March 11 to March 17 is the eleventh week of 2024. This week, we are in the Solar Term of Awakening of Insects (Mar 05 – Mar 19), the micro-seasons of “First Peach Blossoms” (Mar 11- Mar 15), and the micro-season of “Caterpillars Become Butterflies” (Mar 16 – Mar 20).
Basho, Buson, Issa, Reichhold, Kerouac, and Li Po wrote the poems selected for this week.
The 24 Solar Terms
The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around the city Xi’an, which was the capital of the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)
Awakening of Insects
Awakening of Insects is the third Solar Term of the year and the third Solar Term of Spring. Jingzhe (惊蛰) is the Chinese name for this season. Jingzhe (惊蛰) is translated to mean “the weather is warming up with the first thundering in spring, awakening the insects hiding under the earth in hibernation.”(2)
Seasonal Food: The Pear
During this season, people start spending more time outdoors and engaging in hard agricultural work. At the same time, the air is also becoming drier and warmer. The combination of hard outside work and changing environmental factors can result in coughs and colds. The pear, which is sweet and juicy, is said to moisten the lungs to prevent colds brought on by dryness. Therefore, pears are a recommended food during Awakening of Insects.(3)
The 72 Seasons
The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)
This week we have the micro-seasons of “First Peach Blossoms” (Mar 11- Mar 15) and the micro-season of “Caterpillars Become Butterflies” (Mar 16 – Mar 20).
Peach Blossoms
Peach Trees (Prunus persica) produce peach blossoms. These trees are a member of the rose family (Rosaceae). Other plants in this family included cherries, apricots, and almonds.
Peach blossoms are typically pale pinks with a deep magenta center. Each flower has 5 petals and the blossoms are arranged around last year’s shoots. For a peach tree to blossom, and subsequently produce fruit, the tree needs to experience a period of chilling. An ideal chilling period is about 500 hours of temperatures between 32 -50 degrees Fahrenheit. This chilling period allows the tree to induce an internal chemical process that brings about the flower buds.(6,7)
The peach blossoms’ petals are edible and often used as garnishes. They can be found in cakes, pies, tarts, ice cream, crème brulee, and other desserts.
Peach blossoms can also used in a variety of teas. The peach blossom mixes well with green, black, or white teas, and the taste of the blossom compliments the taste of mint, basil, and thyme, cinnamon.(8)
Astronomical Season
March 18, the last day of week eleven, is 84 days past the winter solstice and only 1 day away from the spring equinox (March 19, 2024).
Moon Phases
On March 17, the moon reached its first quarter phase. The First Quarter is 7 days after the New Moon and marks the first quarter of the Moon’s orbit around the Earth.
On March 18, the Moon is in a Waxing Gibbous phase with 68% illumination. It will take another 7 days to reach March’s full moon on March 25.
Haiku and Kigo
The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku. The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society gives us the following explanation for why we use kigo in haiku.
“A kigo is a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season; it’s a powerful word or phrase that can conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions. Its use in haiku, a poem of few words, is especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(9)
Visit The Haiku Foundation’s “New To Haiku: What is a Kigo?” for more information about the kigo and its uses.
Seasonal Kigo
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “peach blossom” is listed as a spring kigo, while “peach” is an autumn kigo. Yamamoto also includes “plum blossom” and “cherry blossom” as related kigo.
In a short paragraph before the list of Sping/Plant kigo, Yamamoto explains that in traditional renku, “blossom” without naming the type of blossom, is considered a cherry blossom. Cherry blossoms have their own micro-season (March 26 – March 30), so we will wait until then for any specific cherry blossom haiku.
In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “blossoms” are listed as an overarching kigo, and “apple blossom, “cherry blossom”, and “plum blossom” are also listed. Reichhold doesn’t make the same distinction about the term “blossom” as Yamamoto.
Now with all this in mind, let’s read some haiku.
Basho
spring
gradually takes shape–
moon and plum blossoms
(translated by Haruo Shirane)
a spring unseen:
on the back of the mirror,
plum blossoms.
