Week 07: “Fish Rise From The Ice”

February 12 to February 18 is the seventh week of 2024 in the Gregorian calendar.  During this week, we complete the Solar Term of the Beginning of Spring (Feb 04 – Feb 18), and the micro-seasons for this week are “Bush warblers start singing in the mountains” (Feb 9 – Feb 13) and “Fish Emerge From The Ice” (Feb 14 – Feb 18).

The haiku selected for this week are written by Basho, Issa, Reichhold, Sogi, Kerouac, and Kenko.


The 24 Solar Terms 

The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China  (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around the city Xi’an, which was the capital of the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)

Beginning of Spring

The Beginning of Spring is the first Solar Term of the new year. While it is still cold in many places, in the southern regions of China the snow has shifted to rain and people have started preparing for the upcoming planting season.

Spring Festival Decorations

The Spring Festival starts with the arrival of the Beginning of Spring. At this time, cities, towns, and people dress in red.  Red is an important color for the Spring Festival because it symbolizes happiness, wealth, and prosperity. 

Door Couplets

One way that people decorate their houses for the Spring Festival is with “Door Couplets” or “Couplets”.  Couplets are red strips of paper with Chinese calligraphy that are pasted on the sides of doorways. 

The writing on the couplet is a poem, and each poem is unique to the household.  These couplets follow traditional rules that include, “both lines must have the same number of characters, the tone pattern of one line must be the opposite of the following line, and the meanings of the two lines must be related.”(3)  This tradition began in the Song Dynasty (960 – 1279) and continues to be popular today.  

Spring Festival Couplet by visityunnanchina.com

The 72 Seasons

The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai.  Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)

The micro-seasons for this week are “Bush warblers start singing in the mountains” (Feb 9 – Feb 13) and “Fish Emerge From The Ice” (Feb 14 – Feb 18)

Fish in Spring

“Fish Emerge From The Ice” refers to the time in the year when the ice on the rivers, lakes, and ponds, begin to break apart and the fish become active again.  

In Japan, the average temperature in February varies greatly depending on where you are.  In Toyko, the average high is 50 degrees Fahrenheit and the average low is 35.  However, if you are in Sapporo the average high is 32 degrees Fahrenheit and the average low is 20.(6)  So the relevance of this season really depends on your location. 

Lake Turnover

Lake Turnover is when the deep water of a lake begins to mix with the shallow water closer to the surface. This process occurs in the autumn and in the spring when there are significant shifts in the atmospheric temperature.

In the spring, lake turnover happens when the ice that covers lakes and ponds thaws, and there is new open water.  The sun’s rays pass through this open water and start to warm the deeper waters. The increased temperature of the deep water makes it rise toward the surface and thus begins to create cyclical currents.  These currents bring nutrient-dense matter toward the surface, while the sunlight brings the dormant biological organisms back to life. 

With the increase in water temperature brought on by the shifting season, and the available plant life and microorganisms brought on by lake turnover, the fish are drawn out of their deep-water winter retreats and return to the surface.  Fishing is said to be very good at this time of year.(7) 


Astronomical Season

February 19, the last day of week seven of 2024, is 59 days past the winter solstice and only 30 days away from the spring equinox (March 19, 2024).  

The Moon Phases

On February 16, the moon reached its First Quarter phase. The First Quarter is 7 days after the New Moon and marks the first quarter of the Moon’s orbit around the Earth

 On February 18, the Moon is in a Waxing Gibbous phase with 70% illumination. It will take another 6 days for us to reach February’s full moon which is on February 24.  


Seasonal Haiku

.In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, February is considered early spring.  ‘Melting Snow”, “Thin Ice”, and “Ice Flows” are all potential Earth kigo for this week.  

In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “Melting Snow” and “Run-off” are both spring terrestrial kigo and “Fish” and “Minnows” are potential animal kigo.

When checking the World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greve, we find that “Drift Ice”, “Floating Ice” and “Lake with Melting Ice” are all potential kigo for this week.

Now with all this in mind, let’s read some haiku.


