December 18 – December 24 is the 51st week of the Gregorian calendar. During this week, we complete the Solar Term of Major Snow (Dec 07 – Dec 21) and enter the Solar Term of Winter Solstice (Dec 21 – Jan 05). The micro-seasons for this week are “The Salmon Gather to Spawn” (Dec 17 – Dec 21), and “The Common Self-Heal Sprout” (Dec. 22 -Dec 26).
The haiku selected for this week are written by Basho, Issa, Buson, Hakyo, and Reichhold.
The 24 Solar Terms
The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around the city Xi’an, which was the capital of the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)
This week, we complete the Solar Term of Major Snow (Dec 07 – Dec 21) and enter the Solar Term of Winter Solstice (Dec 21 – Jan 05). Winter Solstice is the 22nd Solar Term of the year.
Dongzhi Festival
The Dongzhi Festival, also known as the Winter Solstice Festival, is a traditional festival that began in the Zhou Dynasty (1045 BCE –256 BCE). Dongzhi, when translated, means “winter’s extreme”. The Dongzhi Festival marks the turning point of winter.(2,3)
Families celebrate Dongzhi by gathering together and eating warm and hearty meals. Some of the foods consumed at this time of year are dumplings, wontons, mutton and vermicelli soup, and nine-layer cake.(2,3)
The 72 Seasons
The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(5)
The micro-seasons for this week are “The Salmon Gather to Spawn” (Dec 17 – Dec 21), and “The Common Self-Heal Sprout” (Dec. 22 -Dec 26).
The Myth of Osuke, the King of Salmon
In Japan, on the 15th day of the 11 lunar month, the fishermen lift their nets to allow the salmon to travel upstream. Osuke, the King of Salmon, and his wife Kosuke lead the salmon migration.
As Osuke travels upstream he calls out “Here we come up, Osuke and Kosuke!”, and sometimes “Osuke is now going upriver!” As the myth goes, if someone hears Osuke and Kosuke on their way up the river they will experience ill fortune and may even die.(6)
Migrating Fish
As indicated in the myth of King Osuke, salmon migrate to spawn. Salmon spend their adult lives in the ocean and return to freshwater for spawning. This behavior is remarkable because these fish swim against the currents, and sometimes vast distances, to reach their original spawning grounds. Scientists label this pattern of movement as anadromous. Anadromous comes from the Greek words aná, which means “up”, and drómos, which means “course”, this is also translated to “upward running”. (7,8)
Conversely, catadromous fish, follow an opposite pattern. These types of fish dwell in freshwater but migrate to the ocean to reproduce. Eels are an example of catadromous fish. Catadromous means “downward running”.(8)
Astronomical Season
December 24, the last day of week 51, is 03 days past the winter solstice and means that we have entered astronomical winter.
The Winter Solstice (December 21, 2023)
While the Earth travels around the Sun, it spins on its axis. This earth’s axis is not perpendicular but at a 23.5-degree angle. Because of this angle, some parts of the Earth receive more of the Sun’s warmth than others during the year. A solstice is when the earth’s tilt away from, or towards, the sun is the greatest.
At the winter solstice, the earth is at its greatest tilt away from the Sun When this happens, we experience the shortest day of the year and the least amount of sunlight. For people living in the Northern Hemisphere, the winter solstice is in December. However, the winter solstice is in June if you live in the Southern Hemisphere.(9)
The winter solstice marks the beginning of the coldest part of the year and marks the transition towards longer days and shorter nights.
Seasonal haiku
In the World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greves “Winter solstice (tooji)” is a relevant winter kigo in Japan and globally. Dr, Greves also lists “sun comes back” and food-related kigo like “Pumpkin Soup at the Winter Solstice”, “Ricecakes at the Winter Solstice”, and “Rice Gruel at the Winter Solstice” as other options.
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, no kigo directly reference the winter solstice. However, there “short day” and “year market” that are relevant.
Yamamoto explains the “year market” by writing that the year market is “set up mid-Dec specifically to sell New Year’s decorations, toys, and related items. Somewhat like a Christmas-tree lot, but broader in scope.”
In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, she lists “fish” and “winter solstice” as potential kigo for this week.
Now with all this in mind, let’s read some haiku.
