Week 04: Major Cold

January 22 – January 28 is the fourth week of 2024 in the Gregorian calendar.  During this week, we are in the Solar Term of Major Cold (Jan 20 – Feb 03). The micro-seasons for this week are “The Giant Butterbur Flowers” (Jan. 21 – Jan 24) and “The Mountain Stream Freezes Over” (Jan 25 – Jan 29).

The haiku selected for this week are written by Basho, Issa, Buson, Reichhold, and Kerouac.


The 24 Solar Terms 

The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China  (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around the city Xi’an, which was the capital of the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)

Major Cold

This week falls within the Solar Term of Major Cold (Jan 20 – Feb 03).   

Major Cold is the last Solar Term of winter and the last Solar Term in the Lunar Calendar. Snow, icy rain, and cold temperatures are common and welcomed during this time.  The accumulation of snow will provide a reserve of water for the upcoming growing seasons, and the colder weather will help control the population of pests that might damage the spring crops.(2) 

Seasonal Food: Stewed Hen Soup

One of the foods common around Nanjing in the Jiangsu province during this time is Stewed Hen Soup.(2) Stewed hen soup is similar to chicken soup.  However, stewed hen soup uses older hens instead of younger chickens as the protein source.  The meat of the older hens is tough and isn’t recommended for most chicken dishes.  

Cooking stewed hen soup is not complicated, but it does take many hours to complete.  The hen is placed in a stewed pot and simmered for about three hours. Near the end of the cooking time, you add your chosen vegetables. Some suggested ingredients for hen soup are Chinese yam, dried jujube, dried goji, ginger, and mushrooms. 

Check out AsianCookingMom.com’s stewing hen soup recipe for detailed instructions and a commentary about the process.  


The 72 Seasons

The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai.  Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)

The micro-seasons for this week are “The Giant Butterbur Flowers” (Jan. 21 – Jan 24) and “The Mountain Stream Freezes Over” (Jan 25 – Jan 29)

The Giant Butterbur

The Giant Butterbur (Petasites japonicus) is also known as the Japanese Butterbur, Great Butterbur, or Sweet Coltsfoot. The Giant Butterbur is a perennial herb in the Asteraceae family. It is native to China, Japan, and Korea.  This plant thrives in woodlands near streams and where the soil is moist. The Giant Butterbur is considered an invasive plant in most parts of North America.(5,6,7)

In early spring, just after the ground thaws, small green buds of the Giant Butterbur begin to emerge from the ground. Those buds produce small flowers that start out green but then quickly turn white.  As the plant matures, the flowers give way to the stalks and leaves of the plant.(5,6)

When fully grown, the Giant Butterbur has stalks that can be about 36 inches long (.9 meters) and leaves that can be up to 48 inches (1.2 meters).  The stalks are edible and are called “Fuki”. One technique for preparing fuki is to stir-fry it with miso to create a relish to add to rice dishes. 

You can find some great photos documenting the growth of the Giant Butterbur on Linda Davis’s site: NewEnglandFineLiving.com


Astronomical Season

January 28 is the last day of week 04 of 2024.  Jan 28 is 38 days past the winter solstice and 51 days until the spring equinox (March 19, 2024).  

The Wolf Moon (January 25)

January’s full moon arrived on January 25.  This full moon is sometimes referred to as The Wolf Moon.

Catherine Boeckmann at The Farmer’s Almanac explains that the Wolf Moon got its name because  “wolves were more likely to be heard howling at this time. It was traditionally believed that wolves howled due to hunger during winter, but we know today that wolves howl for different reasons.”  Some of the other reasons wolves howl are to identify territory, locate other wolves, and coordinate hunting activities.  

 Other traditional names for January’s full moon include:

  • Frost Exploding Moon from the Cree
  • Freeze Up Moon from the Algonquin  
  • Severe Moon from the Dakota
  • Spirit Moon from the Ojibwe, and 
  • Greetings Moon from the Western Abenaki.

For more information about the Wolf Moon, read Boekmann’s full article.


Seasonal haiku

Stewed Hen Soup, fuki, and the story behind the Wolf Moon got me thinking about words related to getting or eating food in the winter. For example, “hunting” is listed as a winter kigo in The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto and in Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku.   