Basho

beginning to melt,
I soak it dry with my brush:
the pure water spring.
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
at dawn
the white of an ice fish
just one inch long
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
baby sweet fish 
seeing off the ice fish
farewell
(translated by Jane Reichhold)

Issa

ice melting--
in the threshold
early evening's moon
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
in one spot
the crows congregate...
snow is melting! 
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
before the gate--
my cane makes a river
of melting snow 
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Reichhold

the bones the stones
the last snow melts
again a river

Iio Sogi

Snow yet remaining
The mountain slopes are misty
An evening in spring
(translated by Donald Keene)

Kerouac

Snow melting,
    Streams rushing–
Lookouts leave the valley

Kato Kenko

An insect living
in the stone animal’s mouth–
time of melting snow

Haiku Invitation

This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu that references melting snow or ice.

Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write! 

We are halfway through NaHaiWriMo! Feel free to share any insights gained from this practice. 


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About the Haiku

Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess.  Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy.  Iio Sogi haiku was retrieved from The Classic Tradition of Haiku: An Anthology. By Faubion Bowers. . Kerouac’s haiku was retrieved from Kerouac’s  Book of Haikus.  Kato Kenko haiku was retrieved from Haiku Enlightenment by Gabriel Rosenstock. 

Resources

  1. “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
  2. 24 Solar Terms: 9  things you may not know about Start of Spring; ChinaDaily.com
  3. “Chinese Spring Festival Decorations”. visityunnanchina.com
  4. 72 Seasons App
  5. “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
  6. “Complete Guide To Visiting Japan In February 2024: Weather, What To See & Do”. Live Japan.com
  7. Balgooyen, Warren P. “Seasonal Magic: How Ice Out in Lakes and Ponds Helps Nourish Life”.  Edited by Matt Loosigian, Deb Avalon-King, and Christine Smith. Maine.gov
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      1. Oh yes please do go and find one. Not always easy to spot. But look for them near an old bridge or weir.They haunt fast flowing rocky steams mostly though here in the UK I’ve seen them on sluggish streams running through lowland meadows.

      2. Clive,
        I’ll be on the look out for them. I volunteer at a nature preserve regularly and I’ll ask the staff about them. Thanks for introducing the bird to me. ~Nan

      3. Thanks Maddy, I rather like this one too but it has been rejected a number of times. Just goes to show …

      1. Thank you 🙏. I love dippers and have watched them on mountain and forest streams lazy water meadow streams and even at a river outflow to the sea.

  1. Good Morning Mark and all;

    I’ve three sets of verse for you this morning; Please enjoy something; Fishy?

    The first set is here;

    slow creek flow
    fairly consistent
    (fast with rain)

    Dawn’s breaking hundreds of crows head northwest, do they hunt for early fish?

    © JP/dh (Jules)

    I was actually looking at the birds because apparently you can take part in a bird count. But you have to set up an account first with The Autobon – Great Backyard Bird Count. I’m not sure if I will participate. But I did happen to watch the early sky this morning and saw hundreds of crows! Unless it was the same flock just making circles.

    1. Jules, aren’t you grateful for your backyard and its creek? It’s been a reliable wellspring for you!
      While I don’t think crows fish, I do see them along shorelines looking for whatever they can scavenge. I’ve see them around lakes and also on Atlantic beaches, outsmarting the seagulls.

      1. D. – I am have been and am gratefull for everyday for the last 30 odd plus years for our home being where it is! Not quite a lake with loons. But still it is good.
        Just a few crows flying through the snow this morning…
        It was interesting yesterday to see a bunch of those crows roosting for just a bit. I wondered where they were off to.
        There are some parks and farms around… 🙂

    2. Hi Jules, we have similar here in the UK with a Big Garden Birdwatch (RSPB) done a couple of weeks ago over a couple of days; bird counts still coming in but over 9 million sightings recorded this year.

