April 15 to April 21 is the sixteenth week of 2024. This week, we complete the Solar Term of Clear and Bright (Apr 4 – Apr 19) and enter the Solar Term of Grain Rain. The micro-seasons for this week are “First Rainbows” (Apr 15 – Apr 19), and “First Reeds Sprout” (Apr 20 – Apr 24).
Basho, Issa, Buson, and Reichhold wrote the poems selected for this week.
The 24 Solar Terms
The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around Xi’an, the capital of China during the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)
Grain Rain
Grain Rain is the sixth Solar Term of the year and the sixth Solar Term of Spring. Guyu(谷雨) is the Chinese name for this season. Guyu means “Grain crops grow fast because of rain”’.(2)
Guyu Tea
In parts of southern China during Grain Rain, people drink Guyu Tea. Guyu Tea is tea made on the first day of Guyu. This tea is said to be rich in vitamins and amino acids and will help remove inflammation, improve eyesight, and perhaps, exorcise evil spirits.
The 72 Seasons
The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)
The micro-seasons for this week are “First Rainbows” (Apr 15 – Apr 19), and “First Reeds Sprout” (Apr 20 – Apr 24).
First Rainbows
In the winter, our days are short and cold because of the Earth’s orientation to the Sun. As we move into Spring, the Earth’s orientation shifts resulting in longer days and warmer temperatures.
As the Sun’s rays warm the Earth’s surface, we experience increased evaporation and more moisture in the air. With these temperature shifts, and increased atmospheric humidity, we also get more rain and thunderstorms. All these factors combine to provide ideal conditions for rainbows.
To see a rainbow, there needs to be a light source positioned behind the viewer and light must strike an atmospheric water droplet at a 42-degree angle. When the sunlight hits this water droplet, it then undergoes a refraction, or bending, as it enters and exits the droplet. The refraction and reflection of light varies due to the wavelengths of the incoming light. This variation produces the spectrum of colors seen in a rainbow: red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, and violet.(6,7,8)
Astronomical Season
April 21, the last day of week sixteen, is 33 days past the spring equinox and 60 days until the summer solstice (June 20, 2024).
Moon Phases
The Moon reached its first quarter phase at the beginning of this week (April 15). The First Quarter is seven days after the New Moon and marks the first quarter of the Moon’s orbit around the Earth. After the First Quarter, the Moon shifts to its Waxing Gibbous phase. During the Waxing Gibbous phase, the Moon’s illumination increases until it reaches the Full Moon. On April 21, the last day of this week, the Moon is in a Waxing Gibbous phase with 96.9% illumination. April’s full Moon will occur on April 23.
Haiku and Kigo
The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku. The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society provides us with the following explanation for why we use kigo in haiku.
“A kigo is a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season; it’s a powerful word or phrase that can conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions. Its use in haiku, a poem of few words, is especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(9)
Visit The Haiku Foundation’s “New To Haiku: What is a Kigo?” for more information
This Week’s Kigo
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “spring light”, “spring thunder”, and “spring rain” are relevant kigo.
In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “rain”, “raindrops”, “showers” and “rainbows” are all potential kigo.
In the World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greves, “spring rainbow” or “first rainbow” are spring kigo, while “rainbow” by itself is a summer kigo.
With all this in mind, let’s read some haiku.
Basho
spring rain—
blowing back and forth like straw coats,
river willows
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
laziness
helped out of bed
by spring rain
(translated by Jane Reichhold)
Issa
spring's first rainbow from the wheat field on my left to the western snowcaps (translated by David G. Lanoue)
a good day for a siesta... year's first rainbow (translated by David G. Lanoue)
the little crow slips so cleverly... spring rain (translated by David G. Lanoue)
Buson
Spring rain escaping from the walls of houses smoke (translated by Allan Persinger)
Spring rain
an empress reflected in the water
the hazy moon
(translated by Allan Persinger)
I cannot write in the spring rain — how nice (translated by Allan Persinger)
Reichhold
clouds drifting into sea foam rainbows
Haiku invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu referencing spring rains.
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write!
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Thank You!
About the Haiku
Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku.
- “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
- “6 Solar Terms of Spring”; China Educational Tours
- “24 Solar Terms: 5 things you may not know about Grain Rain”; ChinaDaily.com
- 72 Seasons App
- “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
- “Rainbow”: Wikipedia
- “Rainbow”: National Geographic Society Encyclopedia
- “What Causes a Rainbow?”; SciJinks.gov

Wash away my pain.
Pretty blossoms we will gain.
As tears, so is rain.