There are also fishing-related kigo including “wicker fishnet” from The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words, and “fishermen in winter” in A Dictionary of Haiku. For those of us in colder climates, “ice-fishing” would also fit in here. 

For foods that are commonly consumed in winter, “porridge” is listed as an option in The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words, and “Bean Soup” is listed in A Dictionary of Haiku.  I also think “Chicken Soup” would be another potential seasonal word for this week. 

Now with all this in mind, let’s read some haiku.


Basho

if it hails 
I'll cook and serve
wicker-caught whitebait.
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
barley soup
grown thin from love
the cat’s wife
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
well nothing happened
yesterday has passed away
with globefish soup
(translated by Jane Reichhold

Issa

dawn
at the hunting shack...
the dog's bell
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
his wicker fishing trap
built once more...
deep mountain haze
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
the season's first
pufferfish soup smoke...
house on the hill
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Pufferfish soup (fukuto-jiru) is a winter season word.

going out
to get soup stock...
bright moon
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Buson

In wintery wind
gills puffing —
a hooked fish
(translated by Allan Persinger)

Reichhold

old hunter
confined to setting traps
for mice

Kerouac

America: fishing licenses
   the license
To meditate

This last haiku by Kerouac is one of my favorites.  I wanted to include it even though it isn’t necessarily a winter haiku. 


Haiku invitation

This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu referencing some aspect of cooking or gathering food in winter.

Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write!  


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About the Haiku

Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess.  Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy.  Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire:The Selected Poems of Yosa Buson. Jane Reichhold’s haiku was retrieved from Dictionary of Haiku. Kerouac’s haiku was retrieved from Kerouac’s Book of Haikus

Resources

  1. “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
  2. 24 Solar Terms: 6 things you may not know about Major Cold; ChinaDaily.com
  3. 72 Seasons App
  4. “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
  5. Davis, Linda. “Giant Japanese Butterbur, a prehistoric looking plant in our yard”.
  6. Dyer, Mary. “Japanese Butterbur Information: Growing Japanese Butterbur Plants”. 
  7. “Petasites japonicas:; Wikipedia
  8. Boeckmann, Catherine. “Wolf Moon: Full Moon in January 2024”. Almanac.com 

149 thoughts on “Week 04: Major Cold

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  1. Great as always Mark, love the Basho haiku, especially the second one, here is my offering – I’ll be missing for the next two weeks, sunning myself take 😊chttps://poetisatinta.wordpress.com/2024/01/26/haiku-for-the-season-8/are

    1. AJ,
      Love the haiku as well as the photo you used to set off the ‘ku. Now, I’m going to have to look up soft rowan jelly. The best of haiku is bringing humans into nature, and you nailed it! ~Nan

      PS. Enjoy your time away; don’t forget the sunscreen.

  2. I too liked the Kerouac haiku and also Basho’s “well nothing happened”. Here is my contribution:

    taken from the freezer
    to enjoy on wolf moon night:
    Pat’s potato soup

    If I were a Scotsman, the second line might read “for Robert Burns’ Night”.

    Peace,
    LaMon

    1. LaMon,
      Excellent haiku, and I love that you knew that Robbie Burns’ birthday shared the day with the Wolf Moon. My husband and I are going to a Burns’ Night Dinner tomorrow evening. It should be fun, listening to Burns’ poetry and so much more. Nan

    1. Pumpkin soup is my favorite winter soup, What I really like about this one is the “not gone soft” line. For me, this line holds the suggestion of “not gone soft yet” and its still edible. It also hints that if you are saying this, than hunger and food scarcity might be an issues.

    2. Griffin,
      What a great haiku and the soup sounds delicious! I guess we should have thought to make soup from ours…we just gave it to the wild animals in our neighborhood to eat. ~Nan

      1. I agree with Mark, Eavonka and Nan–definitely a wonderful haiku, a delicious and colorful soup!

  3. Mark (and All)

    Lovely information, more full moon names, and master’s ku!

    Here’s mine (two more at title link); …Major Cold…

    …Major Cold…

    spirit moon
    nestled in rain clouds
    offers health

    Though unseen, Luna smiled wide, winked, sighed at the old lady’s bowling score.

