September 09 – September 15 is the 37th week of 2024. This week, we are in the meteorological season of fall but remain in astronomical summer until the autumnal equinox on September 22, 2024.
At this time, we are also in the Solar Term of White Dew (Sep 08 – Sept 21) and enter the micro-season of “Dew Glistens White on Grass” (Sep 08 – Sep 12).
Basho, Issa, Buson, and Reichhold wrote the poems selected for this week.
The 24 Solar Terms
The 24 solar terms were created by farmers in ancient China (206 BCE and 24 CE) to help guide their agricultural activities. Each solar term is 15 days long and is based on the climate around Xi’an, the capital of China during the Han Dynasty (206 BCE to 220 CE). (1)
White Dew
White Dew is the fifteenth Solar Term of the year and the third Solar Term of Autumn. Bailu (白露) is the Chinese name for this season. Bailu (白露) means “white dew marks the beginning of cool weather”.(2)
During White Dew, the temperature starts to drop rapidly and there is more rain. Tea, rice liquor, and sweet potatoes are traditional foods for this season.(2)
The 72 Seasons
The 72-season calendar was established in 1685 by Japanese astronomer Shibukawa Shunkai. Each season lasts for about 5 days and offers “a poetic journey through the Japanese year in which the land awakens and blooms with life and activity before returning to slumber.”(4)
The micro-season for this week is “Dew Glistens White on Grass” (Sep 08 – Sep 12).
About Dew
Dew is the term used to describe the tiny water droplets that form on objects near the ground. Dew forms when the air surrounding these objects cools to the dew point. The dew point is the temperature at which water vapor condenses into liquid.
There are several conditions that promote dew formation including:
- Warm days: Warmer days allow more moisture to evaporate into the air, increasing the potential for dew.
- Higher humidity: High humidity means there is more water vapor in the air.
- Light winds: Light winds prevent the mixing of air masses with different moisture levels, making it easier for dew to form.
- Moist soil: Moist soil adds extra moisture to the air, aiding in dew formation.
- Clear night skies: Clear skies promote rapid cooling of the ground and objects, encouraging condensation.
There are also a few conditions that will disrupt dew formation. These conditions are:
- High winds: Strong winds mix air masses, preventing dew from forming.
- Cold temperatures: If the temperature drops to or below freezing (32°F or 0°C), frost will form instead of dew.
- Arid climates: Dry regions may lack the moisture necessary to produce dew.
Haiku, Kigo, and Saijiki
The kigo, or season word, is one of the key parts of the haiku. A kigo “a poetic device used in haiku to denote a season.”(6) It can “conjure up many allusions, historical references, spiritual meanings, and/or cultural traditions.”(7) When used in a haiku, it is “especially effective because of this power to expand its meaning beyond the literal and to create a larger aura of seasonal mood, historical/ literary context, and/or cultural implications.”(7)
A saijiki is a dictionary of season words, or kigo, paired with haiku using that season word. A saijiki is a reference and tool for the poet that is divided into five seasons (Spring, Summer, Autumn, Winter, and New Year) and separated into seven categories.
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, each of the five seasons has seven categories of words.
- Seasons
- Heavens
- Earth
- Humanity
- Observances
- Animals
- Plants
While this document doesn’t include haiku for each season word, it is helpful in understanding what words may be kigo.
In A Dictionary of Haiku, Jane Reichhold’s English language saijiki representing her location and experiences, she follows the five seasons structure with some slight differences in categories. Reichhold’s categories are:
- Moods
- Occasions
- Celestial
- Terrestrial
- Livelihood
- Animals
- Plants
Both Reichhold’s Dictionary and Yamamoto’s Essential Season Words are helpful in understanding the role and use of kigo in haiku.
This Week’s Kigo and Haiku
In The Five Hundred Essential Japanese Season Words as selected by Kenkichi Yamamoto, “fog”, ”dew”, “dew chill”, and “dew frost” are all relevant kigo for this week.
In Jane Reichhold’s A Dictionary of Haiku, “fog”, “mist”, and “morning dewt” are also relevant kigo.
Now, let’s read some haiku.
Basho
deep into autumn-
a butterfly sipping
chrysanthemum dew
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
without dropping
its bright white dew,
a bush clover sways
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
a narrow path,
wire grass blossoms
filled with dew.