Basho
Market shoppers!
let me sell you this hat
full of snow
(translated by Haruo Shirane)
for what
in this year’s-end market
goes a crow
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
snowy morning
all alone I chew
dried salmon
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
Issa
I move my cactus
to the upper shelf –
it’s Winter Solstice.
(translated Robin Gill)
a wild fox celebrates
among rice sheaves...
winter solstice
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
my plum tree
looks no different...
winter solstice
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
Buson
A ceremonial scribe
walking in Yue-en garden
the winter solstice
(translated by Allan Persinger)
Ishida Hakyo
wind and clouds
playing just a little -
winter solstice
(translated Gabi Greve)
Reichhold
winter solstice
so low in the trees its return
just stays
winter solstice
the white night alone
with rolling surf
ripples in water
fish spines
and mine
Haiku Invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu referencing the winter solstice.
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your own page and link back to this post. I can’t wait to read what you write!
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Thank You!
About the Haiku
Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy and World Kigo Database. Ishida Hakyo haiku was retrieved from World Kigo Database. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: The Selected Poems of Yosa Buson. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from Dictionary of Haiku.
Resources:
- “24 Solar Terms”; ChinaHighlights.com
- “24 Solar Terms: 9 things about winter solstice”; ChinaDaily.com
- Dongzhi Festival; Wikipedia
- “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
- 72 Seasons App
- “Salmon Osuke Legends”, Dr. Gabi Greve, Daruma Museum Japan
- “Fish Migration”; Wikipedia
- “Catadromous—Diadromous And Anadromous Fishes”; Encyclopedia.com
- “Solstice”, National Geographic


Good Morning!
Here is my haiku to start this week’s conversation.
another round
of things coming and going
winter solstice
Thanks everyone,
Mark
Hi Mark, your haiku is a gem. I appreciate all the layers. At first, I was thinking… a time to reflect on the past year’s comings and goings. But then “another round” means you’re celebrating the new year coming…
I really like Reichold’s “…so low in the trees…”.
I understand why Nan appreciates all this information on your weekly posts. It is very inspiring. (I like the pumpkin soup kigo:)
Happy Winter Solstice, to you and everyone!
Hi Maddy, Thanks! I am glad the you enjoyed the haiku. I have to agree that pumpkin soup is a great kigo. In my house it could be a kigo for most seasons. Maybe not summer, but the other three.
That’s great Mark. 🙂
“round” = round earth, spinning round, circling round the sun, and your second line. All of it is connected. I love it. Thanks, LaMon
Thanks LaMon, I appreciate it!
So wonderfully evokes the season and seasonal changes, Mark.
Thanks Eavonka! It seems like there is a lot of changes happening around me this year.
Ah, Mark, the cycle comes around again and again. Somehow, the year ending with the beginning of winter seems appropriate.
I like this haiku for reminding us of these. Happy Christmas
~Nan
Thanks Nan. And thanks for the information about the upcoming issue of Failed Haiku. I submitted and a couple were accepted.
Perfect for the solstice Mark 💞
Thank you!
It’s Shab-e-Yalda
For my Iranian man
We ate summer fruit.
Hi Adele, Thanks so much for adding to this week’s conversation! I had do a quick search on Shab-e-Yalda. This definition came up, “festival that celebrates the winter solstice and the victory of light over darkness.” I really like that framing.
Thanks again for sharing!
I always love your nature articles and poetry! Thanks!
Very nice, Adele. I like the juxtaposition of the “summer fruit”. 🙂
Thank you! We ate watermelon and pomegranates. It is a tradition for Shab-e-Yalda.
I’m so glad I read Mark’s remark and learned what Shab-e-Yalda is. I was about to Google it. Thanks for the enlightenment, and best wishes to you and your man. ~Nan
Thanks, Nan. All the best and wishing you and yours a joyous holiday time!
Beautiful 💕
Thank you! I’m happy you liked it!
Adele Very good to learn new things – Thanks
Thank you, Jules! Happy New Year!
🙂
“My plum tree” by Issa is my favorite today. Here is the haiku I wrote yesterday:
winter solstice:
darkness only appears
to be winning
Peace, LaMon
Hi LaMon, Wonderful! This one has so many potential layers.
