Week 15: “Wild Geese Fly North”

April 08 to April 14 is the fifteenth week of 2024.  This week, we are in the Solar Term of Clear and Bright (Apr 4 – Apr 19). This week also contains the micro-seasons of “Swallows Return” (Apr 05 – Apr 09) and “Wild Geese Fly North” (Apr 10 – Apr 14).

Basho, Issa, Buson, and Noyes wrote the poems selected for this week.  


The 24 Solar Terms 

The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China  (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around Xi’an, the capital of China during the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)

Clear and Bright

Clear and Bright is the fifth Solar Term of the year and the fifth Solar Term of Spring. Qingming (清明) is the Chinese name for this season. During Qingming (清明) people take time to honor their ancestors.  The Qingming Festival (April 04) is one of the four traditional festivals of China.(2)

Cold Food Festival

The Cold Food Festival, or Hanshi Festival (寒食节), is a traditional festival held on Tomb Sweeping Day. This festival honors the death of a Jin nobleman named Jie Zitui in the 7th century BCE.  During the Cold Food Festival, no fires are made including fires used in cooking.(3)

The Legend Of Jie Zitui

In early 600 BCE, Prince Ji Chong’er was wrongly forced into exile.  Ji Chong’er was accompanied in exile by 15 of his noblemen.  One of these noblemen was Jie Zitui.  At a particularly difficult time in exile, when the group had no food, Jie Zitui cut a piece of flesh from his thigh and made it into a soup to relieve Ji Chong’er’s hunger.(4)

In 636 BCE, Ji Chong’er was reinstalled as Duke of Jin.  Ji Chong’er was very gracious to those who supported him in exile. However, he forgot about Ji Zitui.  Feeling discarded, Ji Zitui retreated to the forest of Mt. Mian to live in solitude.  Duke Ji Chong’er eventually tried to lure Ji Zitui back to his court, but Ji Zitui refused. This annoyed Ji Chong’er who ordered his men to set fire to the forest of Mt. Mian hoping to smoke Ji Zitui out and bring him back to the court.  But, Ji Chong’er’s plan failed and Ji Zitui burned to death on the mountain.(4) After realizing what had happened, Ji Chong’er instituted the Cold Food Festival to honor Ji Zitui. 

Initially, this festival was held mid-winter and lasted for about a month.  Later, it was shortened to three days and held during Qingming.  Now it is a single-day observance held on Tomb-Sweeping Day.(4) 


The 72 Seasons

The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai.  Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)

This week we have the micro-seasons of “Swallows Return” (Apr 05 – Apr 09) and “Wild Geese Fly North” (Apr 10 – Apr 14).

The White-Fronted Goose

The White-Fronted Goose makes up 90% of the geese found in Japan.(5)  The White-Fronted Goose is divided into two separate sub-species: Greater White-Fronted Geese (Anser albifrons) and Lesser White-Fronted Geese (Anser erythropus), and the Greater White-fronted Goose is the dominant species. 

The Greater White-Fronted Goose is a medium-sized, heavy-bodied bird with stocky legs, a small bill, and a short neck.(7) These birds average about 25.2-31.9 in. (64-81 cm) long and can have a wingspan of about 53.1 in (135 cm).  The adult birds are “mostly brown with white feathering around the base of a pinkish-orange bill. Black barring marks the belly and the under tail is white.”(7) While the birds are flying, an observer can see a white “U” at the base of the tail. When the birds are standing still, an observer will be able to see a thin white line that goes across their side. 

The Lesser White-Fronted Goose is similar to the Greater White-Fronted Goose but smaller and more compact.  This goose averages about 21–26 in. (53–66 cm) long with a wingspan of about 47–53 in (120–135 cm).(8)  This goose is also described as having “a rather oval, ‘high-crowned’ head with a steep forehead . . . and relatively long wings which project well beyond the tail-tip.”(6)

Migration Pattern

The White-Fronted Goose spends its winters in Japan. In late March or early April, these geese leave and head to their summer homes in Siberia.  In September and early October, the white-fronted geese return from Siberia and take up residents on the marshes and rice paddies.(5)

Greater White-Fronted Goose: Ryanx7, CC BY-SA 4.0, via Wikimedia Commons
Greater White-Fronted Goose: Ryanx7, CC BY-SA 4.0, via Wikimedia Commons

Astronomical Season

April 14, the last day of week fourteen, is 26 days past the spring equinox and 67 days until the summer solstice (June 20, 2024).  

