January 15 – January 21 is the third week of 2024 in the Gregorian calendar. During this week, we complete the Solar Term of Minor Cold (Jan 05 – Jan 19) and enter the Solar Term of Major Cold (Jan 20 – Feb 03). The micro-seasons for this week are “The Springwater Holds Warmth” (Jan 11 – Jan 15) and “The Pheasant First Calls” (Jan 16 – Jan 20).
The haiku selected for this week are written by Basho, Issa, Buson, Reichhold, Fukio, and Spiess.
The 24 Solar Terms
The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and reflects the climate around the city Xi’an, which was the capital of the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)
By the end of this week, we have entered the Solar Term of Major Cold (Jan 20 – Feb 03).
Major Cold
Major Cold is the last Solar Term of winter and the last Solar Term in the Lunar Calendar. Snow, icy rain, and cold temperatures are common and welcomed during this time. The accumulation of snow will provide a reserve of water for the upcoming growing seasons, and the colder weather will help control the population of pests that might damage the spring crops.(3)
Seasonal Food: Dispelling Cold Cakes
One of the common foods around Bejing at this time of year is the “dispelling cold cake”. This cake was introduced by Gao Wei, the secretary general of Beijing’s folklore society.(2) The main ingredients of this cake are sticky rice and sugar. The high sugar content of the cake is said to make people feel “warm all over”.(2) Some versions of the dispelling cold cake will include dates and walnuts. Dates and walnuts are said to be good for your body during the cold winters.
The 72 Seasons
The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)
The micro-seasons for this week are “The Springwater Holds Warmth” (Jan 11 – Jan 15) and “The Pheasant First Calls” (Jan 16 – Jan 20).
About Pheasants
A “pheasant” can be any one of about 50 different bird species found in the Galliformes order of birds. Birds in this order are described as being heavy ground-feeding birds. Besides pheasants, other birds in the Galliformes order are turkey, chicken, and quail. Pheasants are typically larger than quails but smaller than wild turkeys.(5,6)
Pheasants are a sexually dimorphic species. This means that there is a significant difference in some of the characteristics between males and females.(7) In pheasants, the males are usually larger, with brightly colored plumage and longer tail feathers. The females are smaller and usually brown.(5)
The Green Pheasant
The Green Pheasant, or Japanese Green Pheasant (Phasianus versicolor), became Japan’s national bird in 1947. Referred to as “kiji” in Japanese, this species is said to be able to detect minor earth tremors that precede more significant earthquakes. These birds are credited with saving many lives before the invention of the seismograph.(8)
The Pheasant’s call
The Green Pheasant call is described as “a harsh double-honk, similar to (and perhaps indistinguishable from) that of the Common Pheasant.”(9)
Pheasants call throughout the day. However, they are more frequently heard at dawn and dusk during the spring. Spring calls are usually associated with the male pheasant trying to claim his territory.(9) To hear the call of the Green Pheasant check out eBird.org: a project of the Cornell Lab of Ornithology.
Astronomical Season
January 21, the last day of week 03, is 31 days past the winter solstice and 58 days away from the spring equinox (March 19, 2024).
Moon Phases
At the start of this week, the Moon is in a Waxing Crescent phase with 21% illumination. On January 18, the Moon reaches 50% illumination, which is also known as the Moon’s First Quarter.
The First Quarter is seven days after the New Moon and marks the first quarter of the Moon’s orbit around the Earth. The day after the First Quarter phase, the Moon shifts into its Waxing Gibbous phase. On January 21, the last day of this week, the Moon will be in the Waxing Gibbous phase with 83% illumination.
The Next Full Moon is on January 25.
Seasonal haiku
When checking the World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greve, we find that the pheasant (kiji) is a spring kigo and not a winter kigo. This is interesting considering we are in the season of “The First Pheasant Calls”.
Recognizing this difference between bird and season, we now have an opportunity to consider what other birds may be associated with winter. For example, in The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “Cold crow”, ‘Cold Sparrow”, “Wild Duck”, and “Hawk” are all possible winter birds.