I really like your haiku, LaMon. I really appreciate the word “appears” . It turns the poem around to reveal the true meaning. I like the plum tree too, by Issa…the winter solstice isn’t affecting it. 🙂
Such delightful hope in this, LaMon.
In more ways than one, unfortunately for our world, LaMon, but I do like this positive haiku.
I love this LaMon perfect 💞
LaMon,
May light continue to ‘win’ ~☮
~Jules
Hi Mark! I was inspired to write a haiku:
longest winter dark
bought oranges taste sweeter
and lights shine brighter
Hi Dave,
Wonderful haiku for this week. I have been noticing the holiday lights the past few weeks. They are definitely shining brighter!
I really like this haiku, Dave. Brightens up our day! 🙂
Thank you for saying that! And I’m glad the haiku had that effect 🙂
Love this Dave so full of hope 💞
Thank you for say that — I appreciate it 🌞
Dave,
I like your haiku for shining the light and sweetness into the darkness of winter. We all need some sweetness and light.
~Nan
Thank you Nan — I appreciate your reply 🙂
Mark,
I like your verse. I am looking forward to even a little bit more daylight. I went down another rabbit hole investigating the ‘Selfheal’ plant. More info and images at my site.
Please enjoy;
…“The Common Self-Heal Sprout”…
selfheal sprout
propagate here when
much warmer
One can simulate ‘frost’ by putting these seeds in the fridge for a month.
~
druids their
unique ritual
for harvest…
Dark moon with Dog Star rising; sickles and thanks before the drying parts.
~
valued mint
this heart-of-the-earth
little plant
Used in different ways for healing; infusions, teas, raw petals too.
© JP/dh
These are lovely Jules. I really like the third poem, “this heart-of-the earth little plant”. It resonates with me.
There is much to learn about all plants 🙂
~Thanks
🙂
Hi Jules, great information on your blog about the self-heal. This is an amazing plant. I am really enjoying the depth of information you got about the druids and the self-heal.
I wonder how the first human or humanoids figured out which plants were good. One fiction book I had read suggested that while actuall speach was limited – certain information was already and easily accessed in the brain.
Hi Jules, I have had that same question before about plants and many other things. This ability to know what is safe and what isn’t also shows up in the non-human species. Fascinating!
Kind of how some animals… like the little yellow frog (barely an inch in size is avoided because other animals know that bright color is a signal for poison. Or how some other butterflies mimic the Monarch – pretty much for the same reason. The Monarch’s show of color says stay away!
I think the book series I was thinking about was ‘The Clan of the Cave Bear’ by Jean M. Auel, about prehistoric times. It is the first book in the Earth’s Children book series, which speculates on the possibilities of interactions between Neanderthal and modern Cro-Magnon humans.
This is such fascinating information! 🙂
a very special trio Jules, my favourite is the second one 💕
Sometimes when I watch some of the mystery shows from the BBC there are hints at some Driud type practices. But I know most of those are fiction. So many old sites over your way 🙂
Hi, yes loads in North Wales in many fields you can find stone circles or ancient Celtic crosses. Anglesey is the most famous place for Druid sites 😊
What amazes me is the amature metal dectorists that have found some very unique and old treasures!
yes I know – wish I could 😊
I would like to get a metal detector… But anything I found would be much younger than anything found your way 😉
After publishing my own blog, I read that the winter solstice used to be celebrated on the 13th of December which is St Lucy’s day (a Christian festival) but calendar changes pushed the solstice to the 21st of the month. I find these things fascinating because they challenge one’s ideas of where we are in the world, of what we think we know.
The light of afternoon,
Fades quickly;
The shortest day.
Here is a link to my post:
Ashley fascinating!
1. Your first paragraph.
2. Your haiku.
3. Your blog, which I had never visited before. Think I will sign up.
Peace,
LaMon
LaMon, thanks for your comment. I have a Christian background but not practicing, however, I believe spirituality may be found in many places.
Ashley, while I am committed to Jesus, I too affirm the great value of other religious traditions. I have learned a lot them. By the way, I wanted to sign up for your blog but could not find the button to push!
Hi LaMon, While I wasn’t looking for a subscribe button, when I made a comment on the Ashley’s blog it gave me a subscribe pop-up. That might work.