(translated by David Landis Barnhill)
Issa
even among silver dewdrops... some big, some little (translated by David G. Lanoue)
amid dewdrops it triggers nostalgia... hackberry tree (translated by David G. Lanoue)
bell for the ancestors-- in falling dewdrops it rings (translated by David G. Lanoue)
Buson
The dewy grass silently weeps in the dying sun (translated by Allan Persinger)
After a short night on the caterpillar’s hairs dew drops (translated by Allan Persinger)
Reichhold
morning dews coming out a cedar house the whole forest
broken fence river valley fog patches the gaping holes
Haiku invitation
This week’s haiku invitation is to write a haiku or senryu about dew or morning fog
Share your haiku in the comments below, or post on your page and link back. I can’t wait to read what you write!
Formatting Note: To eliminate the spaces between the lines of your haiku, hit shift-enter at the end of the line. For example,
one (shift-enter)
line two (shift-enter)
the third line (shift-enter)
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A Local Saijiki Project
The Yuki Teikei Haiku Society, explains that a saijiki is useful for poets, “naturalists, and people interested in the natural and cultural history of an area.” The saijiki contains seasonal words, plus haiku that demonstrate the poetic qualities of the words.
The creation of a local saijiki, one that represents an individual community, always felt like a big, daunting, and yet worthwhile project. So, I have decided to try and create my own saijiki. I am not sure how this will turn out, but if you are interested in joining me and creating your own saijiki, I have created a saijiki worksheet to get you started. If nothing else, this is a good exercise in noticing the natural world and writing haiku. Let’s see where this project takes us!
About Today’s Haiku
Basho’s haiku were retrieved from “Matsuo Bashō’s haiku poems in romanized Japanese with English translations” Editor: Gábor Terebess. Issa’s haiku were retrieved from David G. Lanoue’s Haiku Guy. Buson’s haiku was retrieved from Foxfire: the Selected Poems of Yosa Buson, a Translation by Allan Persinger. Jane Reichhold’s haiku was retrieved from the Dictionary of Haiku.
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Looking forward to read your blog after work. Will post the haiku though. Often inspired early morning.
Driving my C-Max.
It’s not summer anymore.
Early morning fog.
So descriptive, Adele. The tendrils of fog seen in the morning making drives a bit hazardous (and freaky). ~Nan
Thank you, Nan!
Hi Adele, This one captures the moment perfectly! My morning commute was also through the thick morning fog!
Thank you for your always encouraging feedback, Mark!
I really like this haiku, Adele. I agree with Nan, it’s very descriptive…full of imagery! First time I have heard of a C-Max… I looked it up!
Thanks, Maddy! They don’t make those cars anymore.
Your welcome, Adele! …I didn’t realize they are also hybrid.
Thanks (again!) Mark. One of the exercises I have used in teaching haiku is to identify seasonal words that they might then use in their haiku. Here is a haiku I wrote several years ago:
thinking together
seven male theologian
room full of fog
I think we need a female or two 🙂
Peace,
LaMon
LaMon,
Cute ku, and if there were a couple females, would there be less fog?
~Nan
PS. Love reading your haiku on your blog, too.
That is a good question.
Double thanks Nan!!
Female theologians often have different perspectives which could have helped us to see a different way to whatever truth we might have been grappling with. I wrote that haiku several years ago and was probably just bored 🙂
LaMon,
I understand being bored in a meeting and writing haiku about it, sometimes snarky ones at that. Still, loved your ku about the theologians (and having a theologian for a spouse helps). ~nan
Hi LaMon, This one is great! I love the image it creates.
Hi La Mon…a delightful haiku and one lined commentary. I enjoyed its humor…we got our first thick fog of the season, this morning!
Hi LaMon,
I don’t know much about monoku yet and still am not sure when a line is a monoku. It continues to be a learning process for me. Your monoku works so well with the haiku…brilliant, both achieving a very witty, effect. I couldn’t help a good chuckle!
Thanks Maddy, I wasn’t writing the female line as a monoku, but just a bit of fun–that was probably also true!
It’s a joy LaMon.🙂 Thank you for sharing your process for filing haiku. It’s getting me thinking of the kind of filing system I need:)
Another great post, Mark, explaining about the formation of dew. Once again, your blog is so informative. Thanks for sharing. and now I will share some of my haiku.
morning dew
the cat leaves paw prints
on our floor
~Nancy Brady, 2024
#offthecuffhaiku
a gray cat emerges
from the fog
–autumn morn
~Nancy Brady, 2023 (published in Chrysanthemum Issue 31)
dew drops cling
to the spider’s web
–sunny morning
~Nancy Brady, 2024
#offthecuffhaiku
http://www.nbsmithblog.wordpress.com
Wonderful haikus Nancy. The imagery of the cat’s paw making its mark in highlighting the dew is beautiful and brilliant!
Thanks, Suzette, that is so kind of you to say. What I was trying to say must have been effective–again, thanks! ~Nan
You are most welcome, Nan. Wishing you a lovely weekend!