      1. Wow! Another friend of mine (in your neck of the woods) hasn’t seen to many birdies. Might be a city locale?

        I did see a few crows this morning – but it snowed overnight, and there are still some flurries. But the roads are clear, because the ground was warm. 🙂

      1. We have a few that live around our neighborhood, but nothing like what you described or the video that I viewed. I never realized how big crows are (compared to cardinals and sparrows). Maybe they just grow them bigger here. ~Nan

      2. Nan, The red wing black bird isn’t as big as those big black crows! I’m not about to get up early every morning to watch them. But I think the crows do have a regular route. 🙂 ~Jules

      3. We have quite a few red-winged blackbirds around here. Often I’ll see two or three in the apple tree, and on my walks near the water, I’ll see them clinging to phragmites stems. In fact, I thought I heard the trill of one yesterday morning. That seems early to me, but then I realize February is almost over. I remember writing the following haiku about 15-16 years ago:
        March blizzard
        red-winged blackbirds
        flock to feeder
        ~Nancy Brady, 2009 (published in Three Breaths, 2012)

      1. Mark,
        Thanks for the interesting video. Our Mall used to have a problem with the roosting crows. I’m not sure what they did to stop them. It was fun to watch all those crows… since it was dawn I guess they were heading towards some feeding ground. 🙂

        ~Thanks

    3. Woo hoo! Congrats on your highest bowling score and helping your team climb up, Jules!

      I love your use of the idiom ‘fish out of water’ as it so cleverly alludes to this week’s prompt.

  2. This one did not come easy, since we have no melting snow–or snow of any kind. But I love working with your prompts, so here is my offering:

    from Alabama
    alas no melting snow
    only frost : again

    Peace,
    LaMon

      1. Avery, your reply is a perfect example of how wonderful haiku is, i.e., open to a variety of interpretations that speak to our own psyches. That last line for me was disappointment, i.e., I’m tired of just frost, I want some SNOW! And who knows we have gotten snow in late February and even March, but it is less and less likely.

    1. Hi LaMon,
      You can have some of my snow if you want! We probably got about 6 inches today and it is still falling.
      I do like how you worked with the prompt. Very creative.

    2. Hi, LaMon. What I found most surprising in your poem is that I hadn’t realized Alabama was ever a place that it snowed. My own ignorance is showing!

      Thanks for saying so much in your ku.

    1. Hi Bill,
      “iced birdbath” is wonderful. I also really appreciate “sun on pavement” it reminds me of spring and green up day.
      Thanks for sharing!

    2. Huge fan of ‘iced birdbath’. I particularly enjoyed the use of ‘meltwater’ which is a word I’ve never heard and is so evocative.

  3. Halfway through NaHaiWriMo? Where does the time go? Nope, I have not written daily. But almost every day I think I should or could write a haiku and more days than is my norm I have. Writing haiku is hard! And I’m lazy and surrounded by squirrels as well.
    These two have been an idea for days and took way too many drafts to get this far; I am still undecided, though I think I prefer the second one:

    decaying snow
    hardpacked path remains
    and firewood enough

    packed path
    ice spine in sinew snow
    dwindling woodpile

    Your post today led to the following and again I prefer the second (and all of these were more fitting yesterday, before our latest gift of fresh fluffy snow):

    spring debris
    swims in the light
    feeds on winter’s last remains

    spring snow roils
    surfacing debris
    winter’s last remains

    This last one I revised today, I think I wrote it last year when others were writing about cherry blossoms and I was boiling sap outside with sugar snow in the air.

    spring snow
    petals cherry cheeks
    and is gone

    1. Hi DeDe, What a collection! I think I hear the beginning of a Issa-inspired haiku with your statement “haiku is hard! And I’m lazy and surrounded by squirrels.” Perhaps:

      no haiku
      yet I’m surrounded
      by squirrels

      or

      surrounded by squirrels
      I write a whole lot
      of nothing

      That’s two for me for today! Phew.

      1. Two haiku, and they both make me smile. I’ll bet you’ll get another one or two today.

        Personally, I feel like I am slacking on the daily thing. I’ll write several and then nothing. Maybe I need to see a squirrel or two.

      2. I love these poems, Mark…i love the word choice and the ring to them…and squirrels can be a great substitute! 🙂

      3. I have to leave the house right now with my daughter, but will be back to give the poems above an extra reading. 🙂

      4. Mark….

        Just write ’em as they come. Only, maybe or just perhaps koans are perfect?