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
in my sickbed,
I can’t even eat my rice cake -
blossoming peach
(translated by Sam Hamill)
Issa
on the homecoming servant's
face too...
peach blossoms
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
the setting place
for the spring sun...
wisteria blossoms
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
Buson
A woman
Reading a letter by moonlight
Pear blossoms
(translated by Alex Kerr)
Reichhold
clusters talking
together in admiration
apple blossoms
Kerouac
The Spring moon–
How many miles away
Those orange blossoms!
Li Po
Mountain Dialogue
You ask why I’ve settled in these emerald mountains:
I smile, mind of itself perfectly idle, and say nothing.
Peach blossoms drift streamwater away deep in mystery
here, another heaven and earth, nowhere people know.
(translated by David Hinton)
Li Po (701-762) is a Chinese poet of the Tang Dynasty. Li Po may also be known as Li Bai, Li Pai, Li T’ai-po, and Li T’ai-pai.
I came across Li Po’s poem in some research I did after reading Arthur Sze’s poem “Floaters”. In this poem, Sze writes,
peach blossoms on flowing water go
into the distance—
and, as I ponder how a line written in 740
stays present tense—
(excerpt from “Floaters”)
Please go read Arthur Sze’s full poem on the Poetry Foundation website. It’s worth the time!
Haiku invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu referencing any blossoming plant except the cherry!
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write!
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About the Haiku
Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from The Classic Tradition of Haiku edited by Faubion Bowers.. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from Dictionary of Haiku. Kerouac’s haiku was retrieved from Kerouac’s Book of Haikus. Li Po’s poem was retrieved from Mountain Home: The Wilderness Poetry of Ancient China translated by David Hinton.
Arthur Sze has two collections of poetry: Sight Lines and The Glass Constellation: New and Collected Poems. Sze also has a book of translated poetry The Silk Dragon: Translations from the Chinese.
- “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
- “6 Solar Terms of Spring”; China Educational Tours
- “24 Solar Terms: 6 things you must know about Awakening of Insects”; ChinaDaily
- 72 Seasons App
- “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
- “Peach”; Wikipedia
- “Peach”; Brittanica
- “Peach Blossoms”; SpecialityProduce.com
I enjoyed this beautiful and tender appreciation of the early spring delights, Mark, thanks so much.
Hi Jet, Thanks for the kind words. I am glad that you enjoyed this week’s post. I hope all is well!
Jet,
Loved the star magnolia haiku. Such delicate white blossoms they have. Nicely done. ~Nan
Thank you for the link to the Arthur Sze poem—beautiful!
Kristen Lindquist (she/her)
Website: kristenlindquist.com Haiku blog: http://www.kristenlindquist.com/blog/
What a treat to read your haiku blog, Kristen! I have so long admired your work.
Thank you so much!
Hi Eavonka, I agree! I was just trying to remember Kristen’s haiku that I really enjoyed from an older episode of Poetry Pea, and just notice noticed that Kristen was on Poetry Pea a couple of days ago! I have added that podcast to my weekend playlist.
https://poetrypea.com/s7e11-poetry-pea-reading-from-kristen-lindquist-island/
Kristen, in case you can’t tell, I also enjoy your work.
Thank you very much! I’m honored!
I agree Eavonka and Mark, Kristen’s poetry is a delight!
Hi Kristen, I enjoy so much of Arthur Sze’s work. I remember listening to him on a podcast right after his book The Glass Constellation was released, and I was so intrigued by both his scientific knowledge and poetic abilities. Thanks for the comment and I hope all is well!
Enjoyed reading your haiku over at your site. Quite a collection you have. I’m impressed.
Just returned from visiting long-time friends in Georgia, so this haiku came easily!
spring vacation
rosy pink redbud blossoms…
driver’s distraction
Peace,
LaMon
LaMon,
Perfect haiku. I love redbud blossoms. Such a vibrant purple splash against the black limbs. Well done, my friend.
~Nan
Thanks Nan.
Hi LaMon,
I hope you had a nice visit. What a delightful haiku for this week. I like the spectrum of reds in line two. Very fun.
Thanks Mark. It went without me saying, but it shouldn’t have, i.e., I loved the haiku you chose and the writeup on this week’s material. Thanks.
What a treat, those redbuds!