In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, the are many birds listed in the winter-animal section. “Wild Duck”, “Woodpecker”, “Owl”, “Eagle”, and “Black Birds” are just a few options.
Now, with this in mind, let’s read some winter haiku with birds.
Basho
always hateful -
those crows, except in this
morning’s snow scene
(translated by Makoto Ueda)
Cold night: the wild duck,
sick, falls from the sky
and sleeps awhile.
(translated by Robert Hass)
A hawk in the flesh
is more reliable than
one in a dream
(translated by Haruo Shirane)
Issa
winter wind--
he can't find his roost
the evening crow
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
snow mountain--
what crow
has had children?
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
deep snow--
on the signpost
a crow caws
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
Buson
Even the mandarine duck’s
charm has no meaning under
bare winter trees
(translated by Allan Persinger)
Reichhold
a flutter of wings
yet the bare branch
stays bent
from his tongue
wind tears the screech
of a snow owl
Fukio
the heart of winter–
a crow perches
on its own shadow
(found in Rosenstock’s Haiku Enlightenment)
Robert Spiess
the city bus stops–
a caw of a winter crow
through the opened door
(found in Rosenstock’s Haiku Enlightenment)
Haiku invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu that references a bird in winter.
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write!
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About the Haiku:
Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire:The Selected Poems of Yosa Buson. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from Dictionary of Haiku. Fukio and Spiess haiku were retrieved from Haiku Enlightenment by Gabriel Rosenstock.
Resources:
- “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
- “Eating the dispelling cold cake”; Chinaculture.org
- 24 Solar Terms: 6 things you may not know about Major Cold; ChinaDaily.com
- 72 Seasons App
- “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
- “Pheasant”; Wikipedia
- “Pheasant”; Britannica
- “Sexual dimorphism”; Wikipedia
- “The National Bird of Japan-Pheasant”; JapanCityTour.com
- “Green-pheasant”; birdfinding.info
- “Ring-necked Pheasant-Life History”; AllAboutBirds.org


I saw this one yesterday, though it wasn’t only the black-eyed junco that hung out in the tree.
lone mocking bird
guards his house of bird seed…
black-eyed junco waits
peace,
LaMon
p.s. Issa’s famous compassion is seen in his beautiful first haiku. Thanks for posting it!
LaMon,
I have Junco here too. I have mocking birds but I think I only see them when the weather is better. We”ve got 27F and snow this morning. But I do see my ‘birdies’ at the feeders 🙂
We have had (for us) some brutally cold weather lately in Birmingham, AL, so I have tried to keep our 2 feeders full. And the birds continue to flock around them. Unfortunately my binoculars are broken, so I can’t watch them close-up from the house. (Now, I going to check out your “avian friends”
LaMon,
Ah… I’m in Southeast, PA. Most winters – since we are on the south east side of the mountains we don’t get much snow. So far this January we’ve had three snow events… of 2-3 or more inches. The students don’t get snow days now… since the pandemic… The get Virtual Learning Class days!
The other night it got down to 9F. Stay safe and warm!
A pecking order develops at bird feeders! But somehow your last line speaks of patience and plenty enough.
Lovely LaMon – I have never heard of a black-eyed junco before I had to look it up – pretty little bid 😊
LaMon,
Lovely haiku, and juncos, which are such pretty little birds, usually have to wait to eat. Sometimes, though, they are willing to feed on the ground along with the sparrows. ~Nan
LaMon,
Just an FYI! I have trouble using binoculars, but I have a digital camera with a long lens (75-300mm) and I use that lens to view birds up close and personal. Yes, I take photos, but it is a plus to this near-sighted person. If you happen to have a DSLR, you might want to consider it. ~Nan
Hi LaMon and Nan, Using the DSLR is a great alternative to binoculars. I have heard of many birders who do that. The real serious one carry both binoculars and the DSLR into the field.
