Week 10: “Awakening Insects”

March 04 to March 10 is the tenth week of 2024.  This week, we enter the Solar Term of Awakening of Insects (Mar 05 – Mar 19), complete the micro-seasons of “Grass Sprouts, Trees Bud” (Mar 01 – Mar 05), and enter the season of “Hibernating Insects Surface” (Mar 06 – Mar 10).

Dickinson, Basho, Buson, Issa, Reichhold, and Kerouac wrote the poems selected for this week.  


The 24 Solar Terms 

The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China  (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around the city Xi’an, which was the capital of the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)

Awakening of Insects

Awakening of Insects is the third Solar Term of the year and the third Solar Term of Spring. Jingzhe (惊蛰) is the Chinese name for this season. Jingzhe (惊蛰) translates to “the weather is warming up with the first thundering in spring, awakening the insects hiding under the earth in hibernation.”(2)

Spring Plowing

Awakening of Insects is understood to be the beginning of the busy season for agricultural work.  The warming temperatures make it an ideal time to get into the fields.  There is an old Chinese proverb that says,  “Once the Awakening of Insects comes, spring plowing never rests”.(2)  This proverb highlights the importance of this season for farm workers. 


The 72 Seasons

The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai.  Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)

This week we complete the micro-seasons of “Grass Sprouts, Trees Bud” (Mar 01 – Mar 05) and enter the season of “Hibernating Insects Surface” (Mar 06 – Mar 10).

Spring Insects In Vermont

The average temperature in March in Vermont is 42°F, with the potential low temperatures of 19°F.  This means that there are not a lot of insects out at this time of year. 

However, because of the work done by the Vermont Center for Ecostudies, we know a few species that are around at this time of year.

Winter Stonefly 

Winter Stoneflies are part of the Capniidae family of insects in the order Plecoptera. Nathaniel Sharp, who wrote a short article in the Vermont Center for Ecostudies’ March 2020 Field Guide, says that Winter Stoneflies are “wingless, but most have long bodies, with darkly veined wings that lay folded across their back. As nymphs, winter stoneflies spend their lives huddled in the layer of silt and gravel beneath the stream bottom, only moving towards the surface of this layer when they are preparing to emerge as adults. Emergence occurs throughout the winter and into early spring, and adults are often seen wandering on top of the snow.”(5)

Winter Fireflies 

Winter Fireflies (Ellychnia corrusca)  are a species of lantern-less fireflies. They overwinter in the bark of trees and become active in early spring. Spencer Hardy writes in the Vermont Center for Ecostudies’ March 2020 Field Guide that these fireflies can sometimes be found in the bottom of sap buckets during sugaring season.  

Mining Bees

Mining Bees (Genus Andrena) are “dull-colored hairy bees, ranging in size from a few millimeters to the size of a small bumble bee.”  They are the most diverse species in Vermont with about 70 recorded species.  These bees have a fondness for tree sap and willow buds, both of which arrive in spring. 


Astronomical Season

March 10, the last day of week nine of 2024, is 77 days past the winter solstice and only 9 days away from the spring equinox (March 19, 2024).  

March’s New Moon

The new moon in March will occur on March 10, 2024.  A new moon occurs when the moon is directly between the Earth and the sun.  This puts the moon’s shadow side toward the earth making it difficult to see.

If we look toward the field of astrology, we find out that March’s new moon coincides with the astrological sign of Pisces (February 19 – March 20).  Jill Wintersteen, a columnist for Yoga Journal, writes the following about this time of year. 

“This new Moon in Pisces can help you understand the vastness of your energy and your potential. It’s a time to feel your interconnectedness and know that everything you desire is already yours. You do not need to control every detail. Instead, hold the vision of what you want today. Feel it, be it, and believe that it is already real. Then allow it to happen by following the flow of your life.”(8)

To learn more about March’s New Moon, read Wintersteen’s full article


“A Light Exist in Spring” by Emily Dickinson

Emily Dickinson’s (1830–1886) poetry was greatly inspired by science, nature, and the passing of the seasons.  She wrote about 500 poems about the seasons with a majority of them being focused on the spring and summer.  Here is one of her spring poems that fits well with this week.

“A Light Exist in Spring” 

A Light exists in Spring
Not present on the Year
At any other period —
When March is scarcely here

A Color stands abroad
On Solitary Fields
That Science cannot overtake
But Human Nature feels.

It waits upon the Lawn,
It shows the furthest Tree
Upon the furthest Slope you know
It almost speaks to you.

Then as Horizons step
Or Noons report away
Without the Formula of sound
It passes and we stay —

A quality of loss
Affecting our Content
As Trade had suddenly encroached
Upon a Sacrament.