I feel I got a little ahead of myself last week with my white blossoms. 😂 But there’s little I love more than the blooms of stone fruit.
the peach tree
brimming with blossoms
good luck returns
Delightful haiku, Eavonka. May all those blossoms turn into peaches! Truly that would be good luck!
Our tree, alas, has been chopped down and I miss it still. As do the neighbors who enjoyed our peaches, too. ~Nan
We were very lucky to have a peach tree when I was a teenager which sometimes produced fruit. When it did, it made for glorious summers!
Hi Eavonka,
So many blossoms to write about in the spring. Let’s hope all those blossoms bring fruit this year!
In my neighborhood, there are so many trees with blossoms, but I wonder how many produce fruit? Most of the fruit I do see blooms at a different time of year (citrus trees). We are blessed to have something blooming all year in Southern CA.
A wonderful poem Eavonka. I love your choice of verb and the alliteration.
I love the third line too. A delicious surprise!
Thank you, Maddy. It is so hard for me to resist alliteration! I did some research on peach blossoms and in China they are a sign of good luck. So I was inspired by that (new to me) information.
Lol, I know what you mean, Eavonka! …wonderful to learn all these things!
Nice one, Eavonka. I have to ask about “good luck”; is it related to some tradition about peach tree blossoms or just a general affirmation that things are looking up? I assume the latter, but had to ask. LaMon
I read that one of the reasons peach blossoms are beloved in China is that they are a sign of good luck. It made of been faulty research as I didn’t double check, but it inspired L3.
There is nothing like a sun-warmed peach right off the tree. And the blossoms are beautiful.
I couldn’t agree more!
Mark thank you again for all your infomation. No peach blossoms here yet;
Many Firsts…
Hi Jules, what a great collection of poems and information for this week! Thanks for always adding another layer to our learning.
~Always a joy to inform… 🙂
Wonderful post, Mark, about the micro-season of the first peach blossom and other blossoms as well (except for the cherry blossom, that is). Here are haiku about blossoms:
apple blossoms…
a bumblebee covered
in pollen
~Nancy Brady, 2021
despite
the cold and snow
crocus blossoms
~Nancy Brady, 2021
snowflakes
on her shoulders
crab-apple blossoms
~Nancy Brady, 2021
weighed down
with peach blossom pollen–
how does she fly?
~Nancy Brady, 2024
#offthecuffhaiku
https://nbsmithblog.wordpress.com
Be back later to read everyone’s haiku
These are all so delightful, Nan!
Thanks, E. I write lots of blossom haiku (some better than others though).
Hi Nan, What a great collection! I really like “snowflakes” and how you chose crab-apple blossom. There is something about pulling in the crab-apple that gives this haiku a little edge.
I love all of these too, Nan. They are all so charming. I must say the fourth one really resonates with me.
Thanks, Mark. Glad you liked the “edge.” It’s been rejected by many, yet I always liked it.
I really like all of these/ Thanks!
Thanks, Griffin. Appreciate it.
Hi Nancy, A nice quartet of haiku! The first one may be my favorite. I used the word “bumblebee” last week. There is something delicious about that word. Peace, LaMon
LaMon,
Thanks so much; I think it is the alliteration of all those Bs in the word (I was going to say ‘buzzing around,’ but thought it was too much). I never realized how pollen-covered bees get or saw the pollen sacs filled until I got a DLSR and took photos of bees in blossoms. Then, safely, I could blow up the photo and look closely at all the bees. ~Nan
Madeleine,
Thanks! My fourth one was new, and I’m glad it resonated with you. Especially when pollen sacs are filled, it’s hard to imagine how bees fly. I’ve always heard (read) that bees (bumblebees) are not aerodynamic and shouldn’t be able to fly, yet they do. Because of that, I wanted to write a haiku with that idea in mind. Wasn’t sure it worked to be honest so thanks for the reassurance. ~Nan
Hi Nan, I am impressed for the reason you write about bumblebees. I had no idea they aren’t aerodynamic. This is so interesting… and a delectable poem!
Well, yes, theoretically, bumblebees are not aerodynamically built to fly, Madeleine, but they obviously do. But they are also so cute, too, so why not write ku about them. ~Nan
Suffice to say they get by on a wing and a prayer as the saying goes and because they are so cute! 🙂 (lol.) I agree, Nan…why not?
