June 17- June 23 is the 25th week of 2024. This week, we enter the Solar Term of Summer Solstice (June 21 – July 06). “Plums Turn Yellow” (June 16 June 20) and “Self-Heal Withers” (June 21 – 26) are the micro-seasons for this week.
Basho, Issa, Buson, and Reichhold wrote the poems selected for this week.
The 24 Solar Terms
The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around Xi’an, the capital of China during the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)
Summer Solstice
Summer Solstice is the tenth Solar Term of the year and the fourth Solar Term of Summer. Xiazhi (夏至) is the Chinese name for this season. Xiazhi means “heat is to come”,(2) which acknowledges that Summer Solstice is just the beginning of the warm weather, the real heat comes mid-July to mid-August.
The 72 Seasons
The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)
The micro-seasons for this week are “Plums Turn Yellow” (June 16 June 20) and “Self-Heal Withers” (June 21 – 26).
Japanese Plum
The Japanese plum (Prunus mume) is a deciduous tree in the Rosaceae (Rose) family. Other fruit trees in this family are plums, cherries, peaches, and nectarines.
The fruit of the Japanese plum tree begins to develop shortly after the flowers drop and will continue to grow until it is ripe in mid-June or July. The ripening of the fruit coincides with the beginning of the rainy season known as meiyu or plum rain. In most regions, plum rain lasts from early June to mid-July.
The fruit of the Japanese plum is a type of drupe or stone fruit. A stone fruit “is derived from a single ovary of an individual flower. The outer layer of the ovary wall is a thin skin or peel, the middle layer is thick and usually fleshy (though sometimes tough, as in the almond, or fibrous, as in the coconut), and the inner layer, known as the pit, or putamen, is hard and stony. The pit, which is often confused with the seed itself, usually has one seed or, rarely, two or three, in which case only one develops fully.”(6)
While the fruit of the Japanese plum is edible, it is considered too bitter to be eaten right off the tree. It can, however, be used to make plum wine, salted plums, and tea syrup. The fruit is also used in various jams and preserves.
Astronomical Season
June 23, the last day of week 25, is three days past the June Solstice (June 20, 2024).
The June Solstice
In the Northern Hemisphere, the June Solstice, also referred to as the Summer Solstice, marks the time when the Sun reaches its highest point in the sky. At this time we experience the longest day and shortest night of the year. In contrast, the Winter Solstice, which happens at the opposite time of the year, brings the shortest day and longest night, or the least amount of sunlight in a 24-hour period.
The summer solstice also marks the beginning of astronomical summer. This year, the summer solstice took place on June 20, 2024, at 4:50 PM.
Haiku and Kigo
The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku. The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society provides us with the following explanation for why we use kigo in haiku.
“A kigo is a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season; it’s a powerful word or phrase that can conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions. Its use in haiku, a poem of few words, is especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(9)
Visit The Haiku Foundation’s “New To Haiku: What is a Kigo?” for more information
This Week’s Kigo
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto “hot”, “summer-like”, “mid-summer rain”, and “plum rain/rainy season” are all potential kigo.
In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “sun”, “hot day”, and “long day” are all relevant summer kigo.
With all this in mind, let’s read some haiku.
Basho
Pouring the hot day
into the sea–
Mogami River
(translated by Haruo Shirane)
a falling sound
that sours my ears
plum rain
translated by Jane Reichhold)
path of the sun
the hollyhock leans into
early summer rain
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
Issa
shaking her body in the summer rain... maiden flower (translated by David G. Lanoue)
in the hot day what's buried there? crow (translated by David G. Lanoue)
Buson
A summer rain--
the terraced rice fields
have become dark
(translated by Allan Persinger)
In the hot day a sword is changed for a fan (translated by Allan Persinger)
Reichhold
long day waiting for the cove to fill with water
without wind desert sun slides into the narrowest crack
Haiku Invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu about the June Solstice or Summer Solstice.
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write!
Formatting Note: To eliminate the spaces between the lines of your haiku, hit shift-enter at the end of the line. For example,
one (shift-enter)
line two (shift-enter)
the third line (shift-enter)
Thanks to LaMon for sharing these instructions!
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About the Haiku
Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku.

Good morning and happy solstice week!
The beginning of summer has been extra busy for me and I haven’t had as much time to reply to all the comments and haiku from last week’s prompt. Nevertheless, there was a great conversation, resources shared, and new information provided about the fireflies.
