Week 14: “Swallows Return”

April 01 to April 07 is the fourteenth week of 2024.  This week, we end the Solar Term of Spring Equinox (Mar 20- Apr 3) and enter the Solar Term of Clear and Bright (Apr 4 – Apr 19).  During this week, we also have the micro-seasons of “Distant Thunder” (Mar 31 – Apr 4) and “Swallows Return” (Apr 05 – Apr 09).

Basho, Issa, Buson, Mizerit, Reichhold, and Kerouac wrote the poems selected for this week.  


The 24 Solar Terms 

The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China  (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around Xi’an, the capital of China during the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)

Clear and Bright

Clear and Bright is the fifth Solar Term of the year and the fifth Solar Term of Spring.

Qingming (清明) is the Chinese name for this season. During Qingming (清明) people pause to honor their ancestors.  The Qingming Festival, which is held on April 04, is one of the four traditional festivals of China and it focuses on remembering those who have passed.(3)

Honoring the Ancestors

The Qingming Festival is also known as Tomb-Sweeping Day or The Mourning Day. During the festival, people head out to the cemeteries and clean up the debris that accumulated during the winter. People will also bring food, drinks, flowers, incense, and money to gravesites as offerings to their ancestors.(3)  


The 72 Seasons

The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai.  Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)

This week we have the micro-seasons of “Distant Thunder” (Mar 31 – Apr 4) and “Swallows Return” (Apr 05 – Apr 09).

Comings and Goings

Within a given year, the 72-season calendar has several micro-seasons that comment on the comings and goings of things. This week, the “Swallows Return” and “Distant Thunder” can be heard. The opposite of these seasons are “The Swallows Leave” (Sep 17 – Sep 21) and “Thunder Ceases” (Sept 23 -Sept 27).

There are other seasonal pairs including:

  • “Hibernating Insects Surface” (Mar 06 – Mar 10) and “Insects Hole Up Underground” (Sept 28–Oct 2)
  • ‘Wild Geese Fly North” (Apr 10 – Apr 14) and “Wild Geese Return” (Oct 08 – Oct 12)
  • “Last Frost, Rice Seedlings Grow” (Apr 25 – Apr 29) and “First Frost” (Oct 23 – Oct 27)

Each pair of seasons highlights a cycle in the natural world. The movements of the animals and the weather are choreographed in a way that might go unnoticed by most. But, because of the calendar’s attention to these transitions, these shifts are brought forward and help us recognize all that is happening in the world.


Astronomical Season

April 07, the last day of week fourteen, is 19 days past the spring equinox and 74 days until the summer solstice (June 20, 2024).  

Waning Crescent

The Moon is in the Waning Crescent phase from April 03 – April 07.  This phase occurs between the Last Quarter (April 02) and the New Moon (April 08). During the Waning Crescent phase, the Moon’s illumination slowly decreases until it reaches 0% illumination on the night of the New Moon.

On April 07, the Moon will be on its last day of Waning Crescent with 2% illumination.(6)

Solar Eclipse

On April 08, 2024, there will also be a total solar eclipse in parts of the United States. This event technically will occur in the fifteenth week of the year, but it seems relevant to mention here.

Below is an explanation of the path of the eclipse from NASA.

The path of the eclipse continues from Mexico, entering the United States in Texas, and traveling through Oklahoma, Arkansas, Missouri, Illinois, Kentucky, Indiana, Ohio, Pennsylvania, New York, Vermont, New Hampshire, and Maine. Small parts of Tennessee and Michigan will also experience the total solar eclipse. . . The eclipse will exit continental North America on the Atlantic coast of Newfoundland, Canada, at 5:16 p.m. NDT.

Read NASA’s full article if you are interested in the exact times for partial and total eclipse events across the US.


Haiku and Kigo 

The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku.  The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society provides us with the following explanation for why we use kigo in haiku. 

“A kigo is a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season; it’s a powerful word or phrase that can conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions. Its use in haiku, a poem of few words, is especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(9)

Visit The Haiku Foundation’sNew To Haiku: What is a Kigo?” for more information


This Week’s Kigo

In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “swallow”, “bird enter clouds” and “spring thunder” are relevant kigo. 

 In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “decorating graves”, “birds”, “migrating birds return”, and “swallows” are all relevant kigo.

