Week 08: “Rain Water”

February 19  to February 25 is the eighth week of 2024 in the Gregorian calendar.  During this week, we begin the Solar Term of Rain Water (Feb 19 – Mar 04). The micro-seasons for this week are “Rain Moistens the Soil” (Feb 19 – Feb 23) and “Mist Starts to Linger” (Feb 24 – Feb 28).

The poems selected for this week are written by Basho, Issa, Reichhold, and Teasdale.


The 24 Solar Terms 

The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China  (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around the city Xi’an, which was the capital of the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)

Rain Water

Rain Water is the second Solar Term of the year and the second Solar Term of Spring. Yǔ Shuǐ (雨水) is the Chinese name for this season. Yǔ Shuǐ (雨水) is translated to mean the weather is becoming warmer and there will be rain, or snowfall is decreasing and now it will rain. 

“Rain Water as Precious as Oil”

In parts of Northern China, spring drought is common. The farmers, who are looking toward the upcoming planting season, are paying close attention to the water table right now.  This is why the Chinese have an old saying that goes “Rainfall in spring is as precious as oil.”(2)


The 72 Seasons

The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai.  Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)

The micro-seasons for this week are “Rain Moistens the Soil” (Feb 19 – Feb 23) and “Mist Starts to Linger” (Feb 24 – Feb 28).  Much like the Solar Term of Rain Water, these two micro-seasons focus on the gradual environmental changes.

“Rain Moistens the Soil” marks the time when the snow has melted back and rain can reach the earth. 

“Mist Starts to Linger”, marks the time when we begin to notice the atmospheric changes that enable to formation of mist. 

Mist

Mist, which is created when “warmer air over water suddenly encounters the cooler surface of land”,(6) is similar to fog.  The two are differentiated by how much they reduce horizontal visibility.  Mist reduces horizontal visibility to less than “7 miles (11 km) but more than or equal to 5/8th mile (1 km)”. Fog reduces horizontal visibility to 5/8th of a mile (1 km) or less.(6) 


Astronomical Season

February 25, the last day of week seven of 2024, is 63 days past the winter solstice and only 23 days away from the spring equinox (March 19, 2024).  

February’s Snow Moon

February’s full moon arrives on February 24.  This full moon is sometimes referred to as the Snow Moon.

Catherine Boeckmann at The Farmer’s Almanac explains that the Snow Moon got its name because  “On average, February is the United States’ snowiest month, according to data from the National Weather Service.”  This is very interesting because the Snow Moon seems to be in conflict with the Solar Terms and the micro-season for this week. This difference highlights the range of weather that can exist at any time of the year.

Other traditional names for February’s full moon include:

  • Eagle Moon from the Cree
  • Bear Moon from the Ojibwe (this one references when bear cubs are born) 
  • Raccoon Moon from the Algonquin 
  • The Bony Moon and Hungry Moon from the Cherokee, and 
  • Goose Moon from the Haida.

For more information about the Snow Moon, read Boekmann’s full article.


Spring Poems by Sara Teasdale

Sara Teasdale (1884 -1933) was an American poet born in St. Louis, Missouri. She wrote seven books of poetry and became recognized for her lyrical style. 

Her first book, Sonnets to Duse, and Other Poems, came out in 1907. She published two other books of poetry before she released Love Song in 1917. Love Song won the Columbia Poetry Prize and the Poetry Society of America Prize. 

In 1920 she published Flame and Shadow. Marguerite Wilkinson reviewed this book for the New York Times Book Review and Magazine and wrote, “Sara Teasdale has found a philosophy of life and death,” having “grown intellectually since the publication of her earlier books” and displaying a “growth in artistry.(7)

In 1926, Teasdale published Dark of the Moon, and in 1930 she published Stars To-Night.  These two books, along with Flame and Shadow, were considered her best books. In 1933, Teasdale’s final book Strange Victory was published. Teasdale died in January of that same year.   


Teasdale wrote several spring-themed poems during her life.  “Spring Rain” is one most explicitly connected to this season.  Here is an excerpt:

I thought I had forgotten,
  But it all came back again
Tonight with the first spring thunder
  In a rush of rain.
(“Spring Rain” by Sara Teasdale, verse 1)

“Spring Rain” was published in Love Song. You can read the full poem here.

Spring Torrents” was published in the September 1919 issue of Poetry and it takes a different approach to spring.

Will it always be like this until I am dead?
    Every spring must I bear it all again–
With the first red haze of the budding maple boughs,
    The first sweet-smelling rain?