Thanks for the digital camera suggestion. Unfortunately I don’t have the long lens. Maybe next time I’ll get one!
LaMon,
My husband shops for used lenses. They are just as good and quite a bit less expensive. How do you think I can afford to have a camera and lenses? That is how. Let someone else pay the big bucks first. Nan
Thanks Nan, I’ll check it out.
Lovely juxtaposition — the greedy and the patient
Or the ARROGANT
Hi LaMon, I agree with your comment about Issa’s haiku. I so appreciate David Lanoue’s searchable Issa haiku database. I could spend hours in there reading different Issa haiku.
Lovely haiku for this week!
I’m almost afraid to go on that Issa database; I might never leave it!! Issa is my favorite of the big three.
Mark,
It is always a pleasure to learn and share. I’ve more info at my post via the title to explain the first one. And there are also two more about my;
Avian Friends…
brief look-see
albino pheasant
big surprise
Across the big pond that separates us, my friend saw those red eyes gleam.
© JP/dh (Jules)
Wow an albino pheasant I bet that’s quite a looker 🙌
I haven’t seen a phesant, but I’ve seen an albino Peacock!
Scurried (or should I say flied over) to your site. Enjoyed your ku, AS, and the notes. Happy birdwatching!
Nan
🙂
Jules, Another great collection. I really like the way you arranged the second haiku. Thanks for adding these to this week’s conversation.
Sometimes when you count – you have to split in odd places. 🙂
I can see this in my mind’s eye. Birds that present as all-white when you are not expecting that can be SO surprising! This one’s red eyes means it probably was a true albino… many unexpectedly white birds are leucistic rather than fully albino.
I myself have seen a true albino Peacock pair.
Really quiet lovely. Yes white birds like egrets and others are lovely too.
Hi LaMon and Jules,
Thanks for getting us started!
Here is my offering for today.
early morning
the Chickadee song stops
for the snowplow
Stay warm!
Mark,
Our plows haven’t come around yet. While some places and service are closed. Some schools are doing ‘Virtual Classes!’ –
No more ‘snow days!’
I don’t hear my birdies… I think they don’t sing much when their beaks are full 😉
Hi Jules, Yes, the double-edged sword of technology shows up again. It makes it easier to connect and then there are no more snow days!
…I’ve inherited a tablet… but haven’t figured out how to use it… And the grands are too busy with their own school work. *sigh*…
So evocative Mark and I love the sound of the word Chickadee too😊
Yes, Chickadee is a song all by itself!
I like it! Thanks, Mark.
LaMon
Thanks LaMon.
Mark,
Lovely haiku. Chickadees are such cute little birds, love their markings. Have a great weekend!
Thanks Nan. Same to you!
Wonderful use of the auditory in this ku, Mark.
Thanks Eavonka. Speaking of cutting words out of haiku. This one is one of those where I went back and forth about the word “the” in L2. I ended up leaving “the” in because I felt it sounded/read better, even though it could be considered an “extra” word. What are your thoughts?
I believe proper articles are essential in English Language Haiku. Without them, there is a risk of ‘tontoism’ (dang, I forgot who wrote the essay on this). I rarely leave them out.
That said, I do have a self-made rule to not use the same one twice in a poem. So, I would use ‘a’ in L3 of your ku. This is because haiku is so short that any repeated word needs to have a very good reason for being there. Of course, that’s just my take at this point in my learning.
Hi Eavonka, That is a great suggestion!
(Can’t help but say I agree unequivocally with Eavonka. 🙂
Hi Mark, there are quite a few engaging layers here and the “ch” sound and “s’s” sounds are delightful…agree with Nan, chickadees are darling.
Hi Maddy, thanks! I am glad you enjoyed this one.
🙂
Jules, your poems are lovely as always! 🙂
LaMon, a very intriguing haiku…first time I had heard of a black-eyed junco, as well. I looked them up. They are darling.
