Week 16: “First Rainbows”

April 15 to April 21 is the sixteenth week of 2024.  This week, we complete the Solar Term of Clear and Bright (Apr 4 – Apr 19) and enter the Solar Term of Grain Rain. The micro-seasons for this week are  “First Rainbows” (Apr 15 – Apr 19), and “First Reeds Sprout” (Apr 20 – Apr 24).

Basho, Issa, Buson, and Reichhold wrote the poems selected for this week.  


The 24 Solar Terms 

The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China  (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around Xi’an, the capital of China during the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)

Grain Rain

Grain Rain is the sixth Solar Term of the year and the sixth Solar Term of Spring. Guyu(谷雨) is the Chinese name for this season. Guyu means “Grain crops grow fast because of rain”’.(2)  

Guyu Tea

In parts of southern China during Grain Rain, people drink Guyu Tea. Guyu Tea is tea made on the first day of Guyu. This tea is said to be rich in vitamins and amino acids and will help remove inflammation, improve eyesight, and perhaps, exorcise evil spirits.   


The 72 Seasons

The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai.  Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)

The micro-seasons for this week are  “First Rainbows” (Apr 15 – Apr 19), and “First Reeds Sprout” (Apr 20 – Apr 24).

First Rainbows 

In the winter, our days are short and cold because of the Earth’s orientation to the Sun.  As we move into Spring, the Earth’s orientation shifts resulting in longer days and warmer temperatures.

As the Sun’s rays warm the Earth’s surface, we experience increased evaporation and more moisture in the air. With these temperature shifts, and increased atmospheric humidity, we also get more rain and thunderstorms.  All these factors combine to provide ideal conditions for rainbows.  

To see a rainbow, there needs to be a light source positioned behind the viewer and light must strike an atmospheric water droplet at a  42-degree angle. When the sunlight hits this water droplet, it then undergoes a refraction, or bending, as it enters and exits the droplet. The refraction and reflection of light varies due to the wavelengths of the incoming light.  This variation produces the spectrum of colors seen in a rainbow: red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, and violet.(6,7,8)


Astronomical Season

April 21, the last day of week sixteen, is 33 days past the spring equinox and 60 days until the summer solstice (June 20, 2024).  

Moon Phases

The Moon reached its first quarter phase at the beginning of this week (April 15). The First Quarter is seven days after the New Moon and marks the first quarter of the Moon’s orbit around the Earth.  After the First Quarter, the Moon shifts to its Waxing Gibbous phase. During the Waxing Gibbous phase, the Moon’s illumination increases until it reaches the Full Moon. On April 21, the last day of this week, the Moon is in a Waxing Gibbous phase with 96.9% illumination. April’s full Moon will occur on April 23.


Haiku and Kigo 

The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku.  The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society provides us with the following explanation for why we use kigo in haiku. 

“A kigo is a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season; it’s a powerful word or phrase that can conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions. Its use in haiku, a poem of few words, is especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(9)

Visit The Haiku Foundation’sNew To Haiku: What is a Kigo?” for more information


This Week’s Kigo

In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “spring light”, “spring thunder”, and “spring rain” are relevant kigo. 

 In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “rain”, “raindrops”, “showers” and “rainbows” are all potential kigo. 

In the World Kigo Database by Dr. Gabi Greves, “spring rainbow” or “first rainbow” are spring kigo, while “rainbow” by itself is a summer kigo. 

With all this in mind, let’s read some haiku. 


Basho

spring rain— 
blowing back and forth like straw coats,
river willows
(translated by David Landis Barnhill
laziness 
helped out of bed
by spring rain
(translated by Jane Reichhold)

Issa

spring's first rainbow
from the wheat field on my left
to the western snowcaps
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
a good day
for a siesta...
year's first rainbow
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
the little crow
slips so cleverly...
spring rain
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Buson

Spring rain 
escaping from the walls of houses 
smoke
(translated by Allan Persinger)
Spring rain
an empress reflected in the water
the hazy moon
(translated by Allan Persinger)
I cannot write
in the spring rain — 
how nice
(translated by Allan Persinger)

Reichhold

clouds
drifting into sea foam
rainbows

Haiku invitation

This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu referencing spring rains.

Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write! 


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Thank You!

About the Haiku

Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess.  Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku were retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku.

  1. “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
  2. “6 Solar Terms of Spring”; China Educational Tours
  3. “24 Solar Terms: 5 things you may not know about Grain Rain”; ChinaDaily.com
  4. 72 Seasons App
  5. “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
  6. “Rainbow”: Wikipedia
  7. “Rainbow”: National Geographic Society Encyclopedia 
  8. “What Causes a Rainbow?”; SciJinks.gov

113 thoughts on “Week 16: “First Rainbows”

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      1. Hi Adele, There is so much in these lines. Well done! (Feel free to rhyme here! We are very, very loose with the rules of haiku.)