    © JP/dh (Jules)

      1. These poems are so very charming, Jules. It’s a joy to read them! My favorite is:

        “fifty one
        official days; ‘Spring’
        – it’s that warm” 

        Glad it’s warm again! :)

    1. Great trio, JP. I particularly like that you used spirit moon in your first haiku (and that saucy wink from Luna, too). That’s such a cool kigo. When I read the different names for January’s full moon, I thought there’s some new moon names to add to my kigo list, but of them all, spirit moon was my favorite.   ~Nan

      1. I agree, Jules…it does gives us gifts…from listening to fellow poets, I am beginning to believe that writing haiku helps us to see these gifts.

  4. Hi Mark and everyone HNY 😉
    January Blessings on this Wolf Moon Night.

    Issa’s pufferfish
    soup 🍜—I like that one😃

    I like your invitation. Thank you for all you do.
    Here’s my soul food 🍲 on the boil. And I really love how the windows fog over.

    In the comments:

    fogged over with steam
    the windows in the kitchen
    slow cooking the soup

    xo, Selma

    1. Hi Selma, I like this one! The steam over window and slow cooking soup say “winter” to me. This actually happens to me every Sunday when I cook a pot of soup for the next week’s lunches.

      1. Hi Selma: I love this visual you have created. I feel warm just reading your poem. 🙂

      1. Thank you My Friend for calling in, read and kind comments, Much appreciated.. So pleased you enjoyed my poem. Have a great day. Stay Smiling.

  5. Another informative post, Mark. I chuckled when I read the haiku “well nothing happened” by Issa. That could almost be a kigo by itself for any season. Speaking of nothing happening, here are some haiku:

    Kenyan cuisine…
    a meal of chapati
    and stew hen soup
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    gathering
    the last of the berries
    –jam-making
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    Burns Night…
    eating haggis
    with a wee dram
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024
    #offthecuffhaiku

    https://nbsmithblog.wordpress.com

    I have to write my blog first, but I’ll be back to read everybody’s haiku. Have a great weekend! A toast to Robert Burns!

      1. Thanks, Eavonka!
        I have had chapiti, and never had stew hen soup in Kenya, but all the chicken we had when we were there had lived a longful life before becoming dinner. ~Nan

    1. Hi Nan, you have taken us a culinary tour from haggis to berry jam. Such great collection for this week. I hope you have a great weekend too.

      1. Thanks, Mark.
        Tomorrow night I’ll be at a Burns Night Dinner where the group will be celebrating Robert Burns poetry and enjoying haggis, dancing, and a wee dram or two. ~Nan

    2. Love the Burns night poem. I watched a short visual blog by Michael Guite on YouTube celebrating Robert Burns’ Night a couple of days ago. He read two short poems by Burns. In the introducing Burns’ night, he poured himself a wee dram, but confessed to never liking haggis. Peace, LaMon

      1. Thanks, glad you liked the Burns haiku. Yes, LaMon, worldwide celebrations are going on this weekend. His birthday was the 25th, but many are happening this weekend. Personally, I do like haggis and a wee dram, yet don’t like meatloaf. Go figure! ~Nan

  6. One senryu, which doesn’t go with the haiku prompt, but I couldn’t resist.

    the leaky cauldron…
    on my bar tab
    two mugs of butterbeer
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024
    #offthecuffsenryu

      1. Thanks, E. Yes, the butterbeer at Universal reminded me of liquid butterscotch. At least, from what I remember (it was pre-pandemic). I loved the whole Harry Potter theme-park. This senryu came about because of when I read about butterbur, my mind converted it to butterbeer. I wondered if I was the only one.

      1. Hi Nan, I agree with Eavonka and Mark about your haiku and including your senru about butterbeer. They are all wonderful!

      2. Hi Mark,
        Thanks! When I read about butterbur, my mind changed it to butterbeer, which tastes a bit like butterscotch or butter rum lifesavers (it’s pretty sweet) from what I recall, and one was all I could handle, but I had to give it a try at least once. Once a Harry Potter geek, always a Harry Potter geek! ~Nan

  7. I have to say that though I always love the haiku you showcase and usually most of all the ones from Basho, I too especially loved that Kerouac one when I got to it because it resonated the most. I never understood the point of purely fishing for “sport” – until I realized it was a way of allowing the fisher person (usually men) to just be quiet in nature. A kind of culturally acceptable excuse, as it were. :)) I also loved that “Frost Exploding Moon” name – wow! <33

    1. Hi Lia, Thanks for sharing your reflection on Kerouac’s haiku. I had the same idea,
      Thanks for your continued support. I hope you have a good weekend.