Thanks to all of you for continuing to write and share your haiku. Let’s see what this week brings!
Mark
If only hot days had people exchanging swords for fans. Apparently the increased heat after a 2017 hurricane took down two thirds of the trees on their island near Puerto Rico, the monkeys there changed their ways and are less aggressive now as they share shade and conserve energy. Maybe people will follow suit.
The Reichold haiku puts me right in the desert.
Here’s one from me:
past the longest day
I walk with shadows
a crow flies on silent wings
D. ~The earth’s tilt, the moon’s pull… The sun – bakes.
Now if we could just find some ‘shadows’ …
~Happy summer. Hope the loons are doing well.
Our loons are crazily quiet. The two eggs seem overdue, we may not have chicks. But there’s also an overabundance of loons in the area, so maybe they’re not crazy. Stay cool Jules!
Even the geese that I’ve seen seem to have less gosslings this year – often I’ve seen five to seven for a pair. The one pair I saw only had two!
Avery, I too was touched by the Buson haiku. And I really like your haiku. It is multilayered, e.g., the shadows of shade trees, the shadows of troubles. And then the last line sounds almost sinister! The day may be “long” in more ways than one. Thank you for this contribution. Peace, LaMon
Or the shadows of shades; it could be read as sinister, but I was thinking of my dad, who became sick two solstices ago and whose ashes we spread at this solstice time. There were some long days. I associate crows with him, in a good way, but now with shades of sadness. Thank you for your thoughtful comments.
Wonderful ambiguity – on the brightest day the darkest shadows, the mournful silent passage of crow marking the impermanence of all things
Hi D, Thanks for sharing that information about the monkeys in Puerto Rico. If only we could learn from them.
Wonderful contrasting images with your haiku! Stay cool!
D, that’s a lovely sentiment! If only…
Love the pictures you’ve created with this haiku, D.
A very profound and beautiful poem, D.
With longer days,
Summer flowers open;
Oh my, geraniums!
https://8-arrows.com/2024/06/17/summer-solstice-2024/
I love the delight and surprise in the third line!
Thank you D. I’m glad you enjoyed this! 🙏
Hi Ashley, What a delightful haiku and the photos you shared on your site are wonderful! Have a great weekend and I hope all is well.
Thank you Mark. Have a great weekend. ☕🙋♂️
Ashley,
Your haiku is just what I noticed on my walk to and from the library. The deep red geraniums were just blooming so beautifully, as is your haiku. ~Nan
Thank you, Nancy, for your lovely comment! 🤗💐🙋♂️
splendid. Made me smile. I like this. Thanks.
Hi Ashley. This is a great poem and beautiful images. It’s lovely that you have many different colors of geraniums. I agree with everyone, the last line is a delight!
Thank you, Maddy! 🌹🙋♂️
My pleasure, Ashley!
Mark,
I’m not sure how much ‘PC’ time I’ll have this weekend. A mini retreat – the first verse of the series is here; Mini Summer Adventure the rest at the link…
https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/06/21/mini-summer-adventure-1p-xxiv-nd-6-21/
one long day
one long day
summer solstice, trip
this time ‘south’
Hot sky radiates rays of the golden globe during the longest day.
I tried to copy and paste so I could take out the line spaces but something went wonky. So I’ll try again – the link is correct though….
one long day
summer solstice, trip
this time ‘south’
Hot sky radiates rays of the golden globe during the longest day.
© JP/dh ~Jules
long days
in overdrive
hot links
Safe travels Jules.
Mark,
I’m not sure how much ‘PC’ time I’ll have this weekend. A mini retreat – the first verse of the series is here; Mini Summer Adventure the rest at the link…
https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/06/21/mini-summer-adventure-1p-xxiv-nd-6-21/
one long day
one long day
summer solstice, trip
this time ‘south’
Hot sky radiates rays of the golden globe during the longest day.
Hi Jules,
Thanks for sharing these while you are out on retreat! Its a wonderful collection highlighting an interesting series of events.
Ah… only the half of it… after picking up our ‘host’ – we went into town for lunch… and forgot where we parked! – but had a nice place to sit in the shade and with the help of three different maps and some faulty memory… we made it back (to the resort) safe and sound 😉 ~Thanks
Sounds like you are having quite the adventure!
