October 23-29 is the 43rd week of the Gregorian calendar. Within this week we have the Solar Term of Frost Descent, the micro-seasons of “The First Frost Falls”(Oct 23 – Oct 27) and “Light Rain Showers”(Oct 28 – Nov 01), and a full moon. The haiku for this week will focus on atmospheric and celestial events of late autumn.
The 24 Solar Terms – Frost Descent
The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is about 15 days long and is based on the climate around the city Xi’an, which was the location of the capital of the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (2)
Frost Descent (Oct 24 – Nov 07) is the 18th Solar Term of the year. It is also the last solar term of the season of autumn. An alternative translation of this season is First Frost.(3)
Foods associated with this time of year are persimmons, apples, pears, and chestnuts.(4)
The 72 Seasons
The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(5)
This week contains the micro-seasons of “The First Frost Falls”(Oct 23 – Oct 27) and “Light Rain Showers”(Oct 28 – Nov 01).
After the micro-season of “Light Rain Showers”, is the micro-season of “The Maple and the Ivy Turn Yellow (Nov 02 – Nov 07). “The Maple and the Ivy Turn Yellow” is the last micro-season of autumn.
Astronomical Season
October 29, the last day of week 43, is 36 days past the autumn equinox (Sept 23, 2023) and 53 days until the winter solstice (December 21, 2023) in the Northern Hemisphere. By this calculation, we are about half of the way through astronomical autumn, and 142 days away from the vernal equinox (Mar 19, 2024).
The Hunter’s Moon
October’s full moon is on October 28, and it is sometimes called the Hunter’s Moon. Catherine Boeckmann writes the following about this month’s moon:
“It is believed that this name [Hunter’s Moon] originates from the fact that it was a signal for hunters to prepare for the upcoming cold winter by going hunting. This is because animals were beginning to fatten up in preparation for the winter season. Moreover, since fields had recently been cleared out under the Harvest Moon, hunters could easily spot deer and other animals that had come out to search for remaining scraps. Additionally, foxes and wolves would also come out to prey on these animals.”(6)
Other possible names for October’s full moon include:
- Sanguine or Blood Moon
- Falling Leaves Moon (Anishinaabe)
- Freezing Moon (Ojibwe)
- Migrating Moon (Cree)
Migrating Moon refers to the birds heading south for the winter.(6)
Seasonal Haiku
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, October is considered late autumn. Some potential late autumn kigo include “a little cold”, “night chill”, and “fleeting autumn”.
In A Dictionary of Haiku, Jane Reichhold lists weather-related kigo in the “Celestial” section of her dictionary. A relevant kigo in this section is “cold”. Reichhold also lists “Hunter’s Moon” along with many other moon-related phrases as autumn kigo
The World Kigo Database lists “First Frost Of Autumn” or “Frost in Autumn” as potential kigo for late autumn. Dr Greve states that the term “Frost” by itself is considered a winter kigo.
Now with all this in mind, let’s read some haiku.
Basho
the paulownia leaf moves on the autumn wind frost in the ivy (translated by Jane Reichhold)
deepening autumn: the man next door, what does he do? (translated by David Landis Barnhill)
autumn passing now ... through the slow drizzling of rain the shape of the moon (translated by Tim Chilcott)
Issa
first frost-- what are you praying for katydid? (translated by David G. Lanoue)
first frost-- the smiling face of the tea master (translated by David G. Lanoue)
autumn departs on a palanquin... new sake in the shop (translated by David G. Lanoue)
David G. Lanoue writes the following about this haiku.
“The brewing of new sake (rice wine) is an autumn event; in this case, late autumn. Issa imagines the season being carried off on a litter like some feudal VIP, now that the new sake is available in the sake shop.”
Kaga no Chiyo
the autumn wind resounds in the mountain temple bell (translated by Patricia Donegan and Yoshie Ishabashi)
Jane Reichhold
mountain cold getting under a blanket to sleep with me
a hunter's moon the o's of howling dogs ring in the mists
Jack Kerouac
Hurrying things along, Autumn rain On my awning
Haiku invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu referencing a current weather or celestial event. Perhaps you have recently experienced the “first frost” or a “cold rain”. Or perhaps a haiku that features the “hunter’s moon” is more your style.