Adele,
Tears and rain are cleansing, and provide so much including flowers. Nicely done, Adele.
~Nan
Nicely put, Nan!
Thank you for your encouragement!
I know it’s not supposed to rhyme; but I cheated this week!
Adele
Hi Adele, There is so much in these lines. Well done! (Feel free to rhyme here! We are very, very loose with the rules of haiku.)
Thanks, Mark!
Adele,
Mark is right. Besides, we don’t need no stinkin’ rules (in other words, rules are made to be broken sometimes). ~Nan
One of the first things I remember learning about haiku is that we must avoid rhyming. And for years, I assumed it was absolute. However I discovered an American Japanese poet, Kenneth Yasuda (pen-name Shoson). He was forced to live in the camps where most Japanese-Americans were shamefully kept during WW II. He published a book of translated haiku from Japanese poets, including Basho, Issa, and Buson. The book ( A Pepper-Pod) closes with some of his own haiku. EVERY haiku translated or personal had ending rhyme for lines 1 and 3. So rhyme all you want to!! Here is one of his translations of Issa:
Oh, no, do not beat
Them,–these flies who wring their hands
And who wring their feet.
And one of his own:
Brushing the leaves, fell
A camellia into the soft
Darkness of the well.
Peace,
LaMon
LaMon,
Thank you for your valuable contribution. I feel better about rhyming now, and the haikus you shared are exquisite!
All the best,
Adele
Hi LaMon, Thanks for adding this information about Shoson. Really helpful.
Shoson’s work supports my thought that all haiku rules are really guidelines. They keep us within the form, and you can go beyond them when you are intentional about your choices.
Thanks again,
Hi LaMon, I wanted to also thank you for posting the excerpts of Kenneth Yasuda’s translations of two of Issa’s poems. They are very inspiring. I am looking forward to reading Shoson’s poetry book and checking out Mark’s library too… and of course to rhyming soon! 🙂
Good morning Mark. First, Issa’s “a good day” is my favorite. But it was a tough choice! Second, I looked at your book store for the first time–oh my!!! What a great selection. I will be back.
Here is my haiku:
wild flowers dance
spring rain falls
like grace
Peace,
LaMon
Hi LaMon, I was having a hard time picking a favorite too. Issa’s “a good day” is excellent. I also like Buson’s “I cannot write” and other two. I may have to do with “I cannot write” as my favorite.
I really like L2 and L3 of your haiku. “spring rain falls/like grace” is so good!
Thanks for your continued support and visiting the store!
Wonderful sense of peace in your poem, LaMon.
LaMon,
I checked out Mark’s bookstore; it does have an impressive set of books on haiku.
I like the flowers dancing in the rain. Light spring rain does feel like grace. ~Nan
LaMon, I really like your poem and I agree with Nan and Eavonka’s responses.:)
Love this!
I love the straw coats poem. The way that Basho pulls not only an image into the mind but a full sensory experience into being, with so few words… wonderful. Great post as always, Mark!
Hi Lia, Thanks for your comment! I really liked your post and poem inspired by that haiku. It was great. I hope you have a good weekend.
Thank you so much Mark for checking it out – I very much appreciate it! Likewise wishes for a good weekend!
Thank you Mark for all the great research and information you add to the delight of writing haiku /senryu peoms inspired by the seasonal changes.
I applaud your support of adding more haiku books to libraries.
Love the Buson selection:
“I cannot write
in the spring rain —
how nice”
Hi Suzette, I really liked that one too. It really makes me think about why he couldn’t write in the rain. Things were very different in Buson’s time.
I could so relate to his delight in taking a break from writing!
Suzette,
That haiku struck me, too, but then there are times I have trouble writing and it doesn’t even have to be raining. ~Nan
Me too Nan. Yes writing is a special moment and takes much energy.
Agreed, Suzette.
(All these emails got buried, my apologies for my tardiness).
Oh no worries Nan. All good. Thank you! Have a great day!
I’ll share a secret: after a good cry, standing under the sun just so, you could see rainbows on your eyelashes. Ssssh, don’t tell anyone 🤭 🌈 👏🏽 seriously, on your very own eyelashes. I know!
That is a very cool experience. I also enjoy seeing the swirling rainbow colors in soap bubbles 🙂
Thanks, Jules. So cool. 😎
Wow, Selma. I never knew that. That’s really cool, but I try to never cry. ~Nan
Try not to cry —how is that going?
😊 🤗
Thanks for the comment, Nan. Blessings.
Selma,
Most days easily enough, but sometimes it is difficult to avoid crying especially when I see injustices.