We did venture to Yorktown…for a short visit. Got to see a youthful fife and drum corps.
Hi Jules, these are wonderful haiku. I love all your monoku as well. Glad you are having such a wonderful time on your vacation!
Maddy, vacations are too short… but still it is good to be home! ~Jules
Mark,
I’m not sure how much ‘PC’ time I’ll have this weekend. A mini retreat – the first verse of the series is here; Mini Summer Adventure the rest at the link…
https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/06/21/mini-summer-adventure-1p-xxiv-nd-6-21/
one long day
one long day
summer solstice, trip
this time ‘south’
Hot sky radiates rays of the golden globe during the longest day.
Mark,
I’m not sure how much ‘PC’ time I’ll have this weekend. A mini retreat – the first verse of the series is here; Mini Summer Adventure the rest at the link…
https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/06/21/mini-summer-adventure-1p-xxiv-nd-6-21/
one long day
one long day
summer solstice, trip
this time ‘south’
Hot sky radiates rays of the golden globe during the longest day.
Mark,
I’m not sure how much ‘PC’ time I’ll have this weekend. A mini retreat – the first verse of the series is here; Mini Summer Adventure the rest at the link…
https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/06/21/mini-summer-adventure-1p-xxiv-nd-6-21/
one long day
one long day
summer solstice, trip
this time ‘south’
Hot sky radiates rays of the golden globe during the longest day.
Mark,
I’m not sure how much ‘PC’ time I’ll have this weekend. A mini retreat – the first verse of the series is here; Mini Summer Adventure the rest at the link…
https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/06/21/mini-summer-adventure-1p-xxiv-nd-6-21/
one long day
one long day
summer solstice, trip
this time ‘south’
Hot sky radiates rays of the golden globe during the longest day.
I am not sure why this came up so many times in the same post… It was not my intent. …
Hi Jules, That has been happening recently. I don’t think it was anything you did. No worries!
~Thanks – I believe others have had some issues.
WP is at ‘it’ whatever ‘it’ is …again…. sigh
I join Avery in appreciating Buson’s “peace” haiku. That, plus the prompt, plus my normal Wednesday morning resulted in this:
my neck’s exposed
morning summer solstice…
peace vigil
LaMon
There’s more than one way to get burned. Cool haiku. Stay vigilant.
Hi LaMon, I like how you were able to pull together all the elements. Especially, the idea of sticking your neck out and peace vigil. Very well done.
LaMon,
Sunscreen, before the solstice, is my suggestion for a more peaceful vigil. Seriously, that haiku works well. ~Nan
Hi Nancy, I love the sizzling ball melts/into the lake! And I did chuckle at you response to my peace vigil haiku. Trust me, I do use sunscreen. But I still worry a bit because the shade tree behind us doesn’t keep the morning summer sun off our backs the whole hour. Peace, LaMon
Thanks, LaMon, for the compliment on my haiku.
Re-applying sunscreen (early and often) is a pain, but it is important. I have a scar on my arm that is constant reminder to wear sunscreen or sunblock as well as protective clothing (they make SPF50 clothing), yet I’m sure the damage occurred when I got burnt when I was young. I wish you peace. ~Nan
Thanks Nan, I am pretty careful. I had a melanoma removed from my neck several years ago. My dermatologist said I should wear sunscreen when I got to the mailbox. I think she was kidding.
She probably wasn’t if she’s like my dermatologist, LaMon. Mine is constantly reminding me; wear sunscreen even in the winter, even on cloudy days. Fortunately, the foundation I wear has sunscreen in it, but I also use a product from Brush On Block that is a brush on powder.
making a mountain
out of a mole
–melanoma
~Nancy Brady, 2021 published in Prune Juice #71
Hi LaMon, a very clever haiku which I enjoyed reading, combining two important sentiments… I like Nan’s commentary about the importance of wearing sunblock at all times. I know I need reminders every now and again. 🙂
I love “pouring the hot day / into the sea” and “a sword is changed / for a fan” — saying so much in these lines!
solstice picking
droplets on blueberries
my sweat
longest day
first sunflower
turns to look
Wow, I can see that sunflower and it makes me smile. I can see the blueberries too, and admire your resolve to get them picked despite the heat.
Love the sunflower turning “to look.”
Peace,
LaMon
I agree with LaMon. “Longest day” is spot on!