New Moon and Solar Eclipse

April’s new Moon was on April 8, 2024.  A new Moon occurs when the Moon is directly between the Earth and the Sun.  This puts the Moon’s shadow toward the earth making it difficult to see.

April’s new Moon coincided with a total solar eclipse in parts of North America. A solar eclipse is when the Moon blocks out the light from the Sun.  The complete eclipse event, from partial to total eclipse to back, lasts about 3 hours and 17 minutes.  The total solar eclipse lasts for about 4 minutes and 28 seconds. 

April’s new moon is also within the astrological sign of Aries (March 21- April 19).  Jill Wintersteen, a columnist for Yoga Journal, explains that Aries is the sign of the warrior. The traits of the warrior are courage, willpower, and motivation. During an eclipse, the dark sides of Aries can come into focus. Wintersteen suggests that you take this time to reflect on the ways you are fighting yourself, identify the places where you are blocking your growth, acknowledge them, and try to work through the blockage.  

“This solar eclipse is an excellent time to face your fears around your soul’s mission. You may have an inner knowledge of your soul’s path and what it would look like to create this life. It takes courage, though, to align with your life’s mission. It may even take risks or leaps of faith to create a life you know you were born to live.”

Jill Wintersteen; Yoga Journal

Haiku and Kigo 

The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku.  The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society provides us with the following explanation for why we use kigo in haiku. 

A kigo is a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season; it’s a powerful word or phrase that can conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions. Its use in haiku, a poem of few words, is especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.(9)

Visit The Haiku Foundation’sNew To Haiku: What is a Kigo?” for more information


This Week’s Kigo

In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “departing ducks” and “departing geese” are relevant spring kigo. 

 In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, there are many potential bird kigo including “eagles”, “robins’, “storks”, and “thrush’.  Reichhold also lists “migrating birds return” as a kigo but nothing about birds leaving.

In the World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greves, “migratory birds” is an autumn kigo. Greve explains this by referencing Richard Gilbert’s essay “Kigo Versus Seasonal Reference in Haiku: Observations, Anecdotes, and a Translation”.  In this essay, Gilbert states that “‘migratory birds’, is an autumn kigo in part because migrating birds arrive in Japan from Siberia to winter. They also depart in the spring, but in the culture of kigo, migrating birds migrate only one way, in one season.”  Therefore, the birds “depart” in the spring, and “migrate” in the autumn.

With all this in mind, let’s read some haiku. 


Basho

as clouds drift apart 
a wild goose now separates
from his only friend
(translated by Tim Chilcott)
departing spring - 
birds weep, and fishes’ eyes
are tearful
(translated by Makoto Ueda)

Issa

on the day of departure, too
she leads...
the widow goose
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
the departing goose
stares the man
in the face
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
just one
but he goes honking...
departing goose
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Buson

On Soushyu River
a wild goose’s tears —
a hazy moon
(translated by Allan Persinger)
Some left yesterday
and some left today —
no geese this evening
(translated by Allan Persinger)

H.F. Noyes

the geese fly off. . .
and now it comes to me 
that I am still here

Haiku invitation

This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu referencing seasonal things that are leaving.

 Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write! 


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About the Haiku

Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess.  Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku. Kerouac’s haiku was retrieved from Kerouac’s  Book of Haikus.  Noyes’s haiku was retrieved from Haiku Enlightenment by Gabriel Rosenstock.

  1. “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
  2. “6 Solar Terms of Spring”; China Educational Tours
  3. 24 Solar Terms: 8 things you may not know about Clear and Bright”; ChinaDaily.com
  4. “Cold Food Festival”; Wikipedia
  5. Ishi Hiroyuki; “The Flight of the Wild Geese”: Nippon.com
  6. “Greater and Lesser White-fronted Geese photo ID guide”; Birdguides.com
  7. “Greater White-Fronted Goose”; AllAboutBirds.org
  8. “Lesser White-Fronted Goose”; Wikipedia
  9. Wintersteen, Jill “What the Solar Eclipse and New Moon in Aries Mean for You”: Yoga Journal
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  1. I like Noyes haiku. It has an existential image–worth at bit of reflection. Here is my haiku response to the prompt.

    heard by never seen
    Baltimore Oriole
    ….alas

    The few (?) that have been around, if not already gone, will very soon depart.