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your own page and link back to this post. I can’t wait to read what you write!
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About the Haiku
Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku. Jack Kerouac’s haiku were retrieved from “Jack Kerouac Collected Haikus”; Terebess Asia Online. Kaga no Chiyo haiku was retrieved from The Classic Tradition of Haiku: An Anthology edited by Faubion Bowers (1996)

Yay! You’re back, Mark. Glad to see your challenge. I’m off to write.
Hi Colleen, It is nice to write again and read all the haiku. Thanks for stopping in and saying “hi”!
You were missed! I got interrupted, but I’ll finish up my haiku soon.
Always a delight to read your description of the micro-season and the haiku. Thank you 🙂
Thanks Dave, I hope all is well with you. I can’t believe that we are almost in November already these micro-season just fly by!
I missed you the past couple of weeks, but thrilled your back today! Here is my offering:
empty garbage cans
under a harvest moon
clear Autumn evening
Peace,
LaMon
I enjoyed reading your haiku, LaMon.
Hi LaMon, Thanks for the kind words and sharing such a great haiku. I really like this one! If we were sitting at a table talking haiku, I would really want to explore the meaning of empty garbage cans! Are they just empty cans or perhaps a commentary on economics and food insecurity. . . .
Thanks Mark. I understand that good haiku leaves room for reader interpretation. So, what you wrote is really affirming.
LaMon,
Nice haiku. It was certainly clear for last night’s full moon. “The luster of midday to the objects below…” came to mind.
~Nan
LaMon, I like your “empty garbage cans” vs. full ones. There’s something to be said about the energies of the full moon and the relationship to letting go. Well done.
Thanks Colleen.
Hi Mark:
So happy you are back! I hope you and everyone are having a very nice Friday:)… I am planning on having cup of tea, and looking very forward to reading about the frost… will send my poems in, soon:)
Hi Mark and fellow poets,
I love the different names for the October full moon …it works so well, especially since Mark’s post states the full moon as being tonight, the 28th:) .. I really like the late autumn kigo, too!
My favorite poems this week are Issa’s–especially “…the smiling face of the tea master…”
oops! *I got the day wrong…tomorrow, Saturday is the 28th… the full moon!:)
Yes! Issa’s poem about the tea master is great. Why the smiling I wonder? Is it because the cold brings in more business? So many potential layers here!
I was thinking along those lines too…lol!
Here are my offerings for the week:
I really like this name of the full moon, ” falling leaves moon”.
falling leaf moon
a small heart shape
on the sidewalk
…
first frost
our aloe vera plant turns yellow…
I take it inside
Hi Maddy, I really like your “falling leaf moon” haiku. So well done.
Thank you for your continued support and engagement in the posts. It is very much appreciated.
Awwww! Thanks, Mark! ….we all get so much from your Friday posts.
Your falling leaf moon poem is just so delightful, Madeleine.
Thanks, Eavonka! That’s so very nice of you to say!
Maddy,
These haiku are both awesome. I particularly like the use of Falling Leaf Moon paired with the heart shaped leaf as well as pairing the first frost with protecting your plant. Nice visuals on both. Well done.
~Nan
Thank-you so much Nan for your lovely words. Your feed back really helps!
🙂
Feedback always helps!
Maddy, your haiku using “falling leaf moon” is my favorite. I love how this turned out. It’s excellent.
Thank-you Colleen for your very encouraging words:)
You’re so welcome. Your haiku are marvelous!
Welcome (back) Home, Mark! We’ve had the weather bouncing between the mid 30’s and up into the mid-70’s. My mums from Mother’s day are blooming!!
I had errands this morning and was happy to find your prompt when I went looking. Here’s one of three sets (title is the link to the other two);
…frosty ‘ku…
dark night chill
summer’s garden fades
farmstand closed
Green tomatoes in brown paper bags to ripen, red ones; frozen sauce.
© Jules
Hi Jules, Thanks for the kind words! Glad to be back writing again. I know what you mean about the weather. We had our first frost earlier this week (Right on track with micro-seasons) and now it is mid-60s.