    2. Lia,
      I liked Kerouac’s haiku, but I had to read it twice before I got it. Then it was like “Duh, of course!” You got it immediately, I can tell. I liked all the alternate full moon names especially Spirit Moon. I suspect I will be adding all of them to my list of kigo/fragments that I call upon regularly when I’m stumped with a lack of ideas. ~Nan

      1. Lia,
        When I find a kigo I like, I use it appropriately. Last year, I wrote several wolf moon haiku. Here’s one of them:

        the howl
        of the neighbor’s dog
        –wolf moon
        ~Nancy Brady, 2023 Published in Presence Issue #75

      2. That’s brilliant Nan… a great technique. Straightforward language can transmit deep stuff through the “in betweens” if you know what I mean. Love your wolf moon haiku

  8. major cold
    chicken soup to cure
    what ails me

    wolf moon
    hidden behind clouds
    a reason to howl

    Once again, I’m surprised to find just how well this week’s offerings go with my own experiences. I did actually feel poorly and my sweet husband made me chicken soup. Plus, we had a big storm come through.

    1. Awww! Love the play on words in your first poem…it’s very witty. I couldn’t help chuckling. I hope you are feeling better! I love your second one too. Eavonka, I notice that my second one is a little like yours 🙂 I have to admit I like yours a lot better! I usually just go on site look at Mark’s prompt and then go back and start working on a poem, without looking at the others. (I wanted you to know I wasn’t copying yours.:) I wasn’t that wowed by mine, I just considered it as a filler and it was fun writing it. And I was intrigued with the wolf moon! (I had never heard the moon called by that name before.) I am not interested in using the poem again, it’s a throw away. 🙂

      1. Oh, Maddy, of course you hadn’t seen mine. It’s totally natural to mention howling with the wolf moon kigo. I’m flattered you enjoyed mine. I quite liked yours too.

        So happy you felt the humor in my wordplay as that makes writing so much fun for me. I am feeling better, thank you.

      2. Awww! That is so kind of you to say, Eavonka…Yes, a lovely feeling when that happens:) I am glad you are feeling better. 🙂

      3. Madeleine,
        Speaking only for myself, I don’t look at anyone’s haiku until I write mine because I don’t want to be influenced accidentally or otherwise by others’ haiku. First, I read his post, note the prompt, and then skip quickly to the end of the comments and post haiku. I suspect that is how most do it. In fact, this week is unusual in that I wrote all of them off-the-cuff, and I didn’t go back in my files to pull some out. Usually, at least one haiku is new. When I read wolf moon, I was excited since I have several wolf moon haiku that were published last year, but then Mark twisted the prompt into food (gathering and otherwise). Then, I go to my blog and write my blog post referencing Mark’s blog and some of what he discusses, linking it back here. Lastly, after posting my blog, I return here and read all the phenomenal haiku written by everyone else. I am always pleased to see how many poets write haiku here. Mark has really created quite a community of readers and writers, and I’m proud to be a part of it. ~Nan

      4. Thanks, Nan for your thoughts. I do the same. I just don’t want to get accidentally influenced, either. I agree, a wonderful growing community of poets on Mark’s blog. I consider myself a very lucky person to be part of it. It’s great fun sharing poems on this post. 🙂

    2. Hi Eavonka,
      These are both really good! The word play on “major cold” is fantastic.
      Thanks for sharing and I hope you have a good weekend.

    3. Eavonka,
      Art imitates life, or vice versa. I like both of these very much; major cold works as both a kigo and what you were going through. A pivot and a kigo all in one. A good reason to howl, indeed. I hope you’re feeling better now. ~Nan

      1. Thanks so much, Nan, it was mainly lethargy, but I was grateful for the soup! I was really pleased about that pivot so I’m glad you noticed it. 💜

    4. Eavonka ~
      I like that -mind meld 😉 The moon reflects the sun, and thus heals (deep into the soul?).

      The weeks that I was under the weather – I had my hubby ‘cook’ for me. We are both retired. I think I might have to have him cook even when I am healthy 🙂

      Hope you are all mended!