The chickadee was the first birdsong I heard, one day this week. And the snowplow can also be that “first song of the morning,” in its own way. Cool juxtaposition here!
Hi Shelley, thanks for the comment. I do appreciate hearing what comes up for others when reading haiku.
I find it so interesting that here where we are in SW Canada, the seasons always seem to align very closely with these solar and micro seasons. During the time of “minor cold” (which I believe you mentioned was actually the coldest cold) we were having a deep cold snap. Then we had a big snowfall, first of the year, and today it’s turning to rain (and deep slush). I looked at the world map and we (at the 48/49th parallel) are about in line with the north of China, and/but being seaside is similar perhaps to Japan – of course, we are farther north, but we have a warm ocean current that moderates temps.
Anyway, lovely post as always!
Hi Lia, Thanks for adding this reflection, and I have had some similar observations. There are many parts of these calendars that align with our climate in Northern Vermont and some that don’t. I find it really interesting to notice these things and then start to investigate the why behind them. Very cool stuff! Feel free to share other observations!
Hello again. Birds and winter! Yes!
winter day
even the sky
is chickadee colored
filing through the snow
dark cloaks thin against the cold
turkeys in winter
framed by my window
partridge buffeted by wind
gleans the yellow birch
I love all of these you paint a magical picture 🙌
Each haiku has it’s own value, but my favorite is definitely the first one–chickadee colored sky! I can see it. LaMon
Love them all, D, especially the chickadee-colored sky ku. We don’t see too many wild turkeys here. I’m not sure I have ever seen a partridge, in a pear tree or otherwise. ~Nan
So very visual, colorful, evocative
Hi DeDe, “winter day” is pretty awesome. I agree with the others about the image of a chickadee colored sky is spot on.
Thanks Mark and everyone. I’m glad because I wasn’t sure about that color, well I was/am, but didn’t know it would translate. ‘Cause I’m talking about that soft orangey-brown too.
The partridge was quite a sight, but hard to nail in words. Turkeys? They martyr along like once-zealous pilgrims who’ve lost faith but don’t know what else to do with themselves.
I so admire your ability to write both a modern haiku and two 5-7-5 so well. They are all so compelling.
Hi D. These are all great. The turkey poem resonate with me…such vivid imagery! The second line is hauntingly beautiful.
D., all lovely images. A couple of years ago we had some wild turkeys in the yard. I think they moved on to more dense wooded area.
dormant wisteria
now blooming
with juncos
Hi Shelley, Welcome to the conversation!
Perfect haiku for the week. Blooming with juncos is a great line. Thanks for stopping by today.
Thank you for building this friendly space, Mark, and for the continuing gifts of your attention and appreciation.
Beautiful haiku, Shelley!
Shelley, I agree with Eavonka. 🙂
Beautiful! … I like how D says it’s alive with birds!
Thank you!
That dormant vine is alive with birds! Love it.
Thank you!
Wow, Shelley, what a haiku! I love this. Your word is so evocative and spot on. I’m envious of your word facility and images. Nan
Thank you, Nan. This was a scene that I was fortunate enough to witness just beyond my front door… I’m glad that it seems I may have captured it well enough for it to resonate with you.
You’re welcome. I only call ’em as I see .em, Shelley.
Shelley,
The flitter of juncos… a lovely image 🙂
Hi Mark and fellow poets! Hope everyone is well! So grateful for this blog! 🙂 Here is my contribution. I will be back soon to read your blog and all the poems more thoroughly!
first day
a rabble of robins
devour a holly berry bush
A few days after the new year, I noticed a group of birds with rusty colored chests, ( their chests are more pale orange than where we live…they are very cute) descending with quite a flurry on a bush filled with bright red berries in a corner of my garden. The next day the berries and birds were gone..(lol)! I am happy and I know you would all agree that the berries went to a very good cause!:)
* more pale orange than red where we live
Love this Maddy ‘a rabble of robins’ how perfect 🙌😊
Thanks, Ange! 🙂
a rabble of robins…how alliterative, Madeleine! I love it. I should check my holly bush since we’ve had robins sitting in the crab-apple tree along with the ubiquitous sparrows. A good use of the berries, I agree. ~Nan
Thank-you Nan, awww. Yeah, it’s been raining recently so haven’t been outside but I think I will venture out tomorrow with umbrella in hand and look for more of these dear little things.:)
I can see that rabble! It’s a cool thing to see, birds swarming the shrubbery.