Oh, I am like a rock in the rising river
Where the flooded water breaks with a low call,
Like a rock that knows the cry of the waters
   And can not answer all

Teasdale also had two anti-war poems placed in spring. 

Spring in War-Time” is one:

I feel the spring far off, far off,
    The faint, far scent of bud and leaf—
Oh, how can spring take heart to come
    To a world in grief,
    Deep grief?
(“Spring in War-Time” verse 1)

And, “There Will Come Soft Rains

There will come soft rains and the smell of the ground,
And swallows circling with their shimmering sound;

And frogs in the pools singing at night,
And wild plum trees in tremulous white,

Robins will wear their feathery fire
Whistling their whims on a low fence-wire;

And not one will know of the war, not one
Will care at last when it is done.

Not one would mind, neither bird nor tree
If mankind perished utterly;

And Spring herself, when she woke at dawn,
Would scarcely know that we were gone.

Contemporary scholars of poetry are now bringing attention back to Teasdale’s work, including her anti-war poetry, claiming that her work was neglected or overlooked by her contemporaries.   


The Kigo

In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, February is considered early spring.  ‘Spring Rain”, “Light Snow”, and “End of Snow” are all potential kigo for this week.  

 In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “Lingering Cold”,  “Mist”, and “Snow” are relevant spring celestial kigo.

When checking the World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greve, we find that “Mist” and “Spring Mist” are spring kigo, while “fog” is autumn kigo.

 Now with all this in mind, let’s read some haiku!


The Haiku

Basho

yes, spring has come; 
this morning a hill
is shrouded in mist.
(translated by R.H.Blyth)
spring rains 
passing beneath the trees -
pure water, indeed.
(translated by Thomas McAuley)

Issa

half of it
is flitting snowflakes...
spring rain
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
spring rain--
the morning moon
in a clam shell
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Reichhold

spring presses
cold into shadow
shape
morning mist
filling the spaces
of night bird

Haiku Invitation

This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu referencing any local seasonal changes.  

Are you noticing more rain, melting snow, mist, or lingering cold?  What is inspiring you this week?  Write about it!

Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write! 


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About the Haiku

Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess.  Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy.   Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from Dictionary of Haiku.

Resources

  1. “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
  2. 24 Solar Terms: 6  things you must know about Rain Water. ChinaDaily.com
  3. 72 Seasons App
  4. “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
  5. “Mist”; National Geographic
  6. “Obscuration Types”; National Weather Service
  7. “Sara Teasdale”; Poetry Foundation
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  1. Good Morning,
    I hope you enjoy the addition of Teasdale’s work to this week’s post. “Spring Rain” had such great imagery and movement that I had to include it. I then went down the research rabbit hole and needed to include the other pieces.
    Thanks for joining me on this adventure in poetry!
    -Mark

      1. Hi Bill, Glad that you enjoyed Teasdale. I have been reading a lot of longer form poetry recently. I may have a William Carlos Williams poem for next week.

      1. Hi Suzette: These are very lovely images from your poem…and I really think the picture is great, too:)

      2. Hi Suzette, I am glad that you enjoyed seeing Teasdale’s work this week. I appreciate your comment.
        Its still cold here too. However, we are expecting spring weather soon.

  2. Mark, thanks for the Sara Teasdale poems. Being a pacifist, “There Will Come Soft Rains” was particular moving. I have a row of poetry books lined up on my desk to read. One of them is her “Selected Poems”. I will move it to the top of the list. Here is my haiku offering today:

    uncertain season
    spring rain under snow moon…
    daffodils tremble

    Peace,
    LaMon

    1. I’m also a pacifist, LaMon (my dad is a Quaker), and I felt the same way.

      It struck me that you could make an excellent monoku from your tercet:

      spring rain under snow moon daffodils tremble

      1. Oh, I’m so glad, Mark. I love how ‘under snow moon’ can be a pivot for both what comes before and after.

      2. Yes, that pivot of the monoku is something thar I struggle to get correct in my own writing. I like that you were able to pick it out of the three line form.

      3. One of my ancestors was “William the Quaker”. I’m a strange breed of Baptist, but have always been attracted to the Quaker tradition. I have never written a monoku, but you are right, it looks good. Thanks. LaMon

    2. Hi LaMon, I am glad that you enjoyed reading Teasdale’s work. I was also move by both the war poems.
      Wonderful haiku for this week. It has echoes of Teasdale in it.