(This poem is in the public domain)


Haiku and Kigo

A haiku is a short seasonal poem.

The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku.

If you have ever wondered why we use kigo in haiku, the Yuki Teikei Haiku Society provides the following explanation.

“A kigo is a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season; it’s a powerful word or phrase that can conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions. Its use in haiku, a poem of few words, is especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(9)

To dive deeper into the history and use of the kigo, visit The Haiku Foundation’sNew To Haiku” page.


This Week’s Kigo

In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “Butterflies” and “Silkworms” are listed as potential insect kigo for this week.  

 In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “Bees”, “Beetles”, “Fireflies” and “Moths” are some other potential kigo.

 Now with all this in mind, let’s read some haiku about insects in spring


Basho

moths in a straw raincoat
come listen to their voice
in a thatched hut
(translated by Jane Reichhold
learn from the journey
of a sorrowing wayfarer:
flies of Kiso.
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)

Issa

butterfly at the gate--
the child crawls, it flies
crawls, it flies...
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
my hut's lamp--
even moths don't come
to the flame
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Buson

Releasing fireflies
inside the mosquito net —
ah, fun!
(translated by Allan Persinger)

Reichhold

cloudy dawn
on my pillow
moth wing dust
still stinging
yesterday's bee
dead

Kerouac

In my medicine cabinet
  the winter fly
Has died of old age
Reading my notes –
   The fly stepping from
The page to the finger

Haiku invitation

This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu referencing spring insects.

Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write! 


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About the Haiku

Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess.  Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku. Kerouac’s haiku was retrieved from Kerouac’s  Book of Haikus.

  1. “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
  2. “6 Solar Terms of Spring”; China Educational Tours
  3. 72 Seasons App
  4. “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
  5. “Feild Guide to March 2020”; Vermont Center for EcoStudies
  6. “Winter Firefly (Ellychnia corrusca)”: iNaturalist.org
  7. “Mining Bees (Genus Andrena)”; Vermont Center for EcoStudies
  8. Wintersteen, Jill. “What the New Moon in Pisces Means for You”; Yoga Journal
  9. Kelsey, Julie Bloss. “New to Haiku: What is a Kigo”. The Haiku Foundation.
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    1. She really was–and now, Mark, has reminded me that she shares this with haiku. No wonder she’s long been one of my favorite poets!

  1. stonefly hanging
    on the porch screen
    birds flock the feeder

    astounding synchronicity, Mark, that you teach us about stoneflies the very day after a huge one appeared for an hour on my porch (genus Pteronarcys, Salmonflies)

    1. I love it when stuff like that happens! Its especially great that you were able to incorporate the stonefly into your haiku. Nice!

  2. Mark, I didn’t know there were lightningbugs that didn’t light! 🙂
    Thanks for including other poets – I think Emily is correct – there is a special light to spring.

    I’ve added some info to my verses here: Spring Insects Awaken

    1. Okay, Jules, once again you’ve enlightened me with information. This time it’s the boxelder bugs and mason bees. I’m going to have to look both up. Love the haiku and AS you’ve written, especially the mason bees ‘ku.

      We have carpenter bees that drive us crazy. They seem pretty solitary, too, but they also seem territorial.
                                  ~Nan

      1. Jules, I agree with Mark. I love your mason bees haiku, and the idea that solitary bees need homes warms my heart. I had no idea that some fire flies don’t have lights, either. I like your comment about Emily. 🙂

  3. Hi Mark and everyone:

    As always I am so grateful for your post. I just read Emily Dickinson’s poem, ” A light exists in Spring”. It’s absolutely charming and so inspiring. I am going to go back and continue to read your post and the haiku from Issa, Basho and fellow poets. 😀

    Here are my offerings

    face to face
    the spider rethinks
    his next move

    plough moon
    our backs ache from the full spring
    cleansing

    1. Nicely done, Madeleine. I really like your second one (plough moon) as it so true. Your first one just gives me the shivers, but then I am a true phobic in regards to spiders. His next move might be to prepare for his death. 😉

      Congrats on the haiga Mark created from your haiku; love it!

      By the way, Rocket Man lyrics plays into Cold, Cold Heart; you might want to Google or YouTube the song. ~Nan

      1. Awww……thanks, for the compliment on the second one. (Ha ha, that’s funny Nan) his next move, in a manner of seconds was to disappear up the zipline, out of sight!

        Thank-you, Nan. I thought Mark chose an image that worked perfectly with the haiku.