Found it! Thanks.
I see that Mark has kindly resolved your query.
Hi Ashley, like LaMon, I find your haiku fascinating and the first paragraph too. All the lines go so well with each other and each one prepares the next line so well. Very nice that you mentioned St. Lucy. (I discovered a few years back that she is the patron saint of vision… quite a few Catholics have attributed regaining their sight to her. )
Hi Maddy, funny you should mention St. Lucy again (St Lucia of Syracuse 304ce). I understand that she secretly took food into the catacombs to persecuted Christians hiding there, was discovered & executed. She is portrayed as wearing a hat with lots of candles to “light” her way in the darkness of the caves. How right she should be seen as bringing the new light into the shortest day of the year. 🙏
Thanks Ashley, so lovely to read your reply. I can see her with all those candles on her hat, bringing food to outstretched hands. I love…. “she should be seen bringing the new light into the shortest day of the year” I agree whole heartedly when you replied to LaMon, “…spirituality can be found in many places…” 🙂
The haiku expresses the winter solstice well with the use of shortest day and fading light.
That’s interesting tidbit about St. Lucy’s Day is illuminating. How many times has our calendar been changed to facilitate the powers-that-be preferences or influences? Probably too many to count! ~Nan
Is this the same St. Lucia that is celebrated to this day on Dec. 13th in Sweden with the candles on her head? One of my favorite celebrations from another country that I was lucky to experience one year (sadly, not in Sweden).
I can’t help but think it must be, Eavonka! I had no idea she was celebrated in Sweden!:)
Oh, yes, you must google it (St.Lucia Day Swedish holiday). It’s truly wonderful. I believe she is also still celebrated in other Scandinavian countries as well.
Yes, same St. Lucy. Her name was St. Lucia of Syracuse.
https://www.wikiwand.com/en/Saint_Lucy
Yes, St. Lucia of Syracuse celebrated in many places including Sweden.
Thanks, Eavonka…so wonderful.
Thanks, Ashley! 🙂
Thank-you Eavonka…I did google St. Lucia Celebrations … how wonderful that the Christmas season in Sweden begins on her feast day. Hope you and fellow poets are having a Merry Christmas…and also Happy Holidays!
Hi Ashley, thanks for sharing your post. I really enjoyed your ‘ku and the discussion that it spurred about St. Lucy.
Thanks Mark, I went back to Ashley’s page and saw the subscribe button pop up. LaMon
My comments seem to have sparked more questions. That’s a good thing, isn’t it? 🤔🙋♂️
Hi Mark. Here is my response to this week’s prompt -‘Winter Solstice’
Happy Festive-tide Greetings Everyone.
Hi Geoff,
I really enjoyed reading your haiku. I like the vivid words you used that ring out clear the feelings of a cold winter… If I were out for a walk, I would want to get back home as soon as possible. 🙂
Thanks My Friend for the read and kind comments. Your support is much valued. So pleased you enjoyed. Merry Christmas.
I can feel the coldness of the silence AND the world outside. Nicely done as I am now chilled to the bones. ~Nan
Cheers.☕️🎄
Hi Goff, So nice to hear from you! I hope is all well and thinks for sharing your winter solstice haiku.
Here are my offerings for this week:
is the pumpkin soup
too hot
my son asks
loud slurping
it’s just fine
we say
~ ~ ~
my dog’s shadow
appears longer
on the walk
~ ~ ~
winter solstice
at home watching Christmas
movies
I like both haiku, but the second one is really clever. How different it would feel if you moved Christmas to the last line. But where it is made me think about what I see when I watch Christmas–cool. Peace, LaMon
Thank-you LaMon. I really appreciate your suggestion! I like it much better with “Christmas” for the last line. 🙂
Hey Maddy, I wasn’t recommending that you move “Christmas” to the last line, just that it would make it feel different somehow. I actually prefer it right where it is, i.e. watching Christmas wherever it appears!
Hi LaMon, I do like that version, though. For fun, I tried it without “Winter Solstice”, as well, with Christmas in the last line, too. It’s interesting how just changing one line makes it so different 🙂 I really appreciate the feedback.