    3. LaMon,
      That is a lovely haiku especially pairing spring rain with the snow moon…truly an uncertain season. Daffodils tremble, but they are resilient. Our neighbor’s daffodils are starting to sprout as well as our crocuses, and I can’t wait for the uncertain season to become spring.
      Nan

      1. Your welcome, LaMon. It’s so nice to read yours and everyone’s poetry here to have this place where we can exchange our words and thoughts. Thank you for appreciating Hunger Moon. It’s been helping a lot to write about her:)

      1. Hi Jules, I agree with Eavonka and Mark, waxing bear is a wonderful haiku. I also really like the poem about the sparrow, it’s very lovely.

  3. Mark,
    Loved all the information about the seasonal changes, but found the poems of Sara Teasdale interesting and in particular, her anti-war poems profound. I can understand why interest in them has increased lately.

    icy winds
    off the lake
    –lingering cold
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024
    #offthecuffhaiku

    mist rises
    from the river–
    a chill moves inland
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024
    #offthecuffhaiku

    We live a half block from the river and a block from Lake Erie, and the mist moved inland yesterday. Actually we’ve had quite a bit of mist for the past several weeks, but right now it is sunny.

    Now, to write the blog: https://nbsmithblog.wordpress.com

      1. Eavonka,
        Yesterday there was so much mist, it looked like those Victorian/gothic films of London at night. I expect the same this evening.
        Nan
        PS. I like your calla lilies haiku, and that it spawned another from Mark.

    1. Hi Nan, I really like both of these, and “mist rises” is really great. Its also interesting to hear that you are experiencing similar weather patterns as the micro-seasons. We are still buried in snow!
      Glad to hear you liked reading Teasdale’s poems.

      1. Hi Mark,
        The lake and the river both affect our weather patterns here. It stays warmer in the fall and cooler longer in the spring.

        Since we haven’t had much snow, we are getting lots of mist and a fair amount of rain instead. Usually February is snowier than this, and a lot colder, too. Yes, we had a few cold days, but mostly the temps have been going up and back down like a roller coaster. Although it was sunny a half hour ago, it has already started clouding up. I would guess the mist will be rising again throughout the afternoon and evening, making it look like (foggy) London this evening.

        Thanks for the compliments on my haiku. Have a great weekend.
        ~Nan

      2. Hi Nan: Your two poems are great. I feel as if I am in London, too experiencing the mist and icy wind…I am getting the shivers. (Lol:)

      1. Thank you. I really like the mist and fog. Whenever I get the chance, I try to walk out on the pier when it is foggy/ misty. This winter we’ve had quite a bit of it. One minute it is clear and sunny, and within minutes it is socked in.

  4. It was truly wonderful to read Sara Teasdale’s work today, Mark. I have heard of her, but I knew little of her actual poems. I love that you have shined a light so we could find her.

    In my neck of the woods:

    calla lilies
    line the front walk
    spring unfurls

    1. Hi Eavonka, Wonderful haiku and how different the weather is where you are versus where I am. Calla lilies are still months away.

      under the snow
      calla lilies
      wait

      Have a good day!

    2. Nice, Eavonka! You are way ahead of us. The most that we have are the sprouting of daffodil and crocuses. Nothing blooming yet, though. Even the earliest crocuses (at the church on the corner) have not bloomed yet. In the meantime, enjoy the calla lilies and your spring. ~Nan
      PS. I, too, am glad Mark shared some of Sara’s poems of spring. The anti-war poems seem especially appropriate considering this is the second anniversary of the Ukraine invasion/war.

      1. Isn’t it shocking that it’s been 2 years already (and heartbreaking)?

        Yes, we are blessed with very early spring. I think I shared my photo of the calla lilies and crocus that line the front walk where I live. They truly herald the changing season (even if it never gets very cold here).

      2. It is heartbreaking, E.. Up until recently, we had a handmade Ukrainian flag in our front window. It finally ripped (it was made from some collage paper I had), but fortunately, we now have a (real) Ukrainian flag that we may fly this weekend in solidarity. Our next door neighbor also has one, too.

    3. My neighbor has calla lilies… I thought they bloomed in fall.
      Next time I pass them I’ll have to see what is breaking ground in their garden. I think they have several different colors. 🙂

      1. I suspect calla lilies in most of the world don’t bloom in winter, but southern CA confuses many plants/flowers. They have bloomed here in February the past 9 years I’ve lived in this apt.

    1. Hi Griffin, this is a very lovely haiku…so full of imagery and I can see it so vividly. I am intrigued by your monoku.