        I am a believer that any verse should be fun.
        Hard it doesn’t have to be. But each has their own path – and some have squirrels in the way! 😉

    2. D, you may not be writing haiku daily, but obviously your input is impressive. I really like the last one, with my reading of cherry as a verb. I am ready for spring, and I get the feeling from your haiku that you are ready, too. ~Nan

      1. Thanks, Nan. (Cherry=adjective, petal=verb) but as they say, read it as you wish. It used to be
        snow petals
        brush cherry cheeks
        and are gone

        It is ridiculous how much I can fiddle with the few words and even more ridiculous has been my struggle to describe the path to the woodpile in the thawing and freezing and overall melting of snow, which leaves the packed paths a raised rail of ice. Ugh, I may not be finished… Haiku is like golf. I hate playing and quite enjoy playing and sometimes do okay.
        Golf or no, I am not ready for spring; where was my winter?

      2. D,
        What can I say? That’s the magic of haiku. People often see different (read different) things in a haiku. Or as I have heard it said: “the poet writes, but the reader interprets.” I like your revision as well. Most of my haiku have several similar versions with some tiny word differences, and I don’t think they are ever done. I recently had several haiku selected for publication that I had written several years earlier (and rejected more than once). I had moderately edited them and apparently that worked.
        Regardless, I like both the original and the re-worked one…they both work for me. ~Nan

    3. Hi D, I agree with Nan. I really love the spring snow with petals cherry cheeks poem…it is very imaginative and thought provoking.

    4. D. haiku like any other verse and writing just takes practice, practice, practice. And we don’t have to like every thing that gets penned. Just the act of recording what we see or feel is good.

      We just got dumped on… you might get this system if it swings north and east.

      My maples are not sugar maples. Sigh. I do like those little boxes of sugar maple candies. And I do use the real stuff that is thin and sweet. Funny I just heard a tid bit that Mrs. Butterworth’s first name is Joy! 🙂

    1. Hi Rick,
      Thanks so much for joining the conversation and adding your work!
      Ephemeral is such a great word and perfect for this season. Thanks again for being here.

  4. Mark, loved all the information you included in this week’s post especially the Chinese couplets. I wonder if that is how duostich (pronounced duo-stick per master haikuist, Alan Summers) got started. I want to read a few, but obviously I am not skilled in Chinese although I know a few words of Pinyan, thanks to my older son. Regardless, here are some haiku.

    Channeling Issa with the first haiku

    ice melting…
    in the sky
    a first quarter moon
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    melting ice…
    the fish rise to the surface
    of the river
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    melting ice
    on the river
    a cat is fishing
    ~Nancy Brady, 2023

    Chinese knot…
    our Chinese couplets
    wishing luck and love
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024
    #offthecuffhaiku

    1. Hi Nan, That is a great observation about Duostich. It sounds like there might be a connection.
      Your first one “ice melting” is my favorite of this collection.
      I also wonder about what you think about removing the second “Chinese” from the last one. Perhaps:

      Chinese knot . . .
      couplets
      of luck and love

      What do you think? I have been thinking a lot about form and word choice in haiku so any thought you have would be very welcomed.

      1. Mark,
        I think you are right. Too much Chinese (the word, not the people) as it is written. After reading the link you provided, I really wanted to use Chinese knot and link them back to the couplets; however, I think your suggestion improves it. That’s why that one is an #offthecuffhaiku because I just threw it up there, knowing editing might be involved.

        Chinese knot…
        couplets
        of luck and love works for me.

    2. Nan, like Mark your first poem is a favorite of mine too…I can’t help but think of a shiny quarter at the top of the sky. The Chinese Knot is so clever and really resonates and then I have a soft spot for the cat fishing poem…such a lovely image. 🙂

      1. Thanks, Madeleine, that’s the Issa channeling, using the moon phase information Mark mentioned. Once I clicked the link about Door Couplets, I also learned about Chinese knots and I knew there had to be a haiku in it. Mark really improved it with his suggestion. The cat fishing haiku was from last year’s post, but I liked it so much, I posted it again. Glad you liked it, too. 🙂

      2. Nan, this such an interesting background to your haiku about Chinese knots. I really appreciate that you shared it. 🙂

      3. To learn more, click the link in Mark’s blog. Chinese knots are cool looking, and I think we have a couple that someone gifted us years ago. I just didn’t know what they were called.
        ~Nan

    3. Nan, you will not be surprised to discover that I absolutely adore ‘melting ice’ and the image of the cat fishing.

      1. Thanks, Eavonka. With feral cats living down by the Huron River, it is not uncommon to see them out on the melting ice fishing for sushi as the shad come to the surface.