    Peace,
    LaMon

    1. Nice ku, LaMon.

      By the way, we have found to keep orioles around is to get a jelly feeder. We usually put grape jelly in the feeder, and the birds (finches, robins, and especially Baltimore orioles) love it. Buy the cheapest jar because you’ll go through the jelly quickly, or so we have found, but we’ll see them for weeks instead of just a day or two. Orange slices, too, are a good draw for orioles. ~Nan

      1. Mark,

         While I have always liked birds, even tried the salt on the table to catch one when I was a kid, I have only become a birder since moving to our present location near Lake Erie. Our backyard has become filled with feeders and plants, trying to lure birds of all kinds. We regularly get robins, cardinals, goldfinches, house finches, blue jays, red-winged blackbirds, crows, orioles, and a hummingbird or two. We’ve even had at least one red poll and a white-winged dove, both of which aren’t common around here. Oh, let’s not forget the ubiquitous sparrows…we get those, too.

      2. Nan, we lived in a suburb (?) of Buffalo for 3 years in the early 90s. Loved First Night in Buffalo and the Falls, especially the Canadian side. Where around Lake Erie do you live? (We had friends in Erie, PA). Your back yard sounds wonderful–and full of haiku meditations.

        Peace,
        LaMon

        p.s. Just saw your two haiku. Departures and migrations cannot always be planned. I liked both of them.

      3. A white-winged dove is a new species name for me. Yesterday, I saw what was either an Great Egret or a White Heron. It was driving on a back road so I didn’t have time to check it out enough to tell the difference once I found out there was a White colored Great Blue Heron that looks very similar to the Egret.

      4. Mark, Around here, we basically have the great egret (white feathers and black legs), but looking at the bird book (National Audubon Field Guide) , I can see why it would difficult to tell one from the white heron. We have quite a few herons around here (Great blue heron, green heron, night-crowned heron) and they are always impressive looking. What always amazes me is how thin their necks are and then seeing them swallow fish whole. Frankly, I don’t know how they manage to it, but they do. ~Nan

      5. LaMon,

        They are relatively inexpensive. I think the one we purchased from Wild Birds Unlimited was around twenty dollars, and that was a couple years ago.    ~Nan

    2. Hi LaMon, I really like this response haiku. For me, it highlights the mystery that can be found in the natural world.
      On another note, I have only seen a few Baltimore Orioles in my life and remember them being really stunning.

    3. LaMon,

       I live a block from Lake Erie in one of Ohio’s little cities called Huron.

       Thanks for the kind remarks on my haiku. It is appreciated.

       Please let me know if you catch sight of any orioles especially if you use a jelly feeder. Sometimes I hear them before I ever see them especially if any other birds decide to use the jelly feeder. Orioles chase them off.       ~Nan

  2. The Noyes haiku empties and fills my soul.

    broken wing
    we and one snow goose
    left behind

    Tens of thousands of snow geese winter in the tidal marshes and sounds around Hatteras Island. A spectacle! One March we visited and they had all left for their Arctic breeding grounds except a lone white goose with broken wing.

    1. Hey Griffin, I like the Noyes, but the one haiku that hits me the hardest is the Issa ‘lead goose.’

      I like your haiku and the story behind it, but like the Issa haiku, it is sad. I hope the snow goose recovered eventually. Around here, we have Back to the Wild, a bird sanctuary where they rehabilitate injured birds, particularly raptors (eagles, hawks, etc.) but they might even fix the wings of geese, too.   ~Nan

  3. Thanks, Mark, for another insightful and informative post. Learning about the legend of Jui Zutui and the reason behind the Cold Food Festival and Tomb Sweeping Day was quite interesting. Thanks for sharing that and the difference between migration and departure. I would have thought they were essentially the same thing, but apparently not.

    Here are some haiku referencing seasonal departure, I think:

    heading south

    to plant geraniums on parents’ graves

    –tomb sweeping day

    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    white pelicans depart

    for the shores of Lake Erie

    –superstorm Sandy refugees

    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    #offthecuffhaiku 

    Not sure either of these qualify, but there it is.

    1. Hi Nan, I like “heading south”. I started reading, “heading south/ to plant geraniums” and I was thinking this is a fun upbeat intro, and then the shift to “on parent’s graves” made the poem take a turn I wasn’t expecting. I enjoyed that.

