Week 37: “White Dew”

September 09 –  September 15 is the 37th week of 2024.  This week, we are in the meteorological season of fall but remain in astronomical summer until the autumnal equinox on September 22, 2024. 

At this time, we are also in the Solar Term of White Dew (Sep 08 – Sept 21) and enter the micro-season of “Dew Glistens White on Grass” (Sep 08 – Sep 12).

Basho, Issa, Buson, and Reichhold wrote the poems selected for this week.


The 24 Solar Terms 

The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China  (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around Xi’an, the capital of China during the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)

White Dew

White Dew is the fifteenth Solar Term of the year and the third Solar Term of Autumn. Bailu (白露) is the Chinese name for this season.  Bailu (白露) means “white dew marks the beginning of cool weather”.(2)  

During White Dew, the temperature starts to drop rapidly and there is more rain.  Tea, rice liquor, and sweet potatoes are traditional foods for this season.(2)


The 72 Seasons

The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai.  Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)

The micro-season for this week is “Dew Glistens White on Grass” (Sep 08 – Sep 12). 

About Dew

Dew is the term used to describe the tiny water droplets that form on objects near the ground. Dew forms when the air surrounding these objects cools to the dew point. The dew point is the temperature at which water vapor condenses into liquid.

There are several conditions that promote dew formation including:

  • Warm days: Warmer days allow more moisture to evaporate into the air, increasing the potential for dew.
  • Higher humidity: High humidity means there is more water vapor in the air.
  • Light winds: Light winds prevent the mixing of air masses with different moisture levels, making it easier for dew to form.
  • Moist soil: Moist soil adds extra moisture to the air, aiding in dew formation.
  • Clear night skies: Clear skies promote rapid cooling of the ground and objects, encouraging condensation.

There are also a few conditions that will disrupt dew formation. These conditions are:

  • High winds: Strong winds mix air masses, preventing dew from forming.
  • Cold temperatures: If the temperature drops to or below freezing (32°F or 0°C), frost will form instead of dew.
  • Arid climates: Dry regions may lack the moisture necessary to produce dew.

Haiku, Kigo, and Saijiki

The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku. A kigo “a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season.”(6) It can “conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions.”(7) When used in a haiku, it is “especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(7)

A saijiki is a dictionary of season words, or kigo, paired with haiku using that season word.  A saijiki is a reference and tool for the poet that is divided into five seasons (Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, and New Year) and separated into seven categories.

In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, each of the five seasons has seven categories of words.

  • Seasons
  • Heavens
  • Earth
  • Humanity
  • Observances
  • Animals
  • Plants

While this document doesn’t include haiku for each season word, it is helpful in understanding what words may be kigo.

In  A Dictionary of Haiku, Jane Reichhold’s English language saijiki representing her location and experiences, she follows the five seasons structure with some slight differences in categories.  Reichhold’s categories are:

  • Moods
  • Occasions
  • Celestial 
  • Terrestrial
  • Livelihood
  • Animals 
  • Plants

Both Reichhold’s Dictionary and Yamamoto’s Essential Season Words are helpful in understanding the role and use of kigo in haiku.


This Week’s Kigo and Haiku

In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “fog”, ”dew”, “dew chill”, and “dew frost” are all relevant kigo for this week. 

In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “fog”, “mist”, and “morning dewt” are also relevant kigo.

Now, let’s read some haiku. 


Basho

deep into autumn- 
a butterfly sipping 
chrysanthemum dew
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
without dropping
its bright white dew,
a bush clover sways
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
a narrow path, 
wire grass blossoms
filled with dew.
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)

Issa

even among silver
dewdrops...
some big, some little
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
amid dewdrops
it triggers nostalgia...
hackberry tree
(translated by David G. Lanoue)
bell for the ancestors--
in falling dewdrops
it rings
(translated by David G. Lanoue)

Buson

The dewy grass
silently weeps
in the dying sun 
(translated by Allan Persinger)
After a short night
on the caterpillar’s hairs
dew drops
(translated by Allan Persinger)

Reichhold

morning dews
coming out a cedar house
the whole forest
broken fence
river valley fog patches
the gaping holes

Haiku invitation

This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu about dew or  morning fog

Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write! 

Formatting Note:  To eliminate the spaces between the lines of your haiku, hit shift-enter at the end of the line.  For example,

one (shift-enter)
line two (shift-enter)
the third line (shift-enter)


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A Local Saijiki Project

The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society, explains that a saijiki is useful for poets, “naturalists, and people interested in the natural and cultural history of an area.”  The saijiki contains seasonal words, plus haiku that demonstrate the poetic qualities of the words.