      1. Thanks, D, for your kind words. I had to give the couplet a chance, but Mark really made his haiku suggestion sing. I guess that’s the problem with #offthecuffhaiku–the lack of editing.

    4. It is a wonderful idea of use the same first line with those haiku. I wrote several haiku using “summer in the south”. I liked all of them, but my favorite is the third one–I can see the cat doing exactly that! LaMon

      1. Thanks, LaMon. Being a half a block from the river with all the feral cats around there, we have seen them fishing when there is melting ice on the river. ~Nan

    5. Nan – interesting about the Chinese couplets. It seems years ago I entered a Valentine haiku contest (that tanked – no relpy back at all). I took all the haiku I wrote and put them on red hearts and for quite a bit they all hung from my diningroom chanelier.

      1. That is a cool idea to use hearts and haiku and then hang them. I think that could be a cool project for any holiday.

        I know what you mean about contests that don’t follow through. I entered one a long time ago (almost 15 years ago) and I know there was a small fee to enter. I kept watching the site for the announcement of the winners, but nothing. I finally wrote them and they said they cancelled the contest, but refused to refund the money. It wasn’t the money, but the principle of the thing that made me angry.

      2. I get that… no fun when stuff drags on and there is no refund.

        I finally quit entering a ‘certain’ magazine subscription contest… I wrote them saying – let me know if I won. I might have bought a magazine or two in the very beginning. But all they do is sell your address… I requested that they stop that too. I do get less junk mail these days 😉

      3. Nobody should have their name and address sold, but then I get too much of that. I think I am on every Sucker’s List based on the mail I get asking for money. 😦

      4. I’ve a relative who likes certain causes. But they also get more requests than they like. Easy to just toss… but I’ve ended up writing to a few to ask for removal. By law they have to!

        I’ve gotten less calls too, because I just don’t answer numbers I don’t know. Sometimes I look the numbers up. But… there has been this one org that calls from all over. I looked them up and they got bad reviews. So I’m no ever going to donate to them.

        I think (in whatever capacity) a family volunteers that that time should count – so I don’t feel bad by not donating to every request. I finally went through all the address stickers from various places I’d collected. I cut the fancy designs off for a friends children, and then just tossed the rest.

        One company wants us to buy their insurance and send mailing labels. Sorry that isn’t enough to entice me. I’ve got the insurance I want. At least I know our trash is being burned to create energy (at least that’s what our community tells us is happening).

  5. Hi Mark and Everyone:

    Thank-you for the marvelous post full of information.
    I love how spring is celebrated, all the red colors…the door couplets that
    Nan mentioned above…Issa’s responses resonate as well as the lovely poetry above! 🙂

    bony moon
    coyotes howl
    the middle of the day

    I had to forgo a walk with my little dog yesterday. I feel sorry for them:/

    ~ ~ ~

    thin ice
    an empty box
    of ice cream

    ~ ~ ~

    over the moon for crystal geometry(!)

    1. Nice, Madeleine,
      I really like the “thin ice” ku, but I feel for you with the lack of ice cream.
      Have you considered “wolf moon” instead of “bony moon?” January’s full moon is the wolf moon and we’ve barely passed that.
      Nan

    2. Ooh, Maddy, I echo Mark and Nan. Your poem ‘thin ice’ has what they call “ma” in Japanese haiku. The space to allow the reader to imagine many things.

    3. Ha! Yes, the empty box of ice cream could have many stories or interpretations.
      Where are you? Do you mean to say that the coyotes were posing a threat to your dogs in the middle of the day? In that scene a bony moon is maybe more ominous, and does have a bony glow when seen in daylight.