        I am looking forward to checking out, “Cold Cold Heart”. 🙂

      2. I’m so surprised you’ve not heard it, Madeleine. It was one of my favorites from last year. Elton John also did a collaboration with Brittney Spears, but in my opinion it wasn’t nearly as good.

      3. Frankly, I am just as shocked as you are. Nan, I don’t know why my kids didn’t let me know, especially my son who shares my love for his music, lol. But seriously, I am going to check it out right now:

      4. Nan, I did look up both Dua Lipa’s version with Elton and Brittany Spear’s collaboration with Elton as they are both on the above link. They are lovely. I really appreciate your suggestion of listening.. 🙂

      5. Oops, I didn’t know the link was going to make such a splash. I apologize Mark:/

      6. Hi Mark and Nan, my etiquette could use a little improvement especially on your blog. I realize now it is not really that cool to include the link on a blog that doesn’t have much to do with other participants. I tend to overshare:/ I was continuing a conversation between Nan and me from the renku session of THF. It is interesting to me because I have always loved the music and lyrics of Elton John. I didn’t realize that he had published a duet last year and I feel personally it’s hilarious that I didn’t know, considering I profess to be his fan. 🙂

      7. Glad you finally discovered the Elton John/Dua Lipa collab. Isn’t it amazing?
        As for spiders face to face, there is nothing funny about them. I would have freaked if I came face to face with a spider. ~Nan

      8. A very lovely collaboration, indeed. I have to admit Nan, and hoping not to offend…I absolutely adore spiders…there I said it! But at the same time I must say that I also understand and sympathize for those with a phobia towards spiders. Agreed–there is nothing to laugh about. Starting with my older brother, from childhood my heart would go out to him when ever he encountered one–the same with all my children. I was extracting spiders off of walls, well into their 20’s. I feel the same way about cock roaches…they have always given me the creeps. Anyway, hope you and everyone are having a nice week. 🙂

      9. I’m not offended, Madeleine, and I even know that spiders eat plenty of insects. Still, I am truly phobic when it comes to spiders. Many a night have I ripped up my bed after a dream of spiders coming down from the ceiling. As for cockroaches, I agree with you. They are creepy! ~Nan

      10. I truly understand about the spider thing, Nan:/ It’s traumatizing, it was for my brother too.:/ Yeah, thanks, they are. I wish I could be more tolerant towards cockroaches, as they are fascinating too. If I am correct the only insect in its original form to have come down from prehistoric times and they are so very intelligent. I haven’t checked my facts but I think this is correct. I can’t help but admire and respect them. I am torn… I have to laugh. lol.

    2. Oh, Maddy, ‘face to face’ may be my favorite of all your poems! Unlike some, I adore a bit of anthropomorphism. I would highly recommend you submit this to Five Fleas (Itchy Poet). It would fit in perfectly there.

      1. Thank-you Eavonka. I am honored. I will send it to “Five Fleas” right away! He was dangling in front of me, (between me and the shower head.) Lol! 🙂

      2. I wanted to thank you Eavonka for suggesting I submit it to Five Fleas and Mark too for agreeing. It’s been a lot of fun! 🙂

      3. Oh my goodness, Maddy, I completely missed that Five Fleas did publish your poem! Woo Hoo! Congratulations and never stop happy dancing!

    3. I wanted to try seeing it a different way:

      * plough moon
      a full spring cleansing
      our aching backs

    4. Maddy, I am careful about the webs of spiders – especially outside. Often in the morning there can be huge ones covered with due.

      Your verse with the plough reminds me I have work to do in my outside gardens…

  4. Another outstanding post, Mark, leaving me with so much new information. Thanks for all your links. Loved Issa’s haiku about the butterfly and the crawling, flying juxtaposition with child and caterpillar. Here are some off-the-cuff haiku (based on what I learned):

    sugar moon…
    the winter firefly drowns
    in syrup
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    new moon
    reading the novel
    The Pisces
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    first pollinators
    emerging from dead leaves
    –dandelion moon
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    Now to write my blog based on Mark’s column for the week
    https://nbsmithblog.wordpress.com

    1. I’m particularly drawn to your ‘sugar moon’ poem as I like the juxtaposition between sweetness and drowning in it.

      1. Thanks, Eavonka. I probably should have used sap rather than syrup, but I liked the juxtaposition of the drowning in sweetness, too.

      2. Thanks, Eavonka. that one wrote itself although I think using sap instead of syrup would have been more realistic. I wanted the drowning in sweetness and sugar moon though as it seemed to work better.

    2. These are lovely, Nan…I love all the moons! I didn’t know the name dandelion moon even existed! I love your two poems about life and death…how you juxtapose the winter stonefly’s new life as adults, “emerging from dead leaves.” (It must be something to see them on the snow.) I really agree with Eavonka’s comment about the winter.