Great, Griffin. The haiku are so visual, I see what is going on in both of them. Nicely done. ~Nan
the one about the sunflower turning to look is beautiful.
observation: perhaps you are the sun? Sunflowers turn to the sun.
oh I get it, hot like the sun.
stay in the shade. Stay cool.
all in jest: your haiku brought it out. Thanks for sharing. Made me smile.
Not sure which key I mistakenly hit that created a dozen berry pails! Can you delete those, Mark?
berry pail
my granddaughter’s is empty
but she is full
Ha! Good for her.
Hi Griffin,
I will delete all the berry pails!
And, love that haiku. A typical pick your own berry adventure!
What a delight, LaMon!
Griffin,
This haiku just makes me smile. Your granddaughter has it right.
this one reminds me of a book I read to my boys when they were little: Blueberries for Sal. My boys loved it—kuplink, kuplank, kuplunk!
your granddaughter is full. What a lovely last line. Thanks for sharing. Blessings.
Hi Griffin, the haiku about your granddaughter and her empty berry pail is wonderful and witty..a perfect haiku and I love the poem about the sunflower turning.
I’m back from shopping.
the local fruit stand
where Mennonites write haiku
summer’s first ripe plums
At the Mennonite fruit stand there’s always a 5-7-5 message on the chalkboard to engage or inform customers. This season they’ve added a chalkboard that asks customers what they are currently reading. Pleased to write that I’m reading “HAIKU; The Last Poems of an American Icon” by Richard Wright.
Hey D. I didn’t know they wrote haiku at the farm stand. I’ll go check it out.
And the plums are tasty.
Rt 15, MoVegas
The best place for fresh peaches and plums!
Good for them, D, and good for you. What do you think of the book?
It’s a good read! As much for the biographical background as the haiku. They read differently with the info that they were written in the last eighteen months of Wright’s short life.
Autumn of his life
Comfort comes in syllables
Counting breaths and beats
(Loved your “mountain from a mole” up there.)
D, I’ll have to check the book out. Just like haiku, his life was short. Unlike haiku, it’s a shame his life was short. (and thanks).
Thank you D. What fun to be shopping at a fruit stand and come across a haiku for the customers..brilliant.
Yes, I love that they do that.
having
a picnic at 10 PM
canadian solstice
I spent my childhood summers in the Kootenays of British Columbia visiting my dad with my sister. Nothing was more exciting than summer solstice where it felt like it never became darkest night. We would have sleepovers in the Valentine’s hayloft with all our friends. We’d bring treats, sleep bags, etc, and yes, blankets to go up high on the hill to have a picnic to watch the day fade. It was truly magical.
Hi Eavonka, what a great story to go along with your poem! Sounds like an amazing time.
I suspect you have equally long days right now, Mark! Too bad about the heat though. Yipes!
The warm stretch finally ended last night. Now it is in the mid 60’s and raining. It feels much better.
Eavonka,
Wonderful haiku and story. It sounds like a fun time. Does it ever get truly dark in that area during summer? ~Nan
Well, where I was is only a few hours north of the Washington border. So, definitely still have night time, but around solstice didn’t feel pitch black at midnight. My dad went up to Yellowknife one summer to work on a huge wooden boat, and there it truly doesn’t get dark at night. But it does look different at 2 AM than at 2 PM. The photos were eerie.
Eavonka, We noticed the not quite dark when we went on a cruise to Alaska some time ago. It was a bit eerie looking out in the evening and still seeing daylight (creepy looking daylight at that). On the other hand, it was a wonderful trip for all the sights of wildlife.
There’s nothing better than an endless picnic with an endless sunset. I remember still those times from when I was a kid in south east Alaska. (Skagway)
Oh my goodness, D., those must have been amazing. I have yet to make it to Alaska, but I hope to.
Eavonka, what a marvelous haiku about a wonderful childhood memory!
Thanks, Maddy, I’m so glad your trip to Hawaii went well!
Thank you Eavonka! 🙂
I have a lot in common with the Japanese including a love of plums! Mostly I like the fresh fruit varieties followed by plum wine on ice, but every now and then umeboshi (pickled Japanese plum) is a particular kind of taste that hits just right. It’s supposed to be good for digestion. It’s one of those things you either like or hate with no middle road.
As for me, I prefer the dried variety of plums!
Hi Melanie, I have never had plume wine. It sounds like it might be really good. I do like most pickled things so I might need to try and find some umeboshi!