Yes, I haven’t seen it that often…always makes my day! 🙂
We often have sparrows leafing our burning bush in the winter as well as a hedge down the street are alive with their chattering.
Hi Maddy, wonderful word choice! We might not see a robins for another couple of months. But good to know they are being taken care of where you are!
Thanks, Mark 🙂 They are such delights!
Maddy,
Sometimes if the winter is mild our robins will stay all year. They are not here now with temps in the 20Fs. I can see your verse clearly – since one time while waiting for an apointment I was watching activitiy at a holly (bush) that really was a tree! The birds were just zooming in and out so much that it reminded me of an active bee hive!
Hi Jules, yes that is exactly the picture I was seeing when the robins came…and a very apt description of them. I just saw a bunch of them this morning, they seemed to be taking it easy on a tree in our backyard. 🙂
😀
Hi Jules, if you haven’t set up tablet yet, I just found a free app (the link is below) to help set up “tablet”. I am in a similar situation, I found a tutorial for instagram and will be setting up soon. 🙂
https://apps.apple.com/us/app/easy-tablet-help-for-seniors/id855402889
I’m not sure what my tablet is…
It is sort of already set up. But I just don’t know how to make it do anything…
One day… maybe one day 🙂
I’ve copied the info link though.
Thank you.
Hi Nan, yeah there’s a bush here that we pass on our walks where the robins chatter… getting louder as the spring goes along, especially in the evenings:)
Keeping my fingers crossed, Jules! 🙂
While I havn’t seen any robins yet – our one neighbor had a stand of white snowdrops blooming – Is spring arriving early? We’ve got 52 F right now, but more rain is on the way.
Lovely read Mark, here’s mine for this week 😊
Lovely haiku, and a fantastic photo of the pheasant. Can’t claim to have ever seen a pheasant except in photos. ~Nan
Great offering for this week! Your haiku definitely engages the senses.
Thanks so much Mark 💕
Another interesting post, Mark. I even checked out the green pheasant’s call. Not the most pleasant bird call I’ve even heard, I must say. Here are a few haiku:
waning moon…
a snowy owl
on the wing
~Nancy Brady, 2017
published in Stardust Haiku: Poetry with a Little Sparkle, Issue 12 (Dec. 2017)
snow flurries…
only color in landscape
a cardinal
~Nancy Brady, 2024
first quarter…
sparrows crowd
the feeder
~Nancy Brady, 2024
#offthecuffhaiku
Love these Haiku Nan my favourite is the second one paints such a beautiful image ❤️
Thanks, AJ. Glad you liked it, and appreciate your compliment. It is similar to a couple other haiku I wrote a few years ago. ~Nan
Cardinals are so much more in the winter! Smiled at your third one, it made me think of football.
Thanks, D. Yes, cardinals really stand out in the winter. Football, really? I guess I can see that. ~Nan
Hi Nan, I would agree that the pheasant has a less than pleasant call. All your haiku for this week are wonderful and I like that you have incorporated both the moon phases and the birds! Very cool.
Hi Mark,
I just thought all your blog was too interesting to dismiss without writing something. I liked the what you wrote. ~Nan
This prompt was made for you, Nan! I adore those sparrows.
Thanks, Eavonka. I had fun with writing them. I adore sparrows, too, and they have such great markings on their feathers. I have heard it said that sparrows are the cockroaches of the bird family. I don’t know that I’d ever write a haiku about cockroaches, but they often show up in my ‘ku. ~Nan
Whoever called sparrows cockroaches is crazy! That is an insane comparison. Ugh.