What a delightful bouquet of haiku. The crocus one speaks loudest to me, probably because they come first and are so tough, as your haiku describes.
Thanks, D. So good of you to say about my ku. Crocuses are my favorite flower because of their first color and their resilience. I look forward to seeing their blooms each year (and have done so since I was a child). I think that’s why I write so many haiku about them. ~Nan
Nan,
Insects are amazing. Consider the weight an ant can carry 🙂
I do like walking in a warm breeze and having petal flakes swirl around me 🙂
You are correct, Jules. Insects are amazing, and hopefully, they’ll never rise up against us as they outnumber us. ~Nan
🙂
teasing spring
redbud swells
before it opens
A delight!
Spring is on its way! Thanks for sharing this hopeful spring haiku.
Griffin, I really like the imagery of “teasing spring”. LaMon
Griffin,
Your haiku nails it…spring teases us with its yo-yoing temps, but following it up with redbud trees. They are such gorgeous trees when they bloom. That purple splash is something I look forward to each spring. ~Nan
Thanks, Nan. Today on the drive to church the redbuds were in ascendence as the maples peak and fade. Thanks for your support.
I’m jealous! I won’t see ours blooming for a couple of weeks, I’m afraid. Enjoy them while they last, Griffin. ~Nan
It’s quite something to see the spring magic from bud to blossom.
Yes, indeed, D. It definitely seems magical! 🙂
Thank-you for another wonderful post, Mark. I had no idea that peach trees are members of the rose family:) And I am looking forward to peach blossoms in my tea!
Yesterday while taking a walk in the late afternoon
fourth walk
of spring
happy faces outside
people coming home in the light
This morning even though it was slightly cold, the sun was shining. It was also
quite windy.
four weeks old
daffodils
standing up
to the gale
still
no blossoms
only a tree’s silhouette
Fun to see you experimenting with different formats, Maddy.
Hi Maddy, What a collection! I am really enjoying “still”, and like the rhythm of the 4 liners. Very fun!
Thanks, Mark! Made my day 🙂
Hi Maddy. I’m with Mark. All are good, but I like the “still” haiku best. It creates a meditative mood as we wait patiently for the season to come. LaMon
Thanks LaMon, I like your explanation of it!
Hi LaMon, I agree with Nan and Mark. Your haiku is wonderful. I love the two surprises… in the second line and then the third line, which is also humorous!
Delightful haiku, Maddy. I like the four-liners as well as the tree silhouette ku. It’s fun to get outside and experience the changes with a walk. ~Nan
Thanks, Nan. Sometimes; these walks can be so restorative! 🙂
Yes, walks can be. 😉
That fourth one! Some of us are still in shadow and snow.
Thanks D! 🙂 Hopefully spring will happen for everyone soon enough!
Maddy,
It is a delight to see so many folks out and about. Some have even started to mow. We might have to this weekend!
A tad breezy, but no more freezing weather and tomorrow is the first day of Spring!!
That sounds lovely, Jules. My daughter was just commenting how lovely the smell of newly cut grass is. I find so many of us have wonderful memories of newly cut grass, from when we were children. Spring breezes are the best, especially when they are not too cold. Lovely: Happy Spring for tomorrow! 🙂
🙂
In our area farm fields with spread dung is a common spring smell too!
Lol! 🙂
…I like the T-shirt that says;
“I fought the lawn and the lawn won!”
I have never seen that one but like it already! 🙂
Thanks Eavonka! Haiku is so versatile!
Thanks Mark for another inspirational post. here is my response to this week’s prompt – ‘any blossoming plant except the cherry!’
Have a great day.
Hi Goff, Thanks for joining the conversation!
Pleasure Mark. Thanks for the inspirational posts.
Hey Goff, I confess that I don’t usually scroll through all the haiku written in response to Mark’s weekly prompts, but I’m glad I did today. I think it’s the first time I went to your site. I will check is much more regularly!! “Alone the moon hangs” is evocative–love that imagery. Peace, LaMon
Thanks My Friend for calling in, read and comments. Much appreciated. so pleased you enjoyed your visit. Have a great weekend.
dogs howling at moon and each other
sleepless nights…
uneasy Mexican spring!