The creation of a local saijiki, one that represents an individual community, always felt like a big, daunting, and yet worthwhile project.  So, I have decided to try and create my own saijiki. I am not sure how this will turn out, but if you are interested in joining me and creating your own saijiki, I have created a saijiki worksheet to get you started.  If nothing else, this is a good exercise in noticing the natural world and writing haiku. Let’s see where this project takes us! 

About Today’s Haiku

Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku was retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku.

References:

  1. “The 24 Solar Terms”; China Educational Tours
  2. “6 Solar Terms of Autumn”; China Educational Tours
  3. 72 Seasons App
  4. “Japan’s 72 Microseasons”; Nippon.com
  5. “Dew”; National Geographic
  6. “Dew”; Wikipedia
  7. New To Haiku: What is a Kigo?

85 thoughts on “Week 37: “White Dew”

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  1. Looking forward to read your blog after work. Will post the haiku though. Often inspired early morning.

    Driving my C-Max.

    It’s not summer anymore.

    Early morning fog.

  2. Thanks (again!) Mark. One of the exercises I have used in teaching haiku is to identify seasonal words that they might then use in their haiku. Here is a haiku I wrote several years ago:

    thinking together
    seven male theologian
    room full of fog

    I think we need a female or two 🙂

    Peace,
    LaMon

      1. Female theologians often have different perspectives which could have helped us to see a different way to whatever truth we might have been grappling with. I wrote that haiku several years ago and was probably just bored 🙂

      2. LaMon,

        I understand being bored in a meeting and writing haiku about it, sometimes snarky ones at that. Still, loved your ku about the theologians (and having a theologian for a spouse helps). ~nan

    1. Hi LaMon,

      I don’t know much about monoku yet and still am not sure when a line is a monoku. It continues to be a learning process for me. Your monoku works so well with the haiku…brilliant, both achieving a very witty, effect. I couldn’t help a good chuckle!

  3. Another great post, Mark, explaining about the formation of dew. Once again, your blog is so informative. Thanks for sharing. and now I will share some of my haiku.

    morning dew
    the cat leaves paw prints
    on our floor
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024
    #offthecuffhaiku

    a gray cat emerges
    from the fog
    –autumn morn
    ~Nancy Brady, 2023 (published in Chrysanthemum Issue 31)

    dew drops cling
    to the spider’s web
    –sunny morning
    ~Nancy Brady, 2024
    #offthecuffhaiku

    http://www.nbsmithblog.wordpress.com

    1. Hi Nan, “the gray cat” is my favorite of this collection. Although, as I read “morning dew” a second time, it may be my favorite. They are all great!
      Thanks for the kind words about the post. I hope you have a good weekend!

      1. Hi Mark, thank you for the kind words on my haiku. I like that you can’t really pick a favorite. That means something worked.

        Have a fabulous weekend, too. ~Nan

    2. I love these poems, Nan, especially the first two. My favorite is “the cat leaves paw prints”. I also enjoyed reading your third..I can see the sparkle of the spider web. Wonderful.

      1. Thanks, Madeleine, for your always positive comments on my haiku. There is something about seeing dew sparkling in spider webs in the early morning sun (especially if I don’t see the arachnid). The first haiku is “slice of life” as our cat leaves paw prints on the floor (and our hearts). ~Nan

  4. Thank you Mark for the great information on dew. I had no idea that: “Clear skies promote rapid cooling of the ground and objects, encouraging condensation.” I really enjoy the knowledge you share each week, that both informs and inspires thought. Thank you. Love Basho’s poems always my favorite:

    “deep into autumn- 
    a butterfly sipping 
    chrysanthemum dew”

    1. Hi Suzette, Thanks! I am glad that you enjoy the posts and haiku. I often switch back and forth between haiku by Basho and Issa as my favorite. I am torn between the two this week.

      1. Thanks again Mark.

        Also, I should have mentioned in my earlier comment that I like and was inspired by your first point about the “in-between” states of “almost meteorological season of fall but remain in astronomical summer until the autumnal equinox on September 22, 2024.”
        A whole list of ideas for poems spring to mind on that one point alone. Thanks for your inspirations Mark.

  5. Mark,

    Thanks again for all of your information and encouragement. I’ve a series so I’ll post them all here, but there is an information link about shrews at my post about Moving On… here; https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/09/13/nd-09-13-xxiv-issho-ni-kaita-retrans/

    Moving On…

    all that’s left
    white dew of the dawn
    tattered silk

    Grandmother Zipper Spider has moved on, I’m sure we will meet again…

    slow to move
    weighted by her meal
    shrew dinner

    Grandmother Zipper Spider might have made a tasty snack for a shrew.

    little beast
    with big appetite
    and short life

    Grandmother Zipper Spider’s daughters may have left egg sacks… they’ll be more 

    © JP/dh (Jules

    I don’t really know why the spider isn’t there anymore, but the verse makes a good story 🙂

    Happy weekend all… enjoy the cooler temps or the return of spring depending on where you are.