Mark,
I have been lucky enough to see many rainbows, a few double rainbows, and even one from an airplane window!
Please enjoy three verses here; https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/04/19/spring-coloreyezed-2p-xxiv-nd-4-19/
Hi Jules, Wonderful collection of poetic pairs! So many rainbows and so little time!
Indeed!
Ooh, deja ku, I also wrote a poem about crystal rainbows (but shared a different one here) as usually we don’t have rain during this season. But we do have sun year-round!
I so enjoyed your poems, Jules.
Eavonka… ~Thank you.
Off to find your verse!
spring rain in the sky
rainbows in the mind
barbarian bombs falling!
soft spring rain
smooth pebbles glistening
making mottled rainbow reflections
Nice haiku, especially like the soft spring rain ku. I hope the bombs stop falling, and soon. ~Nan
That is two haikus with a space in between but WordPress simply ignored the spaces!!
Hi Baron,
The new formatting for comments doesn’t work well for our haiku. Sorry about that.
“Spring rain in the sky” carries a lot of contrast and makes you think. I like it!
spring rain in the sky
rainbows in the mind
barbarian bombs falling!
soft spring rain
smooth pebbles glistening
making mottled rainbow reflections
These are great!
Hope the bombs stop falling too!
spring showers…
a tiny rainbow glistens
in each droplet
~Nancy Brady, 2024
#offthecuffhaiku
chalk rainbow
washed off sidewalk
–spring thunderstorm
~Nancy Brady, 2022
greening grass…
raindrops mix
with crab-apple blossoms
~Nancy Brady, 2024
#offthecuffhaiku
Hope to be back once I post these (and last week’s ku) in my blog.
https://www.nbsmithblog.wordpress.com
Hi Nan, What a great collection for this week! As I am reading these for a third time, I think “spring showers” is my favorite.
Thanks, Mark. My off the cuff haiku sometimes work, sometimes they don’t. Revision is always a possibility. ~Nan
What nice haikus, Nancy! I especially love this one:
chalk rainbow
washed off sidewalk
–spring thunderstorm
Thanks, Tracy. Kind of you to say.
It’s only the truth, Nan. 🙂
These are all a treat, Nan, but I most appreciate the full story I can create from the third one.
Thanks, Eavonka. I know what I was thinking when I wrote it. I wonder if they are the same story. ~Nan
Nan,
I loved the ‘chalk rainbow, washed off the sidewalk, spring thunderstorm’!
It evokes memories of my childhood and the childhoods of my children.
Lovely! Thank you!
Adele
Adele,
Thank you; I’m glad that they brought up good childhood memories. I can’t believe I missed your comment at the time. I’m cleaning up my inbox and just discovered this. So sorry. Nan
No problem! It’s good to hear from you!
As posted on Instagram:
For Mark.
Image: Docujeju / 173 images, Pixabay
Spring rain, on and off young bracken unfurl their leaves
my heart at sixteen
©️ selma
🍃
Hi Selma, I loved the IG post! Well done!
Selma,
I love the phrase young bracken unfurl their leaves. Beautiful!
~Nan
Thanks so dearly for seeing beauty in that phrase. It didn’t show very well here as a haiku 🤦🏽♀️ but I guess we understand. Happy Sunday, Nan.
Hum… sixteen. A time I can forget after more than four decades of wedded bilss 😉
Hello, Mark! I’ve missed your Friday posts and am happy to jump back in again. This one made me smile:
I cannot write
in the spring rain —
how nice
Here’s my attempt based on today’s weather:
freeze then thaw again
melted ice pours down like rain
from trees, not the sky!
Hi Tracy, “I cannot write” is a favorite of mine too.
Sounds like winter is hanging on where you are. Sometime those last days feel the longest!
So good to hear from you! I hope all is well.
Happy to report we had sunshine yesterday! 🙂
Tracy,
I hope spring comes your way and stays, but I understand the yo-yo weather that your haiku indicates. Stay dry and know your haiku brought a smile. ~Nan
Thank you for your good thoughts which helped bring about sunshine yesterday. Woot!
Glad your weather is improving, Tracy.
I was on a trip last week, and I’m sorry to have missed you all. Such fun to come back to rainbows!
chasing
her first rainbow
a toddler
Hi Eavonka,
Welcome back! I hope you had a good trip. Your haiku does a great job of catching that moment in time when there is so much mystery and joy in the natural world. So good!
Thank you so much, Mark. I had a great time, and I got to add another state to my list. I was in Charleston, South Carolina for a friend reunion.