According to the World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greves, “cleaning the grave” is an autumn kigo.(7) For the Japanese, “cleaning the grave” is associated with the Bon Festival (O’Bon Festival) which is held in mid-August.  This is different from the Chinese Qingming Festival or Tomb-Sweeping Day, which is a spring event.  

With all this in mind, let’s read some haiku. 


Basho

don’t drop your dirt 
into my wine cup-
flock of swallows.
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
butterflies and birds 
ceaselessly fluttering-
clouds of blossoms.
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
you too come out, bat: 
all these birds amid the blossoms
of this floating world
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)

Issa

from deep in the cloud's
billows
thunder comes
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
hey nesting swallows--
grassy green mountains
are elsewhere
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
swallows--
these peach blossoms belong
to you
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Buson

On ancient Japanese roads
in shabby straw shrines and houses
swallows
(translated by Allan Persinger)

Silva Mizerit

spring morning
early birds are pecking
the thin silence

Reichhold

canning jars
overflowing among the graves
roses
whispering welcome
to our winter-weary selves
returning geese

Kerouac

Thunder and snow–
   how
We shall go!

Haiku invitation

This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu referencing the arrival of seasonal object.

This object can be a plant, an animal, the weather, or anything else. Have fun with this one.

Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write! 


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About the Haiku

Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess.  Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku. Kerouac’s haiku was retrieved from Kerouac’s  Book of Haikus.  Mizerit’s haiku was retrieved from Haiku Enlightenment by Gabriel Rosenstock.

  1. “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
  2. “6 Solar Terms of Spring”; China Educational Tours
  3. “The Qingming Festival 2024”: China Educational Tours
  4. 72 Seasons App
  5. “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
  6. “Moon Phase: April 07, 2024”; Moongiant.com
  7. “Bon Festival (o-bon, obon)”; World Kigo Database. Dr. Gabi Greve
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128 thoughts on “Week 14: “Swallows Return”

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  1. The first verse by Basho reminds me of the quip; “Birdie, birdie in the sky… gee I’m glad that cows can’t fly!”

    I played here with another prompt that asked to use ‘first starts’… in creative ways… I think I managed :D 

      1. I appriciate that. 🙂
        Every once in a while a good returning poster gets kicked into spam. I’m not sure what the WP algorithm is for that.

    1. Hi Clive, this is a great haiku. I love the juxtaposition between new front door and returning swallows.

      1. Thanks for commenting. You may like to read my reply to Mark. The juxtaposition between the two made it even more poignant. Clive

      1. Hi Nan,

        Thanks for commenting. You may like to read my reply to Mark. A bit of a shame. And a bit sad. But it happens all too often. Clive

      1. Hi Mark,

        Written originally as a protest against barn conversions and the loss of nesting habitat for the barn swallows. I hasten to add it wasn’t our new front door but a nearby neighbours in the village. The swallows returned year after year and hung about the house until finally giving up …

    1. Very lovely poems, Griffin. The second one resonates. I had never heard of phoebe. I looked them up and found them to be very interesting, a “fly catcher”. I like that they often return to the same nest each year. They are quite cute to look at. They do have them in the bay area. :) I hope to spot one soon and hopefully hear its song!

    2. Enjoyed your haiku, Griffin. The alliteration in the second one as well as your cliff swallows. We see some kind of swallow and their nest whenever we kayak at Old Woman Creek. We have to go under the bridge from the launch site to the estuary itself, and there are hundreds of birds and their nests under the bridge. ~Nan

      1. Thanks! The cliff swallows build a colony of those mud jugs with mud they carry up from the riverbank in their bill. The barn swallows build a little shelf, huge colonies under bridges. We also have tree swallows (cavity nesters, they like bluebird houses) and northern rough-wing swallows — digs a hole in a vertical bank.

    3. Great pair of haiku for the season! I am enjoying “under the overpass” because there is so much imagery that I can relate to. Very nice!