  6. that little drop
    on the tiny hairs on your upper lip
    glistening like early morning dew…

    fog creeping down moonlit hill
    a slowly drifting company of ghosts
    just before the dawn

    sinuous skeins of all-pervasive fog
    wrapping liquid tentacles of moisture
    thousand of dew drops in its wake

    morning after, sunrise:
    dissolving fog drifting over the pastures
    on every blade a sparkling drop of dew

    2024/09/13 Friday 10:55

    1. These verses are beautiful, Baron. The second one is my favorite…there is a lot of imagery and I love the juxtaposition of ghosts and fog, bringing to mind that Halloween is coming up. 🙂

  7. Hi Mark and Everyone, I loved reading all about the dew…we have been having high winds recently and that might be why I can hardly see any dew on our plants. I intend to go back to reread this section as well as the poems of the masters.  I have to say that Buson’s  “deep into autumn…” steals the show for me.  It’s been very cold in the morning for a while and through the morning it warms up and becomes quite hot in the afternoon.

    sunrise

    the fog lightens

    ~  ~  ~

    going out to see the white dew

    ~  ~  ~

    I count five grains

    on the tomato

    white dew

    ~  ~  ~

    dew chill

    in the morning 

    I wear my coat to water

    Hope everyone is having a nice Friday.  I loved reading all the beautiful poetry and will be back soon to reread.

    1. Hi Maddy, Basho’s “deep in autumn” seems to be a favorite. It is a good one!
      Great collection of dew-inspired haiku! “dew chill” is my favorite.

    2. Enjoy them all, Madeleine, but I find the tomato haiku particularly intriguing. Maybe because of the scarcity of tomato haiku. Have a wonderful weekend dealing with the dew chill. ~Nan

    3. Hi Maddy,

      What a great and heartwarming collection of poems you wrote, I was inspired by “counting grains of dew” and your last poem:

      “Dew chill

      in the morning

      I wear my coat to water”

      -the imagery speaks volumes of the time of day, the season the ideas and the poem’s mood through the author’s sharp senses. I enjoyed the read and have re-read it several times.

    4. Maddy,

      I’ve been wearing my flannel shirts in the cool morning to water my plants. I’m also waiting until the sun is at least up and it is slightly warmer – sometimes around 8am. Almost shocking last week when it was below 50F in the morning.

      I’ve been away for a few days… Very windy at the shore. Not so much here, but I did see cows lying down on the way home (old wives tale is that when thte cows lie down it is going to rain!).

      Fun ‘ku about white dew.

      1. Hi Jules, oh my! I had no idea that it was below 50F in the morning…brrrr. Yes, a good idea to water, a little later. That’s great about wearing the flannels! I love to stay in my p.j.s, so I throw my coat over when I’m watering in the morning:) Oh well… I had never heard of that wives tale…its’s a great one. Although I love the rain, it doesn’t have to start right away, right? Thanks, Jules, it was fun writing about it. 🙂

      2. Maddy…
        Nature is so inspiring…
        Have you heard about the forecast of rain by leaves of trees turnig over? Supposedly it is so the leaves can ‘drink from the underside’ without having to wait for the water to be soaked up and spread through the roots, trunck and branches… but I’m not sure how true that is either. Since when it is windy the leaves will turn anyway 😉

      3. Yes, it’s true, Jules… Thank you for mentioning this, I was somewhat perturbed as to why the leaves to many plants of ours have been turning upside down, recently…as a result, I have started watering more often. …Yes, that could be it too, as It has been very windy over here, recently.)

  8. Hello All. I love how folks jump right in to meet Mark’s challenge.

    moonflower under the fog spirits lift

    an ant drinks
    from a leaf…
    morning dew

      1. Thanks, LaMon.

        I’m new to monoku so I practice what Roberta Beary calls shortku:
        one line one breath + season in ten syllables.

        ****

        27 haiku with “Autumn” mentioned and 10 with “Fall”

        How do you organize and RETRIEVE your haiku?

        Thanks, Darcy

      2. Thanks for explaining a structure for the shortku. I like it. Concerning your question, I have written a lot haiku related to readings from the Bible and other religious books. These are saved according to the name of the book. The rest are simply in a folder named “haiku poems”. Then I use the search engine to look for the needed word in that folder. I have over 1000 haiku in that last folder. (I’m sure 900+ of them could be improved with some attentive rewriting!) LaMon

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