Hi Melanie, I love plums too, all kinds. I haven’t tried plum wine yet, but I am looking forward to it.
Mark, thanks for another informative post. The summer solstice is one of my favorite days of the year. My grandmother was born on the 21st of June. Here follow haiku referencing the summer solstice:
African violets
in bloom on Grandma’s birthday
summer solstice
~Nancy Brady
published in Three Breaths
summer solstice
the sizzling ball melts
into the lake
~Nancy Brady, 2021
solstice
the sequined clamor
of birdsong
~Nancy Brady, 2021
published in Kokako #34, April 2021
masked birds nosh
on service berries
summer solstice
~Nancy Brady, 2021
https://www.nbsmithblog.wordpress.com
PS. Saw my first firefly tonight!
They are right on time!
Hi Nan, is that last one a cedar waxwing reference? I saw my first waxwing of the season yesterday!
I am also really enjoying “the sequined clamor of birdsong”. Great word choice!
Yes, Mark, the masked birds are cedar waxwings. They are such pretty birds, aren’t they? I look forward to them every year. They showed up about a week ago, and now our service-berry tree has been picked over, with few berries remaining.
Thanks for the compliment on my word choice. I was pleased when Kokako picked this haiku up for publication. ~Nan
Beautiful memories highlight your haikus, Nancy. I enjoyed them all.
Thanks, Suzette, so kind of you to say. The haiku written about my grandmother is as true today (my African violets are blooming right now) as it was when she was living. She loved those flowers, having pots of them lined up on a window sill in her small home. Living near the lake, we have amazing sunsets. Most of my haiku are haiku moments/memories; only a few are what are described as desk-ku. (Yeah, TMI!) ~Nan
Wonderful. Thanks again for the moments. I delight.
Three sizzling kus…
What a great solstice haiku collection, Nan!
Thanks, Eavonka. So kind of you to say so. I like summer so I tend to write quite a few haiku. Some of these are a few years old although I updated the masked bird haiku with a few word changes. Is any haiku ever finished? ~Nan
Ha! I don’t change a thing once they’ve been published.
Ah, but I only changed those that have not been published, E. Masked birds and sizzling ball were never picked up for publication. I just happen to like them and they seemed to fit with the prompt Mark set.
I’m afraid you misunderstood. I was only responding to your comment about poems never being finished. I didn’t think you had changed your published poems.
That makes more sense, E. I do edit my own haiku if they haven’t been published, and I sometimes modify them (change out a fragment if the phrase still works) if I am looking for something different.
“the sequined clamor
of birdsong”
Love it! I saw cedar waxwings way back in April, haven’t seen any lately. I do enjoy them.
Thanks, D. for the compliment on my “sequined…birdsong.” We saw the cedar waxwings last week for the first time this season. Usually, we get a few “scouts” before the flock descends on our trees, but not this year. ~Nan
These are wonderful poems Nan. I love the poem about your grandmother and her love for African violets.
Thanks, Madeleine. Glad you like the haiku about my grandmother. She was special to me.
That’s lovely, Nan. 🙂
I am glad your African violets are blossoming right now. 🙂
https://benjamintonkin.wordpress.com/2024/06/21/21-6-24-haiku/
Hi Ben, beautiful poem! Thanks for sharing.
What a great time of year both hemispheres at the turn of change. Of course here in the North the welcome of warmer days is not far. Thank you Mark for the great research you do to bring the joys and changes of the season to mind.
I love these two poems:
Basho’s
Pouring the hot day
into the sea–
Mogami River
Issa’s
“in the hot day what’s buried there?
crow”
Have a wonderful weekend. Cheers.
Hi Suzette,
Thank for the comment. I too really enjoyed Issa’s “in the hot day”. So a fascinating moment to catch in haiku.
Yes, you are right…it is that great skill in capturing the moment that brings the haiku to life. Thank you Mark.
Suzette, I love your haiku. It is very inspiring.
I compose spontaneously but then alter a word here or there as needed. Unfortunately I inadvertently published whilst still composing. Here is the final version and hopefully Mark you can delete all the above. Apologies. One of the nicest, bestest things about haiku is they they are unfussy!
on longest day
we begin the move*…
torrential downpour
peaches ripening
furry testicles
of the Plant Kingdom
on this longest day
peak has passed
of this fleeting life
after punishing heat waves
come torrential tormenta
no rest in this realm of suffering
* moving house after two years building.