      1. Thanks, Jules, it was only a day or two. I admit I’m a pampered princess. My husband is the only one who cooks! 😅

  9. Hi Mark and all: It seems that I was not the only one struck by the wolf moon…And I enjoyed reading all the wonderful poetry above!

    Fuki with butterbur sounds delicious. I looked butterbur up on Linda Davis’s site….they are amazing!

    It was so interesting to read about the wolves’ howl

    I like Basho’s “Barley Soup”
    and Issa’s “Dawn”

    full moon
    salivates making stout pie
    from scratch

    ~ ~ ~

    the moon
    howls through the open window
    a masala curry

    1. All these poems today are sure making me hungry!

      These are fun but sadly, a lot of editors don’t like personification in haiku. I, personally, delight in it.

    2. Hi Maddy,
      I am glad that you looked up the Giant Butterbur on Davis’s site. The photos are pretty amazing. I agree that the wolf moon is perfect for haiku, or just about any poetry.
      Thanks for sharing your culinary haiku!

      1. Thanks, Mark! Glad you included the wolf moon…I think we all had a lot of fun with it!

    3. Wow, Madeleine. I like these two haiku very much. I had to look up stout pie (reminds me of Mom’s potpie a little bit, but with more ingredients and stout, of course). I like the personification of the moon howling, too. Eavonka is right. Reading all these haiku is making me hungry. ~Na

      1. Thanks, Nan for your very kind remarks. Yes, a lot of delicious meals on the menu tonight as well as drinks! 🙂 I hope you have fun at the Burn’s Night Dinner tomorrow!

      2. Yes, Madeleine, we had a great time at the Burns Night. A night of poetry, who can beat that? My husband along with a friend did “The Immortal Memory” speech together…tag teamed it with lots of poetry. Stayed with he and his wife, who are good friends, so the after-party was just grand. Also visited my son, his wife, and their two sons beforehand. We never see them enough, but I think they were glad to see us as well. The only downside was our cat, who was super lonely we were away. Hopefully, he’ll forgive us.

      3. Hi Nan, I am glad you had such a wonderful night on Burn’s Night..I bet your cat was very happy to see you! 🙂

      4. Madeleine,
        Burns Night was great fun, seeing friends we haven’t seen in a year. We especially enjoyed the after-party with the people we had the pleasure of staying with.

        Regulus was both pleased to see us as well as a bit traumatized by our absence. He suffers from chronic pancreatitis, and he welcomed us back with a small bout of pancreatitis. If only he’d drink more water…but he’s pretty much back to normal now.
        ~Nan

    4. Ah… food for thought 🙂 When I cook I use recipes as guide lines. I don’t always have what a recipe calls for so I improvise. So sometimes from scratch, and sometimes added to.

      I made a bean ‘stew’ and ended up with two quarts… I still have almost a full quart, mainly because it turned out thick and when I used it I only took some of it and added fuild and more veg – so it sort of kept growing into other meals. 😉

      We have an Indian resturant locally that has masala curry – they ask you you would like your spice (heat) level to be. I might have added too much red pepper or even just pepper to my stew so I kept adding things to ‘calm’ it down 😀

      1. Hi Jules: These methods sound like a great process for cooking…cooking from scratch is fun, partly because you never know how it will turn out. Having more than expected is a nice surprise, too.

  10. Thank you Mark for the prompt. I have very much enjoyed reading the responses so far!
    Here is my take 😊
    bounty of deeply hued roots
    adorned upon our red gum bench-
    much too lovely to prepare

      1. Rosanna,
        Thanks for the compliment on my haiku. I do appreciate your reading.
        Thanks for sharing the names of your root vegetables. By the way, I don’t know if you intended it in your comment, but it sounded like a monoku, but I converted it in a haiku.
        root vegetables…
        carrots, potatoes, and beets dusted
        in dirt
        ~Rosanna Avitabile, 2024

        ~Nan

      1. Hi Shelly, a wonderful haiku. I agree with Mark. Line 3 is quite intriguing. I also enjoy how you set it up in Line 2!