  2. Hi Mark: Thank-you for all the information. I love the theme of ‘Swallow’s Return’. I enjoyed Issa’s poems about swallows. 🙂

    Yesterday, it hailed for at least an hour. The ice looked like snow on the ground and stayed for a

    while.  

    hail storm

    the snow lies beside red geraniums

    in the middle of spring

              ~  ~  ~

    For the first time on a walk the other day,  I saw a black swallowtail butterfly.

    magnolia tree

    a black swallowtail butterfly

    flitters 

             ~  ~  ~

    cherry blossoms

    in the rain 

    all their glory

      1. Awwww. Thank-you for the compliments Nan. Glad that you particularly liked the black swallowtail ku!

    1. Hi Maddy, thanks for letting us experience your day through haiku! I like “cherry blossoms/in the rain” . That provides me with such a clear image.

    2. Maddy,

      I mostly get yellow swallowtails, but occasionally the black or dark ones. I’ve only seen some small white cabbage moths so far. So that one is my favorite 🦋

      1. Hi Jules, I love swallowtails. I haven’t seen yellow swallowtails here recently though. I am looking to see one! …Hadn’t heard of the cabbage moth before. I looked them up. They are very pretty. :) 

      2. I’ve got a bunch of bird, bug and butterfly ID things. I enjoyed going to butterfly houses and seeing all the different ones up close and personal. 🙂 Happy butterfly hunting.

    1. Adele,

       Sometimes, our birds are spooked by the feeders moving in the wind, too. Fortunately, they get over their fright quick enough considering how much bird seed we put out. Nice haiku. ~Nan

  3. Thanks for another informative post, Mark. It’s interesting that the moon is its waning crescent, heading for the new moon as the solar eclipse is about to occur. Of course, after looking it up, I realized that it requires a new moon and the sun lining up just right. Duh! Here are some haiku about the arrival of a seasonal object :

    the alignment

    of sun, moon, and earth

    –syzygy

    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    #offthecuffhaiku

    bikini-clad coeds spread

    their beach towels

    –spring break

    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    #offthecuffhaiku

    spring migration…

    great blues return

    to Erie’s shores

    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    #offthecuffhaiku

    1. These are great Nan. I love the last one especially. The word choice helps to make it quite evocative.

      1. The blue heron is a wonderful bird, Nan! It’s exhilarating when they return each year. Happy Viewing on Monday! Thank-you for introducing “syzygy” to us and the fun way you learned about it!

      2. Today’s eclipse was so exhilarating especially during totality. Got a few decent photos of the corona.

        Great blue herons are really cool. We see them frequently when they return, and they never fail to impress. I remember my sister having a matching game of birds when I was young. One card of birds had the great blue heron, which I figured I would never see since it was on the card with other exotic birds (one was a parrot, which I knew were from South America). To me, that was the penultimate bird. Imagine my surprise when I first saw a great blue at Lake Erie! I was thrilled then, and still am. TMI!

      3. Hi Nan, I am glad to hear that you had a great time at the eclipse, today…I love the story of how you saw your first blue heron on a card from one of your sister’s card games and now these great blues are so close by you. Pretty wonderful! :)

    2. Hi Nan, If we had awards for the most unexpected word used in a haiku, “syzygy” would win for this week!
      Great collection and I do like the use of “Erie” in the last one.

    3. Hooray for learning new words! Syzygy is amazing, and I love your poem, Nan.

      Spring migration was also wonderful.

      1. Thanks, Eavonka. I had a hard time coming up with haiku for Mark’s prompt today. I only learned that word today. Well, I actually learned the meaning today when I was looking into the eclipse. I’m lucky enough to be on the path of totality. I first heard of it on The Big Bang Theory or Young Sheldon several years ago, but I didn’t catch its meaning then. Using it nine more times, it’ll be part of my vocabulary forever, or so our teachers told us.      ~Nan

      2. I sure do envy you getting to see the total eclipse on Monday! That should be fantastic.

    4. Nan – what fun. I laughed out loud!

      I’m not sure if our great blue goes elsewhere. Probably, but I’ve seen at least the same one a few times, or a few singles already this year! ~ JP

      1. Jules, i am glad I made you laugh. Some haiku are designed for that.

        Being a block from the lake, we see quite a few of them, Jules. They are such majestic looking birds, and I never get tired of watching them. 

                           Yesterday, in the river, we saw ten egrets within a few feet of each other. They looked like they had already paired up for the season.   