  5. Hi Mark and fellow poets:

    Thank-you for sharing Sara Teasdale’s work. I love her poetry… Like LaMon, I have written about the snow moon and spring showers, (which has been happening these past couple of weeks!). I came up with two fresh haiku this morning and wrote spring showers when it first began to rain in early February, editing it somewhat, this morning.

    hunger moon
    all the things
    I didn’t say

    ~ ~ ~

    snow moon
    six sides
    to consider

    ~ ~ ~

    spring showers
    a round
    of ribbits

    1. Huge fan of ‘hunger moon’, Maddy! I realize you’re thinking of something specific now, but that is not how I read it.

      When I read it, it opened up a world of ways we/I hunger to redo moments in our lives. That ability to say many things to a wide variety of readers is what makes haiku so special. Well, my perspective at least.

    2. Madeleine,
      Between tears, thoughtfulness, and smiles, your haiku run a gamut of emotions. The first brings tears because of regret (and who doesn’t look back with regrets at some time?), the second brings the thoughtfulness of all the options, and the third brings a smile because of hearing of the spring peepers. I really like them all, but find the first haiku most compelling. ~Nan

    3. Hi Maddy,
      My condolences for the loss of you aunt. It sounds like she was a very special person.

      I agree with others about that you have a great collection of haiku this week. There is so much meaning within each piece. Hunger moon has great impact and I am really interested in snow moon. There is something about that one that I like. Can I use one of these on my IG account this week? Maybe both?

      1. Sure, Mark. Thanks! That will be great. It’s made my day. I am sorry I didn’t see your post until now.

      2. Hi Mark, I must say, that I am very honored by your request. I am sorry for sending my reply so late. Unfortunately, I didn’t see it until two days ago. Hope you are doing well.:)

      3. Hi Maddy, No worries about the response time! I have had a busy week myself. I’ll try to create something for later today or tomorrow. I’ll keep you updated.

    4. Maddy…
      I smiled at ‘a round/ of ribbits’ – though I haven’t seen any frogs yet. I’m sure they are close by.

      Lovely ku this week. All too soon it will be time to get out and clean up the yard and prepare gardens 🙂 And the choices for what to plant… where.

      1. Thank-you Jules. That is lovely to hear. Yes, I think they must be
        close by. Preparing the gardens…something to look forward to! 🙂

    1. Ben,
      I love that we (northern hemisphere) get to experience your Down Under seasons through your haiku on Mark’s Season Words blog. Nice haiku, by the way, if it didn’t come across otherwise.    ~Nan

  6. Hi Mark: I have been meaning to say that I really appreciate your blog, sharing our poems and writing. I look forward to it every Friday. Your posts are always so informative and inspiring. It’s a lot of fun exchanging thoughts and can be very therapeutic, when necessary:)

    1. Hi Maddy, Thank you for your kind words. I do appreciate everyone who comments and shares. I feel like all who contribute are supportive and arrive with positive intentions. It is the community that makes it fun. So, thank you for being here!

    1. Hi Chad,
      Thank you so much for your support. I am glad that you are enjoying the page and offering to contributing. The About Us Page has another way to contribute that isn’t through the Buy Me A Coffee App. It is a donation system through WordPress. I am not sure if that systems allows you to access PayPal. It has been a bit since I tested it. (seasonwords.com/about/)
      Thanks again for your support!
      Mark

  7. When I first saw this post it was hard to think of spring. Got a bit more snow but mostly got cold temperatures. And got another icefishing haiku.

    we drag our sleds
    drill through thick ice
    fishing for spring kigo

    1. D, I like your haiku; it made me smile. We are always fishing…for fish, our words, haiku, and kigo. There is a post on the Haiku Foundation’s site that was just posted. It is under New to Haiku: What is Kigo? It had a few links to different kigo lists. ~Nan

      1. Glad to make you smile. The weather never seems to cooperate with the prompts or with the prevailing kigos. While some were enjoying cherry blossoms and trumpeting daffodils others of us were wearing longjohns AND flannel lined pants as the temperatures dipped to below zero. But that was Saturday. High temperatures now and the forecast spring rain combined with snow melt could make for some high-ku in the river corridors.

      2. D, the assumption is that our weather corresponds to the “appropriate” kigo. It doesn’t. We jokingly say that Ohio has four seasons and sometimes all in the same day. And if you don’t like the weather, wait ten minutes, it will change.

        Just reading through old emails, clearing out the email box, and discovered it.

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