    1. One of the first things I remember learning about haiku is that we must avoid rhyming. And for years, I assumed it was absolute. However I discovered an American Japanese poet, Kenneth Yasuda (pen-name Shoson). He was forced to live in the camps where most Japanese-Americans were shamefully kept during WW II. He published a book of translated haiku from Japanese poets, including Basho, Issa, and Buson. The book ( A Pepper-Pod) closes with some of his own haiku. EVERY haiku translated or personal had ending rhyme for lines 1 and 3. So rhyme all you want to!! Here is one of his translations of Issa:

      Oh, no, do not beat
      Them,–these flies who wring their hands
      And who wring their feet.

      And one of his own:

      Brushing the leaves, fell
      A camellia into the soft
      Darkness of the well.

      Peace,
      LaMon

      1. LaMon,

        Thank you for your valuable contribution. I feel better about rhyming now, and the haikus you shared are exquisite!

        All the best,

        Adele

      2. Hi LaMon, Thanks for adding this information about Shoson. Really helpful.
        Shoson’s work supports my thought that all haiku rules are really guidelines. They keep us within the form, and you can go beyond them when you are intentional about your choices.
        Thanks again,

      3. Hi LaMon, I wanted to also thank you for posting the excerpts of Kenneth Yasuda’s  translations of two of Issa’s poems. They are very inspiring.  I am looking forward to reading Shoson’s poetry book and checking out Mark’s library too… and of course to rhyming soon! 🙂

  1. Good morning Mark. First, Issa’s “a good day” is my favorite. But it was a tough choice! Second, I looked at your book store for the first time–oh my!!! What a great selection. I will be back.

    Here is my haiku:

    wild flowers dance
    spring rain falls
    like grace

    Peace,
    LaMon

    1. Hi LaMon, I was having a hard time picking a favorite too. Issa’s “a good day” is excellent. I also like Buson’s “I cannot write” and other two. I may have to do with “I cannot write” as my favorite.

      I really like L2 and L3 of your haiku. “spring rain falls/like grace” is so good!

      Thanks for your continued support and visiting the store!

    2. LaMon,

        I checked out Mark’s bookstore; it does have an impressive set of books on haiku.

        I like the flowers dancing in the rain. Light spring rain does feel like grace.         ~Nan

      1. LaMon, I really like your poem and I agree with Nan and Eavonka’s responses.:)

  2. I love the straw coats poem. The way that Basho pulls not only an image into the mind but a full sensory experience into being, with so few words… wonderful. Great post as always, Mark!

    1. Hi Lia, Thanks for your comment! I really liked your post and poem inspired by that haiku. It was great. I hope you have a good weekend.

      1. Thank you so much Mark for checking it out – I very much appreciate it! Likewise wishes for a good weekend!

  3. Thank you Mark for all the great research and information you add to the delight of writing haiku /senryu peoms inspired by the seasonal changes.
    I applaud your support of adding more haiku books to libraries.

    Love the Buson selection:
    “I cannot write
    in the spring rain —
    how nice”

    1. Hi Suzette, I really liked that one too. It really makes me think about why he couldn’t write in the rain. Things were very different in Buson’s time.

  4. I’ll share a secret: after a good cry, standing under the sun just so, you could see rainbows on your eyelashes. Ssssh, don’t tell anyone 🤭 🌈 👏🏽 seriously, on your very own eyelashes. I know!

    1. Ooh, deja ku, I also wrote a poem about crystal rainbows (but shared a different one here) as usually we don’t have rain during this season. But we do have sun year-round!

      I so enjoyed your poems, Jules.

  5. spring rain in the sky

    rainbows in the mind

    barbarian bombs falling!

    soft spring rain

    smooth pebbles glistening

    making mottled rainbow reflections

    1. Hi Baron,
      The new formatting for comments doesn’t work well for our haiku. Sorry about that.
      “Spring rain in the sky” carries a lot of contrast and makes you think. I like it!

  6. spring showers…

    a tiny rainbow glistens

    in each droplet

    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    #offthecuffhaiku

    chalk rainbow

    washed off sidewalk

    –spring thunderstorm

    ~Nancy Brady, 2022

    greening grass…

    raindrops mix

    with crab-apple blossoms

    ~Nancy Brady, 2024

    #offthecuffhaiku

    Hope to be back once I post these (and last week’s ku) in my blog.

    https://www.nbsmithblog.wordpress.com

    1. Nan,

      I loved the ‘chalk rainbow, washed off the sidewalk, spring thunderstorm’!

      It evokes memories of my childhood and the childhoods of my children.

      Lovely! Thank you!