Oh, Madeleine, I really like your second one about your dog’s shadow. As I was returning from the library (walking, of course, since I live a block away), I noticed how long my shadow was, wishing I really was that tall and skinny looking as my shadow seemed to show. Thus your dog’s shadow haiku reminded me of my own lengthening shadow. Alas…back to reality.
I like the others as well, slurping and all. 😉 ~Nan
Thank-you for your wonderful response, Nan. It really made me smile. I know… I wish I were longer and skinnier too! lol! 🙂 Thank-you very much for the kind compliments!
…Nan, I love that the library is a block away from where you live!
Oh, Maddy, I so enjoyed your dog ku. If you slightly switched it, it would have a phrase/fragment:
appearing
longer on the walk
my dog’s shadow
Some editors don’t appreciate sentences, and I think you should submit this one!
Thanks Eavonka. I did not know this about the phrase/fragment. Thank-you for suggesting I submit it:) It means a lot!
Hi Maddy,
These are great! I really like the conversation about your two haiku prompted. Very interesting. I like Eavonka’s comment about switching up the order of lines for “dog’s shadow”. I often do that with my own haiku. I read it, then swap the lines around to see if it might provide a more distinct cut, or fit the fragment and phrase structure.
And, I like everything pumpkin soup!
Thanks as always for adding so much to our conversation!
Awww, thanks Mark for the great feedback. Yes, I agree with Eavonka’s suggestion. It’s a very good idea…and thank-you for appreciating the pumpkin soup! 🙂
How lovely Maddy, love the images you convey (my favourite is the second one 😊)
Awww. Thank-you so much, Ange! 🙂
Maddy,
Your verses remind me that soup is a good winter meal.
I have this one Broccoli Cheddar soup mix that I am always adding extra veg to! Yum!
Shadows are different in all the seasons 😉
We don’t do all that much for Dec 25th. Though today hubby is watching some of the three football games!!
Awww, it’s true Jules… nothing like soup especially in the winter! Sounds delicious. I’ll let my daughter know, as she loves both broccoli and cheddar together …Yeah, it’s true…safe to say, I speak for everyone on this post that shadows are very cool. 🙂 I love that telling the time without a clock roughly is a stick in the ground, lots of fun when my kids were younger:) Jules, love all these conversations naturalist weekly fosters…one of the reasons I am so happy to be here… Watching all three football games through the day must have been lots of fun. 🙂
One of our local ‘chain’ resturants has a yummy broccoli cheddar soup. The mix I use makes a hug amount especially (for just two) after I add stuff. Sometimes I’ll use the left over soup and add it to the mac and cheese (with tuna) dinner I make.
Never quite the same twice 😉
Sometimes it is good to just relax.
I love these soup ideas Jules… 🙂 how lovely of you to post them…I agree it is goo to relax. I have cancelled a lot of my weekly activities, enjoying my time with my family, looking forward to a walk with my son..right now I am watching this beautiful fog we are wrapped up in.
😀 Enjoy each present moment.
Thank-you Jules for your kindness and giving me an idea for a winter haiku! Funny how these things happen… I posted below! 🙂
Another fascinating post, Mark, about the winter solstice and the related events that happen at that time. A man I know told me more than once that December 21 (the winter solstice) was his favorite day of the year because he knew that the following day would have a few extra minutes of daylight (and it would increase daily thereafter). For many people, the winter solstice is a time of darkness so Howard’s take on it is a more positive one (and one that I appreciate more and more as the years go by). Here’s are a few haiku about the winter solstice:
winter solstice…
her heart melts
from his kisses
~Nancy Brady, 2023
the lamplight casts
a shadow on the pair
–winter solstice
~Nancy Brady, 2023
https://nbsmithblog.wordpress.com
I planned to share another, but realized that the haiku is to be included in the upcoming Pan Haiku Review (in the next day or so), thanks to Alan Summers.
If I may say so, Nan these are very lovely haiku that warm my heart on this cold day in Northern California. (But at least the sun came out, though:) Both poems are a joy to read…perfect. I want to extend a congratulations to you for your haiku that’s been published in the “Pan Haiku Review.” That is quite an honor! I am looking forward to reading it when you post it later. 🙂 Hope you are staying warm in your neck of the woods!