Great collection you have for the week. Thanks again for your continued support and sharing!
I did a ‘Frost’ for Colleen… here;
The ‘Richness’ of Dreams
If you are looking to learn about Pine Martens… not the ‘Martin birds’. 😀
I love the “dark night chill,” Jules. We’re finally getting to those cooler temperatures.
And yet there are still enough mosquetoes to bit me! 🦟
Really? That’s not good. Yikes on the mosquitoes!
It was something that created a little welt and itch!! I was unblocking the gully so the water would flow. Yikes indeed.
Hi Jules,
I really like your haiku poems and the title “ ‘frosty ku’s” , as well!:). I enjoyed the dark night chill” poem. My favorite is “acorns drop” …the last line gave me quite a smile!:)
So glad you’re back! Here’s my haiku: https://colleenmchesebro.com/2023/10/27/first-frost-haiku/
Very lovely haiku, Colleen.
Thank you, Maddy!
I so enjoyed your poems, Colleen.
Thanks so much, Eavonka.
Hi Colleen, what a great collection of haiku for the season! Thanks for adding them to this week’s conversation.
Thanks, Mark. It’s great to have you back.
hunter’s moon
creeping from house to house
in search of treats
So happy to have you back, Mark! Such fun to start my 2nd year doing your prompts.
Hi Eavonka, it is good to be back! It feels really nice to have some time to write again. Wonderful haiku for this week. It’s a little spooky and very fun!
Thanks for your continued support!
No, thank you! I’m looking forward to seeing your writing and poems.
Hi Eavonka, Maddy, and Nan, Unfortunately, I haven’t been very consistent in own writing practice! It is definitely a place I want to put more attention. Thanks for the encouragement!
Eavonka: I am so impressed by “the hunter’s moon” haiku…it’s absolutely wonderful!
Oh, I’m so glad, Maddy! 🎃
🙂
Love the visuals on this. The kids hunting for treats, Eavonka.
Eavonka, I love this haiku. It’s excellent!
Oh, yay! Thanks so much, Colleen!
You’re so welcome.
Mark, I agree with Eavonka…would love to see some of your writing and poems too:)
Yes, to seeing Mark’s haiku. I agree with you and Eavonka.
~Nan
Glad to see you have returned from your brief sabbatical, Mark. I know I am not the only who has missed you. Your blogs were one of the highlights of each week. On the other hand, everyone needs time away.
Per usual, you have given me plenty of new information this week. Thanks!
hunter’s moon
hundreds of Canada geese gleaning
the cornfields
~Nancy Brady, 2023
‘Geese gleaning’ is such a great image (and alliteration), Nan.
Thanks, Eavonka. I recently passed by a field that had recently been harvested and there were countless Canada geese feasting. Thus, the haiku.
I really liked your Halloween trick-or-treaters hunting for treats. Well done using Hunter’s Moon.
Thank you, Nan. I wanted to put a different spin on it.
E, you certainly did put a different spin on it, and that’s what makes a good haiku (but then you already know that). 🙂
Geese gleaning… what a great visual, Nan!
Thanks, Colleen.
You’re welcome.
Hi Nan, Thanks for the kind words. It is nice to be back writing again. It was a busy autumn!
Wonderful haiku! It made we think about the corn fields in my area. I often see geese out there, and I often see turkeys. The turkeys are really taking their chances out in the fields. Thanks again for writing and sharing!
Thanks. Mark.
We don’t see too many wild turkeys around here. They hide out in the woods, but I am sure there are hunters chasing them down right now. Turkeys, beware!
~Nan
Yes, Nan I agree with Eavonka, it is….poem is full of imagery.
Thanks, Maddy. I just wrote what I saw in the past week as I was driving home. I couldn’t believe how many geese were in the field.
~Nan
🙂
The comparison of the Hunter’s moon to the geese is delightful, Nan! A very charming haiku!
Thanks again. If these geese weren’t protected, it would be a feast for the hunters. They could serve the homeless and themselves for quite a while. ~Nan
Lovely to be back…
https://accordingtosassy.com/2023/10/29/frosted/
Thanks for joining the conversation! Wonderful tanka!