An uneasy Mexican spring…that last line sets the haiku off wonderfully. I can almost see the starkness of the night sky and the silhouettes of howling dogs.
I agree with Nan. An “uneasy Mexican spring” is a great third line for this poem.
I can hear the dogs and feel the tension.
Cool! I have a post about peach blossoms flowers in Costa Blanca
I wonder how different peach blossoms flowers are in Costa Blanca.
Peach blossoms, any blossoms seem far away yet. But there are subtle signs of spring.
spring buzzes
in sunlit windows
flies blossom
(or this? I’m not sure which)
spring blossoms
in sunlit window
buzzing flies
And icefishing is no longer a viable activity.
Hi D. I really like “spring buzzes” and how it flips the blossoming and the buzzing. Nice!
Yeah, you’re right. That’s the better one. Thanks!
I love them both, D:). I agree with Mark, I really like how “spring buzzes” sets up the poem working well for line 2 and 3…and juxtaposes with Line 3 too!
Jules, I agree with Mark. I love your forsythia poem. And It is such a beautiful flower for spring!
D, I like both of them, but I really like the spring buzzes haiku. There’s a bit of whimsy there.
Glad you’ve give up ice-fishing for now, that is. It’d be a bit risky and we’d miss you around here and the Ranch. ~Nan
I was just looking at some images from the 1960’s one was of ice fishing compitions… Hardy folks to do that.
Both of your verse are accurate. At least most flies don’t bite.
I’ve seen some mostquitoes already.
Hi Mark and all, can’t resist a good jig!
dancing
a jig
for no particular reason
~ ~ ~
dancing
a jig
to spring
Cute, both of them, and the spring is a perfect reason to kick up your heels, Madeleine.
🙂
Awww thanks, Nan…Yes, it is! Hope you are having a lovely spring!
Hmm…. can one dance a jig with two left feet? I used to know how to waltz… I can do the Twist!!
Spring is doing a very slow promanade! Only speeding up when the wind jigs everything that isn’t nailed down out of its place! 😀
Love the twist, Jules:) Lovely words! :)
🙂
A happy st. patty’s day, everyone. 🙂
posting a couple of excerpts from one of my favorite blessings, if that is ok:
“…may the sun shine warm upon your face..
.may the wind be always at your back…”
Same to you Maddy. Happy Saint Patty’s day! Grace and peace to you!
Awww! Thanks Suzette! Grace and peace to you as well! 🙂
Thank you Maddy. Cheers.
🙂
Thank you Mark for the excellent information on this micro-season, its flowers and moon phases. And I appreciate the introduction to Li Po ‘s poignant poetry. Lots of great food for thought and inspiration in your weekly shares. Thank you for your work.
Here is my link: I hope you have a wonderful day.
Hi Suzette, Thanks for linking up and sharing your work! Wonderful haiku for this week.
Thank you, Mark. It’s a pleasure to join in. Have a good one!
Not all Prunus blossoms are such happy harbingers of spring. The invasive callery pear is a rapidly growing environmental nightmare in the eastern US, displacing all the native trees and shrubs.
Grey hour of spring dawn / feral pears limn the highway / a white ghost forest
Hi Rick, Thanks for this information! I haven’t heard of the Callery Pear. I did a quick search and it looks like it is quickly become an invasive species and a plant of concern. Wikipedia even said that it smells bad!
Thanks for sharing this!
Never heard of these pears, Rick, but appreciate the information as well as your haiku. Will be looking out for these.
Hi Ben, Thanks for sharing your poem with us! And going for the 4 line haiku. Nice!
Thanks, Mark.
You’re welcome – I am glad you appreciated my 4 line haiku and once again thank you for a great prompt.
A lovely four lined poem, Ben. Well done! :) First time I have heard of these beautiful blooms…and a lily as well! I read up on them recently and understand they got their nick name because of the fact they don’t have any leaves. (I didn’t know they are prevalent in California:)
Thank you, Maddy.
Yes, they certainly are a wonderful and interesting plant for the garden.
🙂
I would be remiss if I didn’t wish everyone a Happy World Poetry Day!
Congratulations Nan on your charming and witty poem…making the short list on THF’s “Haiku Dialogue” this week! Drawing attention to environmental concerns too!