information Jules. I will have to definitely give this a lot of thought!
I apologize…my replies weren’t going to the right place and I am sorry for the typos above:/
…yeah, I think we are the only two without a blog:)
It’s okay, Maddy. I see them anyway.
🙂
Thank-you, Eavonka.
Thanks Eavonka:)
Hi Eavonka Jules and Nan: Hope you are all doing well and enjoying a nice week-end! I was wondering if anyone heard about or had any experience with the Bluehost Blog Site?
Hi Maddy, I have had experience using bluehost as a hosting site. They have great customer service. You can use WordPress software to build your website and then host it on Bluehost. If I remember correctly, if you go this way your posts aren’t connected into the WordPress.com reader and search functions. However, you have much more control of your site.
Thanks for the great feed back Mark…this is a good start:) I will look for a way to be connected to Word Press too, so I can communicate with you all on Naturalist Weekly!
…Eavonka, I apologize, my computer is still not letting me put my response in the right place:) lol
Hi Mark and fellow haiku poets:
Hope you are all having a lovely Friday evening!
Thanks Maddy! See you Friday with a new post.
Your welcome, Mark! See you and all on Friday!