      2. Jules,

        We are seeing the pairing of mallards and mergansers around here. One mallard pair always visits our “pond” every year. There is barely enough room for her in the “pond,” he waits patiently for her to finish bathing before wandering off down the street to get to their nesting place. Haven’t seen them yet, but know we’ll see them eventually. ~Nan

      3. Usually the mallards don’t come up into the yard. But sometimes when it has been raining and has kept the small birds away… the ducks will come up to try and scavange seed that has fallen on the ground. I’m not sure if they will nest in the ivy in the one berm. But maybe?

      4. Jules,

          Every year for the past 3 years (maybe more), they’ve walked right up to the “pond” and she jumped in. They have also eaten birdseed that fell from the feeder, too. We’ve got the photos to prove it, too. Only once was there any problem, and that was the year there was another drake close by. The male kept him at bay.  ~Nan

  4. Great inspiration and community here as always <33 – thank you for sharing all this info and these wonderful haiku, Mark! They’re all so good!

  5. Saw the first spring lizard today. It was on our deck. Here is the resulting haiku:

    stubby green lizard
    behind a butterfly bush…
    nervously hiding

    Confession time! It was actually a honeysuckle plant, but “butterfly bush” just sounded better!
    Peace,
    LaMon

    1. Hi LaMon, Nothing wrong with taking a little poetic license with your word choice! Butterfly bush does sound better and its also makes me think about butterflies and other insects, perhaps even the lizards next meal. So yes. good choice butterfly bush.

    2. Love your haiku, LaMon, especially the alliteration of “butterfly bush.” Poets don’t always have to tell the whole truth in the pursuit of beauty.

      I think that might be the first lizard haiku I’ve read. ~Nan 

      1. A wonderful haiku, LaMon. Yes, “Butterfly bush” does sound a lot better!

        Lizards are great!

  6. hills filled

    with wildflowers

    day tripping

    We’ve had our 2nd year of record rain/snow in CA, and the spring green mixed with all the wildflowers is truly magnificent!

    1. Love it, Eavonka, especially the “day tripping,” which reminds me of the Beatles. I can just see the all the wildflowers (and I wish I could as I love wildflowers). ~Nan

      1. Funny you mention it, Nan, because I have been listening to some Beatles songs recently. Not that particular song, but I’m sure that’s part of why I thought of it.

      2. Eavonka, I think music has the power to affect our moods and just hearing an old song can return that person to that place and time (at least in the mind). I know it affects me that way. 

        I have found that I “borrow” a phrase or two from songs in my haiku writing because the music takes me there.        ~Nan

    2. Hi Eavonka,
      Like Nan, my mind also immediately went to the Beatles song. I like when a haiku can have a cultural reference that doesn’t take away from the poem if you don’t know the reference. You have a Beatles songs, and Issa has dew drops!

      1. This is such a marvelous haiku, Eavonka and a wonderful juxtaposition!  Ours are purple and orange flowers gracing the hills during daily commutes and road trips in our neck of the woods in Northern California! 

      2. Yes, it feels like all the hills of California are alive with wildflowers right now, and it is magnificent!

    3. Eavonka,

      I remember seeing a large landscape that had been barren for so many years full of wildflowers! What a wonderful sight.

      Sorry about that road that collapsed… hope you don’t have to travel it.

      1. Thankfully, I do not, but I have been on that very ledge of PCH a couple of times. It’s beautiful but terrifying. I live about 5 hours south of there.

  7. Hi Mark, I was wondering if you think it would be alright to post this information on today’s eclipse. The first link has information in the article that tells you when you will be able to view it depending on your location, including times you can see it partially as well:

    ( You will be able to put your zip code in USA TODAY’S Data Base further down in the article below.)   

    https://www.usatoday.com/story/news/nation/2024/04/07/solar-eclipse-time-2024/73216068007/

    Interesting information on the eclipse: 

    https://science.nasa.gov/eclipses

    Link for how to watch the eclipse safely:

    https://science.nasa.gov/eclipses/safety/

    Many local planetariums will be having free viewings. I also read that a lot of libraries will be having fun programs and many will be giving out free safety glasses.  

    If anyone has anything to add please do!  Hope everyone has a fun safe day!

  8. New family member:

    A local bird, discovering the little pool in our sagging drainpipe,

    Has taken to bathing in it many times a day!

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