      1. Hi Madeleine,
        Thanks. To be honest, I thought I made up dandelion moon and wanted it be in connection with early pollinators and leaf litter. About a year ago, we stopped pulling up dandelions in our yard because of the early pollinators; the same, too, for leaves covering flower beds. We want the pollinators. Volunteering for the past ten years or so at Old Woman Creek National Estuarine Research Center has taught me so much about keeping pollinators healthy and so much more. The more I learn ways to keep our earth healthy and pollution-free can only help my kids, my grandkids, and everyone else on this planet. I now infuse it into my poetry when I can.
        After writing dandelion moon, I googled it and found all sorts of photos and references to it, unsurprisingly much by haiku poets. Check out the photos; some are pretty awesome.
        Mark’s blog always teaches me so much, and I like writing haiku based on not only his prompt, but his other factoids he includes.

      2. Hi Nan, just checked out the pictures of the dandelions. They are amazing! Yes there are so many things to ponder on Mark’s blog. We learn so much and from each other!

      1. Hi Mark,
        Thanks so much for the compliment as well as the inspiration. You gave us the insects; I just ran with it in my haiku, as did everyone else. ~Nan

  5. I just saved this poem by Issa because I absolutely love it! Thanks, Mark.

    my hut’s lamp–
    even moths don’t come
    to the flame

    Haha, I probably shouldn’t add my own poem after that masterpiece, but this one is based on a recent experience.

    the returning
    hum of honey bees
    white blossoms

    1. I know what you mean, Eavonka, Issa’s poem makes you wonder. I am very glad you did write this poem. It’s so hopeful: honey bees are returning, a triumph really. The humming which is so comforting works beautifully with line 3. And white blossoms are a lovely surprise but then begin to realize they are a perfect juxtaposition:)

      1. Thank you so much, Maddy! I’m so glad it painted such a lovely picture for you. Spring is such a delight.

    2. Hi Eavonka,
      I am glad that you enjoyed the haiku! I am a huge fan of Issa’s work and I just love the way he is able to capture a moment and put a spin on it.
      I like how you captured the hope and expectation of spring in your haiku. So good!

      1. One of my shortcomings is that, despite knowing Issa is my favorite of the masters, I have yet to actually read a book of his works. So when people post them, I am so grateful and often surprised!

      1. Ha, you caught me in my fudge, Nan. There are all these white blossoming trees in the neighborhood, but I have no clue what they are! I don’t think they’re apple though.

      2. There is an apple tree on the other side of our fence. No blossoms yet, but they are white. I just wondered; it’s not a fudge not knowing what kind of blossom they are, Eavonka (AKA Estonia). I still can’t believe that the autocorrect changed your name.

      3. Yeah, that was a reach to change it to Estonia, but at least the first and last letters matched. I remember some of the autocorrect issues I’ve had to deal with: tusk became risk and crocuses became circuses. Funny, but also a bit sad.

  6. Issa’s haiku ‘my hut’s lamp’ — typical wonderful Issa poem. Two days ago I saw my first bumblebee of 2024. So I was glad to see it as a seasonal word. I will work on this haiku some more. (Suggestions always appreciated.)

    pulling up weeds
    pruning small shrubs
    bumblebee hovers

    I look forward to reading all your responses now.

    Peace,
    LaMon

    1. Hi, LaMon. As you don’t mind suggestions, I wondered if it weren’t better to eliminate having two -ing words. However, to do so, I added you to the scene. I know some don’t approve of that either.

      pulling weeds
      as I prune small shrubs
      first bumblebee

      I changed the ending to go with your own experience, but if not, I prefer

      a bumblebee hovers

      1. Thanks Eavonka, Actually the genesis of the haiku begin when I saw my first bumblebee of the year. But somewhere along the way, I lost the “first” word. And I love the change is in ing words. It flows much better.

    2. I am delighted with your haiku LaMon. Eavonka has often given me suggestions that perfects my haiku, with just a few words or a new arrangement. I love the material that you started off with, I must say. Both last lines that Eavonka has suggested: For me, “first bumble bee” that you had mentioned earlier, which Eavonka put as your last line is very joyous, and comes as a lovely surprise…it completes it.