Love them all Nan. The second poem really appeals to me…how beautiful against all the white of the snow flurries!
I just read that Ange likes the second one too! 🙂
Hi Madeleine,
Thanks, that’s sweet of you to say. Cardinals really stand out in the snow, and winter is so ‘shades of gray,’ it seems to me. All the colors wash out. ~Nan
Nan, this such an interesting way of looking at winter and colors … or lack there of. I see what you mean…(with the exception of the cardinals, of course!) 🙂
bite in the air
draws family closer —
clutch of crows
A perfect haiku for the season 🙌
Hi Bill, This is great!
Last year about this time I watched this interesting video from a local independent newspaper where the followed the crows in the winter. They tracked them at dusk as they flew to their communal night roosting, which was usually near a more populated and urban settings that would be warmer than the suburbs at night. It was fascinating to watch and learn. Very cool stuff!
I love your new collective noun ‘clutch of crows’ so wildly different than the traditional murder.
I think I may have subconsciously thought “klatsch,” German/Yiddish word for “a casual gathering of people, especially for refreshments and informal conversation”
Oooh, I probably subconsciously knew that word too, but I love the multiple meanings of ‘clutch’.
Hi Griffin,
Yes, well said. The bite does draw people in. Love the use of clutch of crows. It really works. ~Nan
crows
in bare trees
a gathering
This is about as pared back as I ever write a haiku, but it says all I want to say.
I am quite fascinated by the crows in my neighborhood, and I try to stay in their good graces.
cutting and superb. when a crow looks you in the eye it doesn’t need words
Thank you so much! Is your first name Bill? I wasn’t sure, but I saw Mark use it.
You are so right about crows. They can be down right intimidating.
Your poem is lovely, Eavonka. I see what you mean about paring, the fewer words allows them to stand out!
A wonderful haiku, Bill.
I appreciate your feedback, Maddy. Sometimes I worry it might come across as too stark. 💜
I know what you mean, Eavonka, but I think your poem pretty much says it all! 🙂
I really like Mark’s feedback, below! 🙂
Hi Eavonka, I do like this one. I sometimes struggle with cutting to many words. I remember listening to an interview between Clark Strand and Natalie Goldberg at the Upaya Zen Center where they were talking about writing haiku. Strand and Goldberg had this great back and forth about one haiku where the added or took away words and then reflected on its impact on the reader. They both made some great points both ways.
It definitely can be a struggle. Most of the time I try for a 3-5-3 syllable count, but it isn’t at all a hard and fast rule. I tend to like the visual of short-long-short, but I know it’s not a requirement.
Plus, sometimes a monoku or a duostich is just right. It’s good to have so many options.
Eavonka,
I love this. The ku is sparse, but it is succinct and forms quite a picture.
Crows recognize people so don’t antagonize them. I try to keep them happy, too. Blue jays, too, recognize people (they are also corvids like crows and ravens) and they definitely know me. ~Nan
Exactly! Crows (all corvids) are so intelligent. Crows are one of the few animals that invent games to amuse themselves. They also have long memories and carry grudges. I have too much admiration to ever draw their ire.
Mark, thank-you for another intriguing posting. The green pheasant is amazing…I had no idea. I will have to stay away from cold cakes, because of all the sugar;/ (The same with hot cakes:) I loved Issa’s poems too. Robert Spiess’s “the City Bus Stops” resonates…I can imagine being there and hearing the caw of the crow, just as the bus’s doors are shutting.
Hi Maddy,
I really enjoyed Spiess’s haiku too. I do wonder what a cold cake tastes like. If it is anything like a cowboy cookie, I am in!
Cowboy cookie, Mark? What’s a cowboy cookie? Is it made with real cowboys (paraphrasing a line from The Addams Family movie)? Seriously, never heard of one.
~Nan
Just looked them up. Why ruin a good chocolate chip cookie with all that extra stuff?