      Adele

      1. Adele,

        Thank you; I’m glad that they brought up good childhood memories. I can’t believe I missed your comment at the time. I’m cleaning up my inbox and just discovered this. So sorry. Nan

  7. As posted on Instagram:

    For Mark.
    Image: Docujeju / 173 images, Pixabay

    Spring rain, on and off young bracken unfurl their leaves
    my heart at sixteen
    ©️ selma

    🍃

      1. Thanks so dearly for seeing beauty in that phrase. It didn’t show very well here as a haiku 🤦🏽‍♀️ but I guess we understand. Happy Sunday, Nan.

  8. Hello, Mark! I’ve missed your Friday posts and am happy to jump back in again. This one made me smile:
    I cannot write
    in the spring rain —
    how nice

    Here’s my attempt based on today’s weather:
    freeze then thaw again
    melted ice pours down like rain
    from trees, not the sky!

    1. Hi Tracy, “I cannot write” is a favorite of mine too.
      Sounds like winter is hanging on where you are. Sometime those last days feel the longest!
      So good to hear from you! I hope all is well.

    2. Tracy,

        I hope spring comes your way and stays, but I understand the yo-yo weather that your haiku indicates. Stay dry and know your haiku brought a smile.       ~Nan

  9. I was on a trip last week, and I’m sorry to have missed you all. Such fun to come back to rainbows!

    chasing

    her first rainbow

    a toddler

    1. Hi Eavonka,
      Welcome back! I hope you had a good trip. Your haiku does a great job of catching that moment in time when there is so much mystery and joy in the natural world. So good!

      1. Thank you so much, Mark. I had a great time, and I got to add another state to my list. I was in Charleston, South Carolina for a friend reunion.

        I love what you said about my poem because that is exactly what I was trying to capture. 🌈

    2. Ah…yes I enjoyed spinning my crystals when my grands were little and they tried to ‘catch them’

      I can’t recall the first rainbows my own children saw. 🙂

      1. What a wonderful grandmother you are, Jules! You may be missing the memories of your kids, but you’ve made them with your grandkids!

  10. Hi Eavonka: 

     Glad you had a great time!  Charleston is  a wonderful place.   We would visit my aunt nearby in Mt. Pleasant. We would always go to Charleston for the day. 

        Your poem is precious.  It makes me joyfully think about the time I saw a rainbow for the first time, too… and remembering my father’s explanation, lol! 😀 

    1. Thanks, Madeleine! What fun you must have had back then. It’s a beautiful place.

      Rainbows have always been magical to me. I used to have a crystal that I thought my fairy godmother lived in because of the rainbows it would bring.

      1. Awww…yeah!😀 Wow, Eavonka, that’s quite an amazing picture…your fairy godmother and rainbows in the crystal!

  11. Wow, Nan!  I love “tiny rainbow glistens ” in your first haiku.   The chalk rainbow washed off by the spring thunderstorm is so tender and wonderful too! Makes me smile!

  12. Jules, these are great poems and I really love “…spring light brings hazy memories….” I can only post replies here, as there isn’t a place above. 🙂

  13. This is beautiful yet poignant Adele…there is so much to this wonderful poem. I love the positive light of your poem..pretty blossoms we will gain. It’s great to know is we can rhyme here, too! 🙂

  14. I am not able to read Suzette’s poem for this week. I am not able to access it. I have loved reading all her poems in the past.

  15. Hi Mark, thank you once more for all this wonderful information.  

    Reading all the masters’ work on your post is very inspiring and the kigo is so interesting and fun!

    Last week’s rain might be…

    last spring rain

    taking it 

    all in

        

     Coming to the end of our rainy season

              ~  ~  ~

    Just this morning I noticed a pretty flower and then another near the backyard gate…  I assumed it was a lovely looking weed until I looked it up. Very many are pink and often appear around this time of year…ours is lavender: 

    rosy moon

    looking every part the wildflower

    creeping phlox

    Hope everyone is having a very nice evening!

    1. Hi Maddy, How exciting that you found creeping phlox by your back gate! Not to spoil anything about this Friday’s post, but April’s Full Moon is sometimes called the Pink Moon. The name Pink Moon comes from the early blooms of creeping phlox or moss phlox. You are right on schedule with the universe!

      1. Awww, thanks Mark! You didn’t spoil anything about this Friday’s post…just added more wonderful information. Thank you always for your encouragement and help with our poems. 😀 

        pink moon

        looking every part the wildflower

        creeping phlox 

      2. Hi Mark: If you don’t mind me posting again, I think I have it this time,   I was reading they do have pink ones here in Northern California in the woods and mountains with a different name.  ( There are also blue and lavender, by the same name too: 

        pink moon

        looking every part the wildflower 

        woodland phlox

      3. Hi Maddy, This also works well. I really like the you were able to identify the type of phlox that is in your area. I think it adds something positive to your poem.

    1. Hi Melissa, this is a beautiful poem, I love   “Sunshines through clouds. The image of the sun shining through the clouds with the rainbow is very lovely. 🙂

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