    3. Hi LaMon,
      Earlier this week, I was at our local haiku club meeting and one of the members said, “I really think we should track all the suggestions one haiku gets before it gets to that final product.” I find it pretty amazing how haiku poets are often so open to sharing thoughts and ideas on poems. I workshopped one this week that we changed about 20 times before landing on a pretty decent final product. It was fun.
      I do enjoy Eavonka’s suggestions, and just in case you are interested, here is an interesting article by Jane Reichhold about verbs in haiku and the use of gerunds.
      https://www.ahapoetry.com/Bare%20Bones/BBless6.html
      I love reading this type of stuff, and I realize not everyone finds its exciting. Feel free to disregard if it doesn’t interest you.
      I hope you have a good week,
      Mark

      1. Thank you Mark for the information on sharing the link on verbs and gerunds. It is amazing how one word’s shape can affect the haiku’s final product. So fun. Have a good one!

      2. Hi Mark:
        Thank-you for posting this article by Jane Reichhhold. I really like her. It is very helpful…she also mentions about writing in the present. I appreciate everyone helping each other on this blot. I still remember my whole world be opened up when Eavonka introduced us to the “phrase fragment some weeks ago” 🙂

      3. Hi Maddy, I am glad that you enjoyed the article. I also really like using the fragment and phrase guideline for my haiku. It helps remind me about juxtaposition.

      4. Mark, this information you posted is fascinating. I like how the workshop you attended rewrote their poem 20 times! I think it’s in “the Haiku Handbook” by William J. Higginson, that the author writes he was going to speak at an international conference about haiku, taking place in Japan and he planned to begin the presentation with a haiku which he had recently composed. If I remember correctly, he and one of the Japanese delegates worked on this haiku in his hotel room for a few hours, making quite a few changes before he spoke at the conference.

      5. I really enjoyed the weekly series of the various kinds of juxtaposition you posted last spring! 🙂

      6. Hi, Maddy! It was exciting to see your poem selected in Haiku Dialogue today. Congratulations!

      7. Thanks, Eavonka. I was so excited! lol! And I love your poem! 🙂
        So happy it was about the monarch!

    4. I love it as is. It sure resembles an Issa haiku. wringing its hands, wringing its feet. (you know the one,,,)
      I love it as is, but don’t listen to me. I know nothing.

      1. Selma, I agree that Suzette’s poem does resemble an Issa haiku. But I don’t agree that you know nothing. I have been reading your poems and responses for a while…you know alot! 🙂

    5. I love it as is. It sure resembles an Issa haiku. wringing its hands, wringing its feet. (you know the one,,,)
      I love it as is, but don’t listen to me. I know nothing.

  7. Hello Mark,
    Thank you for the great information on the insects stirring as this season opens. It is a pleasure to read Emily Dickson and so fun that you chose “A Light Exists In Spring” It is I think, so true that there seems a welcoming softness in the light that only Spring offers. Here is my offering for this week: Hope you have a lovely week, Mark,

    Refunded – Haiku Seasons Challenge Week 10

    1. Hi Suzette, I am so glad that you enjoyed this week’s post! Thanks for adding your haiku to the conversation. I so appreciate the way you framed up the changing of the seasons!

  8. Mark and all. Hello. I was fascinated with your post this week (again)
    https://selmamartin.com/24-contemplation-week-10-at-season-words-awakening-insects/
    How cool it is to be paying this much attention to the goings on in my area. Wow. And just like the post indicates, the moths… wow. Good to know some things are right on schedule. I always knew the universe was right on time… Thanks for sharing the knowledge, my enthusiasm frequency runneth over.
    Bless you all.

    1. Hi Selma, I am so glad you are enjoying the posts, and your posts are pretty amazing too. Your photography is stunning and your haiku are spot on. Thanks for sharing and I hope you have a good rest of your week.

  9. Hi Mark:
    I went on google and found out there are many titles with the exact words “the things I didn’t say” … novels, rock bands, and songs concerning the Hunger Moon poem I wrote. I don’t know how that would affect my haiku, especially that it’s posted on IG. Whatever you feel is the right thing to do… I would understand if you feel it’s best that you should take it down. I would always remember your very kind gesture. 🙂

    1. I think it is fine! If there are that many songs and books with that phrase in the title, I would take that to mean it resonates with people.

    1. I’ve heard something similar. Two different broods (one 17-year cicadas and one 13-year cicadas) hatching at the same time. I remember the one in 1987 as my family lived in Dayton on the back of a forest. The sound was overwhelming as there were cicadas everywhere. I can still hear them in my head. ~Nan

  10. I love that the fragment and phrase guideline remind you of juxtaposition…I hope that will happen for me, too! Juxtaposition can be easy to forget sometimes. Thank-you very much Mark for the Congratulations! 🙂 I hope you and all are having a very nice week!

    1. I love your haiku, the worm one, like Nan. But your caterpillar haiku is so joyful. I love that you juxtapose the graffiti with it. Such a vivid visual!

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