Hi Nan, “the gray cat” is my favorite of this collection. Although, as I read “morning dew” a second time, it may be my favorite. They are all great!
Thanks for the kind words about the post. I hope you have a good weekend!
Hi Mark, thank you for the kind words on my haiku. I like that you can’t really pick a favorite. That means something worked.
Have a fabulous weekend, too. ~Nan
Nice haiku!! I too like dew-spangled spider webs!
Peace,
LaMon
Thanks, LaMon. Appreciate it. Peace, Nan
I love these poems, Nan, especially the first two. My favorite is “the cat leaves paw prints”. I also enjoyed reading your third..I can see the sparkle of the spider web. Wonderful.
Thanks, Madeleine, for your always positive comments on my haiku. There is something about seeing dew sparkling in spider webs in the early morning sun (especially if I don’t see the arachnid). The first haiku is “slice of life” as our cat leaves paw prints on the floor (and our hearts). ~Nan
Hi Nan, I agree there is too! 🙂 Awww, cat paws…so precious:)
Thank you Mark for the great information on dew. I had no idea that: “Clear skies promote rapid cooling of the ground and objects, encouraging condensation.” I really enjoy the knowledge you share each week, that both informs and inspires thought. Thank you. Love Basho’s poems always my favorite:
“deep into autumn-
a butterfly sipping
chrysanthemum dew”
Hi Suzette, Thanks! I am glad that you enjoy the posts and haiku. I often switch back and forth between haiku by Basho and Issa as my favorite. I am torn between the two this week.
Thanks again Mark.
Also, I should have mentioned in my earlier comment that I like and was inspired by your first point about the “in-between” states of “almost meteorological season of fall but remain in astronomical summer until the autumnal equinox on September 22, 2024.”
A whole list of ideas for poems spring to mind on that one point alone. Thanks for your inspirations Mark.
Mark,
Thanks again for all of your information and encouragement. I’ve a series so I’ll post them all here, but there is an information link about shrews at my post about Moving On… here; https://julesinflashyfiction.wordpress.com/2024/09/13/nd-09-13-xxiv-issho-ni-kaita-retrans/
Moving On…
all that’s left
white dew of the dawn
tattered silk
Grandmother Zipper Spider has moved on, I’m sure we will meet again…
slow to move
weighted by her meal
shrew dinner
Grandmother Zipper Spider might have made a tasty snack for a shrew.
little beast
with big appetite
and short life
Grandmother Zipper Spider’s daughters may have left egg sacks… they’ll be more
© JP/dh (Jules
I don’t really know why the spider isn’t there anymore, but the verse makes a good story 🙂
Happy weekend all… enjoy the cooler temps or the return of spring depending on where you are.
Hi Jules, You did create a great story here! I am looking forward to heading to your page to read about shrews.
🙂
JP, I love the trio of Grandmother Zipper haiku and AS (not fond of spiders), but the trio make an intriguing story. Happy weekend to you, too. ~Nan
(((Hugs))) ~Thanks
Hi Jules, these haiku are so creative and delightful. Your first is my favorite.
A fellow blogger wrote about a Grandfather Bee… That gave me the idea… 🙂
It’s rather wonderful how one idea can spark another … each one unique!
that little drop
on the tiny hairs on your upper lip
glistening like early morning dew…
fog creeping down moonlit hill
a slowly drifting company of ghosts
just before the dawn
sinuous skeins of all-pervasive fog
wrapping liquid tentacles of moisture
thousand of dew drops in its wake
morning after, sunrise:
dissolving fog drifting over the pastures
on every blade a sparkling drop of dew
2024/09/13 Friday 10:55
Hi Baron, What a collection! It seems like the dew and morning fog provided you with some poetic inspiration! Wonderful.
All are wonderful ‘ku, but the alliteration of sinuous skeins might be my favorite. On the other hand, the picture you draw with your words on the last one is superb, Baron. ~Nan
These verses are beautiful, Baron. The second one is my favorite…there is a lot of imagery and I love the juxtaposition of ghosts and fog, bringing to mind that Halloween is coming up. 🙂
Hi Mark and Everyone, I loved reading all about the dew…we have been having high winds recently and that might be why I can hardly see any dew on our plants. I intend to go back to reread this section as well as the poems of the masters. I have to say that Buson’s “deep into autumn…” steals the show for me. It’s been very cold in the morning for a while and through the morning it warms up and becomes quite hot in the afternoon.
sunrise
the fog lightens
~ ~ ~
going out to see the white dew
~ ~ ~
I count five grains
on the tomato
white dew
~ ~ ~
dew chill
in the morning
I wear my coat to water
Hope everyone is having a nice Friday. I loved reading all the beautiful poetry and will be back soon to reread.