I love what you said about my poem because that is exactly what I was trying to capture. 🌈
Eavonka,
Love it…I can just see this little kid, probably a little girl, chasing the rainbow. This is a keeper.
Hooray, Nan, that makes me happy!
Ah…yes I enjoyed spinning my crystals when my grands were little and they tried to ‘catch them’
I can’t recall the first rainbows my own children saw. 🙂
What a wonderful grandmother you are, Jules! You may be missing the memories of your kids, but you’ve made them with your grandkids!
I do remember other firsts with my own children… so many memories to cherish.
Each memory a gem 😉
Such a fun, endearing image.
How fascinatingly beautiful.
Hi Cindy, Thanks for the comment and I am glad that you enjoyed the post.
Thanks Mark for another interesting and inspirational post. here is my response to this weeks challenge – ‘Spring Rains’.
https://goffjamesart.wordpress.com/2024/04/20/poetry-senryu-spring-rain-fresh-blossoms-a-poem-by-goff-james/
Have great day.
Hi Goff, I really enjoyed L2 and L3 of you poem! Thanks for linking up and I hope you have a good weekend.
Thanks Mark. So pleased you enjoyed. Trusting, My Friend, you have a great weekend too.
Hi Eavonka:
Glad you had a great time! Charleston is a wonderful place. We would visit my aunt nearby in Mt. Pleasant. We would always go to Charleston for the day.
Your poem is precious. It makes me joyfully think about the time I saw a rainbow for the first time, too… and remembering my father’s explanation, lol! 😀
Thanks, Madeleine! What fun you must have had back then. It’s a beautiful place.
Rainbows have always been magical to me. I used to have a crystal that I thought my fairy godmother lived in because of the rainbows it would bring.
Awww…yeah!😀 Wow, Eavonka, that’s quite an amazing picture…your fairy godmother and rainbows in the crystal!
Wow, Nan! I love “tiny rainbow glistens ” in your first haiku. The chalk rainbow washed off by the spring thunderstorm is so tender and wonderful too! Makes me smile!
Jules, these are great poems and I really love “…spring light brings hazy memories….” I can only post replies here, as there isn’t a place above. 🙂
This is beautiful yet poignant Adele…there is so much to this wonderful poem. I love the positive light of your poem..pretty blossoms we will gain. It’s great to know is we can rhyme here, too! 🙂
I am not able to read Suzette’s poem for this week. I am not able to access it. I have loved reading all her poems in the past.
I will try again later! 🙂
Hi Mark, thank you once more for all this wonderful information.
Reading all the masters’ work on your post is very inspiring and the kigo is so interesting and fun!
Last week’s rain might be…
last spring rain
taking it
all in
Coming to the end of our rainy season
~ ~ ~
Just this morning I noticed a pretty flower and then another near the backyard gate… I assumed it was a lovely looking weed until I looked it up. Very many are pink and often appear around this time of year…ours is lavender:
rosy moon
looking every part the wildflower
creeping phlox
Hope everyone is having a very nice evening!
Hi Maddy, How exciting that you found creeping phlox by your back gate! Not to spoil anything about this Friday’s post, but April’s Full Moon is sometimes called the Pink Moon. The name Pink Moon comes from the early blooms of creeping phlox or moss phlox. You are right on schedule with the universe!
Awww, thanks Mark! You didn’t spoil anything about this Friday’s post…just added more wonderful information. Thank you always for your encouragement and help with our poems. 😀
pink moon
looking every part the wildflower
creeping phlox
Hi Maddy, this is really good!
I really like this one!
Thank you, Mark. 🙂 Made my day!
Hi Mark: If you don’t mind me posting again, I think I have it this time, I was reading they do have pink ones here in Northern California in the woods and mountains with a different name. ( There are also blue and lavender, by the same name too:
pink moon
looking every part the wildflower
woodland phlox
Hi Maddy, This also works well. I really like the you were able to identify the type of phlox that is in your area. I think it adds something positive to your poem.
Thank you, so much Mark! 🙂
In honor of Earth Day!
earth day
with white bags and garden gloves
teenagers comb the beach
https://benjamintonkin.wordpress.com/2024/04/23/23-4-24-haiku/
Hi Ben, Great poem for this week! I like the way you used “spring” in this one.
Thank you, Mark!🌈 https://melissalemay.wordpress.com/2024/04/24/🌈/
Hi Melissa, Wonderful haiku for this week! Well done!
Hi Melissa, this is a beautiful poem, I love “Sunshines through clouds. The image of the sun shining through the clouds with the rainbow is very lovely. 🙂
Thank you, Maddy.☺️
😀
Your welcome, Melissa 🙂