      1. Thanks, Mark, for your comment. I was hoping for the twist (surprise). Besides, you provided the fragment (tomb sweeping day) in your post.        ~Nan

      2. These poems are brilliant, Nan. I love Mark’s commentary and agree with it. I am taken with the juxtaposition of geraniums, such a beautiful and unique plant. I love your second haiku too. You paint such a vivid picture with the emphasis on the color of the pelican and I can’t help but imagine the colors of the gathering storm. :)

      3. Madeleine, Thanks for the vote of confidence. I felt that they all lacked something. Sometimes, my haiku only resonate with me, and this was one of those times.                   ~Nan

      4. And Congratulations, Nan! I am very excited for you! It’s an amazing verse you posted on Renku Sessions this week! 🙂

      5. Madeleine,    Thanks and thanks. There are so many great verses this week that I am surprised that he singled it out. Otto Correct is becoming one of my best friends, but I wish he’d make himself scarce on Renku Sessions. I know what I want to type, and I do only to have Otto join in.   ~Nan

      6. Nan, I must say your verse is exquisite and your description of the sun’s corona is both unique and original…revealing a wonderful phenoneman of the sun during a total eclipse! It’s a joy to read. I love that you have named your friend “Otto”!  I understand …although it makes me smile, especially your responses to Otto! :)

      7. Madeleine,   Thanks for the thoughtful and kind words about my verse about the Baily’s beads for the renku. I should have chosen a shade of red in the first place. It was an amazing event and I’m so glad the weather cooperated that day.   You may be too young to remember, but the movie Airplane with Leslie Neilson and others had an section of the movie when the autopilot was deployed. In the credits, the autopilot was spelled Otto Pilot. I wish I could take credit for it, but from now on my autocorrect issues will directed to Otto.It really is annoying when I know I have typed it correctly, only to have the computer decide otherwise (and unfortunately, with THF you can’t revise without putting in a new post).  

      8. Hi Nan:

         I am sorry I missed your response yesterday. I saw it just now.  I enjoyed the story that goes with “Otto”.  I did see the movie with my husband years ago.  I just don’t remember too much of it. Lol.   I am not too young! 🙂  The total eclipse sounds pretty amazing.  My daughter had the day off and we were able to view the partial eclipse through the shades she ordered online, which was a lot fun…we got swept into the worldwide excitement:).  Yeah, auto correct is frustrating…you are posting what is the correct version and it changes your words in the process and you have no way to control it:/ …on a happier note, I am looking forward to seeing your post on THF and Marshall’s write-up this morning! 🙂 

      9. Madeleine,   I am sure that John Stevenson will correct your name and quickly. I had barely posted it when I noticed that he had made the change for me. I tried to make my response to Marshall both serious as well as funny because I thought Marshall might have, jokingly, played the autocorrect card himself. If it didn’t go into the THF’s archives, I might have let it go. But it does, and it is important to get the names spelled correctly.  You are so right. Otto is infuriating (and even funny at times). I am extremely picky as to what I write so when Otto inserts himself and changes my words, it drives me crazy. I remember during one NaHaiWrMo, the prompt was tusk, and every time I tried to post the haiku, it changed the word to risk. The same, too, for the word crocuses, which I have had changed to circuses more than once. Since the crocus is my favorite flowers (or at least one of them), I write quite a few haiku about them.  I hope, by now, that your name has been corrected, not once, but twice, since you have two verses in the renku with your name misspelled.                ~Nan

      10. Awww, thanks Nan! He did! We’re going on a road trip and will be back Monday. Looking forward to reading everyone’s offerings! :)

  4. are the birds

    coming or going?

    –warbler flyway

    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    #offthecuffhaiku2

    How can you tell the difference between migrations or departures? On the Lake Erie coast we get birds that only briefly seen or heard. A day, a week, or maybe a bit more, and then they are gone.

      1. Hey, Mark! It was quite informative; thanks for including the link. Living in a flyway, we must have both northern and southern birds (migrators).

        We also have plenty of Canada geese, but many don’t have the right documents to return home so they stay here year-round. (joking here) Many are born here so technically they are citizens.

                          ~Nan

  5. My good friend who doesn’t have much longer to live…I am a little sad

    my dear friend 

    who leaving this earthly place…

    my heart being swept clean

    ~   ~   ~

    the cherry tree 

    already losing blossoms 

    I step along the path

    crunch  

    🙂

      1. *…new shoots of green leaves that will soon completely cover the tree, carrying us into summer.

    1. My dear Madeleine,

       I am so sorry to hear about your friend. I know how difficult it can be to know a good friend is dying. My husband and I were in the same position recently.

       Both of your haiku reflects similar sentiment as I read them. The loss of a good friend and cherry blossoms…both expressing sadness.

       Take care, and be kind to yourself during this difficult time, Maddy.               

                     

      1. Thank you Mark. I appreciate it. It really does help to write about it. 

    2. Maddy – (((Hugs to you)))

      We too often have had to recover from the losses we knew were coming as well as unexpected ones.

      We are having a mini family reunion because some family will be out of country for about three years. We were hoping one of our Elders could come… but with a slip, hospital stay, rehab… that won’t be happening.