Hi Maddy, Basho’s “deep in autumn” seems to be a favorite. It is a good one!
Great collection of dew-inspired haiku! “dew chill” is my favorite.
Thanks, Mark…always appreciate your feedback.
I too like “dew chill” best, but all of them glitter with images.
Peace,
LaMon
Thanks LaMon, lovely of you to say!
Enjoy them all, Madeleine, but I find the tomato haiku particularly intriguing. Maybe because of the scarcity of tomato haiku. Have a wonderful weekend dealing with the dew chill. ~Nan
Thanks for the lovely feedback, Nan! 🙂 Have a wonderful weekend, too!
Hi Maddy,
What a great and heartwarming collection of poems you wrote, I was inspired by “counting grains of dew” and your last poem:
“Dew chill
in the morning
I wear my coat to water”
-the imagery speaks volumes of the time of day, the season the ideas and the poem’s mood through the author’s sharp senses. I enjoyed the read and have re-read it several times.
Awww, much appreciated Suzette and so helpful…your feedback always means a lot.🙂
You are very welcome, Maggy. Have a lovely day!
…And you as well, Suzette!
Thank you! Blessings, Maddy!
Blessings to you too, dear Suzette! 🙂
Maddy,
I’ve been wearing my flannel shirts in the cool morning to water my plants. I’m also waiting until the sun is at least up and it is slightly warmer – sometimes around 8am. Almost shocking last week when it was below 50F in the morning.
I’ve been away for a few days… Very windy at the shore. Not so much here, but I did see cows lying down on the way home (old wives tale is that when thte cows lie down it is going to rain!).
Fun ‘ku about white dew.
Hi Jules, oh my! I had no idea that it was below 50F in the morning…brrrr. Yes, a good idea to water, a little later. That’s great about wearing the flannels! I love to stay in my p.j.s, so I throw my coat over when I’m watering in the morning:) Oh well… I had never heard of that wives tale…its’s a great one. Although I love the rain, it doesn’t have to start right away, right? Thanks, Jules, it was fun writing about it. 🙂
Maddy…
Nature is so inspiring…
Have you heard about the forecast of rain by leaves of trees turnig over? Supposedly it is so the leaves can ‘drink from the underside’ without having to wait for the water to be soaked up and spread through the roots, trunck and branches… but I’m not sure how true that is either. Since when it is windy the leaves will turn anyway 😉
Yes, it’s true, Jules… Thank you for mentioning this, I was somewhat perturbed as to why the leaves to many plants of ours have been turning upside down, recently…as a result, I have started watering more often. …Yes, that could be it too, as It has been very windy over here, recently.)
Hello All. I love how folks jump right in to meet Mark’s challenge.
moonflower under the fog spirits lift
an ant drinks
from a leaf…
morning dew
I am not a great fan of monoku, but I have to say that I really liked yours! And the haiku is impressive as well.
Peace,
LaMon
Thanks, LaMon.
I’m new to monoku so I practice what Roberta Beary calls shortku:
one line one breath + season in ten syllables.
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… 27 haiku with “Autumn” mentioned and 10 with “Fall”
How do you organize and RETRIEVE your haiku?
Thanks, Darcy
Thanks for explaining a structure for the shortku. I like it. Concerning your question, I have written a lot haiku related to readings from the Bible and other religious books. These are saved according to the name of the book. The rest are simply in a folder named “haiku poems”. Then I use the search engine to look for the needed word in that folder. I have over 1000 haiku in that last folder. (I’m sure 900+ of them could be improved with some attentive rewriting!) LaMon
Darcy, love them both…something about an ant drinking water from a leaf, conjuring up such a charming image…makes a person want to smile. 🙂
Hi Darcy, Very nice offerings for this week! Thanks for the explanation about the structure of your monoku and the shortku option. Very helpful!
Very nice, Darcy 🙂
Wonderful haiku, Suzette!
https://benjamintonkin.wordpress.com/2024/09/15/28-6-24-haiku-reblog/
https://benjamintonkin.wordpress.com/2024/09/15/15-9-24-haiku/
Lovely haiku, Suzette!
Thank you, you are most kind.
🙂 Hope you and all have a great day!
Hi Mark and everyone,
“Sunflower” is the prompt for the next issue of “Solitary Daisy”. Sally and Michele would like us to submit by this Wednesday the 19th, midnight (eastern time). The new issue of Solitary Daisy will be out this Saturday. Link is below 🙂
https://thesolitarydaisy.ca/2024/09/the-solitary-daisy-issue-35/
Hope everyone is having a nice evening!:)