Thanks, Madeleine, that’s kind of you to say. Here, it is dreary gray out, but we have family coming in so that will be like sunshine.
I figure that if poets submitted during short time frame of a week (Nov. 1-7), they’d have their haiku selected. Maybe I am wrong, but it wouldn’t be the first time or the last time I’ve been wrong.
Alan Summers is probably one of the strongest advocates for haiku poets and their haiku. He really is a champion for all of us who care about the craft of writing haiku.
Hi Nan, I hope you have a wonderful time with your family. 🙂 I have seen some of Alan Summer’s posts and poems on the Haiku Foundation. I like them. I am glad to know that he is an advocate, too.
Hope you and and all your family are having a wonderful Christmas!
Nan, a warm congratulations to you on your poem being chosen for Mark’s IG! “…Lamplight casts” is delightful! 🙂
I find it impossible to read these poems without seeing the first couple in the second ku! Perhaps a winter solstice sequence in the works?
Do you know when Pan Haiku Review is coming out? I’ll be in it with you!
Thanks, E, for the thought of a sequence. Actually, I pulIed this phrase from my non-accepted renku file. thought that Alan said that Pan Review Haiku would come out before Christmas (his goal), like the 23rd of the month. But I guess we will see. Congrats on being in the PHR with me. I
Hi Nan, These are wonderful. I really like ‘the lamplight casts”. What a great image. Congratulations for the haiku in Pan Haiku Review. That is great. I am intrigued to find out how it connects to these.
Hi Mark, thanks so much. That phrase sounds so Dickensian to me, but then I just finished reading Dickens last week. On the other hand, I wrote that for a renku a couple years ago. It wasn’t used, but I find that many of the verses I’ve written for renku and were never used become fodder for haiku later on.
I am waiting to post a blog which will link back here, and I hope to add it to the blog. I’ll let you know. ~Nan
This is another time where I am amazed at your organization and memory. You wrote that a couple of years ago! I’ll keep an eye out for your post.
Mark,
Thanks. I keep a file of my renku verses under “Renku verses” just like I keep a file of potential verses under “fragments or phrases.” It is something another haiku poet, Julie Schwerin, taught me some time ago. She said that by keeping those that might not work right now will come in handy some day. So, I go to them both every so often to put together haiku. Sometimes they work. Other times, not so much.
I hope to finish my blog and link it back soon even if the PHR doesn’t get out as soon as I thought it would.
Happy Christmas to you and yours! ~Nan
Hi Nan, I would like to share “the lamplight casts” on IG. Are you okay with that? Thanks and I hope you are having a good week.
Thanks, Mark, for asking. I’d be honored to have you add my “lamplight” haiku to your IG account. ~Nan
Happy Hogmanay and a wonderful new year, Mark.
Thanks Mark! Love these posts. Here are my humble offerings:
The days are blue-cold
and the nights, a sweet of dark
blanket over me.
*
How lucky I am
to be warm, to be sheltered.
Darker still, elsewhere.
❤
Oops, that should read “a sweep of dark” !
These are wonderful, Sunra!
Thank you, Maddy! 🙂
Hi Sunra,
Thanks for adding these to the conversation. “How lucky I am” is a great reminder of the realities of things. It is a blessing if you have heat and shelter.
I am also reading the first one interchanging “sweet” and “sweep”. There is something interesting about the sweet darkness.
Thank you, Mark! Yes, maybe “sweet” does work as much as “sweep.” Appreciate your kind words! 🙂
Hi Sunraz, these are good. I especially like the feeling that “days are blue-cold” evokes in me as well as the “sweet dark and darker still” giving a perfect feeling of the darkness of the solstice and the cold that winter brings. ~Nan
Thank you, Nan! ❤️ I’m so glad you found it evocative! ☺️
I went two ways with this. One far more reality based.
the longest night
only the stars to keep
me company
darkening
the shortest day
el nino rains
Hi Eavonka, I was just wondering, are there more haiku about stars in winter seasons, than summer? That would make sense because there is less darkness. I wonder if anyone has researched that.
I am really enjoying “darkening”. We had a storm roll through the other day and many people commented on how dark it seemed.
Thanks for sharing and adding everything to the conversation.