      The seasons evolve. 💕

      1. Thank you Jules…🥰Hugs right back at you! I hope you have a good family reunion!

  6. Such wonderful poems by our community poets and the masters of old. I look forward when I get back this evening to giving them one more read. Hope everyone is having a good afternoon. :)

  7. When young, I would see my breath.

    It has been so cold!

    Warm breeze will make me feel fine.

    (Last line inspired by Seals and Crofts’ song, ‘Summer Breeze.’)

    1. Adele,

        Nicely done ku, and I love that song. Saw Seals & Croft in concert way-back-when with several of my best friends from high school. It was a great concert; every song (especially “Summer Breeze”) was just perfect except for “Diamond Girl,” which sounded flat. They must have had so much post-production on the song that could not be replicated live.     ~Nan

      1. You are so lucky, Nan! I saw them in 1989 in Hamilton, Ontario. Thanks for your comment! I love ‘Summer Breeze,’ ‘Hummingbird’ and ‘We May Never Pass this Way Again.’

  8. Sorry! I just realized I have to switch the lines around to make the haiku right!

    It has been so cold!

    When young I would see my breath.

    I’ll be fine with spring.

    Sorry! I forgot the rules this time!

      1. Hi Adele:

        I really like the line “When young I would see my breathe” as the first line, I hope you don’t mind and don’t mean to be invasive…I don’t know why I do. ( I don’t know the rules, and I’m probably breaking quite a few.) I think I like the way it sounds and it seems to be setting up for what comes next in your second line. But I like the new third line: “I’ll be fine with spring”.

        When young I would see my breathe

        it has been so cold

        I’ll be fine with spring

      2. I like what you are saying, Mark. Line placement is very important and I don’t know that much about haiku and most of the time I hesitate to comment. :) All I know for sure is Adele’s poem is beautiful which ever way! :)

  9. Thank you Mark for the great research and for sharing your insights of the season. It is great to know the premise behind how the haiku can come to life reflected in seasonal events.

  10. Hi Mark and all, I forgot to mention the poems of the masters’ earlier. They are all wonderful and resonated, tinged with a little sadness that goes along with any kind of departure.  I enjoyed the link you added, “Geese Fly North” and happy that Nan posed the question. It’s a fascinating question and a fascinating study with very interesting conclusions. Although, I can’t help but feel that nothing really seems “cut and dry”, in these cases, especially regarding the conclusion of the two different hypothesis. I guess it’s difficult to come up with a straight answer, and wondering if it’s because of all the changing weather patterns occurring … or maybe an answer would be difficult to pin down, because of the nature of studies, or maybe I’m missing the whole thing? (I had no idea that the Canadian goose in the early 1900’s came close to extinction?!) 

    I have just one more haiku, if that is alright.

    I meant to send this on Friday:

    even though 

    I no longer work I am happy

    it’s friday

    Hope everyone is doing well and having a good weekend.  :)

    1. My haiku above is meant to be 3 lines (for what it is worth)

      even though

      I no longer work

      I am happy it’s friday

  11. Hi Jules, a very lovely set of haiku! The backward haiku is pretty wonderful! ( I wasn’t able to respond to your haiku above, that’s why I place here. ) :)

  12. Hi LaMon:  I thought I had replied to your poem. There wasn’t room to respond initially. I enjoyed reading it.  It is  poignant and very charming. Thank you for bringing the oriole to our attention. I looked up the California one and they are called Hooded Orioles, their bodies are a pretty yellow color. I am hoping to be able to see some soon.

  13. Mark, It’s great that you came across such a beautiful bird.  It is such a wonderful and special moment to view one!

  14. Hi Griffin, I really liked your poem.  It’s understandably sad but very lovely and brings attention to the plight of migratory birds. Like Nan, I’m hoping its wing got fixed, too. :)

  15. Lol! Yes I did!. Oh my goodness, Mark. This is absolutely amazing! It fits in with “First rainbows” (which I think is the theme for this new week.) as a wonderful juxtaposition.

  16.    In honor of Jules love for chasing rainbows too and Nan’s  “Adventures of Aloysius”:

    When I held the hose at a certain angle some months ago to wash the leaves above…

    when I was watering

    a rainbow appeared

    above the queen anne’s lace

    shining in the sun

  17. Hi Mark and all,  my family and I are going on a road trip leaving early this morning,  five o’clock California time.  I won’t be able to respond to your new post until we get back on Monday. (Although I am able to access “Season Words” on my phone,  I am not able to submit anything.)  Happy Haikuing everyone!!😀

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