    1. Shelley,
      Your haiku makes me want to try carrot ginger soup, which I had never heard of prior to reading your poem. I bet he will remember your soup forever. I like the emotional impact of this haiku.
      ~Nan

  11. I can see why the Kerouac haiku is one of your favorites. That one took me a long moment to sink in, then I got it and enjoyed it. Here’s my haiku for the major cold:

    Winter as artist:
    fractally flowery flakes
    Freezing crafts water

    1. Hi Dave: Yes, I can see why the Kerouac is one of Mark’s favorite too. 🙂 I like your haiku especially with the alliteration in the second line. It sounds very nice when you say it aloud. I really appreciate the use of the word fractally …even though I was pretty sure, I looked it up and it confirmed my opinion of how wonderful snow flakes are and encouraged me to read more about Koch’s snowflakes and his discoveries…a beautiful picture of the snow flake.

      1. Thank you Maddy. Your comment inspired me to look up Koch’s snowflakes — and those are really neat. As are up-close photos of snowflakes and ice on windows. Such beauty is out there in winter 🙂

      2. Hi Dave, They are wonderful! I had heard of his work but when I looked him up, I got inspired again! Yes, I agree! 🙂

    2. Dave…
      I only take photos for fun… somewhere I have an image of crafted ice water from the creek at the end of my yard.
      Most often the creek does not freeze. But there was that one winter… (oh, the gully that goes to the creek often freezes.)

      1. Neat that you have a creek at the end of your yard! We have a creek in the neighborhood, and I’ve enjoyed looking at the creek when the top freezes, but you can still see moving water underneath the layer of ice.

      2. The creek by my yard only froze thin enough once to hold a man and his dog… most often it has a constant flow and is a great source of entertainment and inspirations 🙂

    3. Dave,
      the Kerouac took me a couple times before i got it, too. i like your haiku very much. the alliteration, the use of fractally (I have a thing for fractals), and the picture of an artist, Winter. Well done., In fact, it reminds me of the first haiku I ever wrote way-back-when. It still is one of my favorite haiku. ~Nan

    4. Hi Dave, What a great conversation inspired by your haiku! I really like that aspect of haiku and poetry. The observations can spur some really interesting discussion. Thanks so much for sharing.

  12. Wow, just read everyone’s comments about the Koch’s snowflake and decided to look it up. Watched a YouTube animation of it. Impressive.

    Totally off the subject, sorta, I read a Honey Bunch book as a kid and one of the characters was a jeweler who made jewelry designs from snowflakes he’d photographed on ice cold glass plates because the snowflakes were all different.

  13. Nan, I must say I love your haiku from way back when. It is so tranquil and serene…I see the feather floating down to earth perhaps on to a bank of snow and hear the quiet. 🙂

    1. Hi Maddy,
      Thanks so much. I love those big fluffy flakes that look like down feathers. The world hushes and it is tranquil…that is, until the snowplows plow the snow into a slushy, dirty mess.
      I know it might not be to everyone’s taste, but I do love snow (up to mid to late February; then I’m ready for crocuses.). ~Nan

      1. Ahh, Nan I just realized the term “drift” is a play on words…that is so very witty! 🙂

  14. Mark,
    With all the discussion about January’s full moon (the Wolf Moon), I hope you don’t mind that I share a Rengay, which I wrote with Richard Tice at one of Sherry and Zoe Grant’s International Rengay Gathering. It was published in Sherry and Zoe Grant’s Raining Rengay, Issue 2. October 2023

    Howling at the Moon: A Rengay
    Richard Tice (ret)/Nancy Brady (nb)

    midnight hour:
    a coyote answers
    another coyote ret

    the neighbor’s dog
    howls at the moon nb

    fox kits yip
    at their mother’s teats
    second breakfast ret

    hunting horn
    the hounds catch
    the scent nb

    Yellowstone wolf pack
    growl over a deer carcass ret

    a thousand miles
    a musher snaps her whip
    at the huskies nb

      1. Thanks, Eavonka. It was fun, but then you know I enjoy working collaboratively on rengay. I can’t wait for Raining Rengay 3 to come out. How about you? ❤

    1. Hi Nan, Thanks for sharing. This is great and I like how it shifts back and forth between the wild canine experience and then the domestic canine experience.

    1. Thanks, Madeleine. Richard Tice and I were partnered up. Now I notice his name in other journals. I enjoy writing collaboratively with other poets. Altogether, I think I have collaboratively written 6 rengay with 8 poets and 1 solo rengay. It is so much fun. Have you ever written any? ~Nan

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