That is an excellent question, Mark. It does seem like I notice them more in winter, but then again, summer is less likely to have clouds/snow/rain to obscure the view.
Eavonka, I really like that you wrote about “the longest night” in one poem and “the shortest day” in another:) It’s a very creative approach. And it’s so interesting that we do see stars for a longer time as well, on a winter solstice evening, I had never thought about it… I love on the shortest day… that it rains. They are both beautiful poems. In the second haiku, I like that it has different meanings, depending how you read it. If you read the first and second line as one phrase, it becomes mysterious, a magical feeling.
I really like that the last line is a surprise, too. And using “el nino” adds more layers… this is wonderful. I am enjoying pondering Mark’s question about more stars out in winter nights.
Thank you for your lovely detailed comment, Madeleine. It’s wonderful to inspire these thoughts.
Congratulations, Eavonka that your poem is in the Pan Haiku Review! This is very exciting.
Thank you, Maddy! I think it’s going to be a huge issue.
🙂
Hi Eavonka,
I like them both very much…the reality of the shortest day made shorter by rain, and also the stars keeping you company. Well done, E.
Thanks so much, Nan. It was fun to go both ways with this kigo.
I can imagine. I think that is what haiku poets do…play with words, arranging them into a unified whole, and you do it well. ~Nan
Describes this time just perfectly Eavonka 🙌
So kind of you!
Eavonka…
Lovely. We’ve had quite a bit of rain here too.
But I’ll be nestling some sun shine in an all too short respite soon 🙂
Best to you ~Happy New Year.
Wishing you plenty of sunshine in the new year, Jules! 🌞
For the first few days anyway… then back to the cooler north 😉
Hi Ben, Thanks so much for sharing these two haiku. I do like the way you build a bring between the hemispheres! I hope you have a good weekend.
Agree with you, Mark. Ben presents both sides of the world.
Thank you, while writing the ‘fishing line’ had me thinking of the Equator between both hemispheres.
Hi Ben, I really enjoyed reading your haiku. I like that the first poem is very up beat and fun and the second one seems to be very relaxing and calm. It’s a nice break 🙂
Thanks Maddy, I am so pleased you noticed this change.
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Awww, you are welcomed, Ben 🙂
Cold clouds blanket sun
Day goes to sleep before me
Dreaming of Springtime
Hi Roth,
Dreary skies covered by clouds does make one want to nap the day away, and it sounds like a perfect dream. Nicely done, ‘ku. May spring come quickly even though we have months to go before the reality.
~Nan
Thank you, Nan, for sharing your comments. I hope it comes quickly
Hi Dwight, thanks for adding your haiku to the conversation! It’s official, we are heading towards spring. I hope all is well.
Thank you Mark. We are doing very well.
Love the post Mark and some wonderful poetry too, have a lovely break
I hope you have a nice holiday! Thank you and thanks for sharing your poetry with us!
Hi, Mark! Here is mine: https://melissalemay.wordpress.com/2023/12/24/anthurium/
🙂 A lovely haiku!
Hi Melissa, This one is great and fits so well with the cycling of the seasons.
Happy Holidays, everyone! 🙂
Winter Solstice in Mexico
Finally fallen
The tree’s last orange
Motionless on silent ground
This is beautiful!
Very nice! Thanks for adding this to the conversation.
Baron,
Nice haiku giving insight to another country’s solstice. Where I live there are no oranges, but we do have apples. Some of them are still connected to the tree. ~Nan
Hi Mark: I know I have already posted my poems for the week, but when talking with Jules about soup and relaxing just now, this popped into my head, lol. 🙂
winter solstice
wrapped up
a beautiful fog!
Maddy,
How nice that we can inspire each other!
Thank you!
One could take being wrapped up in fog several ways ~
One as the actual mist, and the other as the making of new memories or even reliving old ones 🙂
Thank you Jules! Yes, it is wonderful how we all inspire each other. 🙂 These are lovely comments!
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Hi Maddy,
This is wonderful! Feel free to share any haiku that pops into your head. Those are some of the best.
Thank-you Mark! That’s great to hear! 🙂
Thank-you for the feedback! Hope you are having a great weekend!
Thank-you for the feedback, Jules:)!