It all the extra stuff that makes the cookie good. I just looked up why are they called cowboy cookies, and PBS says, “Some claim cowboy cookies hail from Texas, a state many cowboys call home. Others say the treats were named for their ability to withstand long days in saddlebag.” Now why wouldn’t you love a cookie that can last days in a saddlebag!
Nan, I didn’t know what a cow boy cookie was either until one of my friends told me a few years ago that my home baked chocolate chip cookies that I brought over were too big, lol!…that they were more like “cow boy” cookies!:) I had got into the habit of putting a couple extra tablespoons of batter in each mound on the cookie sheet! My kids really enjoyed them that way!
Mark and Nan, I like the whole idea of cow boy cookies, coz this is your chance to put quite a bit of oatmeal into the batter, which I love and as it gets closer to autumn and the holidays…anything goes. (Some people do this all year round) I love cranberries, sunflower seeds, almonds, walnuts, pumpkin spice, lots of cinnamon, all spice. Some people add a little bit of whiskey, too depending. 🙂
Nan, “…made with real cowboys made me chuckle…”!
Mark, equipped with this new information, I can’t think of one good reason not to partake in one of them here cowboy cookies! 🙂
I really liked this article…I found it yesterday evening! Link is below…couldn’t resist posting:
https://www.homesicktexan.com/cowboy-cookies-recipe/
I have to agree with you, Mark! 🙂
Hi Mark: I added a fourth line. Nan’s and D’s responses and commentary encouraged me to see my poem in a different light. 🙂 I couldn’t help it:) (There might be one too many r’s.) I remember that Jules has discussed “the four lined haiku” in a number of her posts.
a rabble
of robins
ravage the holly bush
a riot!
I really like all the R sounds although I don’t know if the fourth line is necessary. Unless the riot is as in RIOTous (fun to watch the birds devour the berries). The alliteration works, Maddy.
I often have three or four different word combinations per haiku. In my file, I generally put them all down. Even then, when I submit, I often change a word or two at the last minute. It’s just one of my little writing quirks. A couple examples, using THE vs. A when using articles or singular vs. plural nouns/verbs. ~Nan
Thanks Nan for the feedback and information…it means alot! Writing haiku is so wonderful and we learn so much! I know:) I have just begun to realize what a difference writing “A” instead of “The” can make in many haiku. I don’t think we will every stop learning! 🙂
maybe it still should be “devour” the holly bush.
This is it…no more changes:)
a rabble
of robins
descend upon the holly bush
a riot
If you’re open to it (please ignore if not), I wonder if it should remain a tercet.
a rabble of robins
devour the holly bush
early winter?
or some other kigo for L3. I worry that ‘a riot’ is too telly and doesn’t allow the reader enough space for interpretation.
Eavonka, I love it! Thank-you:) I really appreciate your insight… you are right, It is telly. I do like your kigo for L3. But I love “winter morning, too”! (It was in my last poem from Mark’s blog, lol:) I might do “early winter” still!
a rabble of robins
devour the holly bush
winter morning
Ooh, that works really well, Maddy.
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Thanks, always for your encouragement, Eavonka:) It means and helps so much!
Hi Mark. Here is my response to this week’s prompt.
Happy Smiles Day Everyone.
Stunning image and amazing sounds in your ku, James.
Thank you My Friend. Thanks for the read and generous comments. Much appreciated. So pleased you enjoyed. Happy Haiku Day.
I particularly like the line ‘a swirl of scraped caws.’ Crows’ caws are certainly screechy and scratchy…kinda like fingernails on a blackboard effect. Well done, Goff; I really like the ku. ~Nan
Thanks Nan for the read and comments. Much appreciated My Friend.
Hi Goff, Thanks for linking up and sharing such a vivid haiku! I hope you have a great week.
Thanks Mark. Hope you have a great week too.
Hi James. I agree with Eavonka and Nan. This is a wonderful haiku!