      1. Thanks D…we are in the hills of Solano County, California between Fairfield and Napa. I am wary, as I have heard of coyotes in other areas attacking small dogs on leashes, although it’s not that common an occurrence. A bony glow…I like it. 🙂

    4. Maddy –
      Thanks for your visit –

      I think the coyotes are just talking…

      Ah… Do you know this rhyme?

      “I scream, you scream we all scream for ice cream!!”

      1. I used to also sing;
        “Shaving cream be nice and clean shave everyday and you’ll always be clean.”
        Fun when little boys want to mimic Daddy 🙂

  6. I learned so much from today’s post, Mark. I was particular excited by the spring festival door couplets which I will have to look into further. Today I’ve kept it fairly simple.

    warming waters
    all the fishermen eager
    to return

      1. Oh, I’m so glad, Maddy. I just realized that those who do ice fishing have probably been there all along. 😅

      2. Eavonka, Marshall has chosen your marvelous poem. He has written you a note. Pamela and Wendy brought it to my attention.

      3. Thanks so much for alerting me, Maddy. I so wish that THF had a notification system, but I am incredibly grateful for friends like you and Nan helping me out.

      4. Awwww! Delighted to, Eavonka! It’s always a joy to alert you when your beautiful poems have been chosen. 🙂

      1. Could be as simple as wooden handles with nails poking out the bottom or you can by them, but they’re attached by a cord so you just drape them around your neck and should you go through the ice you take hold of the handles and stab the ice to get a grip and pull yourself up.

      2. Wow, D. you are on a roll and you are teaching so much about ice fishing, too. Here, if it is a little warmth, the fishermen will take their boats out. How they can stand it, I don’t know, but the parking lot at the boat launch is often full even now. Go figure!

      3. D… sounds interesting those ‘necklaces’ – I read somewhere that if you wear a necklace of cinnamon it will keep skeeters away!

    1. Eavonka,
      Wonderful ku with “warming waters.” Alliterative, too. Around here, we get a little warmth and the fishermen are out on the lake. I don’t know how they do it, but they do.

      I like the idea behind the door couplets, too. I read a little about them, but still can’t quite figure them out.

      Happy Spring!

      1. I do not envy you the cold where you live, but I do envy you actually seeing the things I just imagine in my head. Mine was very much a desk-ku.

      2. Eavonka,
        I write a fair amount of desk-ku, too. Fortunately, I have a healthy imagination. I think many people, especially with extensive enough life experiences, can return to the memories they have and create haiku from them.
        I hope you are still doing okay and not having any problem with flooding or landslides. I see the footage and it just makes me ill. I can’t imagine what effect it has on those, like you, are going through this. My best to you.

      3. I am lucky to be out of any flood or mudslide zones. Yesterday was stunningly beautiful, but the rains have returned. It has been fairly light here, and hopefully that stays true. Thanks for thinking of us.

    2. Eavonka –
      Our Fishing Season starts the first Saturday in April. You need a licence if you are over 18, even on your own property. But I wouldn’t eat anything that comes out of my creek. There is also a limit to a catch at some places.

    3. Hi Eavonka,
      What a great conversation this haiku inspired, and we learned something new from D about safety spike necklaces. I agree that the door couplets are very interesting and require more investigation.
      I hope all is well!

      1. Thanks, Mark. I always feel a bit guilty because it is just so much warmer here than where you live. Still, I know it’s very beautiful there.

  7. Hi Mark, no snow or ice here, but plenty of rain, or as the weather forecast says, precipitation!

    A dull day;
    Rain doused, first flowers,
    Open.

    Perhaps I should have waited for a few days to publish this one 🌧☔🌧

    1. Nice, Ashley. It reminds me of the haiku Mark posted a week or so ago. I’m referring to the one by Basho which began with “well nothing happened” (Week 04: Major Cold-SeasonWords). Like nothing happened, a dull day gives a similar feel, yet just like Basho, something did happen. ~Nan

    1. Hi Goff,
      Thanks so much for adding this to the conversation! The sound of melting snow is a wonderful line!
      I hope you have a great rest of your weekend.

      1. Hi Geoff:
        This is a beautiful poem. The first line is my favorite and I like that it juxtaposes the second.

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