Hi Baron,
Best of luck with the hours move. Sounds intense and I bet the rain doesn’t help. Your haiku about that situation is great and I like that there is room for the reader to ponder “torrential downpour”.
I’ll remove the duplicates
The move will be in several stages with the last one probably being in two weeks or so. It’s a process.
We live in Veracruz inland at slightly elevated altitudes (a little lower than Denver). Coffee country. Hot air from the warmest waters in the world, the Gulf of Mexico, rush inland and confront the low mountain range where I live, so it is always humid here – and thus always lush and green with orchids and butterflies galore – but during the rainy season which in this climate belt is different from further North, is especially intense with some days it lasting all day long and being very strong every hour (that humidity from the warm Gulf + the rapid rise caused by this hill country).
Every area has its climate issues. I love the greenery here, the relative absence of foreigners, the rural culture which is like moving back fifty years (though internet came into our new village area last year and that will soon change rapidly), the fresh local food and more. But the rain is a bit much sometimes and most non-locals have allergy problems here, self included, which isn’t easy. But hey: now it’s home, and home is where the heart is, so I love it!
Hi Baron, Sounds like a pretty amazing place even with all the rain!
Well, Maybe the Mennonites will want to borrow one of your haiku during peach season. Maybe not. Sounds like a less than ideal moving day. Hope it all turns out well for you.
Baron, I hope you have successfully moved house and the rain wasn’t too bad.
first, I was just gonna leave a comment here. But then the comment got too long. Plus, I wanted to add photos and don’t know how to obtain URL for photos. So I opted for a post. It’s kinda long. Hope you enjoy it xoxo
https://selmamartin.com/week-25-summer-solstice/
thanks for reading.
Thanks for sharing this post! Great haiku, photos, and link to your adventures in wine making!
😆 thanks.
I enjoyed reading your haiku, Selma. Thank you. Always a pleasure. 🙂
Hi Mark:
I am back. I came home a few days ago. My family and I spent a week in Hawaii, it was great and it’s good to be home! I am struck by the beauty of all the haiku and comments above by my fellow poets. It was heavenly to read them all.
Happy Summer everyone!
Hi Nan, your haiku about the summer solstice and Cedar waxwings are delightful. I had to return to my search engine to discover more about these wonderful birds and I was met with fascinating information. I love the poem about your grandmother and the African violets she raised. African violets are so beautiful and they never fail to lift my spirits.
Nan and Eavonka, It’s hard to post on your threads…I thought it would be easier here.
Hi Eavonka, this is such a charming poem highlighting a wonderful experience in your childhood.
Hi D, I am charmed by your haiku. The set up at the Mennonite farm seems so interesting. I like your poem at the way top as well. It is stunning.
D, I thought it would be easier to post a response here.
Mark, I enjoyed the information about the summer/June solstice and the information about the Japanese plum. I love that the tree is from the Rosaceae (Rose) family. I enjoyed all the poems by the masters and Buson’s poem is a favorite “…a sword is changed into a fan…”, which reminds me of the biblical phrase “…turning swords into plow shares…” I marvel at the similarities of the two.
Here are my offerings for this week,
belly full
of strawberry sandwich
summer break
The above poem is similar to Griffin’s haiku about his granddaughter, ”…she is full…”, but that was not my intention. Griffin’s poem is a delight, by the way. They sell strawberry and cream sandwiches at the 7 eleven in Honolulu and we would have them and salmon musubi in the morning. I was trying to work my poem into a full moon and finally settled on “summer break.”
~ ~ ~
There are a couple of places on the Waikiki beach where these wonderful creatures show up.
a family
of sea turtles tip
into the waves
full of fish
~ ~ ~
summer solstice
swimmers
gazing at the sunrise
~ ~ ~
second day
of summer solstice
azure of the ocean
along the beach
This one panel of water along the beach became a stunning blue and it happened only once.
Hi Maddy, Sounds like you had a wonderful trip to Hawaii!
Maddy,
Many moons ago for my 25th I got to spend a week in Maui in September – It could have been summer! However on Maui anyway Hubby says you can find any climate you want – as they are all there. From tropical, freezing with snow (at the top of the mountain).
Wonderful memories – Welcome home!
Thank you Mark, I did. I hope you are having a lovely Friday! 🙂